A stone thrown in water can cause a ripple effect, one after another until it calms down. Same goes with life, all events are connected with each other, somehow. It happened to Eva, the main character of our novel "Just like fire" (book 1). The first fiction writer of Pakistan. I love fiction, fantasies, fables and magical world's with a twisted plot but a linked story. Sanam has proved that a writer can come from anywhere. "Writing" it's a game of words. I greatly admire your work.
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The story is simple and I was able to read it in single sitting and it took me four hours to finish it up. The plot is easy. Book is paperback and pages of good quality.
The story starts with The Three Great Ones who could stop the evil power Whiro but due to his magnificent dark powers Kingdoms of Manavia prime bowed down to him, accepting him as the emperor. After years passed we see that there was a prophecy that only a paragon can open the gate of Abyss but a paragon can only be born at the night of blood moon. Edinretha grounds were under the curse that none was able to break, the curse, that a girl could never be born.
" And mark my words Sephora! For when she shall come, she will wreak havoc"
A girl, named, Eva got kidnapped from Denali, a place where women were treated as slaves, and was taken to Edinretha where she was hunted down but because of a pendant, she got spared. A pendant that was given to her as a reward of saving a life of a man. Eva was kidnapped so that she could compete with other woman for the spot of Queen, for King Tau of Edinretha.
Eva was bold, blunt and straight forward. She was a warrior at times and at certain times, a broken heart who needs care. She stood for the rights of women in front of King and the Great Elders.
Eva fell for Tau, the king and he for her but leaving One, all the elders were against her. One elder wounded Eva so that she won't be able to compete by bringing her such harm that she never could become a mother. Eva got claimed by the king's half brother, Kafele. Vandelia, the other competitor,became the Queen.
Kafele was the one whose life was once saved by Eva so he saved her from getting hunted by other men of Edinretha. Kafele, pampers Eva and deals her with patience and with time she accepts him.
One day, when Eva was out exploring Edinretha, the son of one of the Elders attacked Eva but got burnt by her dark flames. This is when Kafele knew about her hidden powers.
When Kafele left for war against the enemies, the dark ones attacks Edinretha. Meanwhile a girl is born to one of Eva's friend in bloody moon night who is kidnapped by Vandelia. Eva gets her baby Jasmine back but a huge fight was seen by the people of Edinretha between Mora, the dark witch (who made me imagine Bellatrix somehow) and Eva. Tau, the King wants to be the only power on the whole empire.
Would Eva be able to stop Tau? Would he become the emperor? Would Rehzar the evil emperor become stronger and rule the whole empire? Would Kafele bring a twist?
There are sssssssoooo many questions in my mind right now, I want to write here but you should read it to get the answers.
I remembered these lines when love story between Kafele and Eva started sparking.
You, me
We're face to face
But we don't see eye to eye
Like fire and rain (Like fire and rain)
You can drive me insane (You can drive me insane)
But I can't stay mad at you for anything
We're Venus and Mars (Venus and Mars)
We're like different stars (like different stars)
You're the harmony to every song I sing
And I wouldn't change a thing
The characters are sketched perfectly and Edris was one friendly fellow who was always there for Eva.
Anyhow @sanamasifwrites you need a professional editor as I saw many errors like paragraph separation, spelling mistakes, separation by comas between clauses etc., But the story is amazing and I loved it to bits, anxiously waiting for BOOK 2. Can you not send us right now? 🙈