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"What was it you said?" His breath was close to my ear, all I could smell was his masculine scent.

I glanced around, noticing we were the only ones standing outside.

"Cal-" I stammered softly, my eyes drinking his in as he spoke.

"I want to kiss someone in the rain. I want someone to push me against a wall, kiss me hard and pull my hair to the point of pain. I want to want someone so much they are all I think about."

He was quoting exactly what I had said yesterday-word for word. My heart stopped, I think. His face was close to mine, his lips brushing against mine as he muttered,

"Let me be of some assistance here."

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You can't help who you fall in love with.... 'I think that we have relationships with different people to learn things. Learn how to behave, how to fuck, how to break up, how to be.' Cal Fallon

Gretchens life is just average. She has the boyfriend, the friends and the family. She is in the final year at high school and is set on following her career ambition as a therapist. Then Cal Fallon enters her world, changing everything she thought she knew about herself, her friends and the world as she knows it....

Cal Fallon. He has a past that he needs to
keep a secret, until he meets Gretchen, and he realises he doesn't want to keep any secrets from her...even though it could put them both in danger....

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First published November 4, 2020

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Linzvonc

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Linzvonc is a bestselling author with readers all over the globe. She loves nothing more than snuggling up with her fur babies and creating characters just for her readers. She studied an English Literature and Creative Writing degree level before becoming a writer as her full-time job. She believes there is no real way to write-and to write what you would like to read. If we all tried to do what others do, there wouldn't ever be room for change, and there must always be room for that.

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1 review
October 4, 2019
This is the most amazing story ever ❤️💙❤️ the author does an amazing job with the characters and the storyline I love Gretchen and Cal's story they have a wonderful journey together 😘😍😚 this book is a must read ❤❤❤❤❤❤
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5 reviews
November 5, 2020
One of the first works of Linz I fell in love with, and it still captures me every time. I read this whole book in a day - I couldn't put my phone down! The dynamics of this story is amazing. This story's quite a cliché but I love clichés so no complains from me! 🤪 would 100% recommend this to anyone who wants a great story with a little bit (...okay probably more than a little bit) of steam if you know what I mean 😉
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2 reviews4 followers
November 9, 2020
The perfect book to cuddle up with after a long hard day. The author tells the story of Cal and Gretchen so wonderfully that every chapter draws you in deeper, taking you on an emotional rollercoaster in the best way!! Will be reading it again for sure!!
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1 review1 follower
October 4, 2019
Omg

Sooo gripping i couldn't put it down. It normally takes me a week or so to get through a book but this lasted me 2 1\2 days
32 reviews
October 4, 2019
Powerful characters
easy to read, hard to put down.
I finished it in 1 go and I just loved it.
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Author 38 books81 followers
January 21, 2021
Heartstopping, captivating romance

I absolutely loved this book. Cal had my heart from the moment I met him, and all of the secrets and angst and drama made this book a heartstopping unputdownable romance. When I wasn't reading it I was still thinking about it. This book has the right amount of steaminess and love and had me swooning. And the epilogue was just adorable. I can't wait to read more of this amazing author's books.
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29 reviews3 followers
December 27, 2020
The most heart-warming love story

As a romance goes, this book has it all...unconditional love, steamy scenes and thrills of danger. It all starts when hot headed bad boy Cal meets his cousin's girlfriend...sweet Gretchen. You would think, that blood is thick and you do not mess with your family's bond...especially over a girl. But Cal knows what he wants and he is not about to let go the only girl which made him feel "that feeling". And as he rightly said:" you cannot help who you fall in love with". Gretchen's world turns upside down when she meets Cal. He arouses emotions, which no one else could or did, but amongst everything she needs to deal with guilt towards her ex, judgment of her friends and creeping up Cal's past.
I absolutely adore portrayed main characters and the way they changed as events evolved in Winterbourne and New York City. Cal is just sweet, romantic and overly protective guy. His "I f@%&ing love you so much" made my heart race *sight* hahaha! Whereas, Gretchen changed from that sweet innocent girl to fiery and feisty, especially in moments of jealousy. Personally, I think there was abrupt ending to Cal's past "involvements" (trying not to leave any spoilers!). In reality, it would no be so easy to walk away from that kind of job and there would be some consequences. But as it is first book in series, maybe we will find out more in follow up books. Plus, I am more than satisfied with that "happily ever after " ending.
I have read quite few books of this author on Inkitt, but this book is by far my favourite. It is well executed piece of work and definitely impressive for debut book.
As a rating goes:
Amazing characters ✔
Interesting plot and unexpected twists ✔
Flawless world building ✔
All leads to five stars and job well done!
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1,713 reviews100 followers
March 17, 2021
Mine by Linzvonc, is the first book in the Winterburg Series. This is a high school, then college romance with mafia elements. Mine is Cal and Gretchen’s love story as they meet and grow individually and as a couple. Cal is the mysterious bad boy with a dangerous past. Gretchen is a sweet senior with a “perfect life” and a boyfriend she loves. When Cal and Gretchen meet, their attraction is instant, explosive, and fierce. After high school, Cal and Gretchen move to New York so Gretchen can pursue a college degree. Cal’s past repeatedly comes back to haunt their relationship and they must trust each other in order to save their lives and relationship.

Linzvonc has written a beautiful love story that evoked many emotions. I cried, laughed, and was slightly frustrated with these characters, but overall really enjoyed them. Cal’s fierce protectiveness and Gretchen’s strength in going after what she wants to show the author’s ability to create unique characters. I loved Cal and Gretchen’s relationship, their relationship was truly something to aspire to. It really showcases the belief that your soulmate is out there.

“You can’t help who you fall in love with…”

I really enjoyed seeing the dynamic change between these characters as their relationship developed and these characters matured. The writing was fluent and descriptive. However, the plot was slightly predictable, and there were a few loose ends that could have been addressed, but overall this was a good book and a great debut novel!

“Being with Cal was like swimming in wild waters, your lungs desperate for air as you fought your way to the surface. Cal was that first breath you took, that deep, relieved inhalation. Cal was my oxygen.”

Rating: 4/5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Author 29 books642 followers
January 30, 2021
Lovely story - exciting with plenty of steam. I liked seeing the heroine find herself and her own sense of self-worth. The plot did feel a little "done," but that didn't take away from my reading experience too much as the characters were engaging. This isn't really a story with a lot of twists and turns - you can see what's coming - but that doesn't make the journey any less enjoyable.
Recommended.
32 reviews1 follower
September 27, 2021
Best series I've ever read! Mine is the love story of breathtaking bad-boy Cal and Gretchen. Follow Cal as he tries to escape his past, as he and his fair Raven are drawn together in an almost painfully intense, passionate romance. The characters are beautifully developed with so much depth you can feel their every emotion! The second part continues the journey of their intense love story as their relationship grows. A love like no other, their need for one another almost desperate. In the very first chapter, Gretchen's description of what she feels when kissing Cal will take your breath away! I could not tear myself away from it! inkitt.com/linzvonc
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8 reviews
November 23, 2020
A book I just couldn't put down until I finished it...then I greedily wanted more and there was more 💖. Mine is the start of the journey of Cal & Gretchen and how they meet, fall in love, struggle and reunite...don't want to give too much away though. The writing is beyond perfect, grips you throughout with action, passion, heat and good old fashioned true love. I can guarantee you won't be disappointed, you'll just be looking for the next one 💞💞💞
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November 24, 2020
What an amazing read. The drama, emotions, twists and turns, broken characters….everything about this story was incredible. There are frequent hot and heavy scenes, and generally enough variety to keep things interesting while still believable. Underneath the hot and heavy is a really intense storyline that will keep you guessing.
1 review1 follower
December 26, 2020
I really enjoyed the story of Cal and Gretchen! First came across Linz on wattpad and followed her to Inkitt where I had the pleasure to read it. Now I am happy to be able to have it on Kindle!
If you’re wanting a steamy, romantic, and thrilling story then this is for you!! I just can’t get enough!
1 review
November 24, 2020
Finding this story made me fall in love with reading again. I loved these characters and how the author made them come alive for me. I'm a huge fan of her work. I recommended her to everyone I know.
119 reviews
January 21, 2021
This is the ultimate love story. It starts with Gretchen being with Cals cousin and then Cal comes in and he sweeps her off her feet. There’s a bit of everything in there.

It’s written really well and gets you hooked on the first page. I can’t wait for the next book to be published! ❤️
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38 reviews2 followers
December 9, 2020
Omg

Omg. This book. Is one the cutest books I ever read this year. I just love Gretchen and Cal together. They were so cute together.
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220 reviews10 followers
April 20, 2021
O. M. G!! I can't believe I waited this long to read this book, I LOVED it so much! 😭😭❤️❤️❤️ Cal and Gretchen were so perfect together, urg Cal swoon this was such a great book.
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1,075 reviews11 followers
April 29, 2022
Mine follows Gretchen on her journey to finish high school. She’s a popular girl, dating the Quarterback (Luke); her life seems perfect. And then Cal comes in and turns her life upside down. Cal is Luke’s cousin. He’s sexy and mysterious and there’s something about him that Gretchen can’t stay away from. Eventually, she chooses Cal over Luke and that’s when shit hits the fan. Secrets are revealed, friendships are tested….it’s crazy. Then we make it to part two - formerly Ours - Gretchen is attending college in New York, studying to be a therapist. Her and Cal have agreed to try the long distance thing but he can’t stay away. He appears in New York to be with Gretchen even though his past surrounds him in that city. This past is dangerous, and he wants to keep it as far from Gretchen as possible. Can he do that now that they’re both living in New York? It’s really a toss up with a twist at the end …. Although with the chapter titles (that I read ahead of time) the twist is easy to see coming.

If you want a suspenseful romance story, I highly recommend this one. It’s so good.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Author 21 books22 followers
November 2, 2025
Good story. Loved Cal from the start and his cousin not so much. Gretchen was dating Cal's cousin, but once they met and touched they belonged to one another.

I liked the story, I saw it going a different direction than it did, but I still enjoyed the story.
2 reviews
January 3, 2022
Amazing book

I loved everything about this story. Great work. Nothing bad to say about it. Can't wait to read the series
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29 reviews3 followers
December 27, 2020
The most heart-warming love story

As a romance goes, this book has it all...unconditional love, steamy scenes and thrills of danger. It all starts when hot headed bad boy Cal meets his cousin's girlfriend...sweet Gretchen. You would think, that blood is thick and you do not mess with your family's bond...especially over a girl. But Cal knows what he wants and he is not about to let go the only girl which made him feel "that feeling". And as he rightly said:" you cannot help who you fall in love with". Gretchen's world turns upside down when she meets Cal. He arouses emotions, which no one else could or did, but amongst everything she needs to deal with guilt towards her ex, judgment of her friends and creeping up Cal's past.
I absolutely adore portrayed main characters and the way they changed as events evolved in Winterbourne and New York City. Cal is just sweet, romantic and overly protective guy. His "I f@%&ing love you so much" made my heart race *sight* hahaha! Whereas, Gretchen changed from that sweet innocent girl to fiery and feisty, especially in moments of jealousy. Personally, I think there was abrupt ending to Cal's past "involvements" (trying not to leave any spoilers!). In reality, it would no be so easy to walk away from that kind of job and there would be some consequences. But as it is first book in series, maybe we will find out more in follow up books. Plus, I am more than satisfied with that "happily ever after " ending.
I have read quite few books of this author on Inkitt, but this book is by far my favourite. It is well executed piece of work and definitely impressive for debut book.
As a rating goes:
Amazing characters ✔
Interesting plot and unexpected twists ✔
Flawless world building ✔
All leads to five stars and job well done!
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6 reviews
November 9, 2019
This is where it all starts i have loved this book from the beginning the love the characters have for one another is truly remarkable this book is the reason that lynsey carter is one of my favourite author her books can make you laugh and cry and is definitely one book you could instantly fall in love with it makes you believe in love again and taking chances i n life for the ones you love i would definitely recommend you read this amazing book to anyone so what you waiting for fall in love with this authors work ❤️ it was a an honour to have read your work keep up your wonderful work and thank you
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8 reviews
November 23, 2020
A book I just couldn't put down until I finished it...then I greedily wanted more and there was more 💖. Mine is the start of the journey of Cal & Gretchen and how they meet, fall in love, struggle and reunite...don't want to give too much away though. The writing is beyond perfect, grips you throughout with action, passion, heat and good old fashioned true love. I can guarantee you won't be disappointed, you'll just be looking for the next one 💞💞💞
32 reviews1 follower
November 2, 2020
Mine is the beginning of the love story of Cal and Gretchen. Follow Cal as he tries to escape his past, as he and his fair Raven are drawn together in an almost painfully intense, passionate romance. The characters are beautifully developed with so much depth you can feel their emotions! I couldn't put it down, and have read it more times than I can count.
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9 reviews
March 31, 2020
When I first got on import this was one of the first books I ever read!!! Linz you are such a good writer you have a good and prosperous future ahead of you and I'm so proud to read your book knowing it will be in every library and bookstore across the globe! Continue to progress in your writing and I'm looking forward to reading a new book by you😍🖖
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18 reviews1 follower
June 12, 2021
Mine

This was intense, thriller and romance all in one! What a fantastic story between 2 people who couldn’t help who they fell in love with ! The Journey to be together and to protect her! Cal /Leo and Gretchen !!!!! I’m in all with this story ! This was brilliantly written Linzvonc........
253 reviews
June 12, 2020
Such an incredible book. The story is so gripping and the characters so real. I couldn’t put it down, read it all in one day and started on the second book straight away. I’d you are look for romance, drama, heartache and characters that you wish were real, then this book is for you!
1 review
November 2, 2020
I enjoyed reading Mine, it completely blew my mind. As for the author, she manages to surpass my expectations and at the same time is nothing at all as I expected, she surprises me every time. I recommend mine and every book Linzvonc writes.
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