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436 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 5, 2020
"out of sequence too. A scene I feel like writing one day might not come until half way through the book but I'll do it nonetheless and then hope I can use it later. It's more like making a film I suppose. Not everything is shot in sequence. My next book, Progeny, is a good example of that. I was going backwards and forwards all the time adding bits and writing new chapters to slot in (trying to make it make sense!!)." [Shaun Hutson, 20 Dec 2019]I felt this is definitely reflected in this work, and I was particularly distracted by the inconsistency in the ages of three characters: when we are first introduced to Jake Howard we are told he is 48 years old (ch. 4), then we are told he is 56 (ch. 9), then he is about 45 or 46 (ch. 34), and again around 58 as we are first told he is "twice" (ch. 35) and then "almost twice" (ch. 51) Dani's age, who is 29 in chapters 5, 14, 24, 101, but 25 in chapter 60 (in fact, ch. 51 had told us that was when they had met). Similarly, Jake's daughter is introduced to us as an 18-year old (ch. 14), but is then referred to as being 22 (ch. 60). These inconsistencies, as well as a few others (such as 'Jake' being called 'Jason' in chapter 20 when laughing about the price of flags) should have been picked up at the editing stage and let Hutson's story-telling down unnecessarily.