This is a 3.5 star review rounded up to 4 stars for Goodreads and Amazon.
Find Us - Title Story - a dark opening to the collection, we have a graveyard which holds a dark secret, one that our protagonist hopes to keep buried. I enjoyed the backdrop of a Third World War and what it has caused / the plight in the nations - and the chilling line ‘Such Restraint’ really hit a cord with me.
We All Go Into the Water - an old ritual that takes place in a troubled community helps to give the townsfolk something to believe in. But is it faith or population control? A dark story with a vicious and cruel underbelly, it’s the unsaid that is the most powerful tool in this story. The folklore / religious vibe makes for great reading, both things that I adore in my fiction.
They Never Stop Screaming - loved this story about cryogenics and what it leads to, then only thing I’d say about this particular story is that I wanted to know more. It was dark and the nuts and bolts of it are brilliant - this story would be ripe for expansion into a novella or novel. It reminded me of the brilliant short fiction work of Matthew Baker.
The House Beyond the Creek - a creepy sinister offering here, a rumour runs riot over a girl who’s sister has gone missing. Our protagonist sets about becoming this girls friend, they talk, they hang out and they eventually go exploring into the woods where her sister went missing.
The Monster In The Woods - this was a terrific tale that I thought was going one way and Alley takes it somewhere else entirely. Two strangers appear at our protagonists door desperate to be let in and crying out for help. We don’t really know what’s happened but things lurk outside things are not as they seem and the world has gone to the waste - but are these people friend or foe?
Miracle Maker - the line ‘His mercy wasn’t free.’ is brilliant and sums up this story perfectly - a church service at the end of the world. I really enjoyed this apocalyptic vision that Alley create, from the landscape to the mutants and down to the details about the characters - it’s rich and it’s brilliant and with a slice of dark comedy too!
The Window Lake Killer (Chapters 1-9) - I really enjoyed these chapters which formed a longer piece, Alley excels with the longer form and crafting of an unforgettable slasher that would give Jason Voorhees a run for his money. There were some issues I found with this story, some inconsistencies and gaps in the story but they were all overwhelmed with the pace and ferocity of the piece. The killer himself was a great creation but again I didn’t get a fully rounded character arc for him and the ending in these chapters seemed a little rushed and jarred a little given all that went before. But I enjoyed it. I need to read more horror slashers!
The Tree (A Christmas Ghost Story) - I really liked this creepy offering, oh ghosts and Christmas. It reads like some old folklore, rich in storytelling prowess and the elements of the story damn near great. The way Alley tells this one really gets under the readers resolve… there’s something creepy about horror and Christmas and as a sub genre it’s pretty cool, it’s a genre I never knew I needed to read more of until now!
February 14th, The Last - this is a short piece that packs one hell of a punch, a visitor comes to our protagonist to show him the way.
The Orb Weaver - a great story to end the collection. This one again I feel could be expanded into a longer piece- the thematic elements are there to make this a mighty fine disturbing read. It kind of reads like a twisted Grimm Brothers story but mixed with elements of true crime - I felt the ending was a little rushed and there were some plot holes but if expanded this would allow time for such a story to have the meat hung from its bones!
This was a great introduction to a new writer - this is also one of the reasons I love short story collections, you get to taste all the various works a writer is able to create - it has made me want to check out more work from Alley in the future. And his longest work in the collection ‘The Window Lake Killer’ shows what Alley can achieve in the longer form of horror.
As always there are stories I preferred in the collection but most of them are very strong indeed - although there are a number of typos (some which did jump me out of the stories on occasion - due to the typo in particular) it didn’t stop my enjoyment of the stories as I was fully invested to see the macabre offerings Alley delivers in bucket loads.