*2.5/5*
There are some potential spoilers ahead, as well as some quotes, so be warned~
A factor that drew me into reading this book was that it's set in India, which is where I'm from! Having grown up in a place where the stereotypes & general prejudice against Indians is high, it always surprises me to see a foreigner taking an interest in our country & it's culture, as there aren't very many of those. Seeing the other reviews left here, it seems that there are at least a handful of other people who are interested in India too! I'm glad to see that there are so many people who actually may care to learn about our country & what it has to offer :')
Like most other cutesy, cliche romance books, it's not very unpredictable, & instantly from reading the synopsis, I could pretty much tell the direction this story would eventually take. It's one of those typical stories of Indian boy (in this case, Rishi) meets an American girl (in this case, Emma), they fall in love & he decides to defy all his family's traditions to be with her, since her existence in his life gives him clarity & practically solves all his problems. I understand this is supposed to be a lighthearted romance book, but since the author is describing another culture & society, I was hoping there would be a sense of depth to the story. I hope the rest of my review doesn't come off as me wanting to gatekeep writing about India, or any other country for that matter; I would just like to touch on some qualms I've personally had with this book while reading it.
In more aspects than one, I feel that Emma was written much better compared to Rishi. This is probably due to the author herself being American, & being able to relate more easily to this character. From the very first chapter, I could tell what kind of person Emma is in general; a spunky redhead, a classic smart, independent lead character with a determined demeanour. However, despite having finished the book, I have no idea what kind of person Rishi would be outside this situation. Almost every dialogue or thought the author presents from him includes either his arranged marriage situation, his family, or how infatuated he is with Emma. The threat of a looming arranged marriage can put immense pressure & stress on someone, I understand that, but I really wish there were more instances of them getting to know one another thoroughly. I didn't feel like I came out fully understanding these characters, & as a result, their preceding romance felt very bland & rushed.
Rishi's entire character feels like a flat representation of an average person in the same situation. I really wish there was more to him, & I expected there to be as I progressed through the book. I could understand if I was getting this impression from just being exposed to Emma's perspective & her opinions & experiences with Rishi, but not much changes about him & how I perceive him when reading his perspective on what's happening. I often found myself questioning, why write from his perspective at all? Nothing much is being added to how I see these characters from his end, it's just there a means to push the plot forward. The most personality I got from Rishi was when he elaborated on one of his actions, ("He’d heard that the whole “cheers” thing was invented by a king who wanted to make sure his drink wasn’t poisoned and so heartily hit his goblet against his dinner guests’. In the same spirit, Rishi clunked his mug hard against hers, although the foam was too resilient to splash anything out."), but I can't recall learning anything new about him after this.
I would have much preferred the book solely to be from Emma's perspective; I think omitting Rishi's chapters entirely would allow for more space for Emma to get to know him thoroughly, & over a larger span of time. Additionally, the author could have included more scenes of Emma struggling to understand Indian culture or experiencing culture shock, which is common due to her own culture being so vastly different. Rishi could help her navigate through this, & they could have gotten to know each other better & learned more about the other's opinions & ideals. Seeing such aspects would make them both feel more like real people, which is something this book heavily lacks with pretty much all its characters.
The writing style of this book isn't something I was particularly a fan of. Personally, I don't mind flowery language to an extent, but along with that, the author uses a lot of rhetorical questions & keywords. of. importance. which. are. broken. up. like. this. & it's something that's present pretty often. This is especially prevalent in Rishi's chapters. I found myself being told what the stakes are in his situation rather than being shown what they are & how they affect him. I don't mind seeing a character's inner monologue depicting their struggles & mindset, however, this felt more like an omniscient narration on the situation as opposed to Rishi's own thoughts & feelings.
The author also....mentions food a lot? & I don't just mean in scenes of Rishi & Emma hanging out (albeit there are way too many of those too), but also as part of the figurative language?? May I present:
"There wasn’t enough chutney in existence to cure this fiery tension between them."
&
"Her eyes were sparkling. Almost like they were on the verge of tears, but in a happy way. This was something new. This sort of joy only got released over the best tomato chutney or the crispy edges of a dosa."
Like...food is a big part of our culture & all...but realistically, who mentions food this much? Imagine reading a book where an Indian girl meets an American boy, & the boy's inner monologue compares her to cheeseburgers & bacon. It would be a pretty strange way of describing things, & I kind of had to pause for a moment to take it in.
This is another issue in a lot of Rishi's dialogue. Why do so many of his descriptions include comparisons to Indian food, religious places like temples, & Indian holidays? Why not give the same treatment to Emma, & have her compare everything to fast food places, Churches, & American holidays? One of these characters reads like a normal person, the other reads like a bad stereotype. Unfortunately, it just comes off a bit ignorant.
The dialogue in the book, like many others in the genre, is quite strange & "quirky". One thing that caught me off guard was Emma's description of Rishi at the beginning of the book, where she stated how, "Maybe Rishi was better looking and didn’t smell like hay and stale beer with a slight tinge of urine. He smelled more like a dark forest with something spicy in the air."
...Ah yes. The duality of Indian men. Either they smell like piss or like curry. Quotes like this, which may not intend to sound strange, are worded so strangely it can't help but coming off like that.
In other instances of quirky dialogue, there was the time Rishi described Emma's hair, stating how, "He’d noticed the one purple curl that hung down her face in the middle of all that red hair, but he was getting a much more intimate view of it now. It reminded him of the syphilis bacteria he’d once seen through a microscope in college. Magnified, it had been a bright-purple curlicue, almost cute for something so diabolical. He could make a similar comparison to her. But the smell of her hair was more like oranges and honey than whatever syphilis smelled like.", & Emma stating how she "watched Rishi lick his fingers. Maybe she was a little envious of those fingers." Some of it is funny, some are slightly cringy. But I suppose this kind of dialogue is present in almost every other book in the same genre, & enjoying this factor is a matter of preference.
The pacing of this book was also quite all over the place. I felt that there were some things that required a bit more dialogue between characters, such as Rishi's parents, who were initially so against him not getting an arranged marriage, coming around to accepting Emma. Things like this just take more time to develop in real life, & aren't so easily & perfectly wrapped up. This is also a factor I wish Emma & Rishi discussed more, as it seems to be a large part of their relationship which is only ever hinted at casually. The ending entirely felt flimsy, & the initial reason for Emma being in Bangalore felt more like an afterthought that came in at the right moment to make Rishi's parents accept her. This is what I mean by feeling that this story lacks depth; there are so many aspects that could have been developed further but just weren't due to the author seeming to want to conclude the story in this rushed, unrealistically perfect way.
All in all, I didn't hate this book. I went into it skeptical but was hoping to come out satisfied with its contents. Unfortunately, I just can't get myself to fully like it. I'm NOT AT ALL against authors writing people of different cultures, & I’m definitely NOT trying to gatekeep here. I can tell that the author is very passionate about India from certain parts of this book, which is, again, incredibly lovely to see. However, when writing characters from another culture to yours, I feel it's important to ensure that they seem like actual people, as opposed to bland, stereotypical versions of such. Personally, I feel this story sorely lacks that, the uninteresting characters & lack of emphasis on certain aspects regarding the plot really bring down what could have been an interesting take on falling in love with a person whose culture is vastly different from yours.