I really didn't want another DNF on my record, but so much for that.
This book is distinctly mediocre. I'm really puzzled by the sea of four and five star reviews! Let me explain my reasoning.
First, holy crap this really jumps around! There is absolutely no flow to the narrative, and there is a terrible lack of proper segues into paragraphs. As a reader this is very jarring. It's almost as if the writing is flying by the seat of the pants, without an outline or general idea of events made beforehand.
Second, this is one big ol' deus ex machina.
Third, the two main characters so far are Jerrol and Jennery. No, they're not twins. But I had a really hard time keeping these characters separate during conversations!
And fourth, ideas are brought into the mix well after the fact, and it makes them unbelievable. Let me try give an example of what I'm trying to explain.
Jerrol, (let's call him J1), is on the run and comes across a fully caparisoned horse in the woods just in the nick of time. He thinks it's pretty, checks the saddlebags for food and money, (and lo! both are conveniently supplied), hops on the horse and gallops off. Pages later he is talking with Jennery, (J2). The conversation is along these lines:
J2: Wow, J1, that's some swell horse you have there!
J1: Thanks.
J2: Isn't it one of those magnificent ultra-rare mythological types of horses?
J1: Yup.
J2: Don't those horses tell you their own name?
J1: Yup.
Okay, so when J1 galloped away on this pretty and fully-stocked horse, none of these details were even alluded to. It's almost as if the author thought that maybe she would make it a magical horse later on because of the cool factor. She had written other things too late as well, but the horse really stuck in my craw. I think that was the last straw.