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A brand-new look for this beloved novel by New York Times and USA Today bestselling author of HUNTING FOR A HIGHLANDER and LOVE IS BLIND...

Earl Hugh Dulonget of Hillcrest was a formidable knight, used to getting what he wanted. This time, he got himself into a bind. His uncle’s will had a codicil: He must marry. And Hugh had just insulted his would-be bride by calling her a peasant! How could he win back her esteem—and her hand?

Everyone seemed to have advice. Some men-at-arms thought that Hugh could win the fair Willa’s love by buying her baubles. The old witch who was her guardian wanted Hugh to crawl back on his belly. And his castle priest proffered De Secretis Mulierum, a book on the secrets of women. But Hugh had ideas of his own. Hugh would overcome every hindrance—and all his friends’ help—to show Willa that he had not only what she needed, but what she wanted. And that the two of them were meant for a lifetime of happiness.

368 pages, Mass Market Paperback

First published September 1, 2002

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Lynsay Sands

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LYNSAY SANDS is the nationally bestselling author who is known for her hysterical historicals as well as the popular Argeneau/Rogue Hunter vampire series. With her witty and charming personality, Sands describes books as, “Waking dreams or stories, tales to amuse, entertain and distract us from everyday life.” She’s been writing stories since grade school and considers herself incredibly lucky to be able to make a career out of it. Her hope is that readers can get away from their everyday stress through her stories, and if there are occasional uncontrollable fits of laughter, that’s just a big bonus. Visit her official website at www.lynsaysands.net.

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Profile Image for MG *Bury Me with My Kindle.. & a REALLY Long Charger*.
587 reviews768 followers
January 31, 2020
2 vomit crotch + butt boil unsexy stars

This one started off with a strong premise, but the execution fizzled...

Life-long warrior Hugh has recently inherited an earldom from his uncle, and he finally feels that his life has taken a turn for the better. His father was the second son who left the life of an estate steward to become a knight for hire when he had a dispute with the former earl (Hugh's uncle); thus, Hugh moved around a lot as a child and his family did not have much money. When he was of age, he fostered with a warrior and became one himself, but as warriors do not generally have lands, titles, or funds, he was rejected on the marriage mart. Now he will have all of those things that he was found lacking, and he hopes to find a lady to marry and make his life complete. HOWEVER, the best laid plans...

One of the conditions of his inheriting the money is that he wed his uncle's ward - a young woman known as "Willa" who has been living near the property in a small cottage with an elderly witch; her rescued wolves her only companions as she learned very early in life that having friends meant placing them in danger. Though she has no memory of her true parents and no one seems to know who they are, she has called the earl her "papa" all of her life; now that he is gone, she must move to the main estate and marry a man she has never seen before but one she has known she would wed one day. As a girl, she dreamed he would be handsome with gleaming long blond hair, kind to all, strong enough to protect her and her loved ones, and he would arrive on a white horse. When she meets Hugh, he fulfills most of her wishes, but Hugh wants nothing to do with a woman he believes is ill suited to be an earl's wife, so he initially rejects her. But when he learns she was raised as a genteel lady and that he must marry her to gain the funds he needs to run the earldom he has inherited, he realizes he has made a mistake and must do all he can to win her over.

In his quest to earn her trust, he spends 2 days and 2 nights guarding her (as that is the only thing he knows he is best at), and on the second night, he is attacked. Though the attacker is dispatched, it becomes evident that Willa's life is in danger, and he will have to do all he can to keep her safe. As they wed and begin to grow closer as a couple, Hugh finds it will take all his skills as a warrior to investigate why Willa has become a target for death and to be sure he does not fail to protect her at any cost. But will that be enough to stop the force that has been determined to end Willa's life from the very moment it began? And can they find the culprit(s) before all they have begun to build together is lost?

What I liked:
--- As I mentioned at the start, the premise was interesting with a mystery girl who has grown up with a witch who doles out cryptic prophecies... the set up sucked me right in
--- The mystery was there from the start and continued to keep my attention
--- The steamy goodness that was in the book was good

What I didn't like as much:
--- As my rating suggested... yeah. What the what, Lynsay? On their wedding night, Willa becomes very ill and pukes all over her new groom who is naked, so it basically ends up in his lap (and he runs for help like that, so we are treated to descriptions of vomit crotch a few too many times, with 1 time really being too much)
--- And the second part of my ratings title... because Hugh decides to stay out for 2 days and 2 nights standing guard to prove himself to Willa (and because it rained pretty steadily much of that time), he develops a large carbuncle on his ass that the witch then drains and he has to lay there for a few days with a poultice on his butt with his new wife while she recovers from the illness that struck her on their wedding night - that's just not sexy. At. All. WHY??? Why did we have to be subjected to vomit and huge butt boils? It obviously dampened things considerably in terms of trying to visualize and enjoy the love scenes (of which there were not as many as typically found in a Sands HR)
--- The mystery aspect fell flat for me once all was revealed - maybe my expectations are too high, but it was pretty anti-climactic after all the build-up

Overall, it started off with a bang but ended with a whimper. Definitely not Sands' better work nor what I would expect from this author. Thankfully, I have read many other Sands' HRs before this one, so I know the others are MUCH better than this one.

Plot --- 1.5/5
Main Characters --- 3/5
Supporting Cast --- 3/5
Steam Level* --- 3/5
Violence --- nothing graphic
Language --- not egregious
POV --- 3rd

*Note that steam level is not a rating so much as a how hot was it: 0/5 - clean; 1/5 - mild; 2/5 - sensual but nothing descriptive; 3/5 - now we're getting somewhere; 4/5 - yes please! ; 5/5 - they did EVERYTHING in this one, y'all
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346 reviews107 followers
June 24, 2016
What worked for me :

Hugh
He was a formidable warrior, handsome but not a smooth rake. He was aware of his strengths and weaknesses and willing to ask for help when he needed it.
He made a assumption about Willa which hurt her, but he went out of his way to win her back.

Willa
Willa was half in love with Hugh before she met him. Willa had a lonely childhood and loved animals. She was wise and caring and lived with a lot of guilt. There are many secrets related to her birth and family which are a source of mystery for those around her.

Willa and Hugh were a very sweet couple. They tried to do their best for each other and grew stronger as a couple. Hugh was very protective about Willa and Willa adored Hugh with all her heart.

Supporting characters
I loved the supporting characters in this story. They were funny, sweet and kept trying to get Willa and Hugh together.

Funny moments
The book had some funny sequences - the courtship, the wedding night, Hugh falling sick and Willa's Godfather.

What didn't work for me

Paragraphs
I did wish the story was a bit shorter or some paragraphs were cut off be ause they did not add to the story in any way.

Slightly funny
Lynsay sands is famous for stories that make you laugh out loud and that element was missing in this story. Funny moments were sprinkled throughout the story, but they made you smile, not laugh.
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4,806 reviews125 followers
August 20, 2015
Very good book with the author's trademark humor, independent heroine and a hero who is strong but somewhat inept with the ladies. Hugh has just inherited the earldom and has discovered that he must marry his uncle's ward. Before listening to the entire will, he goes rushing off to try to get out of this marriage that he doesn't want. He believes her to be his uncle's bastard daughter with a peasant woman and is careless enough to say so in front of her. When he discovers that he's wrong about her, and that he must marry her to receive his full inheritance, he has to find a way to get back into her good graces. He has the "benefit" of advice from several people, and his attempts to follow it do little to advance his cause. He does gain the prize, but things still do not progress smoothly.

Though Willa was already half in love with Hugh thanks to her daydreams, reconciling the fantasy Hugh with the real thing was a bit of a challenge. He isn't a smooth talker and trying to figure out how he feels frustrates her. When it comes to consummating the marriage, nothing goes the way it should. From an exhausted and ill groom to a bride suffering from a dose of poison, then each getting advice that works against them, it's a wonder they were able to get together at all. But once all those obstacles were overcome, the heat between them is scorching. I loved seeing Hugh's determination to make things good for Willa. It was wonderful to see the way that she healed the hurts of the betrayals he'd suffered in the past, and he came to realize just how much she means to him.

There are questions about Willa's identity that are unanswered, as they seek a letter from her guardian that is supposed to reveal all. Apparently linked to this mystery are several attacks, obviously meant to end her life. Hugh is determined to keep her safe, even though her independent nature sometimes makes it difficult. Once her identity is revealed, the question becomes one of who is carrying out the attacks. Each one is different, and their resolutions do nothing to reveal the instigator. One of the best things about the attacks was the way they made Hugh and Willa work together to survive them, causing them to grow emotionally closer. The final resolution of the mystery was very well done, with one of my suspects being cleared and the other definitely being proved guilty.

I enjoyed the secondary characters and their parts in the story. Willa's foster mother, the witch Eada, had some great moments with her various predictions. She was also quite funny with her treatment of Hugh's boil. I loved Hugh's friend Luccan and how he was always there when Hugh needed him, but could also call Hugh out when he was being an idiot. Hugh's foppish cousin was hilarious with his fussiness and way of talking, but came through like a champ during one of the attacks. It was really funny to see some of the reactions. The final scene of the book, with the men's reactions to her labor were hysterical.
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1,784 reviews126 followers
June 16, 2025
Rating: 4.2 / 5

As far as Lynsay Sands romances go, this one was pretty true to formula, with one exception: the hero was...kind of an asshole at the beginning, which surprised me.

Not to say that it was unrealistic in terms of what an entitled knight/baron might act like at finding out that they'd have to marry a "peasant girl", but I was just surprised that in a Lynsay Sands book of all things, such would be the case. I thought back to literally everything else that I've read by her before and...as far as the historical romances go (not the Argeneaus, actually, though in most cases...), usually while the heroines are pretty diverse in terms of what sorts of characters they are, the heroes pretty much just fall into the category of nice and lustful, ultimately all around good guys. The fact that I found myself disliking one of them so much at the beginning came as quite a surprise, but was also a good enough hook to keep me reading onwards.
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Thankfully though, the hero, Hugh, does redeem himself in as funny a way as you'd expect, given the book summary. I am happy to say that it does fulfill all that it promises, and is perhaps one of the funnier books by this author in terms of hijinks. The heroine herself was lovely, the side characters great--cause yeah, I need an Eada and a Jolliver in my life!--and the plot itself a pretty great mystery.

In other words, I've gotten all that I love from this author, as usual, and am very glad to have found this book when I did! (A thrift shop find, if you can believe it!)
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825 reviews
May 19, 2010
I know that I am in the minority, but honest, I'm not one of those "spoilers' who has to harshly critique great books. I really love Lynsay Sands humor, but I just didn't think this was that funny. I smiled a few times, but as for that laugh out loud humor that Sands is famous for..this isn't the book.

Maybe it was the whole witch theme, maybe it was Willa that I just never really "got" with her wolves for friends and cluelessness, maybe it was Hugh who so stupidly went about trying to court Willa, or maybe it was the long, drawn out explanation of her origins that left me skimming to end the misery as quick as possible.....whatever it was, I can't recommend this book.

I do recommend this author. My favorite book of hers is "Bliss". Now that is romantic comedy if I've ever read it. Skip this one and try that one first...you won't be sorry.
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234 reviews
March 13, 2022
Pretty good. Lady Willa Everlake did not have a normal childhood. After her mother’s death she was given to the Earl of Hillcrest to raise, and he did so as if she was his own child. The problem was someone was trying to murder Willa and they made multiple attempts on her life. Having no other choice the Earl sent her to live in a small cottage with Eada, a healer and witch. When the Earl dies, his will leaves explicit instructions for his family, in particular for Hugh Dulonget, his nephew. Hugh is to inherit the wealth and estates, only if he marries Willa. Outraged at his uncles idea he goes to visit Willa and mistakes her for a peasant. After completely insulting Willa, he realizes his mistake but he still needs Willa to marry him. So in order to gain her favor he waits for two days outside her house guarding it in hopes she’ll accept his proposal. But with Willa’s complicated past there is a target on her back and danger is all around.

Like I said pretty good. Definitely not the best Sands book I’ve read, her Highlander series is much better. This is a bit of a different romance book because I feel like Willa and Hugh’s relationship shows the real aspects of marriage, (things usually not seen in romance novels for sure).For example, Willa throws up on Hugh’s naked lap on their wedding night and he spends the rest of the night holding her hair as she vomits. Another example, Hugh gets a boil on his butt after sitting in his saddle for so long, and they spend 3 days in bed together recovering. Not exactly sexy stuff lol. Both of these things for sure grossed me out, but I suppose they are more real than half the stuff in this genre. Besides from that the plot was okay? Didn’t hate it, didn’t love it. Kept me entertained but not necessarily something I’d be dying to reread. The mystery aspect wasn’t real a mystery because there was only one obvious suspect and in the end it was them so? Wasn’t a ton of chemistry between Hugh and Willa and I think that was the main problem for me. I especially hated the miscommunications in their sex lives, it just added their non-chemistry. I’ve read Lynsay Sands before and she’s had way better characters. Overall not bad.
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950 reviews
August 10, 2021
I thoroughly enjoyed this feel-good novel. Lynsay Sands writes interesting characters and intriguing plots. I've delighted in reading her novels over the years. This book is no different. Hugh and Willa's story provides both serious and funny moments. I liked when Hugh put his foot in his mouth by calling Willa a byblow and then tried to back pedal his reaction and response. Calling his future bride a peasant and then treating her just like the women at court treated him, did not win him any points with Willa neither. Willa listened to Eada's predictions and waited for Hugh to come crawling on his belly through the mud before she relented and forgave him. Willa would have forgiven Hugh earlier, but for Eada's prediction that if she did he would die soon. Hugh has declared he will protect Willa from whomever is trying to kill her. Someone has been trying to murder her since she was a baby. No one knows who the villain is, or if there is more than one.

I liked the protagonists, but I loved the secondary characters. They acted as the sounding board for Hugh and the comedy relief during the tense moments of the story. The plot was the romance, but also the question of who is trying to murder Willa. The missing letter written by deceased Earl Richard Hillcrest will provide the clues to the murderer, but they can't find it. The description is average, but the dialogue feels authentic and true to character. This is a delightful, easy-to-escape-into novel.
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1,779 reviews35 followers
January 19, 2025
This sucked, plain and simple. I was going to give it one star because I can't think of anything I liked, but I genuinely don't hate this book so a two star it is. I was just bored more than anything and the romance was the least romantic romance I've ever read about.
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1,682 reviews92 followers
December 28, 2022
This book was...a choice. There were certain elements I liked such as the heroine was the personification of sunshine and how much she brightened up the hero's mood despite his innate surliness. The rest of the book was a big ol' mess. Bad chemistry plus bad jokes equals no thank you. There were several attempts at humor but they fell flat each time. The miscommunication in the bedroom made me feel like I was interrupting something personal and I was uncomfortable by the heroine's stubborn reluctance to direct the hero's administrations. The minute she barfed on his lap, I immediately checked out. I was totally done and skimmed the rest of the book. I'll stick to her Highlander romances and I'm glad I paid for this very cheaply at a library book sale. It turned out What She Wants was a barf bag and a better understanding of what happens in the marriage bed.

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400 reviews
May 29, 2022
Classic Lynsay Sands. Never lets you down with laugh out loud moments in a historical romance. Re-read 22nd May 2022. Just as funny as the first time round, maybe even funnier.
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856 reviews54 followers
November 10, 2021
Хю и Уила

Хю е единствен наследник на чичо си Ричард, заможен лорд, и след смъртта му е неприятно изненадан, че в завещанието си, чичо му иска от него да се ожени за младо момиче, за което Хю подозира, че е незаконна дъщеря на чичо му. В арогантността си, Хю заявява на момичето, че заради незаконният й произход няма да я вземе за жена, само за да научи няколко часа по-късно, че като единствен роднина на чичо си, Хю ще получи титлата, замъка и земните, но не и богатството. То е дадено като зестра на младата дама, която е от благороден произход, и чийто живот е в опасност, момиче отгледано от чичо му като родна дъщеря. Сега на Хю му предстои да направи нещо, което не е правил през живота си... да ужажва девица.

Още от раждането й, живота на Уила е в опасност. Отглеждана от Ричард, който обича като роден баща, Ида-една възрастна гадателка, смятана за вещица и няколко застаряващи рицари, Уила никога не си е позволявала да се привързва към някой, тъй като когато е малка, коварен убиец отнема живота на най-добрата й приятелка, в опит да убие Уила. И през целият си живот Уила е знаела, че ще се омъжи за пламенника на Ричард, известният рицар Хю Делонгей. Сега обаче, Ида предупреждава Уила, че за опази живота на бъдещият си съпруг и за да имат щастливо бъдеще, той трябва да пълзи по корем пред нея, преди тя да се съгласи да стане негова съпруга. Изглежда ухажването на Хю ще бъде много по-сложно отколкото е предполагал.

Обожавам Линзи Сандс, тя има толкова чаровно чувство за хумор. Още от началото, Хю правеше всичко по силите си да спечели Уила, но винаги подхваща грешна тактика. Тя пък си умираше да се съгласи да му стане съпруга, но заради предсказанието на дойката й, не го правеше, чакайки нашият грамаден арогантен рицар да пълзи пред нея по корем.
Както винаги в книгата имахме коварен убиец. и докато героите ни се спасяваха от покушенията, го правиха по толкова комичен начин, че беше истинско удоволствие да чета приключенията им. Като се започне от първата брачна нощ Който не е чел книги на авторката, само той не знае, че Линзи обича да превръща първата креватна сцена на героите в абсолютна комедия, в която няма нищо романтично или еротично, а много много смях. И тук беше така.

Като цяло типична за Линзи книга, сладка, на моменти доста комична с един куп хахави герои. Много ми хареса краят, макар че ми се искаше нещата да се развият на повече страници.

Наистина обожавам начина по който пише Линзи, и нямам търпение да прочета следващата книга, която издаде.
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914 reviews38 followers
April 7, 2013
Lynsay Sands is one of my favorite authors, thanks to her Argeneau Vampire series, of which I've read – in order – through Book 13 so far. I've only read two of her non-Argeneau books, The Highland Bride, which was still a vampire story and which I enjoyed, and The Brat, an historical, which I loved. One of Ms. Sands' trademarks is sassy humor and comical situations, and she employs both in WHAT SHE WANTS.

The beginning was a little slow and didn't really engage me. Hugh has just learned that his uncle's will decrees that he marry Willa, whom he's never heard of and whom he assumes is his uncle’s “by-blow” - illegitimate child. He rushes off in a fit to Willa's home to announce to her that he has no intention of marrying her, insulting her in the process. Later he learns that Willa is not quite who he thought she was, and that while he inherits his uncle's property, Willa inherits the money needed to run the estate. Back he goes, this time in an attempt to convince Willa that he does want to marry her after all.

Once this part of the story has been resolved and Hugh and Willa travel to their new home to be married, the story picks up tremendously. Willa has a mind of her own, and Hugh often finds her maddeningly frustrating. And consummating their new marriage – let's just say events keep happening to delay that, and both parties are the victims of bad advice from others, much to their dismay and our reading enjoyment.

There are several supporting characters, most of whom are wonderful, creating at times a kind of screwball movie type effect, running in and out of the scene. And there's a mystery afoot, as someone keeps attempting to kill Willa.

All in all, a quite enjoyable romp, and I'm very happy to have several more of this author's books, both Argeneau and non-Argeneau, waiting in my TBR pile.
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235 reviews3 followers
August 12, 2010
I was disappointed with this book. I have begun to really love Lynsay Sands' historical romances, but this one was lacking. Usually Sands' romances (both her historical and paranormal) are quite humerous, and What She Wants seemed to be missing that humor. From the blurb on the back of the book, I thought the plot was about what rediculous advice Hugh would take to woo Willa (which I thought would be really amusing - I love when the hero is clueless as to how to get the heroine), but that only took up a few pages. I didn't hate the book, 2 stars does mean it was OK, but it was not what I was expecting. I would recommend people to read her other historicals though - my favorites were The Reluctant Reformer and The Deed.
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1,381 reviews85 followers
April 9, 2011
I don't read as many historicals as I used to. But this was a good one. A bit predictable, some LOL funny moments, a couple of surprises, a good read. Now, don't get me wrong, it wasn't wonderful but a good solid read.

The time is 1199 and Lady Willa, no last name, has been reared remotely by her foster father to prevent her murder. On his death, she is willed to his nephew, Hugh, the new Earl, as a wife. Hugh is an honourable warrior and is needed to keep Willa safe. Doesn't hurt that of course Willa is beautiful.

The mystery of Willa's birth must be solved to keep her safe and for them to both have long and happy lives with many children.
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151 reviews13 followers
December 28, 2012
Willa was a secret.
Even her true name was a secret.
Someone was trying to kill her.
Even as an infant, those around her were dying because of it. Then her 'father' died.

Hugh's uncle Richard died and left him the Earldom, his estates, and... a wife. Was she worthy of an Earl to be his wife? Who was she?

Thus the story begins. It tells of years of past betrayals, the fallacies of pride, loves passions, and ending with the beginning of new life. Definitely worth reading. I will be reading more by this author.
3 reviews
August 23, 2012
This was my first Lynsay Sands book, I think I got it at the Dollar Store. Well worth it for a buck. Interesting characters, some funny moments and a bit of intrigue. Certainly not the best of her books but it was enough to get me to check out more of the author's works.
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682 reviews10 followers
February 8, 2015
I do love Lynsay Sands historical romances, they are always a fun read. This one has lots of humour, misunderstandings, romance and a bit of danger all rolled into one exciting read. Full of strong minded characters that definitely make it a book worth while checking out :)
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575 reviews
March 9, 2019
Muy buena y divertidas todas las aventuras de Willa y Hugh, son tan lindos por cómo nace su amor
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33 reviews1 follower
January 14, 2024
Lynsay Sands ‘What She Wants’ is a standalone Historical Romance. It weaves the story of a brave yet formidable, Scottish knight who, upon discovering his unexpected betrothal, embarks on a journey to meet his future wife. Their initial encounter, however, is a catastrophe as he ends up deeply insulting her. Willa, who has spent years fantasizing about her betrothed, is faced with the stark reality that her prospective husband does not meet her expectations.
Hugh, our gallant knight, proves to be surprisingly inept at courtship. He soon discovers that his betrothed is a wonderfully sweet yet untamed woman who isn’t hesitant to make him grovel and plead. The plot intensifies with a hint of danger. An unknown adversary is plotting to kill his betrothed, thrusting Hugh into a dual role of wooing his future wife while simultaneously striving to protect her life.
This book left me truly astounded. I find myself oscillating between adoration and disdain for it, or perhaps experiencing a sentiment that lies somewhere in between. I’ve never been provoked into such fits of laughter in my life. The skill with which it blends humor and danger is nothing short of bewildering. It poses a conundrum for me. I appreciate the humor Lynsay Sands injects into each of her novels. Yet, I can’t help but question if there’s such a thing as too much humor? It appeared to me that there was a disparity between humor, romance, and plot. Not that the plot was deficient - it was brimming with twists and had considerable depth. The romance between Hugh and Willa was beautifully constructed, with their development throughout the novel being skillfully executed.
That said, the number of times I found myself laughing at the most outrageous and borderline absurd incidents is quite significant. It felt as though I was laughing more than I was swooning, if that makes any sense. For goodness’ sake, there were instances of puking in unthinkable places, a boil as large as one’s hand in yet another unmentionable location, and it seemed as though the universe conspired against Hugh in his courtship of Willa. Every single attempt left me roaring with laughter. Poor fellow.
Thus, you understand my dilemma. I find myself ultimately settling on the notion that while I didn’t adore it beyond measure it was for lack of a better word….okay.
229 reviews3 followers
June 29, 2025
Another hilarious historical by Lynsay Sands! At first, the story had a slow start, with the Hero, Hugh DeLonget, not wanting to marry the woman whom he had been arranged to marry, Willa. Hugh started out as a stuck up jerk, but things got better when he started trying to woo Willa. However, he was still a jerk for awhile; only wanting to marry her at first when he found his Inheritance was contingent on the marriage.

Things rapidly took off after that with the threats on Willa's life, Hugh's boil on his tushy, and the hilarious banter and actions between Willa and Hugh. I even loved the supporting characters, especially Jollivet, Lucan (I think that's his name), and Eada. I even loved Tristan D'Ormond; Willa's father.

My only main complaint is how the story ended.
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It's not a major spoiler, because you already find out early that Willa will have twins. So, the ending (which is pretty funny, by the way) is about the birth. However, it just ends abruptly with Willa still in labor and Hugh and Willa telling each other that they loved one another. The End. Seriously?? You left the heroine in labor and that's it? Did she have a girl and a boy? Two boys? Two girls? What did they name them? I was looking for the next page. It just felt like it wasn't over yet. Also, another small mistake. When Willa was reading the letter from the father who raised her, it said her real name wasn't Willa and he'd tell her what it was later...only he never did. Was her real name supposed to be her mother's name, Juliana? Nothing was mentioned again about her real name. Again, a minor issue. I was more irritated about the abrupt ending.
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Spoiler over.

So, overall, another great read by Lynsay Sands! I would definitely recommend reading this book. Hugh and Willa were fun characters with good chemistry and lots of cute banter.
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March 27, 2023
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This book was pretty cute. Hugh (MMC) is kind of ridiculous and bumbling in the beginning and I had a hard time thinking I would ever be really into him as a hero (although I LOVED that he was bumbling, more of that please) but color me corrected.

Willa and Hugh end up engaged when Willa’s secret guardian arranges that she must be married to his heir and nephew. Said heir/nephew is not interested. So he insults her and then immediately realizes that that would be both a strategic and perhaps emotional mistake, so he works hard to get her to agree to the arrangement again. Willa’s surrogate mother, a witch, tells her that she can’t accept his suit until he crawls on his hands and knees or he’ll die in less than a month, so that situation is pretty hilarious. Then he moves Willa into the castle, which leads to the person who wanted her dead to start up attempting again. It’s part thrilling and part funny, a combination that I found enjoyable.

I will say that both Willa and Hugh are at times truly lacking in sense, but they somehow manage to take turns…so they get by. And luckily they do end up catching the murderer, because I truly do not know how they managed to avoid death with how much they bumbled.

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Author 2 books48 followers
December 28, 2016
Willa is a woman of some mystery. Betrothed to man she does not know, she simply accepts the fact that Hugh is going to marry her without thinking much more of it. She's a happy person and doesn't dread it. But she doesn't know who her parents are and has been raised by a witch named Eada. She knows her uncle is an earl and she spent many years with him but after the death of her friend when she was quite young, she's sent to Eada and has a constant guard with her. Somebody is trying to kill her.

Hugh is a knight and the new earl of Hillcrest. He wants to accept his new duties and the money that will come with it but he doesn't want to marry Willa. He doesn't want to marry anybody. He knows he's awkward with women. He's fierce on the battlefield but has no idea how to woo a woman. He goes as far as calling her a bastard. Way to go, Hugh, you dolt!

He soon finds out that all is lost if he doesn't marry Willa and as far as he knows, she's nothing more than a village commoner. He has no choice but to deal with it and try to win her back.

This book has many comical moments but some sad ones, too. The mystery of who is trying to kill her isn't revealed until almost the very end. It was easy to figure out but there's more to it than what I will reveal in this review.

I had to admire Willa. Some really bad things happened to her, even while she was with Hugh, and she didn't falter even once. She learned to cope and to play the hand she was dealt.

She and Hugh were so great together and their chemistry rocked the story in a good way. The book was fun to read and the fast pace of the plot kept me going until the very end.

Easy, easy five stars!
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January 24, 2019
Sands Never Fails

I thought I read all of Lyndsay Sands’ books (yes I might have went on a spree) but I found this on my reading list. I was so excited because her book always is my go to if I need to just feel good and inspired.
Willa and Hugh are a cute couple. I love how they just fit together in every way. Hugh is not the tortured hero which is a refreshing change from what I have been reading lately. Willa has her past but she was not bitter about it. In fact she was a sweet, innocent, gentle and loving heroine. She did have backbone though but not in a too stubborn way. I like how the story focused on them. No sub plots to distract and detract from how cute their love story is. Typical pf Lyndsay Sands plot there is a murderous villain which added a nice touch to the story. I love how humor is applied to this book. There were scenes that were a comedy. Really funny. It is not the typical sarcastic stand up comedy humor some authors use which I sometimes do not find entertaining. There is of course lovemaking scenes tastefully applied to the story.
There is no epilogue but the last chapter did follow through with a tidbit of their future.
I recommend Lyndsay Sands because her books never fail to amuse and entertain me and provide that needed escape once in a while.
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March 3, 2025
I thoroughly enjoyed this feel-good novel! Delightful and funny, Lynsay Sands once again delivers an engaging story with intriguing characters and her trademark humor.

The story features an independent, strong-willed heroine and a hero who, while capable and strong, is adorably inept when it comes to women. Hugh’s determination to do right by Willa was heartwarming, and I loved watching their relationship unfold. Willa, in turn, helps him heal from past betrayals, allowing him to finally understand just how much she means to him. Their chemistry was fantastic, making them such a fun couple to follow.

Rated: 3.5/5.0—The book’s fast-paced plot kept me engaged from start to finish. Sands’ writing is always entertaining, and this novel is no exception—it’s a charming, romantic read filled with humor, heart, and a love story worth rooting for.
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January 16, 2021
i couldn’t finish reading this book.

to begin with, the back cover AND title misrepresented the plot. it has literally nothing to do with what she wants, it has to do with her learning the history of her birth. there is also a fair amount of kidnapping.

i think this is supposed to be a funny book. i didn’t find it funny at all. on her wedding night she throws up on his cock twice. then we watch him heal from a boil on his but. i appreciate bucking expectation, but that is just unsexy.

regardless, i tried to persevere and ultimately, i just am calling it done. maybe 40 pages left to go. i haven’t touched it in months.

things to remember:
2003
he’s an idiot
she never listens

advocate: her guardian, who is a witch and hands down the best character in the book.
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516 reviews
September 26, 2022
Man this one was a bummer for me. I read The Switch and liked it, then read this and was disappointed. There are better written books out there of this time period and even this same storyline. Go get one of those, not this. It’s weird because this could have easily been rinsed and made a Highlanders story. It’s that generic of the English setting.
The characters are annoying and immature. There are side characters but you really learn nothing about them. This is a standalone book so why bother. The story is all very predictable. I skipped the sex scenes because they were boring. As well as all that there is no epilogue! The end of the book left me feeling bereft.
I am wary to read another of this authors books, but I’ll give it another go with Love Is Blind and then have a rethink.
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Author 8 books7 followers
June 27, 2018
This was quite funny in a silly way and a lot of the story was enjoyable.

But:

The story was a little nonseniscal to my mind which made me like it less than I otherwise would.

I did not like how Eada was constantly referred to as a hag, witch, etc just because she's old.

The ending should have been a bit longer.

There were too many sex scenes interrupting the story. I like one or two but then it gets old.

My favourite character was actually Hugh's cousin. I think a book about him would be great. Perhaps he plays the fop because he's a spy or ...?

That said, I did enjoy the read but would not read it again (which I frequently do). I usually love her books.
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January 20, 2023
I enjoyed Lynsay Sands' book What She Wants. It's England in the 1200s and Hugh Dulonget has just inherited the earldom, money, servants/estates, and an arranged marriage. His future will hold joy, happiness, and many children if he can solve a riddle. Willa, his wife-to-be's, life has been at risk for years. She has lived a lonely sheltered childhood because someone wants her dead. It will now be Hugh's job to keep Willa safe from harm and discover who her longtime enemy is. Hugh and Willa's story is a strangers to friends to lovers, romantic suspense. I found it entertaining.
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