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Lovely Witches #1
The Witch and the Succubus
A nerdy witch, a failed succubus, and a love potion. Recipe for a disaster or a sweet and magical romance between two young women?Melida seemed to have it all. Beautiful, popular, and talented. But no one knew she was part succubus, let alone a failed one who hadn't awakened her powers. She had to fall in love to develop as a demon of love, but no man had made her heart skip a beat to this day.Jen loved magic above everything. But no matter how much she tried, she couldn't summon a familiar. Without it, she couldn't take more advanced classes nor get her witch's license.One day, Jen overheard someone planning to use a love potion on Melida, and even though they had never talked, she had to do something. Melida ends up drinking the potion anyway but instead of falling for the guy, she ends up falling in love with Jen. What will Jen do now that the hottest girl in school is head over heels for her?
93 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 12, 2020
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March 29, 2022
18+
A short and sweet sapphic fantasy story about two girls who become friends and fall in love! It was cute, almost no drama and a little spice mixed in! I would recommend!
A short and sweet sapphic fantasy story about two girls who become friends and fall in love! It was cute, almost no drama and a little spice mixed in! I would recommend!
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May 27, 2022I hate stories like this
It started out great but all through out the story is almost gay hate. The succubus doesn't like women just "one" which would've been fine but it's the same for both grandma's who loved each other enough when they were young to sleep together but it wasn't a "romantic" love just really good gal pals who also end up marrying the same guy and living together and ofc now everything is about him and they don't do anything without him but they aren't gay or attracted to each other they just have sex *eye roll* then there is the cousin mikan who "hates that he is attracted to men" huh? many characters are gay in this story but they all hate that fact and still do gay things but hate themselves and tell themselves they are straight. There is no development behind it either the grandma basically tells her oh it's just a fling I did it too me and your other grandma still do it but we're just gal pals then tells her so don't tell anyone bc it will upset the family... oh and mikan intentionally makes himself weaker bc he hates he likes other men. *Face palm* didn't like this.
It started out great but all through out the story is almost gay hate. The succubus doesn't like women just "one" which would've been fine but it's the same for both grandma's who loved each other enough when they were young to sleep together but it wasn't a "romantic" love just really good gal pals who also end up marrying the same guy and living together and ofc now everything is about him and they don't do anything without him but they aren't gay or attracted to each other they just have sex *eye roll* then there is the cousin mikan who "hates that he is attracted to men" huh? many characters are gay in this story but they all hate that fact and still do gay things but hate themselves and tell themselves they are straight. There is no development behind it either the grandma basically tells her oh it's just a fling I did it too me and your other grandma still do it but we're just gal pals then tells her so don't tell anyone bc it will upset the family... oh and mikan intentionally makes himself weaker bc he hates he likes other men. *Face palm* didn't like this.
June 8, 2021
This was short and kinda nice fluffy read.
I realy liked the blurb it pulled me in, but then it took a little different dirrection than I thought based on the synopsis. I thought it could have been executed better, but for such a short story it was ok.
One thing that startled me and creeped me out a little too was the epilogue when she was writing with her grandma and her grandma said:
Speaking of which, if you wanna make your demon side stronger, get down on your girlfriend and drink her juices, honey. I get the feeling you’re satisfied being on the bottom because of your demonic side, but you’ll feel something even more amazing being on top sometimes.
Do it, honey. Drink your girlfriend’s juices and make Grandma proud.
That is a sentence you just don't want to hear from grandmas even if they are succubus :D
I realy liked the blurb it pulled me in, but then it took a little different dirrection than I thought based on the synopsis. I thought it could have been executed better, but for such a short story it was ok.
One thing that startled me and creeped me out a little too was the epilogue when she was writing with her grandma and her grandma said:
Speaking of which, if you wanna make your demon side stronger, get down on your girlfriend and drink her juices, honey. I get the feeling you’re satisfied being on the bottom because of your demonic side, but you’ll feel something even more amazing being on top sometimes.
Do it, honey. Drink your girlfriend’s juices and make Grandma proud.
That is a sentence you just don't want to hear from grandmas even if they are succubus :D
October 27, 2022
Short, cute, odd
TLDR Fine for slice of life brain candy. A little short and inconsistent.
As above, this is a cute, inoffensive story. It's fine for a quick read if bored. My issue with it is that some parts are inconsistent. For example the female lead is the acknowledged "smartest witch" in school and yet the main character knows more about summoning, spiders and Celeste (mana) flow than her... also they refer to gay succubi as "female incubus" which doesn't make sense from a etymological standpoint. Incubus means to lie upon and succubus to lie beneath
...So the only difference is top vs bottom and the MC has thus far proven kinda "herbaceous" (in her dreams at least)
TLDR Fine for slice of life brain candy. A little short and inconsistent.
As above, this is a cute, inoffensive story. It's fine for a quick read if bored. My issue with it is that some parts are inconsistent. For example the female lead is the acknowledged "smartest witch" in school and yet the main character knows more about summoning, spiders and Celeste (mana) flow than her... also they refer to gay succubi as "female incubus" which doesn't make sense from a etymological standpoint. Incubus means to lie upon and succubus to lie beneath
...So the only difference is top vs bottom and the MC has thus far proven kinda "herbaceous" (in her dreams at least)
November 10, 2021
A nice fantasy setting intermixed in young love
If you like your teen lesbian romances on the sweet, adorable side, then this book is for you. Although the story is light on plot, the angst felt by the two main girls feels real. The will- they or won't- they aspect holds your attention throughout though I do wish we could have spent more time with the girls once the inevitable truth comes out. Still, this is merely book 1 out of 3 so I'll have to read the others to see what happens.
If you like your teen lesbian romances on the sweet, adorable side, then this book is for you. Although the story is light on plot, the angst felt by the two main girls feels real. The will- they or won't- they aspect holds your attention throughout though I do wish we could have spent more time with the girls once the inevitable truth comes out. Still, this is merely book 1 out of 3 so I'll have to read the others to see what happens.
May 6, 2021
Fluffy girl/girl romantic fun
I like this authors work and this is no exception. It's a short and easy read and very cute. I can tell this is an earlier work, the sentences are rather simple and there are some spelling and editing errors here and there, but its a fun read regardless. Comfortable and warm like having a nice cup of hot chocolate. This is a fluffy story full of magic and girl loving gay happy feelings.
I like this authors work and this is no exception. It's a short and easy read and very cute. I can tell this is an earlier work, the sentences are rather simple and there are some spelling and editing errors here and there, but its a fun read regardless. Comfortable and warm like having a nice cup of hot chocolate. This is a fluffy story full of magic and girl loving gay happy feelings.
May 12, 2021
Amazing!
I am not great at giving reviews but I really liked this book. Liked'? LoL, I mean LOVED. This book surprised me with a nice and enjoyable plot and some nice sexy scenes as well!
I am not great at giving reviews but I really liked this book. Liked'? LoL, I mean LOVED. This book surprised me with a nice and enjoyable plot and some nice sexy scenes as well!
November 9, 2022
Melinda is a succubus and becomes involved with Jen. There's problems with a guy. A succubus and Melida become more than friends and end up with rather cute familiars.
It's a romance/comedy type of book and is a fun read.
It's a romance/comedy type of book and is a fun read.
March 6, 2021
This is a good book. I would highly recommend.
May 4, 2021
Cute
Cute and fun. The plot is nice and light. There are a few dropped words and grammar issues, but not enough to ruin enjoyment.
Cute and fun. The plot is nice and light. There are a few dropped words and grammar issues, but not enough to ruin enjoyment.
September 22, 2021
Cute story
A cute story in an interesting fantasy world with just the right amount of details about the world and a lot of cuteness.
A cute story in an interesting fantasy world with just the right amount of details about the world and a lot of cuteness.
August 3, 2022
so stinking cute!
August 7, 2022
Liked greatly
Sweet loved friendship becoming lovers... Could have had more sexual context but it was a very warm kind live story
Sweet loved friendship becoming lovers... Could have had more sexual context but it was a very warm kind live story
November 15, 2022
Cute
It's kinda like reading a anime book . I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to reading the rest.
It's kinda like reading a anime book . I really enjoyed this story and am looking forward to reading the rest.
August 19, 2024
Wanna give 5 but there's something 4.5ish about this one
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