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399 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 8, 2020
1st - OVERALL PLOT (5/5 Stars):
The ARC of the story from start to finish was the most riveting part of the novel. From start to finish, there weren't any parts that needed to be expanded upon or fell flat. The ARC rose and fell in all the right spots that a novel should. There were just a few loose ends that were left open since this is the first novel in a series, and will eventually resolve themselves over the next few books.
2nd - CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT (5/5 Stars):
The cast of characters were so diverse and realistic! Super refreshing to read about characters of color from all over the world, and have openly gay characters in the forefront of the story. And thank goodness there wasn't any of the LGBTQ+ characters being used as a plot device or written with the promiscuous trope that usually accompanies queer characters.
The relationship with Una and Hanna was very slow burning. No insta-love or toxic relationships with any of the characters. I LOVED it. All relationships portrayed were healthy and believable. Selina and Solomon will have a slice of my heart 5ever <3
All the characters had individual voices and didn't feel similar to one another. And all characters had purposes; none of them felt like they were filler or there just to serve the plot. They added depth to the story. Which is such a tricky thing to pull off, but T did an excellent job at it!
3rd - PACING (5/5 Stars):
Like the overall plot, the pacing was perfect. Not too quick, not too slow. No "saggy" middle. I do feel the ending could have been expanded upon a little further, maybe another chapter or so to show how the characters dealt with the aftermath of the climax. Maybe even hint at what their plans were for book #2. Other than that, pacing was spot on.
4th - READABILITY (4/5 Stars):
While the book was easy to read, I struggled a bit to push through some of the paragraphs because of the way they were structured. Most paragraphs have 3-5 sentences in them (writing is subjective, I know!) but there were more than a handful of paragraphs that were upwards of 7+ sentences. Seeing large chunks of text made comprehending some of the info a little difficult because there's just a lot going on.
My suggestion would be to separate some lines to keep the flow of text moving quicker.
In the novel, page 129:
Especially Octavia. Just two days ago I'd found the usually stoic Selina doubled over, tears spilling down her cheeks from her laughter. Apparently, Octavia had come and asked, very seriously to 'aid in steering the wheel.' I chuckle despite the absolute horror I'd felt at the time. Yeah... definitely better if she keeps her paws off my ship.
My example:
Especially Octavia.
Just two days ago I'd found the usually stoic Selina doubled over, tears spilling down her cheeks from her laughter. Apparently, Octavia had come and asked, very seriously to 'aid in steering the wheel.'
I chuckle despite the absolute horror I'd felt at the time.
Yeah... definitely better if she keeps her paws off my ship.
Lastly, the chapters are split by POV of all the characters (Caleb, Una, Hanna, Demetrius, Asa, Jonah, Ambrose, Selina, Solomon, Atropous, Kai, Elyse). There were a few chapters towards the end that could have been blended in with one of the main character's. Asa's 1 chapter, for example, could have been put into Hanna's perspective to further show their relationship and character development. I would have liked to see more of Hanna, Una, and Demetrius' perspectives toward the end instead of getting a little bit of everyone.
5th - WRITING (4/5 Stars):
The author has a really keen understanding of this specific era and it shows in the story telling. I am in NO WAY a master at anything history related, but the information put into the novel for the world development really made the world so believable and the characters more relatable.
The prose is beautiful at times too. Some of my favorite quotes of all time have come from this novel:
My past made me who I am at this moment, and I happen to like this 'me'. ~ Solomon
Great Poseidon's arse cheeks, we really just did that! ~ Hanna
Bond or no bond, I'd choose Una. Of that I am certain. ~ Hanna
Throughout the novel, there were quite a few spelling and grammatical errors (missing commas and periods). The writing was also adverb heavy, and some of the actions between characters were repetitive (lips twitching into a smirk, smile, or grin being the one phrase and action that stood out the most). The word choices could have been a bit different.
MY OVERALL THOUGHTS:
T Bishop is now an auto-buy author for me. The Gift of the Sea was an epic read and I CANNOT wait until book #2 comes out. There's a specific character that I need answers from... like yesterday. And I need more Solomon and Selina in my life <3
If this is your first introduction to this genre or pirates and mermaids, I highly suggest giving this novel a read!