My Alpha’s Fairytale

by Kim- Black

Slave. A word I've been hearing for the past 10 years that I completely forgot what my real name was. My money driven parents sold me to the Alpha of the Newmoon pack when I was 10 years old and in return he paid them a fair sum of money." You are just a worthless human!" was their reply when I asked them why they were giving me to him and since then I become the Newmoon's slave. They world all beat me whenever they feel like and always order me around to do their chores. I lost all hope in life and wish to leave it as soon as possible but, something is making me hold tighter to my life whenever I want to end it and I sure hope it's worth it.

Genres: Shapeshifters, Werewolves, Romance

ebook

Published September 29, 2020

Reviews

[Jodi · Rating 3 out of 5]

The story was decent but the typos and misused words were absolutely atrocious. Get someone to proof read your material. And actually the over use of “sighing” drove me nuts. I put it in quotes because it was actually written as sighting in your Webnovel.
I did however appreciate that there wasn’t any graphic sexual content which bumped this up a star.

[Alysha J. Black · Rating 4 out of 5]

Got captured by the story so much I devoured it. 🖤 The protagonists were both so cute.
If it wasn't for the lack of editing that would be an almost 5 stars story for me.

My actual vote: 3.7

[Samantha · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a great story. It made the idea of true mates above and beyond what one could think is possible. The idea of fated mates has always been the draw to werewolves for me. The idea that you find that one perfect person for you. And you accept that person no matter who or what they are because you want to be near them. It may seem unfair, but it's truly peaceful to me.

Slave, as she is known, has lived in one pack since she was 10 years old. The pack didn't take care of her, they decided that she was going to be beaten daily for any and every mistake that happened within the pack. She didn't know why they called and treated her like a slave but she thought she deserved it.

One night at a party her mate found her. Once he realized that his mate was human and in pain he did everything he could to get her back to his packhouse to help heal her. Logan, her mate, realized that she was hurt and traumatized by her former pack. It took a very long time before she was comfortable to emerge. Then she only emerges to the Alpha pair, the Beta pair, and the witch with her mate. After she began to feel free and open her real purpose. Slave was given the opportunity to choose her name because she couldn't remember what her real name is. She chose Eva as her name.

Through time they learn that she is not human and that she is something so special. This book covers physical abuse, love, self-growth, death, plus reincarnation. I suggest this book to anyone who loves the idea of true mates. I would also suggest this book to people who like unique paranormal characters.

[Bonnie Drummond · Rating 5 out of 5]

My Alpha's Fairytale will make you madder then hell when you start to read this book. How could anyone treat a person like they treated Eva/Crystal ( slave to the New Moon Pack ). She lots hope of ever being free but in came her White Knight who knew that his mate was there not at the party but in a place not fit for a rogue to be in. Logan has to protect his mate from danger from the New Moon Pack and from a enemy that is just waiting in the background. But now the secret is out about what Eve is a Gumbia a creature that has 9 tails and can burn a blue fire but what is so special is the Pearl that she carry's and that is what two enemies want.

[Shavon Brown · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book isnsweet love story. Even though Eva/Crystal starts off as a slave not sure what she has to love for, she finds her mate and her own power. This story is both beautiful and tragic. Though there are a ton of spelling and grammar errors, the story is so good it didn't detract much. But still authors/editors should proof read.

[Angie Landrum · Rating 5 out of 5]

The story is awesome best one I have read in months.. Still needs some typos fixed but still an awesome read

[Lizzie-Anne · Rating 3 out of 5]

Maybe a 2.5...there were far too many typos, I just couldn't engage.