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The Visitor
THIS KINDLE BOOK WAS REFORMATTED ON 11TH DEC 2020
Secrets. Lies. Romance. Love?
Gorgeous, lesbian professor Helen Miller arrives in England from America. The last thing she expects is to be lodging with her friend Sophie’s reserved and anxious mother, Ingrid, but Sophie has told a big lie which pushes them all together under one roof and when Ingrid catches them both in what appears to be a compromising position, sparks fly.
Helen lurches from one calamity to another as she attempts to navigate through the storm of a family drama, teetering on the verge of being cast out, but desperate to stay. You see, despite Ingrid’s angry words and cold demeanour, Helen likes her, in fact, she likes her rather a lot and she’s wondering if, underneath all that cold fury, Ingrid likes her too...
With only three weeks left until she must return home to San Francisco, Helen fights for the true love she has always craved but will her own past, and Sophie’s lies, wreck any chance of future happiness? The clock is ticking.
Secrets. Lies. Romance. Love?
Gorgeous, lesbian professor Helen Miller arrives in England from America. The last thing she expects is to be lodging with her friend Sophie’s reserved and anxious mother, Ingrid, but Sophie has told a big lie which pushes them all together under one roof and when Ingrid catches them both in what appears to be a compromising position, sparks fly.
Helen lurches from one calamity to another as she attempts to navigate through the storm of a family drama, teetering on the verge of being cast out, but desperate to stay. You see, despite Ingrid’s angry words and cold demeanour, Helen likes her, in fact, she likes her rather a lot and she’s wondering if, underneath all that cold fury, Ingrid likes her too...
With only three weeks left until she must return home to San Francisco, Helen fights for the true love she has always craved but will her own past, and Sophie’s lies, wreck any chance of future happiness? The clock is ticking.
330 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 25, 2020
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About the author
Angela McKenna
4 books9 followersFor as long as she can remember, books have been part of Angela McKenna's life. Angela started writing from an early age and her favourite authors include Bill Bryson, Stephen King and Christopher Brookmyre. 'The Visitor' is her first full length novel.
Angela's most productive time for writing is in the evenings after a busy day at work. She also likes to write if she feels inspired on Sundays. She credits some of her early writing confidence to her primary school teacher, Mr McDonald, who was an avid fan of her poetry.
'The Visitor' tells the story of Dr Helen Miller, an economics professor from San Francisco who is visiting England to work on a project. Unexpectedly she finds herself mixed up in family drama and a love story that not only captures Helen's heart but hopefully the reader's imagination. Helen must navigate her way through the drama and find what she has always wanted; love and acceptance..
When Angela is not writing, she enjoys reading 'Tartan Noir' at home near Glasgow. She's also very fond of science fiction and dystopian stories.
Angela's most productive time for writing is in the evenings after a busy day at work. She also likes to write if she feels inspired on Sundays. She credits some of her early writing confidence to her primary school teacher, Mr McDonald, who was an avid fan of her poetry.
'The Visitor' tells the story of Dr Helen Miller, an economics professor from San Francisco who is visiting England to work on a project. Unexpectedly she finds herself mixed up in family drama and a love story that not only captures Helen's heart but hopefully the reader's imagination. Helen must navigate her way through the drama and find what she has always wanted; love and acceptance..
When Angela is not writing, she enjoys reading 'Tartan Noir' at home near Glasgow. She's also very fond of science fiction and dystopian stories.
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June 2, 2021
**'The difference between real writers and others who just talk about being a writer is this: Writers write and continue developing their craft while non-writers are just that and terrible at storytelling..'
Meh!
Premise didn't mean anything or made any sense --- just a scattering of words put together for a story.
Meh!
Premise didn't mean anything or made any sense --- just a scattering of words put together for a story.
June 6, 2021
This book may have been reformatted - whatever that means - perhaps now the author should consider having it edited? The grammar and punctuation leave a lot to be desired for, as does the rambling plotline.
The so-called white lie is ridiculous. As is the 'game' the two heroines play that gets their mothers' knickers in a twist.
The eighteen-year-old brother comes across as a man-boy. At first, I thought he might be a simpleton (which I have no issue with), then he comes across as all worldly. His character was so inconsistent, I got whiplash.
The teacher dragging him along with her to say she caught him watching porn just so she could talk to his mother - whom she 'really liked' for some inexplicable reason - was just creepy.
The story went downhill from there. The dialogue is stilted and confusing, and as much as I hate to say it, I can't find anything positive to say about this book, except it didn't break the bank.
Your mileage may vary, so please don't be put off by my review. After all, this is but one reader's opinion.
The so-called white lie is ridiculous. As is the 'game' the two heroines play that gets their mothers' knickers in a twist.
The eighteen-year-old brother comes across as a man-boy. At first, I thought he might be a simpleton (which I have no issue with), then he comes across as all worldly. His character was so inconsistent, I got whiplash.
The teacher dragging him along with her to say she caught him watching porn just so she could talk to his mother - whom she 'really liked' for some inexplicable reason - was just creepy.
The story went downhill from there. The dialogue is stilted and confusing, and as much as I hate to say it, I can't find anything positive to say about this book, except it didn't break the bank.
Your mileage may vary, so please don't be put off by my review. After all, this is but one reader's opinion.
May 14, 2022
No, really not sure about this: the reading was difficult, the story distinctly odd and it was, for me, full of WTF moments. I know every family is different, but Wow!
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December 23, 2020DNF. Found the interactions between the two MCs a bit draggy. I shall move on to other books.
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January 5, 2021
Unfortunately, this was a DNF for me. I typically like to give a book at least two tries (especially for indies) before setting it aside. With that said, it was a bit prosey for my taste. A lot of words without much going on. I wasn't endeared to any of the characters. I simply couldn't get past the first five chapters. I good triage edit would cure what ails this book. 2.75 for it's potential. Not horrible. Just not an enjoyable read.
December 30, 2021
Simply beautiful
I usually read romance with lots of angst. But sometimes mild angst is also good. I loved the dynamic range of emotions between the main characters. It was sometimes confusing, but all out entertaining.
I usually read romance with lots of angst. But sometimes mild angst is also good. I loved the dynamic range of emotions between the main characters. It was sometimes confusing, but all out entertaining.
February 11, 2021
What a dance of attraction. Not the usual way the story is told, well done!
August 18, 2024
OMG! Another ruby from my TBR shelves! And A FAVORITE! A gorgeous age gap love story between two beautiful women of a certain age. Dr. Helen Miller is a visiting professor in England, staying with her friend Sophie. However, Sophie has left her husband Michael and is staying at her mother's, Ingrid . As soon as Helen and Ingrid meet, Helen is interested. But Ingrid is a hard nut to crack.
This is an involved, true to life love story. You'll also fall in love with Oskar, Ingrid 18 yr old son, who shows a maturity of someone much older. I really love this book! It deserves more than 5 stars!
This is an involved, true to life love story. You'll also fall in love with Oskar, Ingrid 18 yr old son, who shows a maturity of someone much older. I really love this book! It deserves more than 5 stars!
February 21, 2021
OMG so bad
I’m sorry but this story is just so far fetched. I had to stop reading it as who the heck would talk to people the way Helen does in their own house when she has just met them?!! I tried giving it a second chance but gave up again after she called the daughter “a self-centred little f**k” in front of her mother who she has known for less than a day and is staying under her roof, then storms off to her room and is annoyed that nobody asks if she ok. Come on!!! I don’t understand all the 5 star reviews.
I’m sorry but this story is just so far fetched. I had to stop reading it as who the heck would talk to people the way Helen does in their own house when she has just met them?!! I tried giving it a second chance but gave up again after she called the daughter “a self-centred little f**k” in front of her mother who she has known for less than a day and is staying under her roof, then storms off to her room and is annoyed that nobody asks if she ok. Come on!!! I don’t understand all the 5 star reviews.
March 24, 2021
Not the usual story
But very sweet. The reader is kept on their toes until the very end, and that is well done.
This is a beautiful age-gap romance with more mature protagonists, and I definitely appreciate that.
Recommended for anyone interested in a sweet FTB romance with really good characters. I could have throttled some of them and seriously fallen for others.
But very sweet. The reader is kept on their toes until the very end, and that is well done.
This is a beautiful age-gap romance with more mature protagonists, and I definitely appreciate that.
Recommended for anyone interested in a sweet FTB romance with really good characters. I could have throttled some of them and seriously fallen for others.
April 9, 2021
Not your "cookie-cutter" lesbian romance, that's for sure. I struggled at times to even like the MC, but I persisted, nevertheless, and was rewarded with a story with lots of twists and a heart-grabbing ending. I would read other titles by this author.
February 10, 2022
Very real and relatable
Definitely enjoyed this story. It touches many emotions. I laughed out loud at times. I felt the struggles of the 2 main characters. Will recommend this to friends.
Definitely enjoyed this story. It touches many emotions. I laughed out loud at times. I felt the struggles of the 2 main characters. Will recommend this to friends.
May 1, 2023
Great book
Ingrid and Helen's story is beautiful. Of course there is aghast. A jealous daughter, and a hateful husband and leaving because Helen was broken. I was so happy to see them find their way back.
Ingrid and Helen's story is beautiful. Of course there is aghast. A jealous daughter, and a hateful husband and leaving because Helen was broken. I was so happy to see them find their way back.
January 31, 2021
A surprising new author and great book. I thoroughly enjoyed and wanted more in the end.
October 8, 2022
Excellent Book. It’s a must read! It had twist and turns through out the story. It has humor, sarcasm and sadness. Mixed with the right amount of excitement.
May 17, 2022
As I am blasting through my TBR pile this week, this was another had for a while but just started. What a start! Chapter one is straight out the blocks and I am not taking my eyes off the action! I didn't quite get a couple of things that happened and the whole situation is a bit odd but enjoyable.
The sad family occasion was movingly written. I often, as I approach the breakup/makeup part of the plot, have one eye on how much of the book is left..... This was to the wire and although there was no epilogue to expand on all being well, the ending fits this slightly unusual book. There are for me some scenes and characters I would have liked developed further or to see more of. A book that held my interest and pacing didn't drop off.
I discovered my version was older and there is an epilogue. It’s perfect! Don’t be put off by some older reviews. This is well worth your time!
The sad family occasion was movingly written. I often, as I approach the breakup/makeup part of the plot, have one eye on how much of the book is left..... This was to the wire and although there was no epilogue to expand on all being well, the ending fits this slightly unusual book. There are for me some scenes and characters I would have liked developed further or to see more of. A book that held my interest and pacing didn't drop off.
I discovered my version was older and there is an epilogue. It’s perfect! Don’t be put off by some older reviews. This is well worth your time!
February 22, 2021
I really enjoyed this book I hope there will be another one following them in the journey. If there is I carnt wait for it to be released
March 14, 2021
I really enjoyed this book , I did not want it to end,I look forward to Angela's next book.
September 18, 2021
Beautiful story
I don't think I can express how much I loved this book! It would even make a fantastic movie. Very well written age gap romance with wonderful characters.
I don't think I can express how much I loved this book! It would even make a fantastic movie. Very well written age gap romance with wonderful characters.
December 29, 2021
Sometimes interactions were unbelievable
This wasn't really my preferred 'enjoyable' but I was still compelled to keep reading. I started out disliking Helen and feeling ambivalent about Ingrid but as their backgrounds, very different backgrounds, began to surface some of their characters became a little clearer. You wouldn't wish either of their lives on an enemy. They both had human failings and neither characters were at all brave. But are any of us? And should we judge? The supporting characters were also not admirable, apart from Oskar, who was something of a saving grace.
This wasn't really my preferred 'enjoyable' but I was still compelled to keep reading. I started out disliking Helen and feeling ambivalent about Ingrid but as their backgrounds, very different backgrounds, began to surface some of their characters became a little clearer. You wouldn't wish either of their lives on an enemy. They both had human failings and neither characters were at all brave. But are any of us? And should we judge? The supporting characters were also not admirable, apart from Oskar, who was something of a saving grace.
January 28, 2025
One extra star for witty dialogue and an extremely snarky heroine!
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