Engaging, high-stakes and action filled play. Five characters, story takes place within a few days.
Premise is simple: Jackie discovers a collection of highly valuable stamps in her dead mother's house and goes on a mission to sell them. Many, many obstacles are in the way.
Emotional heartbeat is about family, sharing, grace (or lack thereof), grief, finding value in the present moment.
ACT ONE
scene one:
- Jackie (main character) almost monologuing at Philip, her internal thoughts about what she wants coming out.
- classic game of interrogation, fluster, rebuttal, interrogation
- “they” off stage that doesn’t really need explaining
- big news hinted at in opening scene that sets the action forward (expensive stamp that Jackie doesn’t know about)
scene two:
- picks up in new location, one character from previous scene (dennis) and a new one (sterling), discussing what happened in scene 1, and what it means for them
- building the suspense and action
- dialogue is doing a lot of ‘not saying’
- small insignificant detail brought back, Dennis noticed the comic book thing
scene three:
- Jackie and Mary packing. to begin with, having two different convos.
- story around Jackie (bills, family, Mauritius) and stakes is starting to be built by showing her world
- ISSUE ESTABLISHED: both lay claim to the stamps
- becomes a vehicle to talk about the relationship obstacles
- INTRUDER: dennis enters, objective to get the stamps
- Dennis cunningly manipulates the sisters into talking about the stamps, pits them against each other and plays on relationship patterns.
- dennis flirts with jackie (shows us she is lonely)
- Jackie loses all control (she is the audience here)
- emotions flare, then topic is changed swiftly, scene continues. jackie aghast.
*whenever a swear word happens, a beat follows*
Scene 4:
- Philip and Sterling meet in the shop. they have old vendettas. Sterling wants to know about the stamps.
- Sterling is classic antagonist bully, intimidating Phil.
- stakes get really high, physical violence and then..
- dennis enters. truth is revealed: we need him.
- plan is hatched
- phil makes a countermove that could throw everything off in secret
scene 5:
- stamps still priority #1, jackie is trying a tactic to get Mary to give them to her. she tries emotional reasoning and justifying her right (by telling story of mother’s death)
- the blowout happens! jackie is animal now, politeness a memory
- mixture of pain of being abandoned to clean up family mess, indignity that Mary could consider them hers, conviction that she has earned them and needs them. PUNCHES mary in the face.
- final monologue from jackie lays the new law down.
ACT TWO
scene one:
- jackie and dennis hashing out the deal. sterling is on his way. they start with the dance, move into honesty
- jackie steps into backstory of Dennis, he shies away. their camaraderie builds.
- sterling arrives and Jackie and him undergo a rigorous deal process.
- just as the deal is done, INTRUDER. phil and mary enter. Phil reveals they're fake. Deal is off after another physical blowout.
- another reveal after Sterling leaves: Phil is in fact lying, they're real.
- showdown between sisters. Jackie reveals her emotional wounding. Mary is a polite shit.
- jackie threatens to burn the stamps. she doesn't. mary and phil leave with the stamps.
- jackie is wrecked, beaten, has nothing left. we know she is morally correct, the hero of the story (despite her fuckups)
- silver lining: dennis has pilfered another valuable stamp. they will be okay.