I hope this makes you wonder.
I hope this makes you question.
Working on Ayla was fun and inventive. I had moments of frustration on what I wanted this to be, I had a concept, but couldn't formulate that middle bridge between a beginning and an end. When it came to me, more organically than anything, I sat back and was satisfied with what this story had turned into. I hope you take the time to give it a shot, whether you love it, despise it, or just think it's good, I'd love to hear from you.
++beginning struggles with moving on, feeling
+Ivan the diplomat
+++"It's always up to you."
+comforting fridge
+++suburbs
+++lack of weight on the other side of the bed
+meatloaf
+++"You're so lame, Dad. In a cool, not-important-side-character sort of way."
++++Holi and love and time
++pounding silence filled the room
++"I acted and saw a way to give it all."
+the unseen
++past tense
+++loving again
++connection without the weight
++++"I told you to get out, not get dead." (might be my favorite line in this story)
++++"I think I'm going to miss you."