Not feeling this
This had the potential to be a very unique and different book with the sister being blind, but the author took away from the greatness it could have been with CONSTANTLY talking about Milan blindness. The character didn’t add anything to the story except being a burden on her sister since that stayed on repeat throughout the whole dang story. I mean unless somebody was taking her somewhere Milan never left the house, or did anything to show that she had more going for herself or at least trying other than a dang man. I mean I ain’t no expert on being blind but I see blind ppl all the time by themselves, on buses, getting in cabs, working, opening up businesses etc. This story really handicapped the character in her blindness and the fact that it just kept being brought up in everybody except poppa’s chapter was really annoying to the point I started skipping pages. I thought this was gone be a female boss up story instead it was a female depression story. All Italy did was let her baby daddy bring her down and talk stuff about her. She kept bringing up “I take care of three kids and a blind sibling” like we get it, women do it everyday B. Oh yea let’s not forget how weak poppa is, omg he makes me want to treat him like a 🤬, he was def a book bae fail. Then the whole story we go without finding out how she got pregnant with Jai cuz she just didn’t want to talk about it with anyone. Just to get to the end of the story and she just blurt out in front of a room full ppl that he raped her? Like for real, and then the fake drama that’s about to start with Milan and dude. I feel like it wasn’t a need to force drama the characters had all been through enough, it’s time to lighten the story up, because it’s about to be overkill now. The only reason I want to read pt2 is to see how the marriage ends.