Ehh, yeah?, no?, maybe? Was it good? maybe? Who knows? Who am I to judge person that is a lot more successful than me? Ok, but in all seriousness, in what began as a sort of fun action paced fantasy series that I thought was ok, the more I actually think about it, the more ridiculous it becomes and the less I like it, but I sort of have to think to write these reviews.
First, we must let my inner fantasy nerd out before we get onto the actual review.
WHY IS THERE NO MAP!!!!!!
There, I’m done.
This is a book that takes place over the course of just a little over 4 days, and during those four days, these characters don’t need any water, can travel the span of what is supposedly a massive empire and back, survive off two hours of sleep, eat just half a meal, while being chased by all sorts of stuff, almost have a near wedding, get locked up in prison while falling in love with the person you hated, not to mention the amount of times they almost died and suffered some pretty bad wounds that are forgotten about until it becomes convenient to mention them.
Like, I don’t care how strong your characters are, they are still human, and humans need to sleep. Like sure it’s all good and all to talk about searching for stuff at night every night without getting a wink all eating any food, but keep it semi realistic please. The author even goes to mention at how tired the characters are and at how they have not had any sleep before they become the hulk a second later and starts beating the crap out of everyone.
And that’s the thing. Don’t just remember to add in things when they become convenient. If a character has had their wrists hurt, would it not hurt for several days to move around your wrist as it recovers, not to mention swinging swords around and climbing walls? No, oh ok.
The world building comes off as a bit dodgy to me, and it isn’t helped by the fact that there is no map. I simply don’t get a sense of the scale of this country. Like, they can travel from the literal edge to the centre in the span of a day, yet there also happens to be plains, massive scary forests and mountain ranges? The geography and sense of scale simply does not match up and that isn’t even the worse thing about the world building, since we are told that there are a specific group of people have magic and why, oh because blue cave thingo. Honestly, the things that are just left out and not explained in this book really just got onto my nerves. Sometimes, it helps to explain import things in your book instead of focussing all your time on your characters trying to fight each other when they are on the same side, wait… what’s this, they have lied to each other for the nine millionth time! i’m not even surprised anymore.
We have this romantic thing… going on from where the characters hate each other from the start yet the guy wants to kiss here because, curves or something and they are close together, but they are meant to hate each other and who cares this is there first time seeing each other for six years. The romance makes no sense, at all. The entire time, these two characters in particular are snapping at each others faces, telling at how much they hate each other, while at the same time at staring at how sexy each other are.
Oh, his eyes! I could just drown in them.
Not one minute later…
YOU LIED TO ME. I HATE YOU AND I WANT TO STAB YOU!!!
I mean, can we just stop with this instalove stuff, cause it does not make sense and the author tries to plays it off as not being instalove as their relationship sort of slowly progresses even though it really doesn’t, not to mention that these are two teenagers who have known each other just a few days. It is not realistic at all, and it can’t be played at love at first sight since they were bickering the entire time about how much they wanted to kill each other and no one is going to tell me that turns into love in a few days just because one person used their leg as a pillow while they slept their only two hours in the entire course of the novel.
I mean no offence to the author, I never do, but she is a New York Times bestselling author, but this book is really just another hyped up overdramatic instalove novel that attempts to call itself fantasy. There is actually good YA fantasy out there, but the more I read of the genre, especially the over hyped books, I really should start avoiding them since more often then not, they all have the exact same plotline, problems, cases of instalove and all their characters have the exact same personality. I mean, it is always good fun while it lasts, but I could be reading something that I may actually enjoy, as much as I like writing rant reviews.
At least it has a pretty cover. 1.5/10