Daddy Issues

by Rayne Havok

Hayden is in for an unforgettable night. His first date with Haley, a young girl that has a propensity for older men, will open him up to games he's never imagined.

Genres: Horror, Novella, Splatterpunk, Erotica, Short Stories, Smut, Dark Romance

35 pages, Kindle Edition

Published November 1, 2020

About the author

Rayne lives in the Arizona desert, free to leave her house whenever she wants, she chooses not to risk death by sweltering sun demons. Instead, she stays safely indoors with a computer and all the words she knows, slapping them together in any which way she chooses in the moment.
Often gory, sometimes erotic. She loves the limitless boundaries of writing, and tends to push them toward extreme.

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Reviews

[John The Crippledgimp · Rating 5 out of 5]

Holy shit what the fuck. Rayne Havok you are definitely the champion at making me cuss the most in the shortest amount of time. What the fuck was that.... you write a perverted steamy as hell story but now I feel dirty. 😂😂😂😂😂

[Peter Topside · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pardon my language, but holy shit. This was basically a prolonged sexual encounter with a tiny bit of story ahead of the date between our leads. I wasn’t particularly thrilled with how things played out. The sex was written really well and the fetish involved had me a bit queasy but, again, that was the ambition. Just a lack of depth and context early on. What put me over the top was the obscene twist towards the end. My jaw dropped and landed on the floor. And that’s how you shock your readers. I’m going to be sick now. Rayne Havok finally got me here. Well done, you fellow troubled mind. Well friggin’ done.

[Carla · Rating 3 out of 5]

I’m speechless!

[Simon McHardy · Rating 5 out of 5]

I thought I was reading a top notch smut book until the fecked up ending. Well done Havok you got me good with this one you little minx.

[Hail Hydra! ~Dave Anderson~ · Rating 4 out of 5]

“That reminds me,” I say, turning the water off and stepping from the walk-in shower, wrapping a towel around my chest, “do you want me to call you Haden… or daddy?”

[Vicky Lelove · Rating 4 out of 5]

A bachelor gets more than he bargains for when he meets up with a tinder date..
Tabooed & a bit smutty..
One read I would of preferred more of Rayne's craziness in it.. but still a good read.

[Sea Caummisar · Rating 4 out of 5]

WTH did I just read?
Twisted? Yep
Morbid? Yeah
Sexy? Heck Havok
Humorous? Definitely
Weird? Of course. It's Rayne Havok

[Darlene I read WAY to many books]

I'm not even going to rate this because idk what I'll rate this.

Let's say... when you go on a dating site are pretty oldish and dating someone 18.. please make sure you remember stuff about your past.

Because home boy got a huge suprise.. and I gotta admit the h can't remember her name did get some revenge



Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐️⭐️
Heat-🌶🌶

Age gap
Daddy kink
No HEA

[Paul · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ok so first things first....where can I find a nymphomaniac like the main character. Second,Rayne damn girl you sure know how to get in to men's heads and fuck them up Than You it did wonders for me. (Shwing) lol

[Corrina Morse · Rating 5 out of 5]

Woah, thems some serious Daddy Issues!!! I love Raynes little twist endings! Brilliant!! 🖤

[Crystal (Crystalreads2) · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just what I needed for a break in between books. It’s a short spicy story with a surprising twist

[Sheldon Jimmie · Rating 4 out of 5]

Um.....that was FUCKED UP! I think I gagged a little at the end.

[Gizel Alvarez · Rating 5 out of 5]

I am in a fit of giggles

This was a superb reverge plot but if the reader has trigger please avoid id hate for this one to get banned.

Its a short read the author has gained a new follower it was we'll written and the taboo was in the twist love it.

[Sharon Leung · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nasty with a capital N

Wow, this has you going and you can actually see it all happening. But what happens when has me feeling squeamish and that's not me. But what a shock and poor Hayden he must be scarred for life. A fantastic read and great imagination. Characters are brilliant and you can just see their faces going through it all. Definitely not for those that easily offend but if you like the extreme like me this is another one of Mr Havoks to read. Great author whose writing is not only descriptive with a great imagination but he draws you in from the very first page and had you hooked. I've not read I e of his books that I haven't thoroughly enjoyed so far. And I don't think there are many left I haven't read now. Definitely recommend.

[Ash Ericmore · Rating 5 out of 5]

Well. So I'm never dating anyone younger than me. Five Stars. Wrong in every right way.

[Cassandra · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hot - and I totally did not see that tending coming. So I have upped my rating to a 4

[Asena Tunay · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book isn't as gory and violent as Rayne's other stories. I would say this is a very taboo book so adhere to do warnings. I like how the story started very steamy and normal, but turned into a twisted revenge story. Ending was so good !!

[Karolina · Rating 5 out of 5]

I feel like I was just punched in the face!

Hayden, a middle aged man that just hasn’t found the right woman yet, but has his list of 100 women he has slept with. Hayden ends up on a date with Hayley, a girl 23 years his junior. His first time with a girl this young. Her first time with a man this old. They end up at his place and begin their evening of sexual daddy/daughter role play. Hayden is so caught up in her that he fails to realize he already knows her.

Disturbing but so well written. A super fast read that is packed full!

[Alicia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Hah... this was interesting. Haden seemed kinda like a dumbass but hey. Ending made me laugh a little bit.

[Erika Horton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ok WTF.

This book was spicyyy and I was enjoying the age-gap relationship. As soon as Haley started venting, I knew. I wanted to scream. Good for her but also.. EWWWW 🥴

[Ryder Kinlay · Rating 4 out of 5]

I really enjoy Havok's stories. They're always quick, brutal and pack a punch. This one was good, but it wasn't my favourite. It was more erotica and didn't have her usual flair for the unexpected twist. Still, Rayne's writing is excellent and she remains my go-to author for a quick entertaining break.

[Melanie Bouthillette · Rating 5 out of 5]

She can write a story I tell you. This story was erotic, sick and funny as fuck. I'm still sitting here thinking and smiling about the ending. Imagine this happening to you!! 🤮 Rayne Havok is fastly climbing to be one a my favs.
5/5 happy reading

[Nora · Rating 4 out of 5]

That ending really turned things around for me. Wow.

[Shernell Joseph · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was weird but I love it

This was so short and so quick but I enjoyed it. I only read this author because it has good reviews and I also wanted to read one of her horror books which I'm nervous too so I read this one first. I kind of newthe twist but it was so spicy that when I got it it wasn't shocking it was just a great ride. Back of my mind I thought this was horror meaning somebody was going to die but it wasn't the case.

[E.B. Lunsford · Rating 5 out of 5]

Another brilliant short by Rayne. I love the simple yet immersive way she writes. While not as splattery as some of her other work, this was still an excellent read.

[Mark Alexander · Rating 3 out of 5]

Lower rating than I normally give the authors work because I found it a bit predictable, guessing the twist very early on. Although, in fairness, this is the 10th novella by the author I have read in the past week and when you read a lot of an authors stories in a short time period, you obviously get used to the way they think. That aside, I did enjoy reading this and it was by no means "bad".

[Jen · Rating 4 out of 5]

Spicy but disturbing! 😂

[Amber Henline · Rating 3 out of 5]

Originally at 2 stars bc EW LEMME EMPHASIZE THAT Then I went up to 3 bc Haley a straight savage. If your into age gaps and daddy issues the here you go…

[Melissa · Rating 3 out of 5]

Yes officer 👮‍♀️ this woman …arrest her

Miss Rayne what the hell…how could u even right this…m so ashamed of myself right now 😭…m definitely going to hell…I swear this is my first time reading shit like this …

This book started so innocently 😭..and I was like okay this girl has daddy kink ..but I was not ready for the plot twist.. fuck me… daughter and father 😭😭😭😭😭😭….. noooooooooooooooooo…23 years age gap…

“So as long as you think I’m someone else’s daughter you’ll make time for me, but if I’m yours, you can’t be bothered to look for time, huh…daddy?” He freezes, suddenly realizing where this could be going. I squeeze tightly milking him over the edge. Just as it dawns on him, I feel the heat of come shoot inside me as a shocked expression takes over his o face, giving me exactly what I wanted. “You get it now, don’t you, daddy?” “Haley!?” he shouts, inadvertently moaning as I coax the last of his come with a slow grind. “So, you DO remember me!”

[Joe · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really hot quick read. I prefer short stories.
Have to admit, I enjoy the idea of a woman calling the guy "daddy", something about it just pings my kink-o-meter
This story was no exception. Young (LEGAL) woman who prefers "older" men
A guy who has trouble with long term relationships.
They met through online dating and really hit if off in their virtual relationship
Decide to bring it to real life
That is when the sparks fly. She turns out to be a dirty girl.
Great seduction, hot sex
Interesting twist at the end that I did not see coming
I think I could enjoy re-reading this one, even knowing the twist. I was just that hot.