Fell short
Because we knew it wasn't a long story, it was a given the story would go fast. I also expected it to not be real plausible. A quick MC read where they live HEA. But sometimes you just have to think... Seriously??
Boy sees girl pole dancing, boy knows right then this is the woman for him (what?), boy rescues her and takes her to her home, they spend the night, next morning he kills a man for her, they ride off into the sunset at his club. The end. Oh, and the man that was killed, the brother of President of MC he rescued her from. They just toss the dead man in the back of the truck, drive to their territory to bury him, and call it a day. No questions or suspicions from the other MC. They assumed he just randomly left, never to return. This from one of the scariest MCs? Not just a member of the club, the president's brother.
Now the main man, he's VP of his MC club. He is supposed to be tough and hard, his club is harsh and rules the town and police. And yet he acts like some love struck child. He even says this isn't him, being all soft and caring about a woman. He cares so much, he wants her to be his Old Lady, decided that right off the bat. She on the other hand doesn't know what to do. (Maybe because they met like 5 hours ago??) They sleep on it, next morning she is head over heels.
Inconsistencies drove me crazy. *She asked him to spend the night. Shortly after that she is all about how he offered to stay and she couldn't turn that away. *Epilogue, one year later...they decided no more birth control right after marriage. When she ends up pregnant, she's worried he may not want this. (I'm sorry, but what??) What does stopping birth control mean? She also comments it wasn't a surprise he was able to get her pregnant because they have sex like every day. This isn't the next month or even two months after stopping birth control. It. Is. One. Year. Later.
So, if you are ready for fast read, like books about MCs, expect and don't mind mistakes, then here you go.