I received an ARC from Edelweiss
TW:
homophobia & transphobia, deadnaming on page, bullying, hate speech/slurs
2.8
Mark grew up in the political world- watching his father run, canvassing for elections, setting news alerts for the biggest stories. And politics is something that can't be taken out of his life, even after his father removes himself. They have a deal: Mark can live as the teenage boy he knows he is, if he stays stealth, stays away from politics, and doesn't do a thing to connect himself to his father or complicate his run at governor. It's a promise he has no trouble making, until homophobic bullying leaves his friend in a possibly future ruining suspension, with no one willing to do a thing about it. The new class president might be able to change things- and stop the conservative, hate-mongering candidate- but can he really break his word to his father?
I really wanted to love this book, and I really, really didn't. What I leaned from this book is never take a comparison to Red, White & Royal Blue as an actual endorsement.
What did meet my expectations is the amount of diversity. Besides the trans main character you have a cast of characters with varying sexual and romantic preferences, as well as a character who comes out as nonbinary. And the love interest is very Jewish, and very connected to his faith, which is really nice to see.
There's also a good amount of catharsis in this book. "The good fight" narrative is always popular, and it doesn't soften itself, so it's satisfying in the way it tears towards the victory. A major obstacle in this book, other than The Man and conservatives/queerphobic people, is obviously Mark's father, and that catharsis moment is one I feared would fall flat and didn't.
There are almost moments where you do really root for Mark, or at least his campaign, and one of the things that did make me root was the disinterest in a soft "it gets better" stance of future progression. There's a fierceness and a refusal to budge that I respect a lot.
However, this book made me so angry and frustrated. Angry, because Mark is terrible and I hate him. I'm all for main characters who are flawed, or even unlikable, but Mark is clearly supposed to be a likable character and just fails at that. He's irritating, selfish, pretentious, and barely feels like an actual character. He is, without a doubt, made up of about half Alex Claremont-Diaz and while a trans, high school version of Alex sounds great in theory the execution is terrible. He lacks all of the relatability, likability, and willingness to learn that Alex does, and instead feels like nothing but a political voice to text option.
Part of the reason Mark feels that way is because the dialogue is not organic at all. This book is made up of monologue after monologue of big, dramatic speeches which not only is not the way people talk, but took any really weight off of them because they got overused. The characters in this book even beyond Mark feel like political sock puppets. No high schooler talks like these high schoolers, no one quotes politics or history as much as these high schoolers, no one care that much about the student handbook. Had all of those interests been only traits of Mark it may have worked- special interests exist- but instead this is apparently set in a world where teenagers all have a deep knowledge and investment in those things.
That doesn't just go for the political things- it also goes hand in hand with the clunky way Sanchez attempts to educate people. While the diversity is a positive factor in this book, and it's good that is gets brought to the surface at times, it gets brought up in ways that feel like I'm watching a poorly acted high school assembly on Diversity™. There are strangely phrased questions meant to set up learning moments, and learning moments out of the blue that then get highlighted for a paragraph or two of internal monologuing. I do think that it's good to have some education- though in implicitly queer media, I think there should be an assumption that the reader doesn't need a 101 class- but this is definitely not the way to do it.
And the story in general just didn't do it for me. There's a romance at work here that has its moments, and is, in general, very sweet, but runs into the same problems I have with the rest of the book. For one thing, Mark himself making terrible, terrible, self-centered decisions. But also a lack of build up to an organic place or a realistic quality. The same way that Mark's decision to run for president didn't feel like an organic choice or have enough context on page to make that leap, the romance starts after the characters have a single, non-deep conversation and then all bets are apparently off and we're meant to assume that was a life changing enough conversation for them both to suddenly think of each other differently. Also, cute as it sometimes is, the chemistry just wasn't there for me.
I am, as always, really glad that there are stories like this on the shelf- trans main characters in general make me really happy, the diversity on page is something you wouldn't have been able to find a decade ago. And I know I'm probably going to be in the minority of people who honestly really don't like this book, just because of the celebration of queerness alone working for people (which is valid). But this is a book I didn't enjoy reading basically at all.