Yeah...it's painful to give this one two stars. Thor is one of my very favorites. But I have to give my reviews room to grow, because I know how good it's going to get when the title hits its stride. These first stories ain't it.
I hate to keep picking on Hank Pym, but he's really the gold standard for the Boring White Guy Superhero trope in early Marvel history, and the first few Thor stories fit that mold. Don Blake is a very upright do-gooder, the only interesting thing about him being his handicap, which is sadly under-developed and used as a limitation rather than an engine for interesting storytelling; then he turns into a Norse god and is just sort of another very upright do-gooder, now with long hair and hammer. There's no texture given to why this ancient, ultra-powerful being would care about mortals, or crime, or, like, America. Is it because he's Don Blake in Thor's body? That gets kind of hazy. Thor and Blake aren't treated as separate people; when Blake becomes Thor, he just takes for granted that Odin's his dad, Loki's his bothersome brother, that he's immortal and ancient. But, like I said, he still cares about Mom and Apple Pie, and seems to think stopping muggings and commies is a good use of his time. Methinks Stan didn't think through the existential crises that would come with transforming into a Thunder God and being accepted into a Pantheon with a millennia-old set of histories and relationships. I guess this all gets cleared up eventually (maybe?), but it's very sloppy and puzzling at this stage.
Also oddly handled, to my mind, is the introduction of the rest of the Gods of Asgard. I know that later on, Odin and all the others are treated very grandly, with a lot of nobility and vast, unknowable wisdom. I figured the gods and their home, and especially Odin, would get a fitting introduction, maybe not even in these, the corny early days--but, yeah, they appear, and they're just kind of...there. Odin first appears in a small corner panel, his figure tiny and indistinct, and, while imbued with impressive abilities, he's a pretty bland Viking dad. Only by the end of the collection do we start to see hints of the dramatic tension between him and Thor, between his plans and expectations for his heir and the affections the Thunder God develops during his time on Earth.
There's Jack Kirby artwork here with more of the vim that I expect from him; I think he took a shine to this character before Stan did, but still, there aren't many issues with his stamp on them yet. Don Heck returns for another respectable run, but the balance of the issues feature unremarkable artwork.
And Stan chose to pass the writing duties off to lesser mortals here too. There are more underwhelming Larry Lieber stories, and a few from a newcomer for me, R. Berns, who showed some initial promise but then degraded into the flat, half-baked style of the rest. Lots of re-treads of the standard alien invasions, impostor aliens, and communist warlords. There's nothing quite as bad as Ant-Man's evil jazz musician issue, but the telepathic magician is almost there. (And, oh lord, I almost forgot about the thing with the replicator gun and the epically silly twist ending; that one actually is as bad as Deadly Jazz.) There is an interesting issue centered on a mob boss coming to Don Blake for medical help--also almost the only interesting use of Blake's status as a doctor in the run--that had some potential for some commentary on the nature of crime and the obligation to serve, but it pretty much loses steam and ends of standard 60s comics moralizing fare.
Stan returned late in this run, and, much like the moment when he brought the Wasp into Ant-Man's life, gave Thor something that made him stand out: intergenerational conflict, and an impetuous, almost tantrum-like reaction to his father's disapproval for his love interest. The scene of Thor trashing Don Blake's office in a full-page splash is momentarily arresting, but ultimately, impetuousness alone can't carry a character; I yearn for the epic grandeur to come, when Lee decides that Thor can mostly shed the need for earthly concerns and give himself completely to flowery pronouncements about gods and the cosmos.
I will say that, as with Pym's size-changing tablets, the externality of this hero's source of power lends some interest. There's always the danger of the hammer getting too far from Thor's grasp, and the question of how he'll get it back, and how he'll transform without witnesses. I like Marvel's tendency, so far, to tie a character's strength up inextricably with his weaknesses. (But I am left wondering why Thor bothers with a secret identity. It's hand-waved late in the collection that Odin forbids his revealing himself, but there's no compelling reason for it before we learn that; it's just a trope to be fulfilled.)
Also, I think there are another few stories here with Stan's name on them that someone else wrote. Just a feeling I get, especially in the sub-standard final two issues (seriously, the two-parter--while ambitious, I'm sure--never bothers to explain the crucial plot point the drives the cliffhanger). I dunno, I guess a guy writing 600 titles a month is bound to turn in some clunkers a not-insignificant number of times, but it really doesn't feel like the same guy.
Ultimately, I think Thor was meant to be Marvel's early answer to a Superman figure, a super-strong, larger than life hero soaring through the air with zero shades of grey. He begins to take on hints of greater complexity, but it won't be until Stan delves fully into the mythic realm that this character will become truly worthy.
BRING ON THE BAD GUYS: This collection has the distinction of introducing one of Marvel's most significant and popular villains--that's right, ZARRKO, THE TOMORROW MAN! Just kidding, it's Loki. And he is delightful. There are at least four or five issues featuring his perfidy in this collection alone, and while they're sort of formulaic, they're also fun to see how Loki twists himself inside out every time to try and get one over on his half-brother (which, again, never mind how Dr. Blake just kind of accepts this relationship, and seems to have full memories of it, or whatever...) Loki also begins to talk the way mythic Marvel characters would all come to talk, in that pseudo-elevated register that's so delicious to read. Other notable villains found here include communist scientist Radio Active Man, the Cobra, the Lava Man, Mr. Hyde, and the aforementioned Zarrko (Marvel's first time traveling villain, I believe, not counting Dr. Doom, who just does a little bit of everything). Decidedly unremarkable villains: Ugarth and Xano, the father-and-son carbon copy duo! Merlin, the Inaccurate! And Sandu, who might have been a mutant prototype (his issue ran the same month the X-Men premiered).
LADYWATCH: I've avoided mentioning Jane Foster at all until now. Oh, Jane Foster. I know she's awesome now. But here, she might be Stan Lee's worst-written female character. She's Don Blake's nurse (of course), and she loves him (of course), but they can never confess their feelings for each other (of course), and she's also into Thor (of course). This is all pretty standard and boring, but what makes it actually troubling is that one of her big objections to confessing her feelings for Blake is because of his handicap; she seems to have some internalized sense that he's not fully a man as a result (a prejudice Blake himself demonstrates, stating at one point that he regrets that it made him unable to serve in the Korean War [so he...still has Don Blake's memories, even though he's Thor now and also remembers Odin and Loki and stuff? Argh]). You'd think a nurse, of all people, would know that Don Blake's leg makes him no less a man than anyone else. To her credit, later issues imply that her objection is less about the leg than originally seemed to be the case, but the damage was done. What I like about her, though, is that there's room for her to grow into the special being that recent years' stories bore out; Odin allows Thor to hope an eventual blessing on their love if she can prove worthy of immortality--so Stan Lee seems to be laying the groundwork for just such a development. This could be a good arc. (And yet, there's this: "And then, because she IS a female: she fainted!")
BACKUP BONANZA: "Tales of Asgard" backup features begin toward the end of this collection, and I think I can sense Stan really getting a feel for the mythology. The four- or five-page stories are highly simplified, and some are just total fabrications, but it's kind of cool to think of little 60's kids learning about an unfamiliar cultural heritage this way.
CONTINUITY NOTES: Thor joins the Avengers during this time, but there's no mention of that or any other superhero. Also, when "Thor goes bad" and the whole city is on alert, no other heroes are depicted as investigating.