3.75 ✰
This was so much better than the first one!! It had me hooked the WHOLE time!!
Ollie
Aw, he is very sweet. He said he has two sides and even though here we don't see his jokester side that much, we get to know the other side of him. And I think that was great, cause we had a lot from his façade on the first book. I wanted to hug him the whole time, he just seemed so lost!! I enjoyed his tension with Piper, though...
Piper
My dudes, she has my outmost admiration. How she didn't crumble after like 100 pages idfk, but damn that girl's strong. She just had one thing after the other pilling up and I could literally feel her frustration and anxiety. Once she has a plan (kinda) everything slows down, but it didn't get boring. I enjoyed watching her find her way through every down.
Other people
Christian and Hayley are a lot here and I'm glad. They are such good friends. So is Eric!! This book got me excited for his book, cause the heroine is an anti-heroine!! That's gonna be interesting. Jason... yeah, nope. Didn't like him. Maybe if we saw a real and deep conversation between him and Pipe, I would've warmed up to him, but idk man...
Conflict
Mmm, it was okay. It was more believable than the conflict in the last book. It definitely kept me anxious cause we didn't know a single thing Ollie was planning, but it was good. It was left kind of open, but I'm guessing it's gonna come back on the next book somehow. With Sky and Madeline involved and everything.
Why not 5 stars?
- Like I said, I wanted at least one conversation between Piper and Jason. That scene at the hospital would've been perfect for a moment like that.
- I hated that we didn't see the conversation between Ollie, Christian and their dad. UNFAIR. We needed to see how that went down, not just the aftermath.
- Closure about Tank. If he doesn't come back next book, then I'm gonna be disappointed with his ending cause we didn't get a real final closure.
- I loved Piper and Ollie's relationship, but it kinda felt short for me. I'm not sure why. Maybe it's because they took too damn long to start something and then when they did, shit hit the fan. Idk. There was something missing. I wish their hugs brought me more warmth, like I waited for one for sooo long and when they do hug, it felt lacking. The writing wasn't the best there.
- Also, the part where Piper breaks down... was unfulfilling. I expected more there and I'm actually not sure if the scene where she "breaks down" can be considered as such.
- Sometimes, the characters seemed dull and like they were just going through motions.
It may seem like there was a lot I didn't like. And there was, but I still enjoyed it a lot more than the first. The plot and conflict were more believable and the main characters were just better. I liked them way more. This was great and I can't wait for the next!!