Saria goes on a vacation with the OLDER ALPHA MALE of her fantasies. The only problem? She's currently dating his son. But, we all know we can't be held accountable for what we do in our sleep? Or can we...? <3
I liked this short story. It was entertaining and enjoyable. The characters were likable for the most part. I do wish that it was a bit longer and fleshed out a bit more with an epilogue or something. The end was abrupt for me, but it was still good. There is a taboo element with the story. I know that the "sleep" thing is big. The lack of consent (because she's asleep) is bothersome but Saria says she wants him earlier in the story as well as right before she goes to sleep. He does make sure that she enjoys herself. I liked that Daddy said he wanted to keep Saria and would do anything to be with her. I would have liked it to show something further out like an epilogue or something.
I enjoyed reading this story. It was creative, different, but with a touch of naughty. There were a few questions left unanswered, but that’s usually the case in super short stories. However, the end was brutally abrupt. A couple more sentences, complete the interaction, that would have made the story more enjoyable and added the last star.
Hmm, I love this storyline. It’s that Insta love, that pulls you in and makes you want see how it turns out. It’s short, but catches your attention and if your curious like me it will have you guessing the different outcomes.