I AM ADDING MY REVIEW FOR BOOK ONE AND BOOK TWO BECAUSE FOR SOME REASON WHEN YOU PULL BOOK TWO UP IT IS THE SAME REVIEWS FROM BOOK ONE. SO I COMBINED BUT SEPERATED BOTH BOOKS.
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I GAVE THIS BOOK 3 STARS INSTEAD OF 5 BECAUSE I THINK THE STORY SHOULD HAVE BEEN TOLD IN ONE BOOK.
2. I THINK THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE GIVEN US A LITTLE KARMA IN THIS BOOK ON CRAIG
I SEE THIS BOOK HAS A SEQUEL AND IT COST $15.00 BUT THIS STORY IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH TO PAY $15.00. THAT’S JUST MY OPINION. I GOT THE SEQUEL FOR FREE AND THAT IS THE ONLY REASON I'M READING IT.
SPARKLE REALLY GOT ON MY LAST NERVE BEING SO DARN NAÏVE. I WAS LIKE GIRL, COME ON NOW. WHATEVER CRAIG DO TO HER I WILL NOT FEEL SORRY FOR HER. SHE SAW ALL THE SIGNS.
I WAS REALLY MAD AT DIAMOND BECAUSE SHE TOLD HER DAD WHAT WAS GOING ON AND I KNOW HE NEEDED TO KNOW BUT TELLING HIM WAS REALLY A CATCH 22 BECAUSE THAT WHOLE SCENE COULD HAVE WENT TOTALLY ANOTHER WAY AND MYRON COULD HAVE GOTTEN KILLED OR SENT TO JAIL FOR 20 YEARS. I’M JUST SAYING.
CRAIG WAS A FOOL AND A HALF. THAT MAN WAS OFF THE CHAIN AND I AM REALLY MAD THAT HE DIDN’T GET WHAT HE DESERVED IN THIS BOOK.
THERE WERE ERRORS IN THIS BOOK BUT THE ONE I COULD NOT FORGIVE AND WHAT MADE THIS BOOK LOSE POINTS IS WHEN THE AUTHOR GOT THE CHARACTERS MIXED UP. ON PAGE 86 HE CALLED BREONNA SPARKLE.
I WOULD SUGGEST THIS BOOK ONLY IF YOU ARE WILLING TO PAY $15.00 FOR THE SEQUEL BECAUSE YOU WILL BE LEFT HANGING.
SIGNED: NO SEQUEL FOR ME.
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I GAVE THIS BOOK 2 STARS INSTEAD OF 5 BECAUSE I WAS REALLY DISAPPPOINTED IN THIS SEQUEL. HERE IS JUST SOME OF THE REASONS. I WILL TALK IN CODE BECAUSE I DON’T WANT TO GIVE A SPOILER ALERT.
1. FIRST THING I WANT TO KNOW IS HOW DID BREONNA GET PREGNANT AND HAVE A BABY? IN BOOK ONE SHE HAD A HYSTERECTOMY, AND NOT JUST A HYSTERECTOMY BUT A COMPLETE HYSTERECTOMY.
2. WHEN CHAD DOWNLOADED THE APP TO FIND A FRIEND AND HE WAS ABLE TO LOCATE CRAIG BY USING THAT APP. THE ONLY WAY YOU CAN LOCATE A FRIEND BY USING THAT APP IS THE FRIEND WHO YOU ARE TRYING TO LOCATE HAS TO ACCEPT YOUR REQUEST. YOU CAN’T JUST LOCATE WHOEVER YOU WANT TO WITHOUT PERMISSION.
3. THE AUTHOR KEPT SAYING CRAIG AND CHAD WERE BEST FRIENDS IN BOTH BOOKS, BUT IN NEITHER BOOK, DID THEY HAVE ANY BONDING TIME. THEY NEVER HUNG OUT OR NOTHING. I NEVER FELT THE CONNECTION.
4. AFTER SPARKLE HAD HER BABY WHY DIDN’T SHE GO HOME WITH HER PARENTS INSTEAD OF HER SISTER’S HOUSE AND AFTER SHE LEFT THE HOSPITAL THE MOTHER NOR THE FATHER CAME TO HER SISTER’S HOUSE TO SEE THE BABY OR HELP WITH THE BABY. I AM ONLY MAKING A BIG DEAL OUT OF THIS BECAUSE THE AUTHOR MADE IT A POINT TO SHOW HOW CLOSE THIS FAMILY BOND WAS.
5. WITH ALL THE CHARGES CRAIG HAD ON HIM HOW DID HE GET BAIL PLUS THEY JUST GIVE HIM 25 YEARS.
6. WHEN CRAIG WENT TO THE EMERGENCY ROOM FOR HIS BURN, I’M NOT UNDERSTANDING WHY THE E.R DOCTOR WOULD TELL HIM TO COME TO HIS OFFICE FOR FOLLOWUP. I WORK IN HEALTHCARE AND I HAVE NEVER SEEN WHERE THE E.R DOCTOR TELL THE PATIENT TO COME TO HIS OFFICE FOR A FOLLOWUP. THE DOCTOR WOULD HAVE TOLD CRAIG TO FOLLOW-UP WITH HIS PRIMARY CARE DOCTOR.
THAT’S JUST SOME OF THE STUFF.
I AM SO MAD THE AUTHOR DID THAT TO MYRON. EVEN IF SOMETHING HAD HAPPENED, HE SHOULD HAVE COME OUT OF THE DEAL WITH A BETTER OUTCOME.
I THINK THE AUTHOR SHOULD HAVE GIVEN US SOME CLARITY ON ALONDRA’S SITUATION. I WANTED TO KNOW WHAT HER REACTION WAS WHEN THE CAVALRY CAME. I ALSO WANTED TO KNOW HER MOTHER’S REACTION WHEN SHE FOUND OUT ABOUT ALONDRA. I KNOW SHE WASN’T SURPISED THAT MUCH ABOUT CRAIG BUT I WOULD HAVE LIKED TO HAVE KNOWN HER REACTION TO HIM WHEN SHE FOUND OUT EVERYTHING. I ALSO WANTED TO KNOW WHAT TYPE OF GUY BROCK WAS. WAS HE ANYTHING LIKE HIS SISTER AND BROTHER? HE WAS A MYSTERY.
I DON’T THINK CRAIG GOT WHAT HE DESERVED.
ONE THING IN THIS BOOK I WAS SO HAPPY ABOUT IS SPARKLE DID NOT NAME HER BABY ROSALEE!!!!!
I GUESS I WOULD SUGGEST THIS BOOK IF YOU READ BOOK ONE.
SIGNED: I SHOULD HAVE KEPT RUNNING FROM THIS BOOK!!!