This is a good book, so easy to read, so difficult to put down. From time to time I did put it down, however, in order to think about what I had just read. Ms. St. James brings a lot of emotion as well as intelligence to her story about a man, Shade, and a woman, Chelle, who have nothing in common and yet get along well together.
It’s a younger man – older woman story written with extraordinary sensitivity. Shade has had about the roughest, most difficult life of any MC character written. Chelle has had sadness in her life, but not nearly to the extent that Shade has had. He has kept his past a secret from everyone, opening up to Chelle as their relationship progresses. Ms. St. James develops their relationship in careful layers, and it feels genuine and natural.
Both Shade and Chelle are well fleshed out. They live on the page. The secondary characters thrive under Ms. St. James’ pen as well. Chelle’s daughters exist as unique entities, not simply pawns used to highlight characteristics and features in the protagonists. The daughters, Maddie and Josie, are delightful in their own rights. They are feisty, intelligent, funny. They bring an empathy to the story.
There are some inconsistencies that are stark. Mentioning them would mean spoiling the way the story unfolds. However, they are serious. For instance – and this example mentions something that isn’t exactly a spoiler, but is initially a surprise to the reader – Shade was able to track down his abusers, but how? He could hardly read, had no computer skills…how did he find these men? It was the writer’s “and then a miracle occurred” moment with no details on how he found the appropriate information. There are other similar problems but listing them would be deleterious to the reading experience.
There are some errors, but not many. For instance:
“Her and Maddie were in the same grade….” This is a librarian (who admittedly loves words) speaking; she would not use bad grammar. It should be, “She and Maddie were in the same grade….” The word, “her,” is an object but the sentence needs a subject pronoun, “She.”
“Miller final remembered a boy named Julian….” Maybe he FINALLY remembered a boy?
I rated this book 4.5 stars and rounded down because of some logistical flaws. Otherwise, this is a beautiful story, for all its inherent MC violence, about a man coming to grips with all that has happened to him. Really, well done!