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209 pages, Kindle Edition
First published November 19, 2020
Vicenary could be one of the most compelling books I’ve read this year. Each story felt fresh, and I was instantly engaged with every one. I found myself thinking about them long after I’d had to put the book down to attend to other things (or sleep), ready and waiting for when I could get back to it.
The stories are presented as a “tour” with the storyteller, Griot, as our guide. After each story is told, a moment of wrap-up is given, which points out how elements presented in the story relate to the reader, which I particularly enjoyed. Griot’s presence as the storyteller, although explicitly discussed in the prologue, is never mentioned again, so as the stories go on, you tend to forget that the wrap-up is coming from him and the stories tend to be disjointed rather than tied together.In addition, the stories tend to feel like a summary of events with a lot of telling the reader what happened rather than the reader experiencing the action as it unfolds. A storyteller is telling the tale, so perhaps they would work better read aloud. Additionally, there are grammar, word usage, and story structure issues that hurt the delivery. For example, often, I had to re-read paragraphs to figure out which character was speaking; two people would be talking on the same line of text which made things confusing.
Having said that, I still feel the stories are engaging, and science fiction and fantasy readers looking for something new and fresh might want to give this book a chance. I hope the author will expand the stories at some time in the future to provide us with a more in-depth experience because many, if not all, are novel-length-worthy tales. Some would make great introductory novels for series, notably, The Forbidden Forest, the story of an emerging champion in the final war for New Africa, and First Day of Summer, an apocalyptic tale of a family taking a trip in an RV.I recommend Vicenary for science fiction and fantasy readers looking for something new and fresh and who are willing to go with the flow and not let structure and grammar get in the way of a great set of stories. Some of the topics are tough ones, so this may be more appropriate for young adult and adult readers rather than younger ones.
I voluntarily reviewed this after receiving an Advanced Review Copy from Reedsy Discovery.