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Kindle Edition
First published January 29, 2017
There was only the pulse of his body inside mine, and his eyes. Those intense, shattered eyes that saw too much.
Demanded all.
And I gave all.
God help me, I gave up everything to him.



ermmm what did I just read? I expected to be a warm fluffy read of sorts but what was this??? The MMC certainly needs to get real help or something because with the way his mind is wired? I think its safe for him to stay single. FOR LIFE LOL. Someone chain this man in his 'comfy cabin' so he never gets out and mistreat women and fuck up their lives too.
Idk how a woman can ever write things like this because between the lines there clearly wasn;t any respect for women as a separate independent individual but rather a crime if a woman was still a virgin when she is still 27?? Why does she think that she is the problem when her boyfriends are leaving her one by one just because they weren't fucking?? Like since when did that entail in a relationship and even so, why was it her fault alone? Idk that part weirded me out alot because it was never her fault to begin with.
For the MMC, he wasn't even 'possessive'. He wanted a girl that had a character that stood out from everyone else. duh. of course. but when she acted like that when they were together, suddenly he wasn't ok with it? and he only ever does things his way without ever consulting her opinion or if she was onboard with it, he only ever assumed that 'she would want this too' wtf?? and when he felt that she was poking in too much? Pushed her away and degraded her even when he liked it so much when they were doing it? hypocrite much?
The MMC never redeemed himself and the plot falls very flat for this one. One trip down to a small town and suddenly the MMC isn't a grinch anymore and has fallen head over heels for her AND Christmas. Yea, I get it, its a novella and all but isn't this going without solid developments? I have read novellas less than a 100 pages long and have better plot developments compared to this one. Says alot doesn't it? Suddenly the best friend got together with the MMC's brother and suddenly he is grovelling and suddenly they are married and she's pregnant? I usually enjoy these type of epilogues but this time? Why haven't you started running girl?