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39 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 27, 2020


This short story did not impress me like it did many of my well-respected Goodreads friends....and the rest of the community. But then....I'm still in a major reading funk!
I was really getting into it too....ticked at the boyfriend/lover who was supposed to be such a great all around person, disappointed in the dispassionate, almost nasty voice of the mother, and got through the....Whew!....difficult descriptive birthing with Zikora, feeling both sad and bad for her. But then....nothing. Well almost nothing, or perhaps just an unsatisfying end for me.
There's a great deal of content in these 32 pages, but I felt like the author failed to bring the story to a proper conclusion....unless, of course, the whole point of the story was the mother-daughter contentious relationship brought to a sort of amicable peace??? I was left wanting to know what happened to Mr. Wonderful.