2021 IPPY Award Bronze Medal for Best Regional Fiction - South
Caddo Parish, 1913. On an October morning, a Klansman confronts seventeen-year-old David Walker at a hidden oxbow lake where he has gone to hunt. David accidentally kills the man and hides the crime. His determination to protect his family from reprisal drives him far from home and into manhood.
Shreveport, 1927. Cargie (rhymes with Margie) Barre and Mae Compton are two vastly different young women, but both are defying convention to reach for their dreams. The men in Cargie’s and Mae’s lives help and hinder them in more ways than one. After years in hiding, David Walker finally resurfaces, and we discover the past is never as far from the present as it seems.
L. K. Simonds is a Fort Worth local. She has worked as a waitress, KFC hostess, telephone marketer, assembly line worker, nanny, hospital lab technician, and air traffic controller. She’s an instrument-rated pilot and an alumna of Christ for the Nations Institute in Dallas.
First the really good things about this novel: the story, the characters and the setting. A really good storyline, very original, with a murder committed and a decision made in the first one fourth of the book. This leads to a minor mystery pervading the rest of the book, which is artfully solved by the end. The characters were interesting and real, even the ones who made some really stupid decisions, but that's a condition of being human, right? The author obviously knows her setting, and described the different locations very atmospherically.
But I have a reading quirk that keeps me from fully enjoying a lot of novels that others love unconditionally. It's about the details for me, and once I spot inconsistencies, I'm sensitive to them throughout the book. There were a few things here that I just could not accept, but that is the way my own mind works. If you do not have this quirk, you may very well read this book and rate it 4 or 5 stars, as a lot of previous readers did. Go back and read my first paragraph, and take it from there.
"A body had to remember to take people as they came, individually, instead of lumping them all together in a bunch."
Stork Bite by L.K. Simonds teems with life and death; choices and consequences; guilt and mercy. In 1913 in Louisiana, seventeen-year-old David Walker accidentally killed a white man, a Klansman at that, and had to make a choice: go home to his family and confess his crime or stay away and stew forever in remorse and regret. This story spans from 1913 to 2012 and is told in hauntingly georgous prose.
Many lives move forward and intertwine across Stork Bite, and discovering the connections across the pages is as entertaining as it is heartbreaking. Through war, prohibition, bootlegging, marriage, and living life to the fullest before crashing into mortality, Stork Bite leaves no emotional stone unturned. Giving out too many details and throwing down spoilers would be so easy and a shame because the threads securing the characters and plot lines together must be revealed slowly and experienced and savored. While racism is a looming antagonist throughout, it does not completely define the overall story. Instead, Stork Bite is defined by love, hope, success, and forgiveness across that chasm between black and white and even across that great divide between men and women.
Characterization, relationships, and outstanding description are the driving forces of Stork Bite, and L.K. Simonds knows how to mine the deepest sentiments and thoughts and then breathe life into each character, one by one. The story builds in due time, and the characters often meld together or brush against one another through the years, bobbing and sometimes sinking in the wake of their choices and the general snares of living.
Stork Bite is a literary treasure that awaits any reader ready to plunge into the mystique of Louisiana throughout the twentieth century and settle deep into the ordinary yet precious lives of unforgettable characters that will nibble at the edges of conscious thought long after the story has finished. The ending will break your heart yet give you hope that love will always triumph and soar higher than anything else on earth and in heaven.
I received a free copy of this book from Lone Star Book Blog Tours in exchange for my honest review.
I was tootling along in this book and then, BAM, my heart was sucked out of my body, and the range of emotions I felt drained my soul...in a good way of course.
This book spans a century and what a story it tells. The story begins in 1913 with David's story of accidentally killing a Klansman who was giving him a hard time just because of the color of his skin. As we know from history, had David been caught he wouldn't have lived long to tell his tale. He was rather ingenious in his steps to cover up the crime for someone that was that young. But the burden that he carried knowing he took someone's life couldn't have been easy. I never understood why he didn't feel like he could go home to his family, but perhaps it was shame or the fear of bringing his family into a situation that he created. David does manage to survive and is taken in by a kind family that teaches him things he never would have learned in his old life. But he brings them his own type of wisdom and knowledge. The impact that they make on each other spans a lifetime.
The story then jumps forward to 1927 and we meet Cargie and Mae. I really liked Cargie. She was a smart and determined woman that was not going to let race hold her back. She knew for many years that she wanted to be a bookkeeper and she lands a job with Bill Cole who owns a dry cleaning business. I loved how Cargie came in and basically started organizing his receipts and books without being formally hired. I had to chuckle because I work for a CPA and we know how messy some accounting records can be for businesses. Bill Cole doesn't seem to mind and he and Cargie become quite a formidable duo when it comes to his business. She does teach him a few things about keeping his book straight. At the same time, he reaches Cargie in a way he doesn't even realize through his journal that he wrote during the war. Something about his words draws her into his experiences and touches her soul.
Cargie is married to Thomas and they have three children over the span of the novel. We learn a bit about Thomas, but there was probably so much more to him than he was given credit. But there is a reason for that and you discover that reason in the last 20% of the story. Thomas was a renaissance man and could seem to do anything he set his mind to doing. He was supportive of Cargie and her career and you could say he was something of a house husband. I enjoyed seeing his love for Cargie and his family, even his mother-in-law that he called "Pretty Mama."
Mae was from a small town in Texas and wanted nothing more than to attend college at Centenary College in Shreveport. This was the late 20s when women usually ended up married with children, but she wanted so much more than that. She found it but it wasn't an easy road when certain truths are revealed. I didn't want to like Mae, but by the end, she had convinced me otherwise. There were several men in her life that taught her various things and helped move her along in life and discover her dreams and desires.
Because this novel spans a century, there are losses that are felt by many characters. I think my heart broke a little each time someone died or learning of their situations knowing the end was near. I don't want to spoil any of the journies that the characters take, but it is humbling for some of them. I just wanted to reach out and hug each and every one of them and let them know that it would all be ok.
While the end of the book brings us back to the beginning, I did think that this could have been three different books and expanded even more on their individual lives. However, considering how the novel ends, I'm not sure that could be accomplished without leaving cliffhangers or spoiling the next book.
This is a book I didn't expect to touch me as it did and the journey of the characters, the rich southern traditions, and the evolution of civil rights make this a novel worth reading.
I don’t even know if I’m being fair giving it 4 stars. If I could give it 4.5 I would, and the only reason I rounded down instead of up was because it was quite long and there were a few bits that could have been left out and not affected the story in any way. Otherwise, it’s a well written, engrossing story that won’t leave me any time soon. In 1913, 17 year old David Walker had a run in with a Klansman, and accidentally killed him. Knowing that it meant certain deaths for him, he made sure to get rid of the evidence and go on with life, but in going on with life, it meant going home to tell his family what he had done and face the consequences, or walk away and keep it to himself his whole life. Then in 1927, we are introduced to Cargie and Mae, who are strong characters in their own right. Cargie is married to Thomas and over the span of the novel, they have 3 kids and build their lives, but there’s more to Thomas than anyone knows. Through war, natural disaster, prohibition, marriages, children, many lives are intertwined as we see David’s story progress. The characters are so well developed that you get very invested and the story lines of racism as well as love and family being out so many emotions along the way. There’s so many details that get spun together to bring so much depth to the characters and the story. I loved reading about life in Louisiana in these times and the ending reminds that love and mercy always wins. I had never heard of this book before I saw it in netgalley but I’m so glad that I had the chance to read it. Thanks to netgalley for this arc in exchange for my review.
I'm torn on this. I enjoyed the writing and felt entertained. But I have a key issue with the product. The description talks about two different stories: that of David after his unfortunate incident and Cargie and Mae during the depression. The book is even arranged as such. However, based on the writing, it seems like there's a disconnect between product and description. Here's how I see it:
Story 1: The journey of a character having to leave his home
Story 2: A young lady gets caught up with bootleggers during the time of prohibition.
The only thing connecting them: a dry cleaner run by Mae's uncle, who employs Cargie. The two characters barely ever talk in the writing.
These are actually good stories on their own, had the stories been expanded. The story of David could've had a hint of a modern Huck Finn with his adventures in the south - which would've been an interesting juxtaposition to Tom Sawyer, David's favorite book.
In the second story, you could expand on Mae's tales. Have her and Jax fly a few other places. Tell more stories of Mae in Fort Worth helping her sister.
The two stories could even work as sister stories with one another, having the characters occasionally mingle since they do have common characters in Bill Cole and his banker Walter Addington. In its current state, it feels like you have David's story, the introduction of Cargie, and then they are forced to the background while Mae takes over for most of the product. I can't say for certain, but it felt like the author was more interested in the bootlegging story than the one taking place in the first 20 chapters.
Again, I liked what was here (score is probably more 3.5 than 3). But I lament what could've been two good-to-great stories had they been explored more, especially David's.
Thank you to NetGalley, and author L. K. Simonds for allowing me to read this book. My unbiased review below is freely given.
I found Stork Bite the type of book I couldn’t wait to get back to. The three story lines were all good and engaging, and you are drawn into another time. You definitely ge to know the characters and to care about them. The title left me with much to think about too, and probably many others will do the same. Lots of wisdom is imparted in these pages too. I absolutely loved reading this author and will look for more of her work.
A hundred years ago, David Walker and his dog went hunting and ended up fighting for their lives because a stranger hated the color of his skin. What strikes me most about the premise of Stork Bite, is how easily this story could have taken place last year. Arguably, the South of David's youth was much more contentious. Soldiers from the Civil War, including David's grandfather, were still alive to carry the memory of strife and slavery into the new century. Klansmen, like the sheriff who bullies David, carried out not-so-secret dark deeds under cover of night, unable to release the past. Evil always finds a foothold, it seems, no matter the century.
Stork Bite is a character study and a family saga, spanning a century of change and tribulation in southern America. L.K. Simonds begins David Walker's journey on the day he has the misfortune to cross a prominent member of the Klan. David barely escapes the encounter with his life, and spends the following years in shame and terror that his family will pay the price for his sin. It was painful and at times terrifying to read David's journey. The author's gift for prose and character easily immerse you into the past as fate brings David to the Tatum's farm in East Texas. Here, our hero is given the chance to aid a family in desperate need of help. The Tatums think David might be an angel, he's just trying to survive. Over time, they come to rely on each other and help one another grow in beautiful ways.
One of my favorite aspects of Stork Bite is how L.K. Simonds shone light through the dark times. No matter how dark the subject matter, there is a prevailing message of hope and faith threaded through these characters' lives. Surprisingly, Simonds chooses to time hop forward a decade and introduce a new character, Cargie Barre. Cargie stole my readerly heart the moment she marched into Bill Compton's laundry and took over his office, thus securing the job she'd work for the rest of her life. A true force of nature, Cargie ignores societal and social conventions to pursue her dreams. Her boss, Bill Compton, a Great War combat veteran, supports Cargie's ambitions, while her husband, Thomas, secures their home.
David and Cargie's stories were easily the most engaging and exciting. The initial time jump was intriguing, but I also felt like Book 2 is where the story lost momentum. With the inclusion of my least-favorite characters, the spoiled and privileged (and white) Jaxy and Mae, the plot stretches a little thin. The author could have easily cut out Jaxy and Mae's storylines, or shown their characters through Cargie's eyes, and it would have made for a much stronger narrative. With their inclusion, I felt pulled out of the story, almost as though I really was reading two different books. A novel about prohibition and a young woman struggling to find her way would have been fine in another book. But I didn't see true character growth with Jaxy and Mae, only disillusionment and embitterment. However, Simonds did well carrying us through the characters' reasoning as each of them convinces themselves their choices are the right choices.
Spanning the narrative over a century allowed for a deeper study of the lasting consequences of character choices. However, the frequent time jumps pulled me from the story too often to feel invested in anyone besides Cargie and David. Still, I have to give Stork Bite four stars for Simonds's nearly flawless storytelling. The author clearly has lived and breathed her source material, because you're easily pulled into the times and lives of these people. Simonds offers a well-researched study on a story from the past that holds just as true and relevant then as it does for us today. There are many painful moments in David Walker's life, but there is much good to balance the evil, and an underlying message of faith that carries through. For this reason and more, I am so glad I went on the journey L.K. Simonds crafted in Stork Bite.
**I was provided with a copy of Stork Bites by the publisher and this is my voluntary and honest review.**
Fast forward to 1927 and we meet two women who couldn't be more different, yet both are chasing their dreams. It's a hard road for Cargie and Mae, especially when it comes to the men in their lives. When David Walker resurfaces, the past rears its ugly head, and everyone involved must come to terms with what happened and move on or suffer the consequences.
Stork Bite is a riveting historical fiction I enjoyed reading. Its rich detailed narration plunges the reader into the deep South. The plot moves at a nice easy pace with plenty of characters, twists, and turns. The characters were so interesting, I found myself dreaming about them. The emotional trauma present in some of the characters, while realistic, was a bit overplayed. The ending, however, was brilliant and I applaud L.K. Simonds for an engrossing story. Fans of Fannie Flagg will enjoy Stork Bite.
Disclaimer: I received a copy from the author via Netgalley in the hopes I'd review it.
Simonds is a wonderfully talented author and evokes the old South in astonishing detail in Stork Bite, making us feel we're sitting in on a long, sumptuous, serial film production. But don't think it's mere eye candy--like the best period dramas, there's plenty of social commentary here. The book starts off with an unintentional murder and continues to spin the story of the aftermath, interlocking different lives and destinies with characters that will live in your brain long after you close the last page. Highly recommended!
In 1913, a teenage boy, David Walker, shot one of the “Bourbon Democrats” his grandfather had warned him to stay away from in their small town. Once the identity of the man killed was discovered, the teen decides it’s best he leaves home to protect his family. He does so by running and reinventing himself.
Fast forward 14 years and we are introduced to two young women, Cargie and Mae, on vastly different paths to reach their dreams. David resurfaces only to realize you cannot outrun your past.
The tension-filled opening drew me into David’s story. I must be honest when I read books with heavy racial overtones, I am always a bit hesitant. You never quite know how the author will handle telling/creating/developing the story of characters that are of different ethnicities. However, the author accurately captured the lessons and reminders that parents of black boys and girls must tell our children so that they make it home each day.
"Don’t eat! Don’t say! Don’t touch!"
Even through all that, there may be a scenario that we can’t fathom one such as the situation young David Walker found himself in on that fateful day. I liked the detail provided on David’s life after that fateful day as well as the nods to one of our classic tales, The Adventures of Tom Sawyer.
With the introduction of Cargie and then Mae, the author did a great job of capturing their determination to be more than what society at the time thought they should or had the right to be. . I could plainly see how Cargie’s story intersected with “Tom,” but it took me a bit to figure out how Mae’s presence played a part in the overall story. The story waned a bit for me with the introduction of Mae’s story,.
This story moved at a moderate pace with a very well-developed cast of characters and plot. The three storylines merged, in the end, to make sense and bring things full circle with an emotional ending. There are a few social issues raised in this story, but they are handled well and with care and accuracy. I would recommend this book to anyone who enjoys a bit of history with a bit of emotionally charged drama.
Stork Bite is a story that satisfies in a way that few others have. It covers racism, racial inequality, war, love, family, birth and death. There is a wisdom that resonates from the pages that I didn’t really understand until after I finished reading it.
The first thing a reader will probably notice about this story is that the author knows how to describe things. The first scene is set in the Louisiana boonies. There’s a country road, a lake, an old canoe on the shoreline. There were mosquitoes. “A breeze lifted the curly gray beards hanging from the bald cypress.” Wind and rain appeared, and the smell of a train. Before I realized it, I was fully immersed in the scene - and in the story.
The story covers quite a length of time for some of the characters. With one character, the story starts in 1913 when he was seventeen years old, and we find that same character in his 90’s before the story ends. The long time periods allow the reader to really see what becomes of the characters, as well as the results of their life choices.
The racism and prejudice in the story aren’t specifically discussed in detail, yet they are very much there. The interesting thing, however, is that we get to experience them from both sides: from the minds and dialogue of both blacks and whites.
Speaking of dialogue, Simonds did a fantastic job with the slang. It was just enough for the effect, without going overboard. I think it added a great deal of authenticity to the story. Further, since the story covers so many years, the author seemed to be especially mindful of using the proper slang in the proper time.
Stork Bite touches on all the emotions and all the senses we have. At times, the emotions are very raw, and we can’t help but empathize.
I enjoyed reading this story very much, but it wasn’t until after I finished that I fully understood its impact. I highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys the true concept of story.
No Book is Supposed to Make You Cry – My Book Review
No book really is supposed to make you cry. Often parts of books do. Often it is the book ending that makes me cry. This novel made me cry at the beginning and at the end. Then it made me cry in the middle. The first crying spell was over the main character’s dog. The last tears were shed because a radiantly-crafted story had come to a perfect end.
Stork Bite is the second novel I have read by L.K. Simonds. This book was flawless. This novel is a multi-dimensional story of characters whose story takes readers through the 1900s to almost the present day. Each character is impeccably defined by their past and their present.
The intriguing part of this novel is how two stories are being told and how they come together towards the end of the book. At first, it was a little bit off-putting for me, but then as I read more of the story that soon became a moot point. With every page, I become more involved in the characters’ lives that were being told with such depth I started caring for them. Hence the crying.
I need to mention the book’s location. The setting of Stork Bite is in Louisiana and East Texas. East Texas and Louisiana are embedded in my soul through my own family, so I know it quite well. Simonds perfected the settings with resplendent precision.
Stork Bite is not your typical historical fiction novel. It is a woven perfection of two stories coming together beautifully. It will take a reader along on a ride of intimacy into how our world has changed over the years. Give Simonds’s writing a chance if you want to discover new authors. She will not disappoint.
Stork Bite was such a pleasure to read, and the story reminded me that we all make life decisions that influence the directions our lives will take, for the good or the not-so-good.
I've got to say, I had a special fondness for David Walker above the rest of the characters. Not that I disliked any of the others. They all have their own unique charms, but maybe he was so special because he was the first person I met in the story. Then there's that wonderful bond he has with his dog. I can relate to that kind of bond. I'd go all tiger-mom at anyone who threatened my kids or my dog.
The final endearment David had for me is the fact that he wasn't not so much at the mercy of his decisions but the decisions of others.
I'd forgotten how terrible it was for Black folks following the Civil War, and in a way I hated this reminder. It was a real punch in the gut to know that David could've easily been killed by that fake lawman in the opening of the story, and other white people would've congratulated the killer, while David's family mourned.
Couched within this story are lessons about social justice, social mores, and the ways people distort them for their own gain.
It is also a story about the folks who struggle against expectations of the time. Mae and Cargie were good examples of that. Through sheer determination, and the support of a loving, understanding husband, Cargie was able to follow her dream of using her skills with math to work as a bookkeeper. It wasn't so easy for Mae. She had to fight a little harder to break from having a life just like her mother's in a small Texas town and do something different.
The growth and changes the characters go through, and how their lives intertwine makes for a terrific story. I highly recommend it.
Stork Bite follows rebels from various decades. I loved the common theme of defiance and rising above the situations and circumstances that these characters encountered. It was filled with strong individuals as well as some controversial topics that lead to a thought-provoking, heartfelt story.
I did get a little confused at the end of part one with the abrupt change to focusing on two new characters. Since I skipped reading the blurb, my way of going into a story with an open mind, I had no idea that David made a reappearance in the story so my first thought was this must be a book of short stories. I was immediately disappointed thinking I wouldn't get to see David in part two because I wouldn't have minded an entire book about David and the Tatums. I loved everything about them. As I kept reading, I did start to catch on and as the blub says "the past is never as far from the present as it seems." I started noticing little connections and my excitement grew to see how things progressed and the potential of this story going full circle.
I have so much appreciation for how much thought was put into this overall plot and how well things unraveled and came together. There were so many powerful topics presented and they were each handled beautifully. I loved so many individual pieces of this story, such as David helping out the Tatums or to the empowerment of Cargie to defy the odds. I would recommend Stork Bite to anyone that loves a good historical fiction, literary fiction, coming-of-age, or heartwarming story.
L.K. Simonds sets up a wonderfully heartfelt drama with Stork Bite! The novel follows two timelines. In 1913, teenager David Walker kills a Klansman in self defense. In 1927, two women struggle to reach their dreams in a time when the world was aligned against them. Simonds really hits you in the heart with her writing and I felt fully invested in the characters! I also found it interesting to see how the two storylines were connected. This is a beautiful read, so definitely take a dive back through history with Stork Bite!
The title is eye-catching, causing curiosity in the reader. What is a "stork bite?" How can this novel be centered around this as a symbol? The reader finds that he or she is presented with questions--and answers--to some of life's conundrums. Simonds' deceptively simple prose provides wisdom as well. The crisp, clear style could be compared to the underside of an elaborate tapestry, when turned, has come together to present the whole story as a beautiful canvas. Set in the South during the early decades of the Twentieth Century, this novel develops and intertwines the lives of its characters to provide a satisfying plot--and so much more.
This was such an interesting read for me. I really enjoyed the beginning of this novel as it is told during the section known as Book One. The story quickly swept me into the life of David Walker. The author painted a vivid picture of this young man and his situation. I wanted to know more. We move into Book Two and I honestly lost a little interest. We are introduced to some new characters and the story begins again ten years from the end of Book One. It was a nice read during this section and I liked the characters and their story but I wasn't rushing back to reading. Then, the story gripped me again. I loved the tail end of this novel. It all came together and I was staying up late devouring the end. A very enjoyable novel and different than most of the books I've read this year.
Thank you in advance to NetGalley for an advanced ecopy in exchange for an honest review.
Disclaimer: This review is solely my opinion. I was provided a copy of a finished book from Lone Star Literary Life partner in exchange for my honest review. The comments in this review do not reflect the views of the author or the publisher. The copies used in this review are finalized copies sent to me in exchange for my honest review. #partner #LSBBT
The author begins this book with the main character David going for his usual walk in his small town during the early 1900s. This is during a time where segregation is still a prominent issue and black males are taught to protect themselves from white males. As the story unfolds, we watch as David’s biggest fear comes true. He has crossed paths with a white male who has his eyes set on demeaning David. Based during a time where being Black was considered a crime, David must decide whether to defend himself or take whatever is thrown at him. Realizing that both choices have great consequences.
The overall storyline focuses primarily on the main character and a series of events that follow one main event. David’s life takes many twists and turns throughout the novel until finally toward the end he comes to some sort of resting place. It really makes you think of a time in your life where you felt you were carrying shame and guilt from a past mistake. There is a bit of biblical based references in this book that tend to focus on forgiveness and letting go. The author allows you to take a step in the shoes of the main character as he works through his emotions and pushes past the shame and guilt he has been carrying his entire life. This all occurs until he comes to a resting place at the end of the novel where he is finally able to find peace and healing in self forgiveness.
The author works to try to capture the true essence of the language during the time period targeted in this book and the potential challenges faced by those of color. If you are interested in a pre-civil rights movement fictional read that focuses on fear and guilt, then this book is one you should pick up.
First I would like to state that I received this book through the Goodreads giveaway in exchange for an honest review. I would like to thank the author for giving me this opportunity and honor in being able to read this book. When I received this book I began reading it at once. I really enjoy the authors writing style, pulls you into the book from the very beginning and you don't want to put the book down. It kept me on the edge of my seat reading from cover to cover. A most wonderful read and I recommend this book
This story takes place in the early 1900's in Caddo Parish, Louisiana following David Walker a seventeen year old black teenager who has a confrontation with a white man when David accidentially kills the man and finds things in the mans possessions that show he is an evil man. David decides to runaway to prevent any harm that may come to his family. The story jumps forward 14 to 15 years and picks up the stories of Cargie Barre and Mae Compton two young ladies living in Shreveport Louisiana you follow both going through their life and their struggles. One with a fairly set life and one just leaving home and struggling to find her way and making the wise choices. This story has a reel good follow to it and keeps you drawn in. Don't worry the author does a good job in bringing story full circle she does not leave you hanging. It was interesting to read the definition of a stork bite.
I loved the stories in this book. I liked most of the characters. But I'm torn. I did not like this as a whole. I felt like I was reading at least two, if not three, different books that never quite converged. Like I started one book, then put it way for about 40% of the story, then read a second book, that ended, then book one picked up again and ended. The stories were just kind of tied loosely together by the fact that a couple of the characters were tied to the same dry cleaners through most of the middle of the story. I felt like both stories could have been fleshed out more and made better if they were written separately. I was hoping, based on the book blurb, that David's story began in 1913, with the killing of the Klansman, he went on the run from it, and then the past caught up with him in 1927 with Mae Compton and Cargie being tied up in his story somehow, mystery solved, redemption found, etc. Instead, Mae's story has nothing to do with Cargie or David. Except that Mae's uncle owns the dry cleaners where Cargie works. Mae and Cargie hardly even speak to one another. David's story just stops abruptly, Cargie's picks up, then Mae's picks up, and Cargie and Mae's stories run kind of parallel for a few decades, Mae's story wraps up, then we get back to David, and back to Cargie. Then at the end, there is a minimal recap of a chunk of time originally missing from David's story, that to me, should have played a much bigger part in the story. And, the stories carry on all the way to 2012, with large gaps of time along the way. The book blurb seemed to hint that the majority of the story would be taking place in the late 1920s. That, and the Louisiana setting were my primary reasons for picking up this book. Even though the whole thing takes place over several decades, I don't know that I would call it historical fiction because the time and place didn't really seem to be a focus of the book. I didn't get a good sense of the decade changes by descriptions of anyone's clothing or the scenery. I really didn't even get a good sense of where the story took place other than being told what cities the characters were in. Over time, side characters were introduced that I kept thinking were going to play a bigger part in the story, but then they just disappeared. The title, Stork Bite, refers to a birth mark. It is mentioned in passing at the birth of a child of one of the side characters. I wish it had been included more as a metaphor of being marked for something from birth throughout the story. Overall, the writing is great. It was amazing to pick up a book with the opening quote being my favorite passage of scripture. I wish that had been a bigger theme throughout the book. As far as content, there is virtually no objectionable content in this book. If there is any harsh language, I don't remember it. There is one sex scene, but it is not graphically described, or detailed. Overall, the story kept me reading. But mostly because the writing is good, and I was devouring the book to see how these stories were eventually going to converge. I would still consider checking out more from this author though.
Stork Bite by L.K. Simonds was one of the most deeply layered books I have ever had the privilege of reading before, and it emphasized how the small choices we make in life can have huge ripple effects that last generations.
This book is divided into two separate, yet connected stories. In the first “book” L.K. Simonds immediately immerses you into deep south life Louisiana. With vivid descriptions of local wildlife, scenery, and murder (really vivid). It was a great hook, and I could not put it down to see what happened next. L.K. Simonds did a great job making me feel like I was right there with David exploring all the options available to me. The people David meets on his journey were interesting and showed a real glimpse of life at that time, and the hardships that many people went through. I LOVED how David emphasized the need for education as being a founding block for a better life, and his selfless actions were remarkable. This “book” was my favorite as it really engaged me, and I enjoyed the ebb and flow of the author’s voice.
The second “book” introduces a completely new cast of characters, and as you will find out when you read the book, all the characters are interconnected in a remarkable way that is not obvious upon first reading the second “book”. While David seems to disappear from the story altogether, we meet Cargie and Mae two women from very different walks of life and who make very different life choices. I was fascinated by L.K. Simonds look into the 1920-1930s era of mobs, bootlegging, and the choices of people. It made for an interesting storyline. What really helped make this story interesting for me was not just the story itself, but the way L.K. Simonds rounded out the seemingly not connected stories into one overarching story.
Overall, I think that L.K. Simonds did a great job layering her characters, giving a good mystery that left you scratching your head for a while, and showing how one man’s choice can affect a multitude of people. One thing I wish was done differently, would have been the first book characters remaining as background characters in the second “book” so that I was not completely at a loss on how the two stories fit together until the last 50 or so pages. But Stork Bite did have a good conclusion that wrapped everything up nicely and gave me the pieces I needed to feel like David’s story ended. I give it 4 out of 5 stars for the accurate historical details, the stretched-out mystery, and for being able to layer so many characters and have the story come out richer because of it.
*I will advise that this story does include some mild swearing **I volunteered to read this book in return for my honest feedback. The thoughts and opinions expressed within are my own.
This was a new author for me and a book that I don't think I'd have picked up on my own. When I saw that it was Southern fiction, I decided to take a chance -- and I am so happy that I did. This novel was a beautifully written look at three main characters and their lives and their families lives from 1913 - 2012. I connected with all of these characters early in the novel (one more than the others) and felt like I knew them to the point that I cried at tragedies in their lives.
David was my favorite character in this book. In 1913, in Louisiana, seventeen year old David was walking to a lake to fish, and was stopped by a man who planned to harm him - David is black and the man he killed was a member of the KKK. David knew that if he was caught, he would be killed and if he went home, his family would be in danger...so he decides to 'disappear'. After he camps for several months, he walks away and finds a small farm in the middle of nowhere. He stays to help on the farm and becomes part of the family.
In 1927 in Shreveport, we meet two women who are totally different. Their only connection is that Cargie works at a dry cleaning store and Mae is the niece of the owner and lives with her aunt and uncle while she goes to college. In some ways they are the same - they both wanted to grow beyond what was expected of them growing up but they both took totally different paths. In this part of the book, we get a look at both women's lives -- Cargie as she works and then is unsure of her life plans when she gets pregnant. She has a very supportive husband who helps make her dream of continuing her job come true. Mae has left her fiancé in a small town and arrived in Shreveport to attend college. After a year, she gets involved with another person who is very different and her life plans totally change. The longer the reader travels in the lives of these characters, the more familiar they become and the more invested we are in their lives.
This is a book about family and redemption, racism and justice.... But most of all it's a story about love. If you enjoy historical fiction mixed with an emotional view of family in transition, you don't want to miss Stork Bite.
Thanks to the publisher for a copy of this book to read and review. All opinions are my own.
Getting right into the review, the whole book was such a more peacefully paced read. The book starts off with a crazy scenario, but then it transitions into this Huckleberry Fin feel and then the rest of the story starts to rise beautifully and we see a bigger picture with everything going on. Along with this pace, the author's wording just took you to the next level of writing. There were so many beautiful sentences and quotes throughout this story and I was just so entranced like I have never really been before.
Along with beautiful writing, there is so much excitement in this story. In the beginning, we are introduced to our main character and the family that he is adopted into after he runs away from his crime. We get to see the adventures he goes on and how he starts a whole different life with a whole different family dynamic. After we get to know them and a few years pass, we are introduced to a brand new set of characters who are in a whole different place in life. There's just so much detail in this book that you never feel bored reading.
As stated above, we do get some different perspectives on various characters. Even though there are quite a few people in this story, it never feels like people are coming out of the wood work. Everyone comes out in their own time when necessary, so you don't get too confused on who is who. It's also fun to read how everyone connects in the end. Ultimately, you are welcomed to this idea of the red string of fate, everyone is connected in some way, even if it's not too direct.
Overall, I am happy I was able to read this beautiful story. It was told in a calm pace and nothing ever felt rushed, but it still kept your attention and had quite a few moments that sprawled you into a whole different time. Each character has something new and fun to bring and it's just a good read. I give this book a 5 out of 5 stars. Until next time, Happy Reading!
First off I want to thank NetGalley for the chance to read this book and write a review.
While I read the synopsis, I was quite confused when we went to completely different set of characters about a third of the way through the book. So much so that I almost didn't finish. With that said, I liked BOTH stories. I just really don't understand why the author thought that the second (plot and characters) needed to be in this story. This could have been written with the complete story about David Walker....which is what I wanted and expected to follow.
The story I wanted to follow was about David Walker. He is a seventeen years old black man, living in Caddo Parrish in 1913. While hunting at a hidden oxbow lake he accidentally kills a klansman who confronted him. He is on the run wanting to protect his family from the KKK. (This would have made a great story alone! Following his life and adventures on the run into manhood!)
Then, all of a sudden it switches scenes and we meet Mae and a different character, Cargie. While these two women are ahead of their time in Shreveport, Louisiana, 1927...the switch was so sudden I was (as I said) confused! I followed it to find out how the two stories connected. They did, but I think that the author could have probably had TWO good stories out of this book.
I was glad to get through this book because of the confusion and that it wasn't a book I felt I wanted to keep getting back to. It took me quite some time to finish! It was just ok for me.
NOTE: I want to apologize to the author for my opinions about the separate stories. I know that it is a wonderful feeling to put pen to paper and have your ideas and creativity put out there. I just think that this would have been TWO wonderful books; separately! And what do I know...I'm just a reader. :(
*I was provided a copy of the book from the author via NetGalley. All opinions are my own.*
Stork Bite was a beautifully crafted story with well-developed characters and setting and some strong social commentary. The story is split into two parts:
Book One is focused on David Walker, a seventeen-year-old black man whose encounter with a Klansmen ends violently, and this one unfortunate, unplanned situation changes the trajectory of his life. Set in 1913, the violent interaction instigates what is otherwise a slowly unfolding story. This first book is contemplative and introspective. Simonds paints a vivid picture of his daily existence in the first year alone in the wilds of the East Texas bayou around Caddo Lake, then, later, as he spends time working for the Tatum family as they eke out an existence on their family farm.
For as much narrative as there is in Book One, it is the remembered conversations with his grandfather and mother that provide the deepest insights into who David is and why he is doing what he does.
The first book ends almost abruptly, and David seemingly disappears from the book as Book Two begins ten-years later. It introduces two new female characters whose lives intersect but have very distinct stories. Book Two is less descriptive narration and more dialogue and character interaction, and this is where I feel Simonds really shines. Her character development is wonderful. I was pulled into the lives of two young women with very different lives, one black, one white, but both with dreams of something beyond what current society typically allows.
While I had to work a bit in the first half of the novel, the second half was a satisfying reward enough. Stork Bite was a book that snuck up on me quietly. I was not expecting to find myself quite so involved with the characters. In addition, I definitely shed a few tears – several times – as each person’s stories wrapped up.
The story begins in the woods of the Deep South in 1913. While out hunting with his faithful dog, a young black seventeen year old named David Walker encounters a white man with evil intentions. When the man shoots David’s dog, he strikes the man over the head and accidentally kills him. In an effort to hide any evidence of the man, David must hide the car until nightfall when he can return to dispose of it. Before doing so David goes through the man’s car discovering that he is a member of the KKK. After disposing of all evidence of his crime, David leaves his home and his loving family equipped only with his grandfather’s rifle and the life skills his grandfather has taught him. David eventually comes upon a hardworking farming family that take him in. David tells them his name is Tom. While in town, the family discovers that Tom is the boy on the missing persons poster. They ask no questions and continue to protect Tom’s identity.
Shreveport, 1927. Cargie a newlywed and Mae a young high school graduate engaged to her high school sweetheart are two young women of vastly different backgrounds that are trying to make their way in life to fulfill their dreams and to find their place in the world. Cargie has a clear understanding of who she is and where she’s going. Mae has a more difficult journey finding herself. The men in both of their lives strongly influence their decisions and life’s direction.
This story will captivate you and make you think about societal issues, the life decisions we all make and the consequences that we will live with because of them. Highly recommend!
This is probably more of a 4.5 stars than a 4 star book (GR really needs to allow for half stars!)
This started out slow for me; Book 1 and David's story wasn't quite hitting it for me. Book 2 turned the tide though, and I really got into it at that point. This book is all about relationships - the ins and outs; good ones, bad ones; deep and shallow. The connections and the way each relationship intersects in this book are phenomenal. The writing is wonderful; there's depth and emotion, and life lessons that sort of float over you, so you can slowly absorb them, rather than being hit in the face by them. There's a lot going on in this book - it spans generations and lifestyles and various social issues. But it all comes back to the relationships between the characters.
By far, the best part of this book for me was the ending. This is saying a lot; I am consistently disappointed in book endings, and that's often what takes many good books and makes them just okay for me. But this one was absolutely perfect in the way that it wrapped this beautiful gift of a story up in a big bow and presented itself to me.
Thanks to the publisher and Netgalley for an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Stork Bites from L.K. Simonds, believe this is my first time reading any works from this author. This book is broken up into two different stories where towards the end the two different stories are combined to tell the whole story! Sounds strange at first especially when you finish one complete story and jump into another with different characters you wonder what's going on. You do figure it out towards the end,I was surprised as I couldn't figure out what was going on until I read a review,then I found out I wasn't losing my mind,lo!.. Towards the end you see why all of this was done. The first story was for me more interesting than book two as it says but all the way around a very good book where all of the characters are believed in their roles in the story,love the description of it all,the scenery ,the places the characters. I enjoyed reading this after I cheated and found out what was going on,lol... Received from Net Gallery and this book came out last year 2020,I was to read before it was published but I just didn't make it but I suppose it's better to have read than not and do a review for all to read!! All thumbs up and I only have two!