Too Much Confusing & Idiotic Behavior!
The women in this story make women look like silly idiots! Going out and participating in very harmful and criminal pranks because of a boy child you like. Going tramping around the woods looking for you know not what, egged on by another silly woman, all while still afraid of a stalker. Just plain foolishness! To be honest, I give myself more credit than this kind of behavior!
As I got farther and closer to the end, the silliness made more sense from the viewpoint of the writer. But also, I was very disappointed at the end, as I did think the Sheriff was being careless and was too invested into the Mary he wanted for himself and not the reveals he was getting from her memory snatches. It appears it will cost him, but we will not know how completely, as this ended as a cliffhanger!
I am reading this at year end, 2021, so there should be a conclusion already! But, there is not! This happened with one other book I read and that author waited 2 years before she put out her conclusion. It was not worth the wait! That should not happen, as there should be forewarning that a part 2 is possible. The reader should be made aware before they get to last page and investing so much of their time!
Edit: The more I thought about this after I posted my review, the more I realize that this is not a romance and should not be listed as one. This female (Mary) is criminally insane and I wish to note that her situation should not be exploited as a serial. This woman should be allowed to be locked up in an institution until she is helped or she should be put to death. She should not be allowed to murder anymore innocent people. If she was just a vigilante, after the bad guys I could view this as being a more credible use of her skills. But, this person has psychopathic tendencies that need to be curtailed! The world does not need her as she is written here in this story!