*Changing my review to 3.5 stars*
THE PLOT
Krystal and Nichole are foster sister that made it out the mud; Krystal is now a baddie lawyer, and Nichole is booed up with a rich architect. But one day Krystal learns Nichole has flown the cuckoo nest and tried to set her husband on fire because she believes he's an imposter. Krystal to the rescue! She drops everything to figure out what happened to Nichole and if anything she's saying is true.
MY OPINNI
I would give the writing 4 out of 5 stars, but the ending and small details that didn't make sense knocked the overall rating to a 3.5. I've read other Lucinda Berry novels; her plots are always interesting and well-executed.
The novel alternates between flashbacks and current happenings, which leaves you guessing on two fronts: what happened in the past and what's happening to Nichole now. I guessed Nichole's husband was up to no good because men are always shady, but the way it all came together was a lil too much. I know this genre asks you to look beyond the plausible, but this one was too unbelievable and the ending was chaotic (not in a good way).
I mentioned that some of the small details bothered me; you might be wondering, who cares if they're small? But they were so blatantly wrong, it looked careless on behalf of the author, the editor, the publisher, and everyone in between who laid eyes on this book before publication. It's not that deep, but since I do this for a living, it stuck out for me. For example, Krystal graduating college and immediately becoming a lawyer at 22 had me like PAUSE. Was this one of those 2 yrs of undergrad, 3 yrs of law school fast track programs?
Also, I find Lucinda particularly skilled at writing child POVs (a nod to her professional background). But, in some spots, I found that Lucinda used that same child "voice" for a 17-year-old, which threw me off a bit.
PROS AND CONS
Pros: Good writing quality, interesting storyline, kept me guessing until the end
Cons: Anti-climatic ending (both villains were doing entirely too much), small details didn't make sense and caused me to lose focus because the math wasn't mathin