Alright, so my review for the first book and this book will be vaguely similar. Yet again, I have to state first that I enjoy this storyline. The 2nd book is vastly different from the first. This book was better written. I think the story had more fluidity to it than the first.
However, that being said, I'm unsure where the grammatical errors are coming from. Sometimes I think it may be that it was written in a different language and then translated poorly. Then other times, I think the grammar is just bad and then I think there are a lot of typos. I'm just not sure. It makes reading the story very difficult to stay focused. The words in this book, versus the first, are considerably less. Yet, I'm still left wondering where the errors originate.
I did, however, enjoy this book much more than the first. I'm actually looking forward to the next book in this series. Fingers crossed, more improvements on the way!