This has got to be my best Shikke pick of all time! I love how soft and fluffy the story was despite Zono's background story. It wasn't that violent, and thank Gee, the story did not tread some disturbing path (I mean, it's a Shikke series, after all. Of course, it's all feel-good stories here.) I adore the main couple's relationship so much. And give it to Shikke once again for drawing such an appetizing character concept—ehem, Deto! I'm totally in love with this!
Kurzweiliger, spaßiger BL, bei denen es um zwei Schläger-Schüler geht.
Storytechnisch jetzt nichts großartiges, aber es ist gut gezeichnet und ziemlich witzig. Die beiden prügeln sich gern - auch wenn es zur semxy Time kommt wirds ein bissl raufiger. Sex ist zensiert, und auch jetzt nichts besonderes.
Triggerwarning gibts diesmal aber: Ein sehr gewalttätiger Vater kommt vor und ist auch wichtiger Storypunkt (von dem wenigen Story, den es gibt). Wäre für ne Reihe vielleicht sogar interessant gewesen - hier wird das Thema Vater und auch die Beziehung sehr sehr flott abgewickelt, da es sich um nen Oneshot handelt.
Fue muy rápida y me gustó como evolucionó la relación de la pareja. me hubiera gustado un poco más de el conflicto de lo que sienten. Sencillo, directo y eficaz.
The story itself is three stars, but I'm adding one more star because of how the characters were designed to be amazingly erotic. Zono's teeth and the smattering of moles all over Deto's face and body (he has moles at the back of his ears) just makes the panels just a bit more erotic, thank you to this beautiful attention to detail Shikke 🥹 The scenes where Zono licks Deto's ears are the best.
Deto is a highschooler who seems to be always broke (like it's never said that his family is especially poor, but there are details like how he doesn't have a smartphone, or how he doesn't have money for college, or how he and his younger sister share a room and a futon, and it's like, they're not starving but also Deto is also just like that as a person). Waits an hour into lunch break for a ¥50 drop on the cutlet sandwich from the store kind of thrifty. He gets tangled up with Zono (actually Hanazono) who was asking his gyaru friends to get him a cutlet sandwich from the store as well.
Deto tries to fight for his lunch and kept losing, until he found out that Zono was especially sensitive around the back of the neck. (It seems like it depends on who's touching him though ?) This gives him some leverage but also ends up being a sexual awakening lol. Dude hears Zono moaning from being touched and is like 'Oh no, I flipped a weird switch... My dick got hard 🥹' I also like how we can see Deto's eyes changing colour when he's turned on.
There’s a lot of fun elements in the story (Zono likes cute pastelly stuff and owns the cutest lounge wear for example) that makes up for the relatively simple plot.
There’s also an extra chapter that came out in digital form only. I have it but completely forgot about it. I think they went on a date at an amusement park?
Si esto hubiera sido más largo me hubiera ENAMORADO de ellos, de hecho amé las historias extras porque precisamente me permitieron conocerlos más. De todas maneras fue muy cute (y hot, dato no menor)
This was a very unique story in the way it was written. It’s a short manga but a lot happens. It was a young enemy to lovers story. The mc discovers he is gay by hearing the guy who bullied him moan. They slowly over time start to build up a relationship. The mc, Deto, discovers that Zono, the bully, has a thing for cute things. He loves cute, pink feminine things. He also discovered that Zono has an abusive dad. After that discovery, their relationship progresses more. In the manga, it starts off as them as seniors in high school, they graduate, and after graduation they find a place to live together and they are still lovers. It was a simple, yet complex story. It was cute and I enjoyed the friend group they had. With all one shots I like, I will always think they could be longer. I would love to read more about them. I also like how the author had they both not go to college. I feel like most stories I read of high schoolers, they always go to college, so it was a nice change
C’était une lecture adorable et touchante. J’ai beaucoup aimé Zono et Deto : leur dynamique douce et réaliste m’a vraiment plu, et leur relation mignonne m’a fait passer un bon moment. Cela dit, j’ai trouvé un peu dommage que le sujet principal reste en surface. Vu son importance, il aurait mérité d’être plus profondément exploré. Là, il semble davantage servir de toile de fond que de véritable moteur au récit.
J’aurais aimé qu’on voie davantage comment ce thème affecte Zono, sa personnalité, et surtout l’évolution de sa relation avec Deto — d’abord amicale, puis amoureuse. Quant à Deto, son caractère aurait gagné à être un peu plus développé aussi, notamment pour mieux comprendre ce qui l’attire chez Zono, dès le départ, et ce qui fait qu’il tombe amoureux de lui par la suite.
Malgré ces réserves, je garde un bon souvenir de cette lecture. Zono et Deto sont attendrissants, et leur histoire m’a fait du bien. C’est doux, et parfois, ça suffit.
( ˘͈ ᵕ ˘͈♡) Voy a escribir lo que Zono y Deto conversaron porque me pareció super bonito, es preciosa esta historia.
Deto: ¿De verdad te gustan los chicos? Zono: Antes no era así, pero he conocido a alguien. Deto: ¿Cómo es él? Zono: Siempre está pendiente de mi en el buen sentido, antes no me importaba estar solo pero ahora me aburro sin él, conoce mis gustos y a mi familia y aun así no me trata de forma distinta, me fascinan tantas cosas de él que no quiero que seamos solo amigos, pero no sé cómo decírselo, al final solo me sale molestarlo. Deto: como un crío... y ... donde esta ese pobre chico maltratado. Zono: en la cama agarrándome la mano.
(ZAZZZZZ Deto abraza a Zono) (˚ ˃̣̣̥⌓˂̣̣̥ )♡ que monada, los quiero mucho y la forma en que están dibujados ambos es preciosa, esos ojos tienen un no sé qué perfecto que me encantan.
Ok allora non è un brutto manga, i disegni sono meravigliosi e la trama è molto carina, non c’è molto drama ed è molto fluffy con delle bellissime scene 🌶, però trovo che non sia stato sviluppato bene, è andato tutto troppo veloce e non è stato possibile legare con i due protagonisti. Penso che qualche capitolo in più non sarebbe stato male. Avesse suscitato qualche emozione in me mi sarebbe piaciuto molto di più, purtroppo l’ho trovato troppo piatto a livello emotivo. Peccato, molto potenziale sprecato.
Zono es extremadamente adorable, jamás un personaje me había trasmitido tanta ternura, y Deto es realmente el chico de mis sueños (hablando de valores y personalidad >3<), cuida de Zono, respeta sus gustos, lo consciente, lo hace sentir seguro y que Zono se sienta cómodo de mostrar quien es. Y juntos son una pareja hermosa, sin duda el uno para el otro son su lugar seguro. Las escenas spicys también te trasmiten ese amor que se sienten y ahhhh fue hermoso cada momento >3<. Esta pareja calentó mi corazón y me hizo pasar buen rato 💗.
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That was the best 45 mins of my life !!! So short, but so adorable like of course the story is so fast paced, and we didn’t really get to see them getting to know each other just them getting to know each other’s body, but they are so cute and them gifting each other scrunchies like come on that is so cute they’re probably my third favourite couple of this author even if we don’t really know them as people
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La historia es linda y aunque al principio te hace creer que será la típica historia del matón de escuela, la verdad detrás de los personajes es bastante agradable de leer.
No hay un gran trasfondo, ni un desarrollo tremendo de personajes y del entorno, es lo suficiente para sentirse atraído por la historia y por la relación de los personajes.
cute! the back cover was so cute! and i liked the MC a lot he was funny. cliche plot but not in a way that made me roll my eyes excessively and i liked the extra love love love post time-skip domestic extras!!!!!