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Rise of the Grigori #1
The Undine's Tear
Mermaids. Magic. And the mistake that could destroy the world... or cost her everything to save it.
Princess Calandra would do anything to save her people. The powerful healer has been raised to restore the Heartstone that protects their island from humans—before she goes Mad and unleashes unfathomable destruction like the woman who sank Atlantis… and her exiled mother. But tradition demands she first enslave a human male with the siren mind-bond, and her queen aunt has selected the one man she’d risk a death sentence to free.
When Calandra learns her mother actually fled to protect the first undine boy in three millennia, she's certain her missing brother is the solution to her problems. Then she uncovers the horrifying connection between the bonds, the Madness, and her people's past and realizes if she finds him, she could start a revolution—but if she can’t, she’ll unleash an ancient evil that could tear the world apart.
Unless she surrenders everything… even the man she loves.
And she’s running out of time.
The Undine's Tear is the first book in the mind-blowing young adult epic historical fantasy series Rise of the Grigori. Packed with complex characters, lush world-building, gritty action, and impossible odds, this intricately woven tale presents mermaids and dragons like you’ve never seen them before. Join Calandra in a search for redemption that could threaten the very fabric of the universe.
Get The Undine's Tear and dive into the adventure today!
Princess Calandra would do anything to save her people. The powerful healer has been raised to restore the Heartstone that protects their island from humans—before she goes Mad and unleashes unfathomable destruction like the woman who sank Atlantis… and her exiled mother. But tradition demands she first enslave a human male with the siren mind-bond, and her queen aunt has selected the one man she’d risk a death sentence to free.
When Calandra learns her mother actually fled to protect the first undine boy in three millennia, she's certain her missing brother is the solution to her problems. Then she uncovers the horrifying connection between the bonds, the Madness, and her people's past and realizes if she finds him, she could start a revolution—but if she can’t, she’ll unleash an ancient evil that could tear the world apart.
Unless she surrenders everything… even the man she loves.
And she’s running out of time.
The Undine's Tear is the first book in the mind-blowing young adult epic historical fantasy series Rise of the Grigori. Packed with complex characters, lush world-building, gritty action, and impossible odds, this intricately woven tale presents mermaids and dragons like you’ve never seen them before. Join Calandra in a search for redemption that could threaten the very fabric of the universe.
Get The Undine's Tear and dive into the adventure today!
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Talena Winters writes page-turning fantasy, romance, and adventure stories of sacrifice, redemption, and hope against all odds. She’s an editor, copywriter, and award-winning songwriter, and she also designs knitting patterns under her label My Secret Wish. She currently resides on an acreage in the Peace Country of northern Alberta, Canada, with her husband, three surviving boys, two Husky dogs, and two neurotic orange cats. Her writing is fueled by an insatiable love of stories, dark chocolate, and the desire to make the world a better place. And she would really like to know why the tea is always gone.
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Talena Winters writes page-turning fantasy, romance, and adventure stories of sacrifice, redemption, and hope against all odds. She’s an editor, copywriter, and award-winning songwriter, and she also designs knitting patterns under her label My Secret Wish. She currently resides on an acreage in the Peace Country of northern Alberta, Canada, with her husband, three surviving boys, two Husky dogs, and two neurotic orange cats. Her writing is fueled by an insatiable love of stories, dark chocolate, and the desire to make the world a better place. And she would really like to know why the tea is always gone.
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April 27, 2022
Calandra is the most powerful healer to arise in three thousand years. Her people are counting on her to save them. The cost may be too much and time is running out.
Even though Calandra and Tanni are complete opposites, they became fast friends. Tanni’s dream was to be a guardian of the island and would put down her life for her.
Zale performs with the gypsys using his fishy ability, like a carnival act in a freak show. He spends his day in a tank of water. Abela came to him, telling him he had a sister and only he could save his mother, who had been taken by the Grigori.
Damon comes to Calandra in her dreams. He has become her hidden teacher, but I am leery of him. She has a push/pull attraction to him and I think, deep down, she senses there is more than meets the eye to him.
Women rule the island. There are no male Undines, so human men were brought in and Redeemed. That is a misnomer, because all their will is taken from them, so what’s to redeem? Calandra’s conscience is telling her there is something very wrong about this.
Narcissa is a princess whose mother is Adonia, the queen. Narcissa envies Calandra and will do all she can to bring her down, maybe even be the cause of her death. AND, not all the characters will survive the story. There is one that I really hate Talena Winters took a particular one out, but I also like when an author isn’t afraid to kill them off if it adds to the story.
I know there are people who thrive power. Those that have it often feel justified and entitled in their actions, but it is not necessary to be cruel.
Reverend Berian. I am having a hard time deciding if he is a good guy or if he has his own agenda.
We do have mermaids, Atlantis, other magicals, danger, betrayal, sacrifice…
Even though the mers spent most of their time on two legs, I loved the concept of the story. I am curious about what happened to all the mermen, seeing Zale is the only one of his kind…
Action packed, suspenseful, and I want more.
I voluntarily reviewed a free copy of The Undines Tear by Talena Winter.
Even though Calandra and Tanni are complete opposites, they became fast friends. Tanni’s dream was to be a guardian of the island and would put down her life for her.
Zale performs with the gypsys using his fishy ability, like a carnival act in a freak show. He spends his day in a tank of water. Abela came to him, telling him he had a sister and only he could save his mother, who had been taken by the Grigori.
Damon comes to Calandra in her dreams. He has become her hidden teacher, but I am leery of him. She has a push/pull attraction to him and I think, deep down, she senses there is more than meets the eye to him.
Women rule the island. There are no male Undines, so human men were brought in and Redeemed. That is a misnomer, because all their will is taken from them, so what’s to redeem? Calandra’s conscience is telling her there is something very wrong about this.
Narcissa is a princess whose mother is Adonia, the queen. Narcissa envies Calandra and will do all she can to bring her down, maybe even be the cause of her death. AND, not all the characters will survive the story. There is one that I really hate Talena Winters took a particular one out, but I also like when an author isn’t afraid to kill them off if it adds to the story.
I know there are people who thrive power. Those that have it often feel justified and entitled in their actions, but it is not necessary to be cruel.
Reverend Berian. I am having a hard time deciding if he is a good guy or if he has his own agenda.
We do have mermaids, Atlantis, other magicals, danger, betrayal, sacrifice…
Even though the mers spent most of their time on two legs, I loved the concept of the story. I am curious about what happened to all the mermen, seeing Zale is the only one of his kind…
Action packed, suspenseful, and I want more.
I voluntarily reviewed a free copy of The Undines Tear by Talena Winter.
January 29, 2022
This book is about an undine and her quest to save her world.
What first pulled me in was the title. I wanted to read the story of this creature.
An Undine is a water nymph, females only, who turns into a human when she falls in love with a human man. But, if he ends up being unfaithful to her, she dies.
On the second part of the title, the name of the series, we have the Grigori.
A Grigori is part of a group of fallen angels, also known as the Watchers, males only, who mated with human women and produced the Nephilim.
So, me being a big fan of mythology, was very interested to see how these two would work out.
Good things first.
I fell in love with the cover the second I saw it.
The pace was a bit slow at the beginning, but as the action moved faster, so did the pace.
I liked the descriptions of the characters and the places.
Now, I enjoy a book with two or more points of view. But, this one confused me a lot. It doesn't only jump from one character to the other, it also jumps in time. And the reader has to keep in their minds a lot of information about both characters, plus the names and relationships of the secondary characters.
There are also a few Greek words, written in English. Me being from Greece could understand their meaning and everyone role, but for those of you who don't know Greek, there is a glossary at the end.
In general, it was a good book to spend your time with.
Thanks to BookSirens for providing me with a free ebook.
What first pulled me in was the title. I wanted to read the story of this creature.
An Undine is a water nymph, females only, who turns into a human when she falls in love with a human man. But, if he ends up being unfaithful to her, she dies.
On the second part of the title, the name of the series, we have the Grigori.
A Grigori is part of a group of fallen angels, also known as the Watchers, males only, who mated with human women and produced the Nephilim.
So, me being a big fan of mythology, was very interested to see how these two would work out.
Good things first.
I fell in love with the cover the second I saw it.
The pace was a bit slow at the beginning, but as the action moved faster, so did the pace.
I liked the descriptions of the characters and the places.
Now, I enjoy a book with two or more points of view. But, this one confused me a lot. It doesn't only jump from one character to the other, it also jumps in time. And the reader has to keep in their minds a lot of information about both characters, plus the names and relationships of the secondary characters.
There are also a few Greek words, written in English. Me being from Greece could understand their meaning and everyone role, but for those of you who don't know Greek, there is a glossary at the end.
In general, it was a good book to spend your time with.
Thanks to BookSirens for providing me with a free ebook.
March 17, 2019
Talena Winters has hit it out of the fantasy ballpark again. She has such an imagination for detail! She has built a whole other realm in this compelling story. It was a trifle disconcerting at first because of frequent references to things I was not familiar with, and it took a bit to feel like I "knew my way around" this country/society with its foreign ways and objects and language. However, once I began to know and care about the book's fascinating characters I was taken with the story itself. It is a long but interesting read. I am looking forward already to the sequel. And to the NetFlix series. ( Hint, hint)
March 29, 2019
After a stressful day at work, I relaxed by reading about the magical world of Undines and other creatures. The characters were imagination and well developed. I feel like I know them. I like a book if I can imagine it like a movie and I can. It gives you romance, action and intrigue. It was long read but it doesn't disappoint.
June 10, 2022
Rise of the Grigori book 1. As the most powerful healer since the woman who sank Atlantis, Calandra’s been raised to restore the Heartstone that protects her island from humans. She must restore the Heartstone before she goes mad like the powerful healers before her. When she learns she needs both male and female magic to succeed, she becomes desperate since there has been no male of her people who has magic. Instead, she's being pressured to use the siren mind-bond to enslave her childhood friend, the one man she's sworn to risk a death sentence to free. When Calandra finds a message that her mother was pregnant with a boy while she was exiled, she begins to question what she knows, but that could risk destruction.
This book had a beautiful cover. Although the book starts out slow, it picks up after a few chapters, and seems to keep its pace from middle to end. The book is an historical fiction young adult fantasy. To be honest this book having an historical fiction theme threw me off because it just did not give an historical fiction feel. The book also mixed different mythologies, which I felt made the book feel more unique. The biggest issue with this book would be that it had a lot of time jumps and character changes that could have been labeled better. I enjoyed this one and cannot wait to read the next book in the series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This book had a beautiful cover. Although the book starts out slow, it picks up after a few chapters, and seems to keep its pace from middle to end. The book is an historical fiction young adult fantasy. To be honest this book having an historical fiction theme threw me off because it just did not give an historical fiction feel. The book also mixed different mythologies, which I felt made the book feel more unique. The biggest issue with this book would be that it had a lot of time jumps and character changes that could have been labeled better. I enjoyed this one and cannot wait to read the next book in the series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
May 15, 2019
Mermaids can walk? WHAT!?
I received a free copy of The Undines Tear in exchange for an honest review - and then I bought a copy as well because I loved it so much.
The map at the front, and the glossary at the back are great tools to quickly ‘immerse’ yourself in the world of mermaids in all their forms!
I look forward to re-reading this story - once I get it back from my 12 year old son who has very quickly become a fan.
I received a free copy of The Undines Tear in exchange for an honest review - and then I bought a copy as well because I loved it so much.
The map at the front, and the glossary at the back are great tools to quickly ‘immerse’ yourself in the world of mermaids in all their forms!
I look forward to re-reading this story - once I get it back from my 12 year old son who has very quickly become a fan.
May 15, 2019
Please note that I was given a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Talena Winters’ The Undine’s Tear is an unforgettable dive into two worlds: one of humanity set in the late 1700s and another set in a world of merpeople and other fantastical creatures.
Initially, the book placed me right in the middle of the action of the latter world. There, I felt eager to follow Calandra and her friends Tanni and Osaze as they went about their adventures. I wanted to find out how Calandra could help her country without falling prey to madness and how the trio would navigate the rules of their society.
Both situations added immediate, genuine tension that kept my eyes glued to the book. And this tension is likely to do the same for all sorts of other readers. For those like myself who find the inner workings of characters fascinating, they can look forward to exploring Calandra and her struggle to avoid madness. For readers less interested in psychological matters, there is still plenty of strong world-building to marvel at.
Part of this world-building included quite a few new, creative fantasy terms. Having many of these terms at the very beginning of the book may feel a bit overwhelming to some readers. But the glossary at the end of the book made it easier for me to keep up with the terms. So instead of being a barrier, the terms became another way for me to stay invested in the story. They made Winters’ narrative environment feel real and immersive. And they drove me to learn more about the characters’ world and to find out how exactly the terms from their world related to the characters themselves.
To add to the immersion of the story, each major character—and many of the side characters—I came across felt believable and relatable. The book was careful to provide a steady pace of development, so watching the characters never felt rushed. Instead, it felt like I got to watch them grow bit by bit. And it didn’t take me long to fall in love with them and feel for them whenever they found themselves in tragic situations.
Overall, The Undine’s Tear combines heart-wrenching tension, intricate world-building, and compelling characters to create an addictive reading experience. I had a hard time putting this book aside even after finishing it. But I’m eager to see it continued as part of the Rise of the Grigori series.
Talena Winters’ The Undine’s Tear is an unforgettable dive into two worlds: one of humanity set in the late 1700s and another set in a world of merpeople and other fantastical creatures.
Initially, the book placed me right in the middle of the action of the latter world. There, I felt eager to follow Calandra and her friends Tanni and Osaze as they went about their adventures. I wanted to find out how Calandra could help her country without falling prey to madness and how the trio would navigate the rules of their society.
Both situations added immediate, genuine tension that kept my eyes glued to the book. And this tension is likely to do the same for all sorts of other readers. For those like myself who find the inner workings of characters fascinating, they can look forward to exploring Calandra and her struggle to avoid madness. For readers less interested in psychological matters, there is still plenty of strong world-building to marvel at.
Part of this world-building included quite a few new, creative fantasy terms. Having many of these terms at the very beginning of the book may feel a bit overwhelming to some readers. But the glossary at the end of the book made it easier for me to keep up with the terms. So instead of being a barrier, the terms became another way for me to stay invested in the story. They made Winters’ narrative environment feel real and immersive. And they drove me to learn more about the characters’ world and to find out how exactly the terms from their world related to the characters themselves.
To add to the immersion of the story, each major character—and many of the side characters—I came across felt believable and relatable. The book was careful to provide a steady pace of development, so watching the characters never felt rushed. Instead, it felt like I got to watch them grow bit by bit. And it didn’t take me long to fall in love with them and feel for them whenever they found themselves in tragic situations.
Overall, The Undine’s Tear combines heart-wrenching tension, intricate world-building, and compelling characters to create an addictive reading experience. I had a hard time putting this book aside even after finishing it. But I’m eager to see it continued as part of the Rise of the Grigori series.
September 12, 2019
The Undine's tear boasts some incredible world-building. I loved the myth-based concepts and the setting descriptions. Talena has an elegant writing style that easily pulls you in.
I had difficulty getting close to Calandra as a character (but that could be because I am far, far from a YA reader). Despite the restrictions placed on her by her society, she seems to get away with many careless things that kept me thinking 'Come on. She's easily going to get caught doing this.' Her aunt (the Queen) after learning that her panacea (lead healer) has broken the island rules by letting her consort husband remain free-minded, immediately assigns Calandra to ferret out any other men on the island who may not be 'redeemed' (enslaved). She has her first check everyone in the city, but doesn't think to check Calandra's newly assigned man Osaze (who Calandra released as soon as she possibly could). Read twice, and no logical reason I could think of why the pair would be caught for their betrayal immediately. Several other instances of this as well where Calandra slips up, and just assumes everyone around her, including sirens loyal to the queen will just keep their mouths shut. The time jumps and POV jumps between Calandra and Zale were a bit confusing as well.
Despite this, this book was written artfully enough to hold my attention all the way through. The characters, despite their mistakes, were believable, and I'd love to read more of this complex, carefully created world.
I had difficulty getting close to Calandra as a character (but that could be because I am far, far from a YA reader). Despite the restrictions placed on her by her society, she seems to get away with many careless things that kept me thinking 'Come on. She's easily going to get caught doing this.' Her aunt (the Queen) after learning that her panacea (lead healer) has broken the island rules by letting her consort husband remain free-minded, immediately assigns Calandra to ferret out any other men on the island who may not be 'redeemed' (enslaved). She has her first check everyone in the city, but doesn't think to check Calandra's newly assigned man Osaze (who Calandra released as soon as she possibly could). Read twice, and no logical reason I could think of why the pair would be caught for their betrayal immediately. Several other instances of this as well where Calandra slips up, and just assumes everyone around her, including sirens loyal to the queen will just keep their mouths shut. The time jumps and POV jumps between Calandra and Zale were a bit confusing as well.
Despite this, this book was written artfully enough to hold my attention all the way through. The characters, despite their mistakes, were believable, and I'd love to read more of this complex, carefully created world.
April 18, 2019
Within a few chapters I was enthralled with the fantasy world of the Undine, taking in the setting and the powers they possess. It did take a few chapters to wrap my head around the powers but then it clicked and all was well. The parallel, historical fiction/fantasy story was especially captivating and I eagerly anticipated when the two paths would cross. There was just enough realism to make the story believable. The story was fast paced, but be aware that the conclusion leaves one wishing for the next book in the series. I could have done without the same-sex relationship included and as such I would suggest this novel would be appropriate for the older teen/adult. Each evening I looked forward to reading the next chapter to discover what would happen next in this mermaid dystopia. Overall an enjoyable read and I would recommend to any fiction fan.
May 6, 2021
At 1st I wasn't sure about this book. The author had a way of trying to describe things that made reading it clunky. It would really distrupt the reading. After the first few pages the flow started up and became interesting.
I loved the unknown and twists throughout. As I look at the next books I am excited to find out how some of the people and plot lines play a role. The author made an interesting world that is definitely unique with lots original ideas.
I recommend anyone who is looking for an adventure in a different, but same world, pick up this book. You will enjoy meeting the characters and the journey they take to save theirs (and our) world.
I loved the unknown and twists throughout. As I look at the next books I am excited to find out how some of the people and plot lines play a role. The author made an interesting world that is definitely unique with lots original ideas.
I recommend anyone who is looking for an adventure in a different, but same world, pick up this book. You will enjoy meeting the characters and the journey they take to save theirs (and our) world.
March 19, 2019
I could not put this book down! I was drawn in from the very first page. The world of Sirenia is fascinating and so well done. From mystical undines to fascinating cherubims, despite being fantasy these characters are so relatable that they feel like old friends. I was excited to immerse myself into this world every evening. This is one of those books that makes you think about our world, human nature and the themes in your own life. Plus, the riveting story propels you along until the very last page. I can't wait for the next book!
December 16, 2021
This is the 2nd time I've read this book. Had to refresh my memory preparation for the next book. I loved it all over again. Great characters, great story. I found it easy to follow through the jumps between characters and times. Can't wait to get started on the next book!!!
January 9, 2022
Rating - 5 *
Huge thanks to Booksirens and author Talena Winters for a chance to read this title. If you have read some of my previous reviews, you would know that I am always game for anything with mythology, fantasy and magic in it. So coming across a The Undine's Tear by Talena Winters - the synopsis was enough for me to pick this one up for reading. And I absolutely loved it despite taking loads of lag in between to read the book ( because life happened !! ).
The Undine's Tear by Talena Winters is the first book in the series The Rise of the Grigori. This epic YA historical fantasy series features the world of Atlantis, mermaids and magic in a different light ; filled with loads of action, fantasy, drama, romance, friendships, sacrifice and so much more.
Talena has weaved a whole new realm out there with quite some similarities to the world of Wonder woman ( Think Amazons ) with some link to the Old gods ( Christian and Greek) Angels and Demons. The story deals with Calandra ( the only known powerful undine healer since the woman who sank Atlantis ) who since her childhood was being raised to restore the Heartstone that powers her island ; her home. Sounds straightforward however it is easy as long as she doesn't go mad as her mother and all the powerful undine healers before her or finds a male undine with magic who hasn't been known to be born for over 3000 years. Either the latter or enslave the mind of her childhood friend and sweetheart Osaze ( whom she had swore to save and protect from slavery) to use the bond of their marriage to save the Heartstone. Amidst all this she uncovers the presence of a family member whom she never even knew existed along with some major revelations from her exiled mother ; revelations capable of making or breaking her home and the entire world. Now how she figures all this with multiple twists and turns before she goes senile and destroys all form the major plot of this story.
The story establishes the mythical connections and linkages right from chapter 1 itself and the protagonist Calandra reminded me of Diana - Wonder Woman. The author has spun a beautiful tale using her knowledge of Greek history, myths seamlessly blending in to the story . Myth, history, fantasy, action, and romance - all packed in a single book so worth a read. Romantic liaison in the story is subtle yet beautifully built over the course of the story.
This story adopts a back and forth narrative, switching between some of the pivotal characters. The ending was sort of a cliffhanger which will definitely make you want to read more into the story as a series. I absolutely loved the glossary that was made in the end of the book as it will be extremely helpful for all new readers to understand the story and the world better however the back and forth of events in the timeline sort of broke the continuity and created a momentary confusion at some points. That could have been reduced a bit in some parts. Otherwise its simply a fabulous read for all those who love YA historical fantasy fiction lovers.
Trigger warnings: blood, violence, attempted murder, murder, murder of parents (graphic), mental and physical abuse, arranged marriage (less)
Huge thanks to Booksirens and author Talena Winters for a chance to read this title. If you have read some of my previous reviews, you would know that I am always game for anything with mythology, fantasy and magic in it. So coming across a The Undine's Tear by Talena Winters - the synopsis was enough for me to pick this one up for reading. And I absolutely loved it despite taking loads of lag in between to read the book ( because life happened !! ).
The Undine's Tear by Talena Winters is the first book in the series The Rise of the Grigori. This epic YA historical fantasy series features the world of Atlantis, mermaids and magic in a different light ; filled with loads of action, fantasy, drama, romance, friendships, sacrifice and so much more.
Talena has weaved a whole new realm out there with quite some similarities to the world of Wonder woman ( Think Amazons ) with some link to the Old gods ( Christian and Greek) Angels and Demons. The story deals with Calandra ( the only known powerful undine healer since the woman who sank Atlantis ) who since her childhood was being raised to restore the Heartstone that powers her island ; her home. Sounds straightforward however it is easy as long as she doesn't go mad as her mother and all the powerful undine healers before her or finds a male undine with magic who hasn't been known to be born for over 3000 years. Either the latter or enslave the mind of her childhood friend and sweetheart Osaze ( whom she had swore to save and protect from slavery) to use the bond of their marriage to save the Heartstone. Amidst all this she uncovers the presence of a family member whom she never even knew existed along with some major revelations from her exiled mother ; revelations capable of making or breaking her home and the entire world. Now how she figures all this with multiple twists and turns before she goes senile and destroys all form the major plot of this story.
The story establishes the mythical connections and linkages right from chapter 1 itself and the protagonist Calandra reminded me of Diana - Wonder Woman. The author has spun a beautiful tale using her knowledge of Greek history, myths seamlessly blending in to the story . Myth, history, fantasy, action, and romance - all packed in a single book so worth a read. Romantic liaison in the story is subtle yet beautifully built over the course of the story.
This story adopts a back and forth narrative, switching between some of the pivotal characters. The ending was sort of a cliffhanger which will definitely make you want to read more into the story as a series. I absolutely loved the glossary that was made in the end of the book as it will be extremely helpful for all new readers to understand the story and the world better however the back and forth of events in the timeline sort of broke the continuity and created a momentary confusion at some points. That could have been reduced a bit in some parts. Otherwise its simply a fabulous read for all those who love YA historical fantasy fiction lovers.
Trigger warnings: blood, violence, attempted murder, murder, murder of parents (graphic), mental and physical abuse, arranged marriage (less)
November 8, 2021
The Heartstone that powers the barrier keeping Sirenia safe from the outside world is failing - and Calendra is the only one who might be able to save it. But she must contend with an aunt who is increasingly power-mad, an as-yet-unfulfilled promise to her childhood friend Osaze, a powerful and unsettling male undine who haunts her dreams, and a secret message from her mother which calls into question all she's ever believed. To heal the Heartstone, Calendra must bond a consort, but childbirth is believed to drive powerful healers Mad - as happened with her mother. Torn between obedience to her queen, duty to the kingdom, the love of her life and the secrets she is slowly discovering, can Calandra choose the right course, heal the Heartstone and avoid going Mad?
I should start by saying that I very rarely read fantasy and only picked this up because I've enjoyed books in other genres by the author and thought I'd give it a go. So I'm probably not the target audience. Nevertheless, while it took me a while to really get into the story, the further I got, the more I was hooked. It did bother me a little that the setting feels like it partly comes from the Bible and partly is pure imagination/mythology - I guess I prefer settings that are either wholly Biblical or purely imaginary (like Lord of the Rings). However, setting that aside, I loved the way that each character struggled and grew as they interacted and faced problems, in an intricately woven web of happenings. Definitely looking forward to reading the rest of the series. Note that this is very much a series that needs to be read together - this book is basically a cliffhanger ending and lots not resolved. Recommended - but be prepared to set aside plenty of time; it's a long book and you'll need the whole series to finish the story.
Note that I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author. I was not required to write a positive review and this is my considered opinion of the book.
I should start by saying that I very rarely read fantasy and only picked this up because I've enjoyed books in other genres by the author and thought I'd give it a go. So I'm probably not the target audience. Nevertheless, while it took me a while to really get into the story, the further I got, the more I was hooked. It did bother me a little that the setting feels like it partly comes from the Bible and partly is pure imagination/mythology - I guess I prefer settings that are either wholly Biblical or purely imaginary (like Lord of the Rings). However, setting that aside, I loved the way that each character struggled and grew as they interacted and faced problems, in an intricately woven web of happenings. Definitely looking forward to reading the rest of the series. Note that this is very much a series that needs to be read together - this book is basically a cliffhanger ending and lots not resolved. Recommended - but be prepared to set aside plenty of time; it's a long book and you'll need the whole series to finish the story.
Note that I received a complimentary copy of the book from the author. I was not required to write a positive review and this is my considered opinion of the book.
May 4, 2022
I received this book for an honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.
This book came advertised as epic fantasy, and those are the facts, folks. I like big books, and I cannot lie…and this is, by all standards, a big book. With an expansive world, many characters, lots of tension, fantastic magic, historical/modern significance, and even a touch of romance. If you think nothing of diving headlong into a 400+ page story, this one’s for you.
I’m sure I’ve said before that Little Mermaid was my favorite movie as a child, so anything with mermaids/sirens tends to hook me. (Side Note: I’ve since gotten older and realized Ariel was basically a walking [swimming?] trainwreck, but I digress). I loved what this story did with sirens, and I love the author’s note at the end about “where are all the mermen?” I wrote a blog post about this, but stories just need one question to get going, and that’s a great question. Was it just me, or was King Triton the only male merperson in The Little Mermaid? How did that work exactly (I’ll stop before I make the leap to Lion King and how Mufasa was the only male lion…). Anyway, this book answered that question in a wonderfully complex and fantastic way, and it posed many more questions that I found myself wanting the answers to.
Long story short, I quite enjoyed this. The siren society was particularly interesting. I often see articles or posts on social media about how a matriarchal society wouldn’t face the problems the world does right now, to which I always sigh because, as this book aptly puts it, violence and hate are not bound by any gender or race. The female villains in this book absolutely reminded me of women (and non-women) I’ve known. I despised those characters, which means they were doing their jobs in terms of showing me how poorly people can act.
I could go on, but I think you get the idea. This book is definitely worth reading. So, go do that. 😊
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This book came advertised as epic fantasy, and those are the facts, folks. I like big books, and I cannot lie…and this is, by all standards, a big book. With an expansive world, many characters, lots of tension, fantastic magic, historical/modern significance, and even a touch of romance. If you think nothing of diving headlong into a 400+ page story, this one’s for you.
I’m sure I’ve said before that Little Mermaid was my favorite movie as a child, so anything with mermaids/sirens tends to hook me. (Side Note: I’ve since gotten older and realized Ariel was basically a walking [swimming?] trainwreck, but I digress). I loved what this story did with sirens, and I love the author’s note at the end about “where are all the mermen?” I wrote a blog post about this, but stories just need one question to get going, and that’s a great question. Was it just me, or was King Triton the only male merperson in The Little Mermaid? How did that work exactly (I’ll stop before I make the leap to Lion King and how Mufasa was the only male lion…). Anyway, this book answered that question in a wonderfully complex and fantastic way, and it posed many more questions that I found myself wanting the answers to.
Long story short, I quite enjoyed this. The siren society was particularly interesting. I often see articles or posts on social media about how a matriarchal society wouldn’t face the problems the world does right now, to which I always sigh because, as this book aptly puts it, violence and hate are not bound by any gender or race. The female villains in this book absolutely reminded me of women (and non-women) I’ve known. I despised those characters, which means they were doing their jobs in terms of showing me how poorly people can act.
I could go on, but I think you get the idea. This book is definitely worth reading. So, go do that. 😊
More reviews at kitnkabookle.com
February 6, 2022
"Calandra had been running from the madness . . . all the powerful healers went mad."
The Undine's Tear combines detailed world-building and complex characters with ever-growing tension, creating an atmospheric read.
Talena Winters combines Greek mythology and Christianity seamlessly. Greek elements include Undines and Tartarus, whilst Elyon and the Grigori (fallen angels) follow Christianity.
The antagonists are honestly remarkable and diverse, with some having redeemable qualities whilst the others being pure evil. The antagonists outperform the protagonist for reading enjoyment, as there is that constant desire to know what they will do next.
World specific language and words (especially names) can make reading clunky. Talena added a handy glossary at the back of the novel. Phonetic respelling is present for most to assist the reader. However, this may still be challenging for neurodiverse individuals such as myself and relinquishing control of pronunciation can be helpful (no one will know if you are pronouncing the words differently in your mind).
Thanks, Booksirens and Talena Winters, for providing me with a DRC (digital review copy) of this book.
The Undine's Tear combines detailed world-building and complex characters with ever-growing tension, creating an atmospheric read.
Talena Winters combines Greek mythology and Christianity seamlessly. Greek elements include Undines and Tartarus, whilst Elyon and the Grigori (fallen angels) follow Christianity.
The antagonists are honestly remarkable and diverse, with some having redeemable qualities whilst the others being pure evil. The antagonists outperform the protagonist for reading enjoyment, as there is that constant desire to know what they will do next.
World specific language and words (especially names) can make reading clunky. Talena added a handy glossary at the back of the novel. Phonetic respelling is present for most to assist the reader. However, this may still be challenging for neurodiverse individuals such as myself and relinquishing control of pronunciation can be helpful (no one will know if you are pronouncing the words differently in your mind).
Thanks, Booksirens and Talena Winters, for providing me with a DRC (digital review copy) of this book.
January 10, 2022
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily. This was a really good read! This story follows two characters separate story lines throughout, switching back and forth between them. You get a great understanding of the world of the undines (sirens), including the history of the world and how it came to be where it is today. The story touches on many current day issues you can relate to such as discrimination and slavery, but also leaves room for fantasy, adventure, and heroism. There are many great characters and I think they are well developed - I really like the main characters and their journey throughout seems thought out and believable. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this story and seeing how it all came together. My only complaint is that I was hoping for more of an ending that left me satisfied, but instead it seems I'll have to keep reading the series to get there. Aside from being a bit disappointed in the ending, I suggest this book.
January 15, 2022
Fantastic book! Undines are Merfolk but they are also so much more!
This book has two storylines that each enhances understanding of the other. One follows Callandra, born and raised among the Merfolk on the island of Sirenia. The other follows her brother, Zane who was born after their mother had fled from Sirenia. He didn’t even know what Merfolk were. Merfolk call themselves Undines and live on the isle of Sirenia.
In following their paths, which were not always in the same time frame, the author has written in such a style that you can feel their emotions as they each go through their own trials and tribulations. The reader finds themselves cheering them on in their quests and wanting to lift their spirits up when they were down.
Included in their story is another thread that has references to the old bible. This thread is a little harder to track at first but then comes together nicely.
I cannot wait for Book 2 The Sphinx’s Heart.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
This book has two storylines that each enhances understanding of the other. One follows Callandra, born and raised among the Merfolk on the island of Sirenia. The other follows her brother, Zane who was born after their mother had fled from Sirenia. He didn’t even know what Merfolk were. Merfolk call themselves Undines and live on the isle of Sirenia.
In following their paths, which were not always in the same time frame, the author has written in such a style that you can feel their emotions as they each go through their own trials and tribulations. The reader finds themselves cheering them on in their quests and wanting to lift their spirits up when they were down.
Included in their story is another thread that has references to the old bible. This thread is a little harder to track at first but then comes together nicely.
I cannot wait for Book 2 The Sphinx’s Heart.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
May 14, 2022
Calandra is a powerful merfolk healer who is related to royalty, she just doesn't know how powerful she is. Zale is an attraction at a travelling show what could the two possibly have in common?
This is the first book in the rise of the Grigori series and oh my goodness what a book. I was completely captivated by it from the first page! I found myself struggling at one stage not because it's been badly written it hasn't, but I felt like I was missing out on bits of information and it was only because I was that taken with everything going on in the story I was speed reading to find out what was happening next. I was so gripped by the book that I ended up burning my dinner at one stage. There is so much love and tenderness in this tale it's warming to have it happen between 2 of the characters.
The plot is not on I would expect but I truly and thoroughly enjoyed it and I will be reading the next one in the series. I need to know what happens and how everything is going to be resolved.
Kudos to Talena. Please read I think you will enjoy the adventure
June 16, 2022
The Undine’s Tear is a hefty fantasy, packed with action, consequences, and oh so much heart. Generously supplied to me by the author and Book Sirens, this YA fantasy has actually been out in the world since 2019! Am I late to the party? Yes, yes I am. But hey, I’m here now!
I love a story that holds my attention, demanding that I forget everything else while I read its pages. The Undine’s Tear certainly did this, which is an incredible feat considering it’s 454 pages! I desperately needed to know how Calandra tackled the huge challenges before her, not least of which being the task of healing the Heartstone.
This is a book about mermaids, with a splash of historical realism… So how could I not fall in love with The Undine’s Tear? There’s so much to like in this YA fantasy. But don’t take my word for it, go ahead and dive into it yourself…
* You can see my full review on my blog: https://www.immersedinbooks.com/the-u... *
I love a story that holds my attention, demanding that I forget everything else while I read its pages. The Undine’s Tear certainly did this, which is an incredible feat considering it’s 454 pages! I desperately needed to know how Calandra tackled the huge challenges before her, not least of which being the task of healing the Heartstone.
This is a book about mermaids, with a splash of historical realism… So how could I not fall in love with The Undine’s Tear? There’s so much to like in this YA fantasy. But don’t take my word for it, go ahead and dive into it yourself…
* You can see my full review on my blog: https://www.immersedinbooks.com/the-u... *
March 26, 2022
Fantastic start to a new YA Fantasy series. I love the world this author has created. This reminds me so much of Wonder Woman and Amazonians. This also has mythology, which is one of my favorite subjects, so put these two together and BAM...a unique and fun read to get lost in.
I will say this is a little slow to start, as most first books in a series, but the writing is great and I absolutely love the characters (even the mean ones 😂😂). Great read for those who enjoy this type of fantasy read.
I sincerely appreciate the publisher and BookSirens for providing me with a review copy. All opinions expressed herein are mine and mine alone.
I will say this is a little slow to start, as most first books in a series, but the writing is great and I absolutely love the characters (even the mean ones 😂😂). Great read for those who enjoy this type of fantasy read.
I sincerely appreciate the publisher and BookSirens for providing me with a review copy. All opinions expressed herein are mine and mine alone.
December 4, 2021
The Undine's Tear is the first volume of the Rise of the Grigori series.
It follows two characters, Calandra, an Undine trained in healing arts and Zale a boy that is yet to discover who he is.
I liked how the story blurred the lines between different myths to create a whole new world. The characters were nice and easy to relate to as well. There was no real surprise as to how the story evolved though but it was a really good story nonetheless.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
It follows two characters, Calandra, an Undine trained in healing arts and Zale a boy that is yet to discover who he is.
I liked how the story blurred the lines between different myths to create a whole new world. The characters were nice and easy to relate to as well. There was no real surprise as to how the story evolved though but it was a really good story nonetheless.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
December 6, 2021
Received as a review copy from Booksirens, this an honest review. A fine, adventurous read as the main character, Calandra, faces off against a truly bizarre future: being a powerful healer that will save her people and the world she know or wipe it out of reality. I found the while hornets nest of secrets that she discovers about herself a lot more fun than the needing male undine magic to ultimately save her home. The author does great job at making this story really visual and coloring Calandra's world to great effect.
May 14, 2019
Within a few chapters of this book, it draws you into the world of Serinia (glossary in the back was helpful for some of the unfamiliar words from this society). Magical mermaids and the humans who help their society run; hints to other magical beings; intrigue, conflict, romance and battling to do what’s right. I also enjoyed how there were two story lines running and couldn’t wait for them to intersect!
May 14, 2019
Talena has created a fantasy world the readers can lose themselves in. Her detailed writing style allows readers to visualize the environment and action that occurs. This reader found the included glossary to be a beneficial tool for clearer understanding of the culture and communication of the Undine society. A definite read for those who enjoy fantasy stories, and an enjoyable read for everyone.
November 2, 2021
The Indine's Tear is Book 1 in the Rise of the Grigori by Talena Winters. Talena Winters has written an interesting fantasy with a well developed world. Calandra is the most powerful healer in 3,000 years, if she does not go "mad" first. From the dungeon to holding the fate of the world, Calandra must heal the Heartstone. This non-stop action story is outstanding. I can't wait to read book 2. I received an arc for free and am leaving my review voluntarily.
November 9, 2021
The world of the Undine is captivating, magical and unlike most fantasy novels I have read of late. Although it took several chapters for me to understand this world and the characters, once it clicked, it was hard to put down. The world building is complex and character development well done.
I highly recommend this novel and look forward to reading the next in the series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I highly recommend this novel and look forward to reading the next in the series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
February 6, 2022
I picked The Undine’s Tear to read, because of it’s interesting plot. I jumped in a whole new fantasy world in this novel and I loved it.
The story, the characters and their surroundings are absolutely well developed and vivid. Due to it’s easy to read and finish in one sit, this book can be a new favorite in Young Adult Fantasy genre.
I can’t wait to read the second part of this series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The story, the characters and their surroundings are absolutely well developed and vivid. Due to it’s easy to read and finish in one sit, this book can be a new favorite in Young Adult Fantasy genre.
I can’t wait to read the second part of this series.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
April 17, 2022
I loved the world and the characters, and really appreciated the included map and glossary. Calandra is faced with a monumental task, but she's smart and determined. The story moves along smoothly, revealing things as it goes along, without overwhelming the reader. It was fascinating to see how the world and society Calandra lives in works. The twists certainly kept me guessing. A great way to start off a series!
January 25, 2022
This was a beautifully written story with lovable characters. I couldn't stop reading it as it had me addicted right from the beginning. The main storylines and the individual character arcs complemented each other so well and it really made this book work.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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