So she kissed one and sleeps with the other and years later everyone says I love you.....DNF made it 68% and into the first love scene and I got more steam off a gum commercial. Just felt bland as F.
This is a story of second chance and intrigue. A mystery if you will. Fantastic protective family and also desire between two male and a female to trust in her blood brother.
This one is just too short. It leaves much to the imagination and leaves you wanting for more of an ending. For a short story it's a decent one though.