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Daughters of Tamnarae #1
Etania's Worth
Cryptic power changes Etania’s life forever…
Etania’s new apprenticeship as a librarian is shattered when she fends off an attacker with Neuma, the hidden power she didn’t know she had. When her father discovers Etania’s gift, Jakin wants to use her as a weapon to stop a threat rising over Tamnarae. Etania despises the idea of being used as a weapon, but the death of a family member forces her to act before it is too late, setting her on a journey leading to love and an acceptance for her newfound gift.
Etania’s new apprenticeship as a librarian is shattered when she fends off an attacker with Neuma, the hidden power she didn’t know she had. When her father discovers Etania’s gift, Jakin wants to use her as a weapon to stop a threat rising over Tamnarae. Etania despises the idea of being used as a weapon, but the death of a family member forces her to act before it is too late, setting her on a journey leading to love and an acceptance for her newfound gift.
306 pages, Kindle Edition
Published October 1, 2020
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M.H. Elrich
9 books141 followersM.H. Elrich is a Christian Fantasy author, reader, otaku, and teacher who wears too many hats. In her spare time, she watches T.V. with her husband, rides horses, and travels to places with lots of trees. Her work has been featured in two separate books: Finding God in Anime and Where Giants Fall, and her stories have won several awards at the Kern County Fair. She is currently writing and publishing the Daughters of Tamnarae series.
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March 10, 2019
A very pleasant coming-of-age fantasy adventure about a teenage girl who discovers, as the title suggests, that she does have worth—to her father, to the man who falls in love with her, and in fact to the whole land of Tamnarae.
It took me a while to get into the story, partly because for some reason I'd been expecting something more in the adult spectrum. As it is, although it's not listed as YA fiction, I would think its main appeal would be to young teenage girls. That said, it has a strong plot, the characters are brought to face their weaknesses and grow through the process, and the Christian foundation of this world, where 'Melchizedek' is the name given to Jesus, is well established from the start. Christian truths are woven into the story in a natural, organic way at various points where Melchizedek lovingly confronts the principal characters and brings them to an understanding of how they need to grow through loving and trusting Him.
I liked the way Etania, who thought she had no special power (or 'Neuma'), discovers that she actually has quite a spectacular one; as does Keyel, her bodyguard and (gradually) her boyfriend. The romance between these two is well built up through the story, with all the inevitable doubts and angst along the way. So also is her relationship with her formerly absentee-father, which is prickly at first but slowly improves as they begin to understand each other better. The story is not without tragedy as well, and one particularly poignant death leads Etania into a deeper dependence on God.
The final confrontation with the evil power that threatens to darken Southern Tamnarae is steadily and inexorably built up to, with many twists and turns along the way; and Etania plays a satisfyingly crucial role in the breathtaking climax, along with her father and Keyel.
On the negative side, there were a number of word-choices that I felt were not appropriate, though generally it's well written with very few spelling or grammatical errors; and in several places there were redundant descriptions of things clearly implied by what had already been said. By contrast, her various races, leaders and types of people (tafif, nothus, etc.) were at one point thrown into the story in rapid-fire succession, causing some definite information overload. I only later discovered the Glossary at the end: maybe this could be placed at the beginning; or better, a little more explanation added in the text, since many readers tend not to look at glossaries until afterwards, if at all.
Having said that, personally I like maps and glossaries and such extras, and I appreciated their inclusion in this book. The map at the beginning is very nicely done.
Another minor negative was that I thought the author showed a certain naivety, and perhaps a little ignorance, firstly about the mediaeval world her fantasy land is based on; and secondly about politics and government in general. (I'm open to correction here if she was in fact simplifying the issues for her young target audience.) Regarding the medieval world, for me the main problem was that Etania's mother is several times addressed as 'milady', yet she doesn't behave like a mediaeval lady when it comes to washing the dishes or lacing up her daughter's new dress! Those tasks would never be done by a lady of the mediaeval aristocracy. On the other hand the king and queen are also addressed as 'milord' and 'milady' (instead of the more elevated 'your Majesty' or 'your Grace'), and the general behaviour towards them is as equals, without the deference expected towards royalty.
With regard to politics and government, I can't be specific without creating spoilers, so I'll only say as an example that speaking of leaders "making the rules" rather than "passing laws" is the kind of simplified description one would give to a child rather than an older teenager or adult. I felt a similar over-simplified approach in most places where politics or government were under discussion. Again, my apologies to the author if this was deliberate in view of the target audience.
The one more major criticism I have of the book is that after the fantastic, nail-biting climax in Chapter 29 there's a long section of tying up loose ends in Chapter 30, including significant chunks of 'telling' rather than 'showing'. This was a bit of an anticlimax and a let-down to me, though I can see that some of it may be necessary for the ongoing story. The final conversation between Etania and Keyel is great; and the very last scene is an essential 'hook' to the sequel. But I feel it would be good if this chapter could be shortened as much as possible to avoid the feeling that the author is outstaying her welcome.
Despite these few negatives, though, this was a very enjoyable read, and I can highly recommend it especially for younger teenagers.
It took me a while to get into the story, partly because for some reason I'd been expecting something more in the adult spectrum. As it is, although it's not listed as YA fiction, I would think its main appeal would be to young teenage girls. That said, it has a strong plot, the characters are brought to face their weaknesses and grow through the process, and the Christian foundation of this world, where 'Melchizedek' is the name given to Jesus, is well established from the start. Christian truths are woven into the story in a natural, organic way at various points where Melchizedek lovingly confronts the principal characters and brings them to an understanding of how they need to grow through loving and trusting Him.
I liked the way Etania, who thought she had no special power (or 'Neuma'), discovers that she actually has quite a spectacular one; as does Keyel, her bodyguard and (gradually) her boyfriend. The romance between these two is well built up through the story, with all the inevitable doubts and angst along the way. So also is her relationship with her formerly absentee-father, which is prickly at first but slowly improves as they begin to understand each other better. The story is not without tragedy as well, and one particularly poignant death leads Etania into a deeper dependence on God.
The final confrontation with the evil power that threatens to darken Southern Tamnarae is steadily and inexorably built up to, with many twists and turns along the way; and Etania plays a satisfyingly crucial role in the breathtaking climax, along with her father and Keyel.
On the negative side, there were a number of word-choices that I felt were not appropriate, though generally it's well written with very few spelling or grammatical errors; and in several places there were redundant descriptions of things clearly implied by what had already been said. By contrast, her various races, leaders and types of people (tafif, nothus, etc.) were at one point thrown into the story in rapid-fire succession, causing some definite information overload. I only later discovered the Glossary at the end: maybe this could be placed at the beginning; or better, a little more explanation added in the text, since many readers tend not to look at glossaries until afterwards, if at all.
Having said that, personally I like maps and glossaries and such extras, and I appreciated their inclusion in this book. The map at the beginning is very nicely done.
Another minor negative was that I thought the author showed a certain naivety, and perhaps a little ignorance, firstly about the mediaeval world her fantasy land is based on; and secondly about politics and government in general. (I'm open to correction here if she was in fact simplifying the issues for her young target audience.) Regarding the medieval world, for me the main problem was that Etania's mother is several times addressed as 'milady', yet she doesn't behave like a mediaeval lady when it comes to washing the dishes or lacing up her daughter's new dress! Those tasks would never be done by a lady of the mediaeval aristocracy. On the other hand the king and queen are also addressed as 'milord' and 'milady' (instead of the more elevated 'your Majesty' or 'your Grace'), and the general behaviour towards them is as equals, without the deference expected towards royalty.
With regard to politics and government, I can't be specific without creating spoilers, so I'll only say as an example that speaking of leaders "making the rules" rather than "passing laws" is the kind of simplified description one would give to a child rather than an older teenager or adult. I felt a similar over-simplified approach in most places where politics or government were under discussion. Again, my apologies to the author if this was deliberate in view of the target audience.
The one more major criticism I have of the book is that after the fantastic, nail-biting climax in Chapter 29 there's a long section of tying up loose ends in Chapter 30, including significant chunks of 'telling' rather than 'showing'. This was a bit of an anticlimax and a let-down to me, though I can see that some of it may be necessary for the ongoing story. The final conversation between Etania and Keyel is great; and the very last scene is an essential 'hook' to the sequel. But I feel it would be good if this chapter could be shortened as much as possible to avoid the feeling that the author is outstaying her welcome.
Despite these few negatives, though, this was a very enjoyable read, and I can highly recommend it especially for younger teenagers.
June 28, 2019
I don’t read Biblical fantasy or really any Biblical-based books, so this was new for me. M.H. Elrich and I did a book review trade and I always welcome the opportunity to read something new.
For starters, there are many characters, races, and places in this book. It got hard for me to keep up with. Then I got to the end of the ebook and realized there was a glossary all along. If I had read the book in print, I would have seen it earlier and wouldn’t have had a problem. So I recommend reading this book in print.
Many of the descriptions are well-done as is the climax. The climax is the strongest point of the book as you really feel all the events of the story connecting and reaching a peak. Etania does not drive the story as much as other characters do, but she still has some likable traits. I liked Keyel but my favorite character was Tala. I found her to have a strong personality and I was surprised by what happened to her.
I can say in all honesty that one of my favorite parts is how we end up being wrong about the ultimate villain. That was very well-done and I didn’t see it coming.
I received a free ebook in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
For starters, there are many characters, races, and places in this book. It got hard for me to keep up with. Then I got to the end of the ebook and realized there was a glossary all along. If I had read the book in print, I would have seen it earlier and wouldn’t have had a problem. So I recommend reading this book in print.
Many of the descriptions are well-done as is the climax. The climax is the strongest point of the book as you really feel all the events of the story connecting and reaching a peak. Etania does not drive the story as much as other characters do, but she still has some likable traits. I liked Keyel but my favorite character was Tala. I found her to have a strong personality and I was surprised by what happened to her.
I can say in all honesty that one of my favorite parts is how we end up being wrong about the ultimate villain. That was very well-done and I didn’t see it coming.
I received a free ebook in exchange for an honest review. All opinions are my own.
February 2, 2024
On the planet Tearah, where the various human races possess different Neuma, or powers and gifts granted by God, Etania doubts herself and her gift. Chosen to help save the world? Yeah, right. Cute bodyguard falling in love with her? Double yeah, right. Why would anyone, especially Melchizidek the God of Tamnarae, love or believe in her when she can't even keep the attention of her own father?
Etania's Worth is a Christian allegorical quest fantasy with coming-of-age and chosen-one themes, plus a side of clean romance. Elrich doesn't hide the allegory or the Christian themes--it's stated clearly in the glossary which characters/symbols are meant to reflect Father, Son and Holy Spirit. Melchizidek also obviously has twelve followers (disciples), one of whom betrays him. None of this detracts from the story, and whilst bits of the plot may seem rather apparent or predictable to people well-versed with chosen one or Christian/faith-based stories (whether Biblical stories or fiction), the way it unfolds is nevertheless interesting.
I especially love the extensive worldbuilding you catch glimpses of as Etania, Jakin and Kayel travel throughout Tamnarae on their quest. However, "glimpses" is a key thing here--it sometimes feels as though you're rushed through the world like a tourist without fully experiencing it, which ended up more than a little confusing at times. I guess what I'm saying is that I would have liked a little more immersion, if that makes sense. Still, the Glossary was stuffed with information you didn't know you didn't know so that helped a little.
One of the key themes Elrich addresses in Etania's Worth is the idea of self-worth and acceptance, but in the Christian sense. Etania and Keyel both doubt themselves, their gifts, and their statuses in society because of their youth, experiences, and past. Elrich works with the concepts of redemption as well as reliance on God to build their confidence in both their worth, value, and acceptance of self.
My major bugbear with this novel, which is probably inordinately affected by the fact that I'm currently doing my own edits, is that it could really, really do with another round of editing. The writing is clunky in parts and, whilst readable, could have been tightened up a lot more.
The book will probably suit female YA readers (aged 15 - 20-ish) the best. Whilst there is war and fighting aplenty, there's also a huge chunk of MAYBE HE LIKES ME MAYBE HE DOESN'T WHY WOULD HE EVER LIKE ME I'M UGLY AND TERRIBLE AND USELESS that may turn off teenage boys after a bit.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
Etania's Worth is a Christian allegorical quest fantasy with coming-of-age and chosen-one themes, plus a side of clean romance. Elrich doesn't hide the allegory or the Christian themes--it's stated clearly in the glossary which characters/symbols are meant to reflect Father, Son and Holy Spirit. Melchizidek also obviously has twelve followers (disciples), one of whom betrays him. None of this detracts from the story, and whilst bits of the plot may seem rather apparent or predictable to people well-versed with chosen one or Christian/faith-based stories (whether Biblical stories or fiction), the way it unfolds is nevertheless interesting.
I especially love the extensive worldbuilding you catch glimpses of as Etania, Jakin and Kayel travel throughout Tamnarae on their quest. However, "glimpses" is a key thing here--it sometimes feels as though you're rushed through the world like a tourist without fully experiencing it, which ended up more than a little confusing at times. I guess what I'm saying is that I would have liked a little more immersion, if that makes sense. Still, the Glossary was stuffed with information you didn't know you didn't know so that helped a little.
One of the key themes Elrich addresses in Etania's Worth is the idea of self-worth and acceptance, but in the Christian sense. Etania and Keyel both doubt themselves, their gifts, and their statuses in society because of their youth, experiences, and past. Elrich works with the concepts of redemption as well as reliance on God to build their confidence in both their worth, value, and acceptance of self.
My major bugbear with this novel, which is probably inordinately affected by the fact that I'm currently doing my own edits, is that it could really, really do with another round of editing. The writing is clunky in parts and, whilst readable, could have been tightened up a lot more.
The book will probably suit female YA readers (aged 15 - 20-ish) the best. Whilst there is war and fighting aplenty, there's also a huge chunk of MAYBE HE LIKES ME MAYBE HE DOESN'T WHY WOULD HE EVER LIKE ME I'M UGLY AND TERRIBLE AND USELESS that may turn off teenage boys after a bit.
I received a complimentary copy of this book from the author. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
June 26, 2019
“Elaina’s Worth,” by M. H. Elrich, is a fantasy novel with strong spiritual underpinnings, rooted in a world with various humanoids, each having the power to control dragons, tame wolves, and manipulate elements such as water, trees, metal. The story centers around coming-of-age Etania Selali, a daughter struggling to understand her identity, her worthiness to be loved, and to accept the role given to her by one known as Melchizidek (a Jesus-like figure), in order to save Tamnarae. Her father, Jakin, mostly-absent throughout much of her life, is forced to flee with Etania and his apprentice/Etania’s bodyguard, Keyel Evant, when King Toren and Queen Jazel suddenly drag the continent into great conflict by seeking to sweep the world into darkness.
Elrich has crafted a captivating journey that is entertaining, satisfying, and action-packed. It is a novel any reader of fantasy or alternative fiction or action or romance will enjoy (the novel ticks all of these boxes and more). And it remains grounded in spiritual reality and truth—among other things that the love of Melchizidek compels mercy, not destruction, against those under evil’s sway. Along with Etania, I especially liked Keyel as a character, a young man who has his own dealings to face due to his difficult life story, along with his desire to court Etania. This is a book for all ages and deserves to be discovered.
MY PERSONAL RATINGS [w/Key Below]: Story Originality: 5 out of 5///Story Inventiveness: 4 out of 5///Characters: 4 out of 5///Descriptive Power: 4 out of 5///True to Scripture: 5+ out of 5///Fictive Dream Strength: 4 out of 5///Proofreading: 4.5 out of 5///Cinematic Flare: 5 out of 5///Overall Satisfaction: 4 out of 5.
[MY KEY] Story Originality: How creative was the concept from page one onwards?/Story Inventiveness: How surprised was I by the flow of the Plot? Any twists?/Characters: How real and how drawn was I to the story’s characters?/Descriptive Power: How sweeping is the author’s control of description, dialogue, etc?/True to Scripture: Were all elements true to Scripture’s worldview?/Fictive Dream Strength: How much was I immersed in the novel—wanting to read page after page?/Proofreading: How well was the book proofread (typos, etc)?/Cinematic Flare: How strong were key scenes (that I could easily see as a motion picture)?/Overall Satisfaction: What was my overall feeling/enjoyment level after reading the novel? Did I want it to end?
I recommend “Etania’s Worth” by M. H. Elrich. It is the first book of a series of adventures set in Tamnarae. (The next installment is set for release December 2019.)
Elrich has crafted a captivating journey that is entertaining, satisfying, and action-packed. It is a novel any reader of fantasy or alternative fiction or action or romance will enjoy (the novel ticks all of these boxes and more). And it remains grounded in spiritual reality and truth—among other things that the love of Melchizidek compels mercy, not destruction, against those under evil’s sway. Along with Etania, I especially liked Keyel as a character, a young man who has his own dealings to face due to his difficult life story, along with his desire to court Etania. This is a book for all ages and deserves to be discovered.
MY PERSONAL RATINGS [w/Key Below]: Story Originality: 5 out of 5///Story Inventiveness: 4 out of 5///Characters: 4 out of 5///Descriptive Power: 4 out of 5///True to Scripture: 5+ out of 5///Fictive Dream Strength: 4 out of 5///Proofreading: 4.5 out of 5///Cinematic Flare: 5 out of 5///Overall Satisfaction: 4 out of 5.
[MY KEY] Story Originality: How creative was the concept from page one onwards?/Story Inventiveness: How surprised was I by the flow of the Plot? Any twists?/Characters: How real and how drawn was I to the story’s characters?/Descriptive Power: How sweeping is the author’s control of description, dialogue, etc?/True to Scripture: Were all elements true to Scripture’s worldview?/Fictive Dream Strength: How much was I immersed in the novel—wanting to read page after page?/Proofreading: How well was the book proofread (typos, etc)?/Cinematic Flare: How strong were key scenes (that I could easily see as a motion picture)?/Overall Satisfaction: What was my overall feeling/enjoyment level after reading the novel? Did I want it to end?
I recommend “Etania’s Worth” by M. H. Elrich. It is the first book of a series of adventures set in Tamnarae. (The next installment is set for release December 2019.)
June 20, 2019
Etania's Worth is an immersive journey into a Fantasy world where Jesus is represented by their leader Melchizedek and the Holy Spirit by a mysterious force called Neuma. This imaginative exploration of gifts left by Melchizedek to aid his people in their battle with evil is an exciting way for Christians to remember the amazing gift we have in the Holy Spirit.
As a lover of YA Fiction, there are many elements in this story I enjoyed: a race against time through dangerous and varied lands and peoples, a slow build of confidence in their abilities, a healing of past hurts, a struggle against change, and a search to discover their purpose. There is a romantic element to the story, and it follows a natural progression that unfolds beautifully. The Christian aspects of the story blend seamlessly with the fantasy world and fuels the story rather than simply adding on to it.
Etania is an excellent female lead character. She grows and changes and is instrumental in the key scenes in the story. Her relationship with her parents and her romantic interest are multi-layered and realistic.
I loved the presentation of the Neuma and various races so much that I felt that their descriptions and action scenes were a little rushed—I wanted to see more!
I am looking forward to the rest of the series!
As a lover of YA Fiction, there are many elements in this story I enjoyed: a race against time through dangerous and varied lands and peoples, a slow build of confidence in their abilities, a healing of past hurts, a struggle against change, and a search to discover their purpose. There is a romantic element to the story, and it follows a natural progression that unfolds beautifully. The Christian aspects of the story blend seamlessly with the fantasy world and fuels the story rather than simply adding on to it.
Etania is an excellent female lead character. She grows and changes and is instrumental in the key scenes in the story. Her relationship with her parents and her romantic interest are multi-layered and realistic.
I loved the presentation of the Neuma and various races so much that I felt that their descriptions and action scenes were a little rushed—I wanted to see more!
I am looking forward to the rest of the series!
July 11, 2019
Etania’s Worth is not only everything you want in a fantasy novel (think special powers, dragons, an evil king, an epic battle, and a sweet romance) but it is also a beautiful portrayal of biblical grace and being made perfect in weakness.
The characters face real life problems such as parental/child relationship issues, doubting their purpose and the will that God has for their lives, and the very relatable struggle of just letting go and letting God have control.
There is a useful map located in the front of the book, as well as a glossary in the back to help you keep track of the different countries, characters, and unique terms. They are a very nice touch that allow you to really immerse yourself into this fantasy world.
The characters have really stuck with me since I’ve finished reading and I’m looking forward to the next installment in this series!
*Disclaimer – I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for a honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
The characters face real life problems such as parental/child relationship issues, doubting their purpose and the will that God has for their lives, and the very relatable struggle of just letting go and letting God have control.
There is a useful map located in the front of the book, as well as a glossary in the back to help you keep track of the different countries, characters, and unique terms. They are a very nice touch that allow you to really immerse yourself into this fantasy world.
The characters have really stuck with me since I’ve finished reading and I’m looking forward to the next installment in this series!
*Disclaimer – I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for a honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
December 12, 2022
A sweet epic fantasy christian novel that deftly tackles questions about faith, destiny, love, and loss, as well as the importance of good fathers, trustworthy companions, and the crippling nature of self-doubt. It's a good read for christians who love anime and shojo!
June 6, 2019
I thoroughly enjoyed M.H. Elrich’s book, Etania’s Worth. I was on an emotional rollercoaster as the characters suffered pain, struggles, and victories. There were real tears.
Etania’s struggles are an amazing blend of a girl becoming a woman with normal adult stresses and a fantasy heroine who learns of her special talents and unexpected destiny. It almost makes the fantasy feel real. There were serious Biblical truths evident as Etania, her father and her bodyguard learn to listen to the Lord and trust him.
It was a little difficult to keep up with the different groups of people represented and their unique talents, but there was a glossary in the back to help keep them straight in my head. I loved how they were able to overcome their petty squabbles to unite against their common enemy.
I’m looking forward to what comes next as there was definitely a door left open at the end.
Etania’s struggles are an amazing blend of a girl becoming a woman with normal adult stresses and a fantasy heroine who learns of her special talents and unexpected destiny. It almost makes the fantasy feel real. There were serious Biblical truths evident as Etania, her father and her bodyguard learn to listen to the Lord and trust him.
It was a little difficult to keep up with the different groups of people represented and their unique talents, but there was a glossary in the back to help keep them straight in my head. I loved how they were able to overcome their petty squabbles to unite against their common enemy.
I’m looking forward to what comes next as there was definitely a door left open at the end.
April 15, 2021
*1.5 stars*
I wanted to like this book, and it had a lot of potential. But, sadly, it didn't live up to my expectations.
Pros:
--> Complex world, with lots of potential.
--> Keyel's interesting backstory.
--> Odd but interesting allegory.
--> Some fast-paced scenes.
--> Lots of potential.
Cons:
--> Character arcs that fell pretty flat because of sudden changes.
--> Romance that moved from nothing-to-everything too quickly.
--> Annoying characters.
--> Bad writing style.
--> Worldbuilding that was too unrealistic yet unexplained, so it pulled me out of the story.
--> The story itself was boring.
--> Very modern dialogue that took me out of the fantasy of the story.
(While I won't count this as a con, since it's a personal standard and not a reflection of the writing, I didn't like the witchcraft aspect that showed up at the end. Especially since I had been told this was non-magical.)
Content: As I mentioned above in parentheses, there was a witchcraft angle that popped up at the end. Aside from that, the main part of this book was the gifts, or "Neuma" that many characters had. While it's not exactly magic, it is the same concept. It's used an allegory for spiritual gifts. The romance is very clean. There is some violence, but it isn't gory.
Age Recommendation: 12+
*Note: I received a complimentary e-copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. A positive review was not required.*
I wanted to like this book, and it had a lot of potential. But, sadly, it didn't live up to my expectations.
Pros:
--> Complex world, with lots of potential.
--> Keyel's interesting backstory.
--> Odd but interesting allegory.
--> Some fast-paced scenes.
--> Lots of potential.
Cons:
--> Character arcs that fell pretty flat because of sudden changes.
--> Romance that moved from nothing-to-everything too quickly.
--> Annoying characters.
--> Bad writing style.
--> Worldbuilding that was too unrealistic yet unexplained, so it pulled me out of the story.
--> The story itself was boring.
--> Very modern dialogue that took me out of the fantasy of the story.
(While I won't count this as a con, since it's a personal standard and not a reflection of the writing, I didn't like the witchcraft aspect that showed up at the end. Especially since I had been told this was non-magical.)
Content: As I mentioned above in parentheses, there was a witchcraft angle that popped up at the end. Aside from that, the main part of this book was the gifts, or "Neuma" that many characters had. While it's not exactly magic, it is the same concept. It's used an allegory for spiritual gifts. The romance is very clean. There is some violence, but it isn't gory.
Age Recommendation: 12+
*Note: I received a complimentary e-copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. A positive review was not required.*
August 17, 2019
Etania's Worth is a Christian young adult fantasy fiction book that checks all the boxes for the genre's stereotypes while, at the same time, being fun with a refreshing new spin on some important issues.
The story follows Etania as she learns about her new abilities Nuema, the world's magic system, during an upheaval in her world's government. She learns to follow Melchizideck, deal with her difficult relationship with her father, and navigate some romantic tension with her bodyguard. The fantasy world that Mrs. Elrich has created is diverse and interesting. The Christian allegory is thinly veiled with God the Father being called Deo and Jesus being called Melchizedek. The Spirit gets to stay the same.
The main character is the teenage Etania, and she fits the whiney immature protagonist I have learned to expect in these kinds of books. Unlike some books, though, she starts to mature very quickly in believable ways. I appreciate that Mrs. Elrich did not have Etania yelling and screaming at everyone to add drama. That drives me nuts. Instead, Etania keeps much of her struggles inside while acting on her immature bias. I think this made the character much more relatable to me.
Another refreshing element was the focus on Etania's relationship with her father. This, in particular, touched me the most. So many books will cover fathers and sons or mothers and daughters, but society often overlooks how important a father is to a girl. Etania's father is not abusive or evil, but a very good man so caught up in his own personal war that he misses every important event in his daughter's life. He is a man who strives to protect his family but ends up just leaving a big hole in their lives instead. This complex relationship between Etania and her father then affects both of their relationships with Melchizedek.
To me, this is what set this book apart in its genre and makes it a book I would strongly recommend. We often don't see this kind of nuanced struggle in Christian fiction. Christians tend to be all good guys in Christian fiction or they aren't Christians at all, just hypocrites.
As a parent, I can relate to Etania's father in focusing so hard in one area of parenting while neglecting another. As a daughter, I also related to Etania in wanting a close relationship with her father. The author was very fair to both of them and the struggle between them was believable. I actually cried in a couple of places.
The love story in this book was not nearly as shallow as most young adult books. I was grateful that there was a maturing past the first crush stage and that by the end of the book they weren't just running off to get married. The emotional "does he/she love me" mental dialog for both characters was tiresome for me, but that is because I am a grown woman who is married. I suspect that this would be relatable to teens, though.
This book is obviously the first book in a series, and I was extremely happy to see Mrs. Elrich do this volume right. She resolved the specific conflict that was the focus of this novel while showing us that everything was not done in the bigger picture. You are not left with a cliffhanger, but just a small lead-in to the next story. She doesn't dwell on this lead-in but gives us enough to know it will be interesting. Because of this, I am more likely to read her next book.
Overall, this was a fun book from start to finish. I usually have some sort of suggestion or issue that I wish was changed for most of the books I review, but I like this book as it is. I have seen some reviewers take issue with how quickly the characters move through the world, but I see no problem with this. The world is at war and to have the characters dawdle just so you can show the reader all the world-building you can do is nonsense. This book is not gritty or dark, so don't look for that here. It's clean with no swearing, sex, substance abuse, or gory violence. It is a war, so of course, people are killed, injured, and such, but it is well within rated G range. I recommend this book for teens in middle school and up. It's also a great light read for adults that want something clean with some good spiritual thoughts.
The story follows Etania as she learns about her new abilities Nuema, the world's magic system, during an upheaval in her world's government. She learns to follow Melchizideck, deal with her difficult relationship with her father, and navigate some romantic tension with her bodyguard. The fantasy world that Mrs. Elrich has created is diverse and interesting. The Christian allegory is thinly veiled with God the Father being called Deo and Jesus being called Melchizedek. The Spirit gets to stay the same.
The main character is the teenage Etania, and she fits the whiney immature protagonist I have learned to expect in these kinds of books. Unlike some books, though, she starts to mature very quickly in believable ways. I appreciate that Mrs. Elrich did not have Etania yelling and screaming at everyone to add drama. That drives me nuts. Instead, Etania keeps much of her struggles inside while acting on her immature bias. I think this made the character much more relatable to me.
Another refreshing element was the focus on Etania's relationship with her father. This, in particular, touched me the most. So many books will cover fathers and sons or mothers and daughters, but society often overlooks how important a father is to a girl. Etania's father is not abusive or evil, but a very good man so caught up in his own personal war that he misses every important event in his daughter's life. He is a man who strives to protect his family but ends up just leaving a big hole in their lives instead. This complex relationship between Etania and her father then affects both of their relationships with Melchizedek.
To me, this is what set this book apart in its genre and makes it a book I would strongly recommend. We often don't see this kind of nuanced struggle in Christian fiction. Christians tend to be all good guys in Christian fiction or they aren't Christians at all, just hypocrites.
As a parent, I can relate to Etania's father in focusing so hard in one area of parenting while neglecting another. As a daughter, I also related to Etania in wanting a close relationship with her father. The author was very fair to both of them and the struggle between them was believable. I actually cried in a couple of places.
The love story in this book was not nearly as shallow as most young adult books. I was grateful that there was a maturing past the first crush stage and that by the end of the book they weren't just running off to get married. The emotional "does he/she love me" mental dialog for both characters was tiresome for me, but that is because I am a grown woman who is married. I suspect that this would be relatable to teens, though.
This book is obviously the first book in a series, and I was extremely happy to see Mrs. Elrich do this volume right. She resolved the specific conflict that was the focus of this novel while showing us that everything was not done in the bigger picture. You are not left with a cliffhanger, but just a small lead-in to the next story. She doesn't dwell on this lead-in but gives us enough to know it will be interesting. Because of this, I am more likely to read her next book.
Overall, this was a fun book from start to finish. I usually have some sort of suggestion or issue that I wish was changed for most of the books I review, but I like this book as it is. I have seen some reviewers take issue with how quickly the characters move through the world, but I see no problem with this. The world is at war and to have the characters dawdle just so you can show the reader all the world-building you can do is nonsense. This book is not gritty or dark, so don't look for that here. It's clean with no swearing, sex, substance abuse, or gory violence. It is a war, so of course, people are killed, injured, and such, but it is well within rated G range. I recommend this book for teens in middle school and up. It's also a great light read for adults that want something clean with some good spiritual thoughts.
April 14, 2020
A Christian coming-of-age story in the vein of Narnia, Etania’s Worth is an enjoyable read with a great message and an immersive fantasy world. I’ve had the privilege of going over this story twice as M.H.’s editor, most recently to help her revamp it. So, my review will be covering both the 1st and 2nd editions.
Elrich’s plot and character development are the book's strong points. We get to know the main characters and see things from each one’s POV, which I appreciated. Their personal struggles and failings are believable, and the romance that builds between two of the characters is sweet. The beginning of the story was a little slow for me, but the pace quickens nicely once Etania embarks on her quest. My favorite parts are her visits to various races and the scenes with Melchizedek. I also love each race’s abilities, or Neuma, and felt that the final battle was built up to nicely. There’s also a great twist at the end!
That being said, Etania’s Worth is not perfect. Elrich’s Neuma isn’t described clearly in places, some of the people groups and action scenes are a bit underdeveloped, and I felt that the last battle was confusing…geographically and chronologically. The prose is clunky at times, particularly in scenes M.H. added after my first edit. However, the 2nd edition will address all of these issues. Future readers can expect greater clarity and better, more concise prose when the revamped edition comes out. Tamnarae’s races are explored in greater depth, and the last battle will be even better! Thus, my new rating of 5 stars.
Regardless of edition, the best part of M.H.’s book is how she weaves Christianity into her story. Her names are fantastic: Melchizedek represents Christ, Deo is God, and Malstorm is Satan. There is a clear conflict between good and evil, and Elrich explores the need every person has for a Savior. Most of all, I liked how Etania’s purpose isn’t conventional, for a fantasy tale. It presents a powerful picture of Jesus’ salvific work and how He transforms us from our former state.
All in all, I highly recommend Etania’s Worth for ages 12+! It’s clean, Christian, and has great themes of faith paired with wonderful characters.
Elrich’s plot and character development are the book's strong points. We get to know the main characters and see things from each one’s POV, which I appreciated. Their personal struggles and failings are believable, and the romance that builds between two of the characters is sweet. The beginning of the story was a little slow for me, but the pace quickens nicely once Etania embarks on her quest. My favorite parts are her visits to various races and the scenes with Melchizedek. I also love each race’s abilities, or Neuma, and felt that the final battle was built up to nicely. There’s also a great twist at the end!
That being said, Etania’s Worth is not perfect. Elrich’s Neuma isn’t described clearly in places, some of the people groups and action scenes are a bit underdeveloped, and I felt that the last battle was confusing…geographically and chronologically. The prose is clunky at times, particularly in scenes M.H. added after my first edit. However, the 2nd edition will address all of these issues. Future readers can expect greater clarity and better, more concise prose when the revamped edition comes out. Tamnarae’s races are explored in greater depth, and the last battle will be even better! Thus, my new rating of 5 stars.
Regardless of edition, the best part of M.H.’s book is how she weaves Christianity into her story. Her names are fantastic: Melchizedek represents Christ, Deo is God, and Malstorm is Satan. There is a clear conflict between good and evil, and Elrich explores the need every person has for a Savior. Most of all, I liked how Etania’s purpose isn’t conventional, for a fantasy tale. It presents a powerful picture of Jesus’ salvific work and how He transforms us from our former state.
All in all, I highly recommend Etania’s Worth for ages 12+! It’s clean, Christian, and has great themes of faith paired with wonderful characters.
December 18, 2018
Eighteen-year old Etania Selali thinks she has her whole life planned; apprentice in the Library under her mother, become a librarian, live a quiet life. But within minutes of arriving at the court library on her first day, as she stands before a shelf to complete her first assignment, she is attacked and almost killed. Strange white light erupts from her fingertips, saving her life and rendering her attacker unconscious. Thus are her life-plans quickly uprooted. Melchizidek, Son of Deo, tells her she is destined to use her Neuma (special power) to save Tamnarae from coming evil.
Despite evidence to the contrary, Etania refuses to accept that she was the source of the light that saved her. She argues that she possesses no special power. Then treachery shatters her world and sends her on a dangerous mission with her father and his handsome apprentice. Etania is forced to accept not only her Nuema, but her destiny.
The story moves quickly as Etania, her father, Jakin, and Keyel travel across Tamnarae. seeking support in their struggle to defeat the rising evil. Ms. Elrich’s world is rich with variety. From the Hafif, humans with no visible Neuma, to the Eritam, humans with the Neuma of taming wolves, to the Draconians, humans with the Neuma of controlling dragons, each people group they meet on their journey has unique characteristics and a life-style suited to their specific Neuma.
I especially enjoyed reading about Etania’s and Keyel’s blossoming romance. Both young adults are tentative and question their worth. As their faith in Melchizidek grows, so too do their feelings for one another.
I look forward to reading the next book in this series to see where Ms. Elrich takes us from here.
Despite evidence to the contrary, Etania refuses to accept that she was the source of the light that saved her. She argues that she possesses no special power. Then treachery shatters her world and sends her on a dangerous mission with her father and his handsome apprentice. Etania is forced to accept not only her Nuema, but her destiny.
The story moves quickly as Etania, her father, Jakin, and Keyel travel across Tamnarae. seeking support in their struggle to defeat the rising evil. Ms. Elrich’s world is rich with variety. From the Hafif, humans with no visible Neuma, to the Eritam, humans with the Neuma of taming wolves, to the Draconians, humans with the Neuma of controlling dragons, each people group they meet on their journey has unique characteristics and a life-style suited to their specific Neuma.
I especially enjoyed reading about Etania’s and Keyel’s blossoming romance. Both young adults are tentative and question their worth. As their faith in Melchizidek grows, so too do their feelings for one another.
I look forward to reading the next book in this series to see where Ms. Elrich takes us from here.
January 23, 2021
I actually won this book in a bookstagram challenge and I am so glad I did!
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Short Summary - In an allegorical fantasy world, many people possess divine gifts, however, Etania’s gift is greater than anyone could have imagined. As evil invades the kingdom, Etania, her father, and her protector, Keyel, journey across the kingdom to raise an army to fight with them. Along the way, Etania learns more about herself and the special gift she has been given.
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My thoughts - Stylistically, this book is a cross between Lord of the Rings and The Chronicles of Narnia. Within the first few lines you are transported to a fantasy land full of unique characters. I love discovering the different races/cultures as Etania goes on her quest. One of my favorite things about the book is the conversations with Melchizedek (a representation of Jesus in the story) (think Aslan in Chronicles of Narnia) The way the characters are able to close there eyes and come face to face with him shows an example of what prayer can be like for us. The only thing I found difficult about this book was the amount of new words I had to learn to read it. In most fantasy books we know that we may have to learn the names of fictional places, people, and animals, but this one has more than the norm. There is a glossary at the beginning to be able to look up these terms. This may not be an issue for others, (I have a friend that learned elvish so she could read the edges of the Artemis Fowl series) I just found it a little hard at first to have to constantly look up words. However, if you love a story with a good quest in a fantasy world, then this is the book for you!
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Short Summary - In an allegorical fantasy world, many people possess divine gifts, however, Etania’s gift is greater than anyone could have imagined. As evil invades the kingdom, Etania, her father, and her protector, Keyel, journey across the kingdom to raise an army to fight with them. Along the way, Etania learns more about herself and the special gift she has been given.
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My thoughts - Stylistically, this book is a cross between Lord of the Rings and The Chronicles of Narnia. Within the first few lines you are transported to a fantasy land full of unique characters. I love discovering the different races/cultures as Etania goes on her quest. One of my favorite things about the book is the conversations with Melchizedek (a representation of Jesus in the story) (think Aslan in Chronicles of Narnia) The way the characters are able to close there eyes and come face to face with him shows an example of what prayer can be like for us. The only thing I found difficult about this book was the amount of new words I had to learn to read it. In most fantasy books we know that we may have to learn the names of fictional places, people, and animals, but this one has more than the norm. There is a glossary at the beginning to be able to look up these terms. This may not be an issue for others, (I have a friend that learned elvish so she could read the edges of the Artemis Fowl series) I just found it a little hard at first to have to constantly look up words. However, if you love a story with a good quest in a fantasy world, then this is the book for you!
November 28, 2022
I enjoyed listening to Etania's Worth. The journey that Etania goes on from bookworm to heroine is well-paced and intriguing. I thought that the author did a great job growing Etania into her role and responsibility slowly but steadily and the coming-of-age aspects of this story really stood out as believable and interesting.
The magic system was very intriguing. The whole makeup of this world being sort of set after the ascension of Jesus (in this world called "Melchizedek") was quite unique for a fantasy. There were times when it kind of threw me out of the story a little, being just a little too close to our own history while being completely made up, but on the whole, it was pretty neat.
I did have a bit of a hard time understanding some of the accents the narrator chose for certain characters, so it wasn't my favorite performance, though I got used to it as I listened.
Kiel drove me a little nuts with his inability to move beyond his own self-doubts, but he was also very sweet to Etania and so I liked him a lot.
I loved all the different cultures that we got to see in this world, and I was particularly intrigued by the "dragon riding" people. (Of course, dragons and dragon riders are always going to capture my imagination)!
The one thing I had a bit of a hard time with in the story was how upset Etania was with her father. I felt like she was quite unreasonable about it, especially since the book lets us see inside Jachin's thoughts at times and so we know he really does care about his daughter. I also felt like she was so over-the-top angry with him that the eventual reconciliation between them felt a little dissatisfying.
But overall, this was a fun, engaging story and I am looking forward to reading book 2 and seeing how the characters grow even further and what happens next in the story!
The magic system was very intriguing. The whole makeup of this world being sort of set after the ascension of Jesus (in this world called "Melchizedek") was quite unique for a fantasy. There were times when it kind of threw me out of the story a little, being just a little too close to our own history while being completely made up, but on the whole, it was pretty neat.
I did have a bit of a hard time understanding some of the accents the narrator chose for certain characters, so it wasn't my favorite performance, though I got used to it as I listened.
Kiel drove me a little nuts with his inability to move beyond his own self-doubts, but he was also very sweet to Etania and so I liked him a lot.
I loved all the different cultures that we got to see in this world, and I was particularly intrigued by the "dragon riding" people. (Of course, dragons and dragon riders are always going to capture my imagination)!
The one thing I had a bit of a hard time with in the story was how upset Etania was with her father. I felt like she was quite unreasonable about it, especially since the book lets us see inside Jachin's thoughts at times and so we know he really does care about his daughter. I also felt like she was so over-the-top angry with him that the eventual reconciliation between them felt a little dissatisfying.
But overall, this was a fun, engaging story and I am looking forward to reading book 2 and seeing how the characters grow even further and what happens next in the story!
July 23, 2019
Etania's Worth is the first novel in a series set in the land of Tamnarae written by M.H.Elrich. While it is the first novel in the series, a large world is contained within this one book. It is my understanding that there will be more stories forthcoming.
The world that this story is set in is imaginative and unique. The author weaves together religion, fantasy, and romance. There are many different kingdoms, races, and Neuma within the continent of Tamnarae. Elrich created a fantasy world where each kingdom/race is gifted with a Neuma that is specific to them, but there are people with no Neuma. However, there are also people who are rare exceptions gifted with a Neuma unique to them. Etania, one of the main characters, is one of the unique Neuma exceptions. While the story partially revolves around Etania learning how to use her Neuma, it also moves forward with an oncoming war where allies are needed.
The central basis for the conflict of the story begins when an unexpected war is declared on the premise of past events/grudges pitting good against evil. Most of the tension in the story revolves around Etania's feelings of inadequacy and her burgeoning romantic feelings rather than the urgency and stress of an impending war. While Etania is the main character, there are two other protagonists, and all three characters carry a different emotional burden that need to be resolved. The majority of the novel is told from their third person limited perspectives, but occasionally the reader receives a glimpse of the two antagonists limited points of view.
While there are many interesting kingdoms visited by the main characters, the author only provides a brief overview of each one in a "telling" rather than showing writing style. As a reader, that left me to guess at the various governments and intricate cultures being appealed to by the main characters. However, I think there is a lot of potential and room for these varying kingdoms to be explored within the world of Tearah. The way that each race lives is intriguing, and the different ways they apply their Neuma within their culture teases the reader's imagination.
The Christian aspects of this novel are revealed with the symbolic figure of Melchizedek (the Christ figure), and Etania's struggle of faith and acceptance of unconditional love. There was plenty of evidence throughout that Melchizedek is an important figure in their religious system, and that there is an evil anti-Christ figure named Malstorm who is referenced but never makes an appearance. Both Melchizedek (Christ) and Deo (God) are mentioned frequently.
While I appreciate the creativity of this story, and the overall message conveyed in the author's writing, there were many areas that need improvement. The overall plot is rushed and difficult to follow after the sixth chapter, and the reader becomes swamped with unclear descriptions of fight scenes while being jerked from one kingdom to the next on a quest to secure support and armies from each one. There are plot holes and abrupt shifts along with plot patches and underdeveloped characters.
The biggest struggle for me while reading this novel was an inability to clearly perceive the world the author was trying to convey. Before I could grasp one culture and kingdom the author had moved to the next, all with a different series of names that I needed to keep in mind. By the end, I had given up trying to remember any of the tertiary character's names and merely skipped over them. However, I did like the main characters Elrich introduced, although I didn't connect with any of the emotional struggles they carried. I also liked how the author slowly builds the romance between two of the characters, and creates an imposing question for Etania regarding the sincerity of her feelings and if what she feels is truly love.
Overall, this story is an imaginative world in need of work. It is clean in content, and a novel that, if improvements are made, could be enjoyed by young teens. The writer has a fantastic magical world she is creating, and the use of each Neuma is unique and could be vividly described in each scene. However, because there are so many different races and Neumas the reader gets lost trying to decipher which race and Neuma they are encountering while the story progresses. There is no real sense of direction or of who the characters are encountering in each kingdom/territory aside from physical and Neuma descriptions.
I do realize that the author provides a glossary of all the characters names, descriptions, and race. It also includes explanations of terms (some of which are unclear within the context of the story), people groups, and countries and cities. Personally, as a reader, if I have to flip back and forth between a glossary and the story to try to grasp which character is speaking or where the characters are, then I am having to work too hard to imagine the world the writer has tried to create. There is also a lot of undisclosed backstory referenced throughout the novel that, in my opinion, needs to be left out and written in a separate novel. This story has good bones, but it needs to be fleshed out more.
The world that this story is set in is imaginative and unique. The author weaves together religion, fantasy, and romance. There are many different kingdoms, races, and Neuma within the continent of Tamnarae. Elrich created a fantasy world where each kingdom/race is gifted with a Neuma that is specific to them, but there are people with no Neuma. However, there are also people who are rare exceptions gifted with a Neuma unique to them. Etania, one of the main characters, is one of the unique Neuma exceptions. While the story partially revolves around Etania learning how to use her Neuma, it also moves forward with an oncoming war where allies are needed.
The central basis for the conflict of the story begins when an unexpected war is declared on the premise of past events/grudges pitting good against evil. Most of the tension in the story revolves around Etania's feelings of inadequacy and her burgeoning romantic feelings rather than the urgency and stress of an impending war. While Etania is the main character, there are two other protagonists, and all three characters carry a different emotional burden that need to be resolved. The majority of the novel is told from their third person limited perspectives, but occasionally the reader receives a glimpse of the two antagonists limited points of view.
While there are many interesting kingdoms visited by the main characters, the author only provides a brief overview of each one in a "telling" rather than showing writing style. As a reader, that left me to guess at the various governments and intricate cultures being appealed to by the main characters. However, I think there is a lot of potential and room for these varying kingdoms to be explored within the world of Tearah. The way that each race lives is intriguing, and the different ways they apply their Neuma within their culture teases the reader's imagination.
The Christian aspects of this novel are revealed with the symbolic figure of Melchizedek (the Christ figure), and Etania's struggle of faith and acceptance of unconditional love. There was plenty of evidence throughout that Melchizedek is an important figure in their religious system, and that there is an evil anti-Christ figure named Malstorm who is referenced but never makes an appearance. Both Melchizedek (Christ) and Deo (God) are mentioned frequently.
While I appreciate the creativity of this story, and the overall message conveyed in the author's writing, there were many areas that need improvement. The overall plot is rushed and difficult to follow after the sixth chapter, and the reader becomes swamped with unclear descriptions of fight scenes while being jerked from one kingdom to the next on a quest to secure support and armies from each one. There are plot holes and abrupt shifts along with plot patches and underdeveloped characters.
The biggest struggle for me while reading this novel was an inability to clearly perceive the world the author was trying to convey. Before I could grasp one culture and kingdom the author had moved to the next, all with a different series of names that I needed to keep in mind. By the end, I had given up trying to remember any of the tertiary character's names and merely skipped over them. However, I did like the main characters Elrich introduced, although I didn't connect with any of the emotional struggles they carried. I also liked how the author slowly builds the romance between two of the characters, and creates an imposing question for Etania regarding the sincerity of her feelings and if what she feels is truly love.
Overall, this story is an imaginative world in need of work. It is clean in content, and a novel that, if improvements are made, could be enjoyed by young teens. The writer has a fantastic magical world she is creating, and the use of each Neuma is unique and could be vividly described in each scene. However, because there are so many different races and Neumas the reader gets lost trying to decipher which race and Neuma they are encountering while the story progresses. There is no real sense of direction or of who the characters are encountering in each kingdom/territory aside from physical and Neuma descriptions.
I do realize that the author provides a glossary of all the characters names, descriptions, and race. It also includes explanations of terms (some of which are unclear within the context of the story), people groups, and countries and cities. Personally, as a reader, if I have to flip back and forth between a glossary and the story to try to grasp which character is speaking or where the characters are, then I am having to work too hard to imagine the world the writer has tried to create. There is also a lot of undisclosed backstory referenced throughout the novel that, in my opinion, needs to be left out and written in a separate novel. This story has good bones, but it needs to be fleshed out more.
February 12, 2022
Upon reading it, I wish I had read it sooner. This was a story I did not realize I needed in my life until I opened the book. Elrich magically captures what is means to grow up in both a literal and spiritual sense. Her detailed characters and peoples create a fascinating world, and her plot draws you in making you eager to discover what will happen next.
Etania Selali has a strained relationship with her father who often puts hunting Skazic over his family. Because of this, Etania chooses to become her mother's apprentice at the library rather than train under her father. However, after a surprise attack by a Skazic, Etania and her family discover she is a Vexli -- she has the Neuma (a unique power given by God) to change Skazic back to their human selves (before they were corrupted by Malstorm). Etania struggles accepting her father's desire to use her as a weapon against the Skazic, but more than that she struggles to accept herself and the fact that Melchizedek (son of God) loves her and has a plan for her life. As Etania travels with her father and his apprentice gathering support for a coming war after a great betrayal, she journeys to places of self-discovery, self-acceptance, love, and God's grace.
One of my favorite quotes from the book reads, "He loved her even when she couldn't love herself." I think this line perfectly captures what true love looks like, and the unwavering love God has for us. As Etania discovers the love of God, we are reminded of it again and again. Elrich's writing is a beautiful reminder that God is the source of all love and that our relationship with him should always remain a priority.
I highly recommend Etania's Worth to lovers of YA fantasy and Christian fiction.
Etania Selali has a strained relationship with her father who often puts hunting Skazic over his family. Because of this, Etania chooses to become her mother's apprentice at the library rather than train under her father. However, after a surprise attack by a Skazic, Etania and her family discover she is a Vexli -- she has the Neuma (a unique power given by God) to change Skazic back to their human selves (before they were corrupted by Malstorm). Etania struggles accepting her father's desire to use her as a weapon against the Skazic, but more than that she struggles to accept herself and the fact that Melchizedek (son of God) loves her and has a plan for her life. As Etania travels with her father and his apprentice gathering support for a coming war after a great betrayal, she journeys to places of self-discovery, self-acceptance, love, and God's grace.
One of my favorite quotes from the book reads, "He loved her even when she couldn't love herself." I think this line perfectly captures what true love looks like, and the unwavering love God has for us. As Etania discovers the love of God, we are reminded of it again and again. Elrich's writing is a beautiful reminder that God is the source of all love and that our relationship with him should always remain a priority.
I highly recommend Etania's Worth to lovers of YA fantasy and Christian fiction.
September 20, 2021
3.5/5 stars (rounded up to 4!)
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
Etania is excited to begin her apprenticeship, but it quickly comes to an end when she accidentally uses a hidden power against an attacker. Jakin, her father, wishes to use Etania as a weapon against the evil forces threatening Tamnarae. Keyel, Jakin's apprentice with a sad past, is assigned as Etania's bodyguard. The three team up and go on a journey in order to save all of Tamnarae. As the evil forces grow stronger, the three will have to trust each other and work together in order to succeed.
This Christian fantasy has so many good messages in it! Trust and faith are incredibly important themes here, and I appreciated how well this book incorporated Christianity into this fantasy world! All three of the main characters have some flaws and weaknesses that they have to overcome on their journey, and I enjoyed watching them grow!
My main problem with this book was the pacing. I feel like a lot of major plot events were somewhat rushed. The romance also seemed a little rushed to me. Overall, the plot was interesting and the romance was sweet; I just wished the book progressed at slightly slower pace.
This book would probably appeal most to younger female readers! The messages in this book were probably my favorite part, though I also enjoyed all of the character development!
Content: some violence, but this is a clean book!
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
Etania is excited to begin her apprenticeship, but it quickly comes to an end when she accidentally uses a hidden power against an attacker. Jakin, her father, wishes to use Etania as a weapon against the evil forces threatening Tamnarae. Keyel, Jakin's apprentice with a sad past, is assigned as Etania's bodyguard. The three team up and go on a journey in order to save all of Tamnarae. As the evil forces grow stronger, the three will have to trust each other and work together in order to succeed.
This Christian fantasy has so many good messages in it! Trust and faith are incredibly important themes here, and I appreciated how well this book incorporated Christianity into this fantasy world! All three of the main characters have some flaws and weaknesses that they have to overcome on their journey, and I enjoyed watching them grow!
My main problem with this book was the pacing. I feel like a lot of major plot events were somewhat rushed. The romance also seemed a little rushed to me. Overall, the plot was interesting and the romance was sweet; I just wished the book progressed at slightly slower pace.
This book would probably appeal most to younger female readers! The messages in this book were probably my favorite part, though I also enjoyed all of the character development!
Content: some violence, but this is a clean book!
June 22, 2021
“Etania. She felt Melchizedek’s voice, warming her whole body… Lean on me.”
The land of Tamnarae and its people are at terrible risk. Melchizedek is no longer amongst them, and the forces of Malstorm, known as the Skazic, are rising once more.
Yet, there are those blessed with Neuma – unique gifts bestowed by Melchizedek Himself – who remain loyal and are willing to risk all to fight for what is good and true.
But when Etania, along with her family and friends, is called to join the fight, she discovers that leaning on Melchizedek in faith is the greatest battle of all…
Etania’s Worth is such a remarkable story. Full of adventure, love, betrayal, and courage, it’s a novel that is sure to entertain readers of all ages and challenge them to face their fears with bold faith.
The characters struggle with real brokenness and doubt, but what truly sets this story apart is the redemptive arc that most of the characters experience. Reading a novel where many characters learn to receive grace and healing was so refreshing. I’m sure that readers will agree, as they turn the last page, that we need more stories as brave and full of faith as Etania’s Worth.
The land of Tamnarae and its people are at terrible risk. Melchizedek is no longer amongst them, and the forces of Malstorm, known as the Skazic, are rising once more.
Yet, there are those blessed with Neuma – unique gifts bestowed by Melchizedek Himself – who remain loyal and are willing to risk all to fight for what is good and true.
But when Etania, along with her family and friends, is called to join the fight, she discovers that leaning on Melchizedek in faith is the greatest battle of all…
Etania’s Worth is such a remarkable story. Full of adventure, love, betrayal, and courage, it’s a novel that is sure to entertain readers of all ages and challenge them to face their fears with bold faith.
The characters struggle with real brokenness and doubt, but what truly sets this story apart is the redemptive arc that most of the characters experience. Reading a novel where many characters learn to receive grace and healing was so refreshing. I’m sure that readers will agree, as they turn the last page, that we need more stories as brave and full of faith as Etania’s Worth.
August 29, 2024
Audiobooks...
I either very much enjoy them or I do not. There isn't much in-between for me.
The narrator has a lot to do with it and Grace Woods did a lovely job on M.H. Elrich's book Etania's Worth (Daughters of Tamnarae #1)
M.H. Elrich wrote a story that really captured what it is to grow-up, both spiritually and mentally.
Etania was a wonderful MC that is easy to root for, so I enjoyed following her journey through the story.
The Author kept faith at the center of the story as a whole and I really appreciated that.
Overall, I found this YA Christian Fantasy to be compelling -
having fabulous world-building and an enchanting tale woven throughout.
I look forward to listening to the next book in this series - Etania's Calling - soon!
*I received a complimentary audiobook of this title. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.*
I either very much enjoy them or I do not. There isn't much in-between for me.
The narrator has a lot to do with it and Grace Woods did a lovely job on M.H. Elrich's book Etania's Worth (Daughters of Tamnarae #1)
M.H. Elrich wrote a story that really captured what it is to grow-up, both spiritually and mentally.
Etania was a wonderful MC that is easy to root for, so I enjoyed following her journey through the story.
The Author kept faith at the center of the story as a whole and I really appreciated that.
Overall, I found this YA Christian Fantasy to be compelling -
having fabulous world-building and an enchanting tale woven throughout.
I look forward to listening to the next book in this series - Etania's Calling - soon!
*I received a complimentary audiobook of this title. All thoughts and opinions expressed are my own.*
February 2, 2021
This compelling YA Christian fantasy is filled with epic elements, great world-building, and an enchanting romance. Etania is a fantastic main character and I really enjoyed her journey and growth throughout the story. I look forward to reading the next book in this series!
May 8, 2020
I enjoyed it, but I didn't breeze through it. I wanted to breeze through it.
May 22, 2023
NOTE: I received a free copy of the audiobook of this story from the author in exchange for a review. A positive review was not required. The following is my honest opinion.
This was very interesting! I'd seen this book around since it came out, and I was interested, but just hadn't gotten around to reading it until the author offered me a review copy. As soon as I started listening to the audiobook, I was drawn in. Elrich pulls the reader seamlessly into the world in which Etania lives, with vivid descriptions that helped me quickly get a feel for what this place was like.
I also liked that the characters were realistically flawed and yet, still likable. In the beginning, Etania could be a little annoying the way she'd get mad at her father, and yet, it's not unrealistic that sometimes parents and children, especially young adults don't understand each other. I know I've been there. She didn't stay that way, though, and I liked the way all the main characters learned and grew, not just in their understanding of each other, but in their faith.
The action and adventure throughout was fun, too.
I'm giving this 4 stars and I'm curious to read the second book and find out what happens.
Content Advisory:
No swearing
Mild romantic attraction between couples. Talk of courtship and love. Nothing sexual ever occurs.
Violence:
Various incidents of violence occur throughout, from sparring, to attacks on individuals (for example, someone almost gets strangled, and someone else is murdered via stabbing) and battles between groups. Sometimes characters die, but the description is always mild, and while there are mentions of blood, they're not drawn out or gross.
Trigger Warning for Parental Loss:
Spiritual:
Melchizedek (sp?) is a Christ-like figure who died and rose again and has many other qualities that are reflective of Jesus. He has a spiritual presence in the story, with many characters having visions in which he gives them guidance, and sometimes, correction. At one point, the characters meet him in person as well.
Characters sometimes remind each other of the teachings of Melchizedek to encourage and guide each other. These teachings are frequently paraphrased passages from Scripture.
Magic:
While it's not called magic, some characters have a supernatural ability called "neuma". Neuma is a gift Melchizedek gives some people. Not everyone has neuma, and those who do must practice and learn to use it properly. As with any gift, people can make mistakes and use their neuma for wrong things. For example, Etania's father basically wants her to become a weapon with her powerful neuma, and she almost kills someone with it at one point (and regrets it). However, Melchizedek chastises them both for this attitude and shows Etania the good things she can do with her neuma. She has to make a choice to use it for the good things instead.
This was very interesting! I'd seen this book around since it came out, and I was interested, but just hadn't gotten around to reading it until the author offered me a review copy. As soon as I started listening to the audiobook, I was drawn in. Elrich pulls the reader seamlessly into the world in which Etania lives, with vivid descriptions that helped me quickly get a feel for what this place was like.
I also liked that the characters were realistically flawed and yet, still likable. In the beginning, Etania could be a little annoying the way she'd get mad at her father, and yet, it's not unrealistic that sometimes parents and children, especially young adults don't understand each other. I know I've been there. She didn't stay that way, though, and I liked the way all the main characters learned and grew, not just in their understanding of each other, but in their faith.
The action and adventure throughout was fun, too.
I'm giving this 4 stars and I'm curious to read the second book and find out what happens.
Content Advisory:
No swearing
Mild romantic attraction between couples. Talk of courtship and love. Nothing sexual ever occurs.
Violence:
Various incidents of violence occur throughout, from sparring, to attacks on individuals (for example, someone almost gets strangled, and someone else is murdered via stabbing) and battles between groups. Sometimes characters die, but the description is always mild, and while there are mentions of blood, they're not drawn out or gross.
Trigger Warning for Parental Loss:
Spiritual:
Melchizedek (sp?) is a Christ-like figure who died and rose again and has many other qualities that are reflective of Jesus. He has a spiritual presence in the story, with many characters having visions in which he gives them guidance, and sometimes, correction. At one point, the characters meet him in person as well.
Characters sometimes remind each other of the teachings of Melchizedek to encourage and guide each other. These teachings are frequently paraphrased passages from Scripture.
Magic:
While it's not called magic, some characters have a supernatural ability called "neuma". Neuma is a gift Melchizedek gives some people. Not everyone has neuma, and those who do must practice and learn to use it properly. As with any gift, people can make mistakes and use their neuma for wrong things. For example, Etania's father basically wants her to become a weapon with her powerful neuma, and she almost kills someone with it at one point (and regrets it). However, Melchizedek chastises them both for this attitude and shows Etania the good things she can do with her neuma. She has to make a choice to use it for the good things instead.
December 6, 2022
FTC Disclosure: I received a free copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review. I was not required to leave a positive review. All thoughts and opinions expressed herein are entirely my own.
Overview: I was delightfully surprised by this book. I didn’t know what to expect going in, other than that there were a bunch of different cultures with cool names and that the cover was pretty. I certainly didn’t expect a sweet story about developing a relationship with Jesus, discovering your worth, and understanding true love.
Characters: Etania’s was a good, relatable character who has lots of doubts about her worth. While she follows the typical trend of female characters—that is, being somewhat annoying at the beginning before becoming likable by the end—she’s a great character with lots of depth.
Keyel was fantastic. I got a little frustrated with him always doubting his worth (because seriously, this man is fantastic), but it was great to see him grow up throughout the story.
Content: The story is quite clean. There’s no language at all (always nice!).
Romance-wise, Etania and Keyel like each other. Their relationship is a great example of honor and purity! Couples kiss. Two characters were conceived out of adultery.
There are several scenes of fighting, and characters are sometimes injured, but there’s nothing graphic. Definitely a PG story.
Characters have Neuma, which is basically magic allegorically representing spiritual gifts.
Writing: The story flows quite well, hitting all the plot points at just the right moments. It never dragged, and the ending was especially riveting. I did feel somewhat detached from the characters, and it was hard to really feel with them. But the worldbuilding is excellent. I especially enjoyed how each culture’s nomenclature comes from a different language; that added to the feel that these are unique people groups.
Summary: This was an enjoyable read that allowed me to turn off my brain and just enjoy a good story. I loved Etania and Keyel’s relationship, and the allegory about finding your worth in Christ was beautiful. I’d recommend this to fantasy readers aged 12+.
Overview: I was delightfully surprised by this book. I didn’t know what to expect going in, other than that there were a bunch of different cultures with cool names and that the cover was pretty. I certainly didn’t expect a sweet story about developing a relationship with Jesus, discovering your worth, and understanding true love.
Characters: Etania’s was a good, relatable character who has lots of doubts about her worth. While she follows the typical trend of female characters—that is, being somewhat annoying at the beginning before becoming likable by the end—she’s a great character with lots of depth.
Keyel was fantastic. I got a little frustrated with him always doubting his worth (because seriously, this man is fantastic), but it was great to see him grow up throughout the story.
Content: The story is quite clean. There’s no language at all (always nice!).
Romance-wise, Etania and Keyel like each other. Their relationship is a great example of honor and purity! Couples kiss. Two characters were conceived out of adultery.
There are several scenes of fighting, and characters are sometimes injured, but there’s nothing graphic. Definitely a PG story.
Characters have Neuma, which is basically magic allegorically representing spiritual gifts.
Writing: The story flows quite well, hitting all the plot points at just the right moments. It never dragged, and the ending was especially riveting. I did feel somewhat detached from the characters, and it was hard to really feel with them. But the worldbuilding is excellent. I especially enjoyed how each culture’s nomenclature comes from a different language; that added to the feel that these are unique people groups.
Summary: This was an enjoyable read that allowed me to turn off my brain and just enjoy a good story. I loved Etania and Keyel’s relationship, and the allegory about finding your worth in Christ was beautiful. I’d recommend this to fantasy readers aged 12+.
October 8, 2022
I was pleasantly surprised by this one. It has a great mix of characters and settings and will appeal to a wide range of people.
It has some great themes as the characters, both young and old, work through issues of character and faith. It has a familiar feel and ring to it, but the settings are fresh.
it's a good book to have on your family bookshelf or on a common kindle. A good clean read. I recommend it.
It has some great themes as the characters, both young and old, work through issues of character and faith. It has a familiar feel and ring to it, but the settings are fresh.
it's a good book to have on your family bookshelf or on a common kindle. A good clean read. I recommend it.
February 3, 2022
I really loved M.H. Elrich’s imaginative description of her world and the diverse groups with special abilities. It was refreshingly original and filled with adventure, plot twists, Christian character development, and romance. I would highly recommend this book to anyone!
April 8, 2024
If you like an interesting fantasy, heavy on the Christian allegory, you'll love this one!
December 5, 2022
Audiobook: This was my first experience with M. H. Elrich's work, and I enjoyed it. The world building was extensive. The characters were unique. There were dragons and magic. The plot was fast paced. The story kept my attention. There was a definite underlying theme of religion running throughout the tale. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series. Grace Woods' narration was fine, and her performance added to the story's entertainment. I was given a free copy of the audiobook, and I have voluntarily posted this review.
January 31, 2022
It was a heartwarming coming of age story that brings a young girl into her own as she discovers that she can do all things if her heart is faithful to her religion. The story takes her through many perilous situations which she questions her faith and has to find her way back physically and spiritually.
May 14, 2022
I went into this story knowing nothing about it - no reviews, no summary, no nothing. I wanted to be completely blind (for fun-sies). And I got to say, there were a lot of parts I really loved about this book.
Etania’s Worth follows Etania, her father Jakin, and her bodyguard Keyel as they gather forces to fight against a usurper of evil who, of course, thinks he can take over the known world. (And who doesn’t like a villain with ambitions?)
The twist here is that this uprising has come years after a war that spanned the entire world. It was only because of Melchizedek, a stand-in for Christ in the book, that the wars ended and peace came to all people. But not everyone believes in that peace or Melchizedek’s love for them, including the usurper.
As I read this book, I loved reading about the world around Etania’s village. It was vast with different tribes who all had different abilities based on what Melchizedek saw right for them. I think my favorite people were the residents of Draconia. Each bonds with a dragon when they reach a certain age. But they don't just get to ride the dragons! Their hair and eyes change to match their bonded dragons' scales and eyes! So cool!
I do wish that I had seen a lot more of each country and its people, but that would make the book way too long.
I also loved how the magic system works in this world, because it reminds me of the magic systems in my own books. Each person has a gift - their own personal powers bestowed by Melchizedek. This gift doesn’t have to be magical, but there are many who have powers beyond the mundane. These are people with Neuma, a power that works beyond their human bodies. Jakin can teleport and shoot purple flames. His friend Cephas can create barriers. And Etania can - well, I won’t spoil it for you.
Anyone who goes against their own gift or fights to have more power becomes a Skazic, a deformed creature who relies on corrupt magic rather than Melchizedek’s power. And let me tell you, they are some nasty creatures. And I’m not just talking about looks!
I enjoyed watching Etania, Jakin, and Keyel grow throughout their travels. There were a few times that I wished the stakes for them were raised even more in the story. I did love the slight twist at the end - I didn’t see it coming and was very pleased with it. (It gives a good lead into the second book.)
When it came to Melchizedek representing Christ in this book, it felt more on-the-nose than most books I've read. But that's not a bad thing at all! It was interesting to see how Christ's love for us works out when applied to worlds that contain power, or Neuma.
My favorite line was when it said, "He loved her even when she couldn't love herself." Not going to lie, I totally started tearing up.
Etania’s Worth follows Etania, her father Jakin, and her bodyguard Keyel as they gather forces to fight against a usurper of evil who, of course, thinks he can take over the known world. (And who doesn’t like a villain with ambitions?)
The twist here is that this uprising has come years after a war that spanned the entire world. It was only because of Melchizedek, a stand-in for Christ in the book, that the wars ended and peace came to all people. But not everyone believes in that peace or Melchizedek’s love for them, including the usurper.
As I read this book, I loved reading about the world around Etania’s village. It was vast with different tribes who all had different abilities based on what Melchizedek saw right for them. I think my favorite people were the residents of Draconia. Each bonds with a dragon when they reach a certain age. But they don't just get to ride the dragons! Their hair and eyes change to match their bonded dragons' scales and eyes! So cool!
I do wish that I had seen a lot more of each country and its people, but that would make the book way too long.
I also loved how the magic system works in this world, because it reminds me of the magic systems in my own books. Each person has a gift - their own personal powers bestowed by Melchizedek. This gift doesn’t have to be magical, but there are many who have powers beyond the mundane. These are people with Neuma, a power that works beyond their human bodies. Jakin can teleport and shoot purple flames. His friend Cephas can create barriers. And Etania can - well, I won’t spoil it for you.
Anyone who goes against their own gift or fights to have more power becomes a Skazic, a deformed creature who relies on corrupt magic rather than Melchizedek’s power. And let me tell you, they are some nasty creatures. And I’m not just talking about looks!
I enjoyed watching Etania, Jakin, and Keyel grow throughout their travels. There were a few times that I wished the stakes for them were raised even more in the story. I did love the slight twist at the end - I didn’t see it coming and was very pleased with it. (It gives a good lead into the second book.)
When it came to Melchizedek representing Christ in this book, it felt more on-the-nose than most books I've read. But that's not a bad thing at all! It was interesting to see how Christ's love for us works out when applied to worlds that contain power, or Neuma.
My favorite line was when it said, "He loved her even when she couldn't love herself." Not going to lie, I totally started tearing up.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 8, 2022
This story is clean, fantasy with very clear Christian values. Characters such as Deo and Melchizedek represent God and the Lord Jesus with sayings written about them being quotes from Bible verses. These quotes help the main characters Etania, Jakin and Keyel navigate through their circumstances (some heartbreaking, some dangerous and some exciting) along with direction from Melchizedek through dreams and prayers.
Very engaging read while at the same time speaking to the reader’s heart about where they are with God and helping them to look at their relationship (or lack of one) with Him and others. Love is a major theme.
The world building is immense and totally riveting so that the reader can’t help but keep turning the pages to see how it all plays out…most of the ends are tied up except for a final strand which will be followed into the next book…so can’t wait to find out how it concludes!
A truly wonderful read and highly recommended!
I received this as a free copy from the author and am grateful to have read this, and now to review it, stating my honest and heartfelt opinion!
Very engaging read while at the same time speaking to the reader’s heart about where they are with God and helping them to look at their relationship (or lack of one) with Him and others. Love is a major theme.
The world building is immense and totally riveting so that the reader can’t help but keep turning the pages to see how it all plays out…most of the ends are tied up except for a final strand which will be followed into the next book…so can’t wait to find out how it concludes!
A truly wonderful read and highly recommended!
I received this as a free copy from the author and am grateful to have read this, and now to review it, stating my honest and heartfelt opinion!
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