Please don't read this unless you've read the book yourself, as it contains spoilers.
I initially gave this book 2/5 stars, an ‘ok’ rating. I did this because I felt bad rating it any lower when it was a book by an author I so admire, and part of a series I generally love. It was like I was reviewing it with the strength of the other books behind it, saying ‘well, it’s not ALL bad, look at the stuff that came before it’. In retrospect, that was crap reviewing and, in retrospect, this book was not okay for me. I did not enjoy it. It actually made me mad.
As part of the ROTE series it’s the weak strut, leaving the other books to bear the weight. As part of a trilogy it is the weakest of three weak books. As a standalone book and a finale, it’s a disappointing let down. I’ve changed my rating to 1, and that kinda hurts me!
Don’t worry, I’m aware that there are people who love a series right up until the ending and then bitch incessantly that it wasn’t what they wanted, and get their panties in a twist. I'm not that precious. It *was*, in its essential parts, the absolute ending I wanted and, in my opinion, the only ending that was truly ‘right’.
That isn’t what bothers me. The pre-reviews and blurbs for this book promise a thrilling conclusion, answers to questions, and beautiful writing. I found none of that. What I read was boring, repetitive, and at a disconnect with the rest of the series, which is generally otherwise brilliant.
Not that the story didn’t make sense – it did. But where was the real essence of the characters I loved so much? Where was their fundamental connection to each other? Why did characters who have been so prominent suddenly take a back seat? Where were the answers to the mysteries I’ve been wondering about for over ten years?
I’m partly annoyed from a place of love, because I have a long history with the ROTE books and a genuine investment in the characters I’ve spent years reading about and the world that has been so carefully and lovingly constructed. To me, these novels are comforting and involving; fantasy in its best form that takes you away from the crap banality of your life and ... essentially into the banality of someone else's, but with magic and swords, so its cooler.
But I’m mostly annoyed because this book seemed like a lazy cop out. A lot of the really important things I was waiting for actually happen off stage. Characters fade away into the periphery. Threads are dropped with no explanation. Parts of the story seem like a rehash of previous tales, with a lot of plodding and dallying in between. It seems to mostly consist of ‘Bee trying to escape and getting her ass kicked, repeatedly’ and ‘Fitz is on a boat and he’s bored’. It got really samey, really fast.
There was no impetus or tension. And I couldn’t think *why* this would be the case. This is the last Fitz and Fool book, there is so much to talk about and address, so much to get through... The ball should NEVER have stopped rolling.
There were some parts I liked:
- Fitz finally becomes a Skill-Wolf. I had been looking forward to and dreading this transformation since the end of the first trilogy, but seeing it realised was just right. Not happy, but right.
- Bee stops being a wet whiny blanket and starts kicking ass. Per and Lant also come into their own, despite initial misgivings. These were not huge pleasures as I wasn't AS interested in these characters, but it was good to see.
- Nighteyes plays a small role as ‘Wolf-Father’, which seems to be a combination of the natural ‘echo’ a Wit-bonded creature leaves behind and the part of Nighteye’s soul which cleaves to Fitz even after death. I was as devastated as anyone when he died in the Golden Fool trilogy and bringing him back entirely would have cheapened the story, but his minimal involvement as a sort of guide and mentor was nice, and was a good device to link Fitz and Bee.
- Hey, its Heeby! Heeby is the best.
- It was kinda nice to see all the cameos. Like, how you doing Brashen...
- Fitz remained his moody murderous self. Oh he was so maudlin, oh his pain was so grandiose, and he just had to chop so many skulls ... but that was good. That’s what we expect and want.
- This ties into my first point, but I loved that Fitz, The Fool and Nighteyes became one creature, bonded by blood, wit, skill and stone. Fitz had not only been in Nighteyes' body, but in the Fool's. In a way, they all shared a part of their integral being and their souls, so when they all come together into the memory stone to become one creature, it's RIGHT. I won't say I cried but I definitely thought about it.
- Nighteyes says that Kettricken is the mate he would have chosen for Fitz. I agree. It would never have happened, but it felt right to acknowledge it.
- The Liveships become dragons. Again, not everyone may like this, and there seems a little something off about the transformation (like, how?) but it seems like the right ending to their story.
And unfortunately the parts I disliked:
- The pace. The s-l-ooooo-w plodding pace and the endless dull travelling. I’m used to Hobb novels going along in a stately fashion, but usually this lull is spent developing the characters. Fitz has to gain XP and level up by helping others before he can face the boss, you know? But this time it wasn’t just slow, it was a snore-fest, and there was absolutely no excuse for it because there was so much that could have filled the story.
- The total lack of confrontation and showdown. Come on, after all that stuff about the Wolf of the West and the Destroyer, we don’t get Fitz, Bee or the Fool kicking in doors and royally fucking everyone up? I was hoping for at least a super cool Skill showdown with Vindeliar, perhaps Bee and Fitz teaming up to strip him of his consciousness in the Skill stream. Hell, maybe even Verity could help, yaaas.
We get none of this. Bee, to her credit, does do away with Dwalia, but then she just sets Clerres on fire and runs off. By the time Fitz shows up the place is already burning down, its inhabitants fled. He does messily despatch The Four (they’re the big baddies but I couldn’t tell you why because they made no impression on me) and then the dragons come down and finish everything off. Hardly the brilliant assassination or the revenge fuelled spree I was looking for.
At least, does the Fool righteously mess up the people who tortured him? Nah. He goes on ahead and gets captured. Again. And has to be rescued. Again.
I can’t tell you how much this disappointed me, and how much I thought readers deserved a better ‘battle’ scene - especially a Skill battle - after all the many chapters of Fitz complaining how boring boats are...
- There was little immersion in the Skill Current. I had high hopes the Skill would be further explored and that we’d maybe get to see some of the ‘larger’ beings in there that have been previously mentioned. Or that we might go through the process of entering it after death, see how an individual consciousness disperses, combines, and flows. Or that we’d be given further understanding of how the Elderlings and the dragons use it to connect and communicate.
My impression was always that the Skill current connected everyone. Not everyone is really aware of it and, of course, the more Skill you have, the deeper you can go into the current, the more of your essence you can keep, the better you can communicate, and the louder you are in there. I also had the impression that this Skill current is where people went when they died, their consciousnesses unravelling and flowing into the big Skill River to be one with all the other beings, with an awareness that expands to eternity.
The ‘very large’ beings mentioned I guessed might be Skill users either with such a mastery of the craft or such a ‘big’ and enduring essence that they have greater magnitude in the Skill current, even encouraging smaller essences to gravitate towards them. I wondered if Verity would become such a one, or if this accolade was reserved for Dragons or Elderlings or even those that came before them, almost gods...
I was also hoping that Fitz would get to speak to Chade in the Skill current, or Verity, perhaps just one last time before he went into his wolf. I mean, yeah, apparently he does have a conversation with both of them, but he’s so addled by the Skill pillar and angsty over ending his life that he doesn’t remember it and it happens ‘off screen’! Even Shrewd was there! My main man, King of Shrews! Quite frankly, I felt horrendously cheated. The Skill in The ROTE series is the most interesting and enduring plot point and I don’t think we learned anything new or saw anything we hadn’t seen before.
- Cameos: I included this in the good section as well, because it was nice little nod to tying everything up. However, on the flip side there were so many of them that it also felt like fan service.
- Motley. Okay, so I thought this arc was going somewhere. But it wasn’t. No reveal. No real reason for the bird to be in it, no explanation of why it seems to develop almost human speech...
- I was told we'd learn the secret of The Others and their beach. What the book told us is that the Others are dragons who spent too long in the company of humans, and that they netted serpents and stole eggs. Erm, okay, but we already knew this. This isn't a revelation. What about the nature of the beach itself - what magic brings those perfect objects? Why do they wash up undamaged? Where do they come from? Are there really many seas - perhaps parallel worlds - that wash up against those sands?
- The back story of the Servants killing off the dragons and Elderlings felt incomplete. We know they were outright slaying Elderlings and poisoning dragons, but that feels like a mammoth task against a united front and a bit unfeasible. We also know from other books that there is a much bigger cataclysm that causes the Elderling cities to be destroyed (and forces the Skill River deeply into the water and earth). With all the talk of water acidity, tremors, fissures, and rains of ash it’s probably volcanic. So did the Servants make a volcano way back at the river source explode? How? Kinda wanted a few more answers on that score, seen as it was such a big mystery in the Royal Assassin trilogy. (Reading that trilogy back then I distinctly remember being excited to find out more).
- Several people in Kelsingra mention that the Skill, in its pure silver form, will eat down into bone and kill you. It's theorised that this is only true for those who are unskilled. This is then dropped and not explored. Would Fitz’s blood have traces of the skill in it? How come The Fool can ingest it with no adverse effect?
- The Fool. What happened to the Fool in this book? Yeah, I get he’s understandably subdued from all the torture, and that he’s been gradually recovering and getting back his sense of self, but his whole personality in this instalment just felt like a blank to me, like he wasn’t there at all. Even though it’s been long established that his bond with Fitz is an everlasting link that transcends gender, time and death, I didn’t feel their connection at all, and it’s their connection that has absolutely driven the previous books. Even when they ended their lives together I just felt this ‘lack’... really hollowed the story for me.
- Why, oh why, did we see Fitz's end through Bee's eyes? I wanted to see it from his point of view. I didn't want his last chapter to just be watching him growing muddled and tired and eaten alive. This was Fitz's last ever book - I wanted to see his joy of completion in merging himself into his stone beast and becoming one with the two people he loved most in the world, even though it meant leaving others he loved behind. I wanted to experience the mingled sorrow and rightness of his eventual symbiosis with the Fool and Nighteyes. For him to recognise once more the lack of boundaries on those relationships which have enabled him to live long enough to do this thing. I felt immensely angered that we saw him, through Bee's eyes, simply slump over his wolf with the Fool and then just pass into it. What was he feeling? How did it feel to enter the wolf? What was it like being inside it? Did all three become one? Are they in the Skill river? Where did he go? UNRESOLVED, HOBB. I NEED CLOSURE.
- Chade had little or no mention and then he died. Just died. That was it. I knew he would die because he was old; I was expecting it. But it was anticlimactic, to say the least.
- WTF happened to Shun??
Overall, this entire trilogy lacked the drive, focus and passion of its predecessors. The ending strikes essentially the right chord, but the road taken to get there is dry and dusty and leaves you squinting and thirsty. The characters are assembled, the elements are waiting in the wings, but it’s like no one ever says ‘action’. All the joy and wonder of the ROTE series is missing somehow; there’s a serious disconnect between the characters and between the story. Mysteries are dangled and then taken away. Characters you’ve long loved fade into the background and become obscure and unknowable. There was no spark here, for me, and I am sad that after such a long time the ending of Fitz is so unsatisfying.
Luckily for me, there are three other ROTE trilogies for me to re-read with pleasure, so I don’t have to sit around all sour and put out. Besides. Hobb is a great writer. There’ll be something else down the line to enjoy.
Edit: was it just me that wanted Verity-as-Dragon to be roused at some point?