Flirting has never been Denny’s strong suit, but so what if she’s too shy to ask women out? She’s content with her simple life, working as a cashier and helping her sister raise her niece.
But then she gets a wrong-number text message from a stranger named Eliza, asking her of all people for dating advice!
Eliza is Denny’s total opposite: witty, outgoing—and straight. Despite their differences, the accidental text sparks an unlikely friendship. Soon, Eliza—self-proclaimed queen of disastrous first dates—would rather banter back and forth with Denny than to keep trying her luck at online dating.
When they meet in person, there’s an instant connection. But what Eliza is feeling can’t be attraction, right? It doesn’t mean a thing that she’s starting to wish the guys she dates would be more like Denny. Or does it?
Can the wrong number lead to the right woman after all?
Wrong Number, Right Woman is a light-hearted, slow-burn lesbian romance that embraces likable characters without all the drama.
Length: 116,000 words Tropes & themes: slow-burn romance, low angst, relatable characters, butch/femme, age gap, “toaster oven” romance
Jae is the author of twenty-six award-winning romances between women. She lives in the sunniest city of Germany, near the French and Swiss borders. The writing bug bit her at the age of eleven.
She used to work as a psychologist but gave up her day job in 2013 to become a full-time writer and a part-time editor. As far as she’s concerned, it’s the best job in the world.
When she’s not writing, she is an avid reader of sapphic books, indulges her ice cream and office supply addictions, and watches way too many crime shows.
4.50 Stars. It’s a Jae book, of course it is great. That really sums up everything right there. I don’t actually have to write any more in this review, right? This was the feel good, happy, and sweet romance of the summer. I go through different stages where sometimes I want a little angst, sometimes I want soap opera filled angst, but other times I just want to smile the whole time I am reading a book and this book filled that to a T.
This book takes place in Portland, where Jae has set some of her other books. In fact one of the mains, Eliza, actually works for Dee and Austen from Under a Falling Star. It was nice to visit with them a little and see that Dee is still the ice queen that I enjoy, but you don’t have to read that book first since the stories are not that connected.
This is a feel good, toaster oven, age-gap romance. While Denny gets teased for her age a lot, there is only 11 years difference, 41 to 30, so most of the time I did not even remember that there was an age gap unless the characters brought it up. Oh, I almost forgot that this is also a slow-burn romance. If you are looking for anything fast, than this is not the book for you.
I really liked that both characters had pretty normal jobs in retail. A lot of authors really depend on jobs to make their character’s interesting, which is fine, but I like that Jae was able to write about every day, real people and the story still completely worked. The characters were wonderful and it is why I think the book was so wonderful. I could even connect with Denny quite a bit. While she’s more butch than I am, I could see plenty of myself in her which is always nice while reading.
I had one tiny issue but it’s almost not worth mentioning. This is a book on the longer side for what is a standard WLW romance. Hey, it means people sure get their money’s worth so that not my problem. The problem for me was that at one point and only one point, I thought the pace slowed down a bit too much. I think I would have edited out a tiny bit. There is a lot of interaction that happens over text messages, which is the premise of how they meet so I get it it’s just that I wanted things to move past this point a little faster. Luckily, shortly after that the book did move on so it really was the shortest of complaints from me.
While this book is all about the characters, including the main’s friends and family, the heart of this book is the sweet as sugar, slow-burn romance. Everything from the chemistry to just the understanding and caring, everything about this couple is what every person hopes to find when they are dating. It was sweet and just lovely to watch these two women fall in love. When I say this book was the feel good romance of the summer, I’m not kidding.
If you could not tell by my review, I would easily recommend this book to all feel good romance fans. If angst is a must for you then this book might not be for you, otherwise get it since you won’t be disappointed. While I love all of Jae’s books, this book will go into the pile of her books that were really special to me like Just Physical, Heart Trouble, Just for Show, and Conflict of Interest.
Not long ago, I got my own wrong number text, but it didn’t lead to anything romantic. Which is quite a relief since the message I received was about a wooden cross (if you're very curious and want to see the text and the picture, go read this review on my blog)… The text Denny gets is much nicer and promising: a stranger in first-date panic over what to wear. Denny answers, thinking the exchange will be a one-time thing, but the mystery woman on the other side keeps texting her. An unusual friendship begins, becoming more and more important to both women.
It’s no secret that Jae is one of the best at writing slow-burn romance, and I really enjoyed this one. Denny is adorable. She lives with her much younger sister and her niece and is the best kind of earnest and responsible. She’s awkward and self-conscious but she’s also smart and funny when she’s comfortable. Outgoing and gorgeous, Eliza is an artist, who works with Austen and Dee (from Under a Falling Star), creating bird toys. If Denny had met her in real life from the start, she would most certainly have been too shy to chat with her. Their text relationship allows both to decide how much to show and tell, which, in a way, makes it easier to show and tell more. Eliza learns to be vulnerable and open, Denny learns she doesn’t have to be strong all the time.
Another nice point is that both Denny and Eliza have regular lives with regular jobs: Denny works in a grocery store, Eliza in a pet store. Denny’s parents are out of the picture but she has the best family with her sister Salem and Salem’s eleven-year-old daughter Bella. Eliza also has a really nice family (this one with parents) and a great best friend, Heather, who has her own interesting relationship with Denny (I won’t say more, no spoiling).
My only (very small) complaint is that the story wouldn’t have suffered from being a bit tighter. It’s on the longer side of what we’re used to in lesfic – and I’m not complaining, I like longer books too – and I felt the pace slowed down a little at times. Not enough for me to get bored but enough to be noticed.
If you’re in the mood for a sweet romance, low on angst but high on chemistry and all-around loveliness, look no further.
I received a copy from the publisher and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
Adorable and charming. You'll need a dental appointment for the cavity you'll get from the complete and utter sweetness of these two love interests. There's no games or pretenses. No angst or major tropes or plot twists. Just good honest, down to earth humans and their vulnerabilities trying to connect on a deeper level.
Denny is shy and introverted, has normal insecurities yet feels alone in them, and overthinks a lot.
Eliza is a loyal compassionate person, with a flirty and fun side. But also understands insecurity, too.
I enjoyed the unique way they 'met' and got to know eachother. How easy and comfortable they felt around eachother. I loved that there was no drama with Eliza and her sexuality, and how she chose honesty in dealing with it. But also care in not wanting to hurt someone she could see would be easily harmed if it didn't work out. She took it all very seriously, and I admired that.
My only complaint is the typical Best friend trope that always comes up in lesfic, where they are forcing issues and communication onto their friend, to do with relationships that feel more like a plot device than reality. Heather annoyed me a bit with her hypocritical ideas on dating. She was fine with forcing Eliza to date constantly even if they were duds, while she herself didn't (despite them saying in book, they mutually agreed to date more on this app? She never did!). She was hard on Eliza in one scene, saying her ideals of 'not having that special connection' with dates wasn't realistic, and stating Eliza was being 'too picky' - while she herself did the same with Denny on her ONE and only respective date with her... It became grating and hypocritical... It would be one thing if Heather herself were actively taking her own advice, but when clearly she wasn't - it just made her look like an ass! Thankfully, she did cool it town later in the book once she realized what was going on with Eliza, and was supportive to her friend... but before that she hit all the cliches I hate in the best friend trope from the romantic comedy playbook.
Other than that, I loved the side characters, of Eliza's supportive family, and especially Denny's sister Salem and the daughter Bella, and the blossoming relationship for her and the realization that their family was changing was very touching and heartfelt.
The ending did feel a little rushed to me, I guess since I loved the characters so much I just wasn't read to say goodbye.
Denny and Eliza are the most adorbs and complimentary couple ever, and this book just brings all the good feels of a real honest down to earth romance.
Warning: My cheeks hurt from smiling my way through it.. Proceed with caution ;)
Jae excelled in writing very very relatable MCs this time around. The story was heartwarming in the best possible way and just as good as my anticipation warranted. Highly recommended. Whopping 5 🌟
I really enjoyed this slow burn romance by Jae. It combines a number of lesfic tropes – butch/femme, friends to lovers, and a toaster oven romance. One more and she may have hit BINGO!*
Denny, is a 41 yr old supermarket cashier. Her sister Salem and her 11 year niece, Bella have lived with Denny since their parents disowned the then 17 yr old, pregnant Salem. I think Denny has become one of my favorites of Jae characters. Denny is not the typical butch you read in novels. She is shy, generous, kind, and describes herself as “sturdy”.
One evening, she receives a text from an unknown number. The texter is asking for first-date outfit advice and sends a couple of photos – this outfit or this one? Both Denny and Bella laugh – they clearly have the wrong number if they are asking Denny for fashion advice! Denny texts back outfit B with the yellow sneakers and that she texted the wrong number. Turned out Eliza’s (aka Sneaker Woman's) BFF accidentally gave Eliza her new phone number wrong. And so, begins an unusual start of a friendship. There are a few hurdles – Eliza has only dated men and she assumed that Denny was a man when they began texting.
I really loved following along with their friendship to more than just friends. We also get to know their friends and family. If you would like to read a low angst, slow burn romance this is the book for you. This is the Right Book, Right Author.
*BINGO - In 2019, Jae ran a Lesbian Book Bingo game on her website, with the squares filled with tropes.
When it comes to Jae’s books, I admit that I’m harsher than most. Though her books are always solid, I often times feel her narratives are so methodical that I can see her plotting them out and it gives me an arm’s length experience. But, about every third book or so, Jae produces a story that I’m completely delighted and charmed by and “Wrong Number, Right Woman” falls into that category.
In this read, we get a very slow burn, gay-for-you, age gap romance that occurs between two very different yet relatable people.
Denny is a shy and awkward mistaken-for-a-man older woman with a little bit of weight on her while Eliza is a younger, outgoing artist with some of her own insecurities. I particularly liked that these characters were every day people who couldn’t get easy passes from super model looks or padded bank accounts. There are no shortcuts in this book, which allows Jae to really build the intimacy and interactions between characters.
The slow burn aspect may be too slow for some but I thought it really worked here. It’s a long journey from accidental text to/from a stranger to in-love, especially since Eliza, until today, has considered herself straight. The time taken to develop the friendship and romance was really important to the believability of the story and I ended up thinking the pacing was just right. Jae did a superb job turning up the chemistry between Denny and Eliza and I appreciated that she built intimacy in numerous ways other than the obvious.
For those who wait, the pay off is worth it.
In addition to the romance, Jae provides a robust and well developed supporting cast, which focuses on the importance of family and chosen family.
Angela Dawe narrated this book and I honestly don’t think anyone could’ve done better. Particularly for Eliza, there were a few times she laughed out a line which completely matched Eliza’s bubbly nature. All around, she nailed it. Kudos to her.
I can’t emphasize how much I love this novel. Jae took a simple, and honestly silly, premise and turned it into the most delightful and heartwarming story. This award winning slow-burn sapphic romance kept me up far too late for a solid 400 pages, and I finished wishing that there was more. I would recommend this novel to anyone and everyone. No notes.
Recommend to all!
Denny, a shy woman with very little luck with romance, receives a series of texts from an unknown woman asking advice on what she should wear to her upcoming date. It turns out Eliza had the wrong number, but the two end up continuing to chat. Eliza is outgoing and friendly, and the two become fast friends. Over time, maybe more. Unfortunately for them both Eliza is straight….right?
This novel was amazing from start to finish. I have so many good things to say about it and even wracking my brain I can’t think of anything negative to say. If I had to find complaints all I could say is that I wish it was even longer, especially at the end which was maybe rushed a little? Regardless this novel was adorable and just so incredibly sweet that it plowed right through any flaws it may have had.
Highlights: -The initial relationship between Denny and Eliza almost entirely developed before they met in person, and mostly developed without them knowing what each other looked like. This was because they fell for each others personalities and I thought that was beautiful. These two are so sweet and they deserve each other. -I liked how both main characters had regular jobs, with Denny working in retail. Most novels have everyone doing fancy jobs like lawyers and doctors so this was refreshing. -The handling of Eliza’s sexuality was done very well. It was slow and gradual instead of the big sudden reveal that is frequently featured. The way that she addressed potential labels and how her revelations both changed her and didn’t change her was wonderful. -How you have an entire novel with nearly no angst, breakups, lies, or other drama and still make it a page turner is beyond me, but this novel can be used as a case study. -Did I mention how delightful both characters are, especially Denny? A cinnamon bun too great for this world.
I'll stop now before this gets too long. lol
Thank you to NetGalley for providing a free ARC. This honest review was left voluntarily.
Scribd users had the primeur with Jae’s latest audio book publication of Wrong Number, Right Woman as Audible is coping with a back log. Lucky me! Now Jae isn’t always my cup of tea, but I was in the mood for more Angela Dawe and she was narrating it so no hard choices there.
When super shy cashier Denny gets a wrong number text from crafty bird-toy maker Eliza seeking clothing advise for a date, neither one of them could know this would set them off on a romantic adventure. Them ending up together seems very unlikely because Denny is too awkward to put herself out there and Eliza is straight. Nevertheless this is the start of an ultra slow burn, super sweet romance. It takes an in depth look at all the stages it takes to get a seemingly straight woman to fall in love with a butch lesbian.
It was almost too much for me to sit through 12 hours of this ultra sweet, considerate, careful, chaste, low angst courtship. I think Dawe’s narrating prowess saw me through it all. Fans of Jae and super slow burn sweetness will have a field day!
Available on Scribd.
f/f a slow and chaste 11-hour build-up towards some fireworks
Themes: Portland, I am straight but gay for you, slow burn, crafts, yellow sneakers, body image, I loved they both had a very down to earth job, normal people with normal imperfect bodies, it was a bit too saccharine for this old Grinch ;-)
What a fantastic book. I mean it wasn’t like I was expecting anything less than great from Jae, but this is just another reminder that she never fails to deliver. This was such a sweet, down-to-earth and genuine feeling romance story. I felt like I was reading a beautiful romance between two everyday women, and I absolutely loved it. There is no high stakes, crazy drama or unnecessary angst in this book. Quite honestly, it felt like a calming and heartwarming read. While I love angst as much as the next person, sometimes a book like this is absolutely perfect. It was really just happiness in a book.
I loved the characters in this story. I’m such a character-driven reader so no matter how good the plot is, I always need at least some connection or intrigue in the characters. What I loved most about the characters in this book was that there were so many to love, not just our mains Eliza and Denny. Salem, Bella and Heather in particular just brought so much warmth, humour and life to the story. Denny’s relationship with her sister Salem and niece Bella was one of my favourite parts of the book. It was so homey, heartwarming and really just added to the overall warmth of the book. Similarly, Heather was such a fun and lively friend to Eliza that felt really important to the book. While many friends or other side characters in romance books feel somewhat disposable, Heather brought so much humour, vibrancy and love to the book. Honestly hoping that Jae writes her next book on Heather!! She would be such a fantastic main character!
Denny and Eliza were also just really fantastic characters. Since the plot was relatively low-stakes and there wasn’t much drama, it was the intricacy and development of their romance that pulled the book forward. As a shy woman myself, I saw myself so much in Denny. She was insecure in herself, painfully shy, but also so compassionate and loving. Eliza was much more of an extrovert and fun-loving woman but also crazy generous, kind and supportive. Watching the characters open up to each other (first as text buddies and friends but then as lovers) and develop such a deep emotional relationship was so heartwarming. I loved them so much together. This book is missing some of the heat of other books from Jae (although there is still a very good sex scene, don’t worry), the lighter chemistry and the emotional connection between the characters made up for. They were perfect for each other and I loved every moment of them together.
While this isn’t my new favourite book by Jae, it felt like such a genuine and refreshing read. The characters are great, the relationships are full of so much heart and this book just made me so happy. Definitely recommend.
4.5 stars. A fun and adorable toaster oven romance. I’m not going to write a long review as there are already plenty of good reviews out there and this book is what it is, a sweet, angst free romance.
Jae is a master in portraying “real” people. She has shown it before and also in this book the main characters are not perfect. As much as I love to escape reality in a book and read about beautiful superhumans experiencing the most exciting adventures, it is also good to be able to step back into reality and enjoy a sweet story starring slightly insecure and flawed (in other words regular) people, living a regular life. In this book I especially adored Denny. Denny is a butch, but in contrast to most butches in books she is not macho, super confident and athletic, but she is a bit awkward, chubby, and extremely shy and I was totally rooting for her and Eliza to become a couple. Eliza is straight and very outgoing, but has her own insecurities, so this is a recipe for a good slow burn romance. Ow, and there is an age gap (41-30). I enjoyed how they meet over text messages, slowly getting to know each other. At some point the book becomes quite cheesy, which I’m usually not a big fan of, but it works for this book. Jae’s books are never disappointing, but this one is in the top for me, which was surprising as this is not the type of book that I generally prefer most.
I definitely recommend this if you’re looking for a funny feel-good, angst-free romance with “real-life” characters.
This book was one of my most anticipated this year, as Jae is one of my favourite lesfic authors. Happy to say, I'm not disappointed. It incorporates plenty of romance tropes: age-gap, oven toaster, slow-burn and they are all very well done. Denny is an older butch woman of heavier build who works at a grocery store. She lives with her sister and niece as they're estranged from their parents. One day, she received a text from Eliza, who was panicked about a first date outfit. Turns out Denny's phone number and Eliza's best friend's number are very similar. That starts a beautiful text friendship and led to real-life friendship and romance. I love both characters, from Denny's shyness and insecurities (which are very relatable) to Eliza's perky positive outlook on life. But, Eliza's not perfect - she has her own insecurities and goes through personal growth. I love the way their relationship develops. It's cute, charming, and melts my heart. Bonus are cameos by Dee and Austen - from Jae's book Under the Falling Star. As usual, it's wonderful to be back in the Jae-verse.
It was cute, it was funny, the main characters were lovable (I considered Denny to be very relatable) and had great chemistry and there was basically no drama. A really good story if you want to read some positive, uncomplicated and drama free romance.
I loved this book; it might just be the most wholesome romance I’ve ever read! I’ve read several of Jae’s books and I’ve come to expect great writing, characters, and storytelling, but wow, this one surprised me due to how unique and lovely it is. Denny Jacobs (41, butch lesbian), and Eliza Harrison (30, sapphic) might just be the two sweetest characters I’ve ever read (don’t ask me who’s sweeter — it’s impossible to answer!), and I enjoyed every minute spent with them.
Reading this book reminded me that I ADORE the Internet-friends-to-lovers premise (partly because I can relate)! I felt the emotions conveyed through every text-based interaction, the insecurity of not knowing if they’d like the real you, and the yearning for details of the other person. And when Denny and Eliza finally meet up, it’s clear they’re perfect for each other. At first this seems like an opposites-attract romance (butch/femme, introvert/extrovert), but I actually think Denny and Eliza are more alike than different because they are both!! So!! Pure!! Eliza is so adorable and energetic and hilarious, and Denny is so gentle and shy and surprisingly funny, and ahhh!!!! Cute couple alert!
I loved the smooth-flowing, slow-burn pace of the story. Everything felt totally natural and it was just a breeze to read. I also appreciated how non-formulaic this book is: even though it might be bordering on cheesy for some readers, I never rolled my eyes and nothing felt contrived. It’s just a feel-good, minimal-angst romance through and through.
I also loved all the positive queer rep in this book. While Eliza is just now coming to terms with her queerness, she and her family are so positive about it, and she’s proven to be a great ally to the LGBTQ community. There are also some cool conversations involving Denny’s experiences as a butch woman. And I’d be remiss if I didn’t mention Eliza’s best friend Heather: transgender lesbian and overall ray of sunshine! Heather has some of the funniest one-liners in the book and she’s an essential part of the story. I’d love to read Heather’s romance sometime, even if it’s only a short story.
In short, I think this is one of Jae's best books and I can't wait to read more of Denny and Eliza in Chemistry Lessons!
Content warnings: disowning (past), teenage pregnancy (past), body shaming (past), graphic sex, homophobia, mentions of transphobia, misgendering(?) of a cisgender person
Every once in a while I read a book that just melts my heart, puts a cheery grin on my face, and happy tears in my eyes. That is exactly what happened when I read Wrong Number, Right Woman by Jae. I’ve never read a novel of Jae’s that I didn’t like, but I just fell head-over-heels in love with this one. This is one of those feel-good stories that you want to read over and over again, especially when you are having a bad day, a bad week, or in the case of most of us, a bad year.
Jae’s characters, especially her main characters are always well-developed. Denny and Eliza are perfect examples of this. They are very realistic and human, with flaws and quirks like all of us. They are also absolutely adorable and loveable. The setting of the story takes place in the same world as several of her other books including the Portland Police Bureau Series as well as her novel Under a falling Star. In fact, Dee and Austen, the main characters from Under a Falling Star are secondary characters in this novel. I’ve always liked how Jae connects her books this way. Don’t worry if you haven’t read these other books yet. This is definitely a stand-alone novel, just in the same world.
The story itself is amazing. The way Jae has these two women meet and slowly get to know each other is wonderful. She weaves a tale that grabs you on the first page and pulls you by the heart strings to the very last page of the epilogue. Jae is the queen of slow-burn romance, and this book shows you why.
Wrong Number, Right Woman has my highest recommendation and is worth every star I can give it. If you need a book to escape from a crappy day (or year), then grab this novel and enjoy!
Thanks to Ylva Publishing for giving me the chance to read and honestly review this novel.
Denny is trying to get the courage to ask Miss sexy bus driver on a date, but she’s awfully shy and makes a fool of herself every single time instead. When she receives a message from an unknown number asking for her opinion on her date outfit, Denny doesn’t expect anything of it. But the more they talk, the harder it is to stop. Suddenly, Denny has a new crush who is also becoming her new best friend and who, of course, has to be straight. Because she’s straight, right?
Wrong Number, Right Woman is an extremely slow-paced romance between a woman who is trying to find her perfect prince, and a complete stranger who is too shy to ask people on dates. I really enjoy following people who appreciate what they have but still know they can have more and fight for it. The main character, Denny has helped her sister raise her niece since she was born, she works as a cashier since she can't afford trying to create her own business, but she dreams about having a partner and a job she's passionate about. While this romance was really soft and slow, I enjoyed seeing the pace because it made their relationship more realistic. I would have preferred to feel more for them, a bit more fireworks and maybe a hint of drama, but it was nice to finally read a sapphic romance I enjoyed with characters I cared about.
I’d recommend it if you are in the mood for some strangers to friends to lovers, really slow burn and with characters that make you feel like you are receiving a warm hug.
While I really liked both main characters, and even more so as they come together to form a relationship, getting there was extremely painful. The problem I had is that it took so incredibly long for anything to happen. It's like if slow burn and a staring contest had a baby, you'd get this book. The first word that comes to mind to describe the pace is "shuffle". But I finished it anyway. Because the characters were awesome.
Denny really intrigued me right from the start. She's explicitly a butch lesbian but counters many of the stereotypes of that designation. She isn't terribly tall or strong and she has big breasts and other "curves" that she's self-conscious of. So Jae is playing against some of the assumptions of that designation but did so with such adept skill that it was never in question that Denny was very much a butch lesbian. And content to be designated so because that description fit her self-conception as well. But the most interesting aspect of her character to me, and what engaged me so much, was how shy she was. That would normally drive me nuts because I prefer strong women, but that's just it; Denny was very strong in lots of different ways, starting with caring for her sister and niece and providing a safe and caring environment for them to thrive in. Hers was that quiet strength that goes about providing for those she loves with care and kindness and that just drew me in and never let me go.
Eliza was a bit more generic. She's ten years younger than Denny. And straight. But the core circumstance of the story, the cell number mix-up, means that their friendship was able to firmly establish itself way before they had to confront anything like attraction. And I can't tell you how engaging their early relationship was. And yeah, it didn't take long to engage with Eliza, as well. Some of that is her awesome friendship with her trans bestie, Heather, and not just because Heather was a hoot. I loved that they supported each other so well, even though that mean Heather was mostly pushing Eliza to date men of questionable suitability for a bit. That dynamic served to allay any fears that Eliza would reject or offend Denny who would have felt such betrayal very deeply.
But things bog down once feelings start developing between the two and I got incredibly impatient; mostly with Eliza. Look, Eliza is pretty much the best-case scenario for someone having a lesbian awakening. Her best friend is a queer trans woman who has brought her to the local pride events for years. And by local, we're talking Portland, Oregon where pride is practically required attendance. Plus, Eliza's family has pretty much adopted Heather as their own daughter so it isn't like they're going to push back, like at all, if Eliza showed up with a girlfriend at some point. Which is .
So all the "should I/shouldn't I" dithering by Eliza felt forced and more than a little unnatural. I just didn't buy a single one of her hesitations because there was never a moment of doubt in her attraction or in their suitability.
I will say that I'm glad that my concerns with how much book was left after they finally got together proved unnecessary. I feared some dark moment and the machinations that would have been required for these two to have one. I'm glad it didn't materialize because it would have been super stupid had Jae gone there.
Anyway, it bogged down so hard that I can't go above three stars, however much I liked the protagonists.
A note about Steamy: There's a single explicit sex scene and it partook of the weakness of the rest of the story. By which I mean it was sooooooper slow. And even though I mostly skimmed it, it single-handedly pushed this over the line into the middle of my steam tolerance.
4.5 stars. This really is a feel good romance. No angst and well written with lovely characters all around, not just the mains but the supporting characters too. The beginning was a bit slow because the main characters just texted and didn’t see each other, but after that the pace picked up. I really enjoyed reading this and loved how vulnerable Denny could be and how careful Eliza was with her. Loved their honesty too. I’ll certainly read this again.
A sweet, well written book made better with Angela Dawe's stellar narration. Listening to bashful butch Denny and (I thought I was straight) Eliza get to know each other via text made for many light-hearted moments. The pace is slow and gentle and the angst is low. Emphasis on inclusion, body positive image and family first values.
“I fell in love with you,” Eliza said with the emotional openness Denny admired so much. Her eyes shone. “As soon as I met you, it was like putting on my favorite pair of sneakers. You just fit. We fit."
Jae truly delivers one of the sweetest and heartwarming slow-burn love stories about finding the best in the unexpected in Wrong Number, Right Woman.
Denny gets a wrong number text message from a woman named Eliza, and this error leads to a friendship and romance that changes these two lives in the best way.
Jae really shows what it means to build a relationship on honesty, respect, and open-communication. Through banter and steady conversations over text, Jae shows maybe not the sizzling and electric chemistry that we see often but what it means to develop safety and comfort in someone over time.
Jae builds incredibly interesting characters through an everyday setting and everyday working-class jobs, but by building each character's dreams, passions, family dynamics, friendships, and insecurities both Eliza and Denny become these captivating three-dimensional characters we cannot help but love.
The pacing of the story felt so incredibly fleshed out every moment this little spark of growing love and intimacy between the characters even when they may not realize it, and it's so well done.
Eliza's exploration of her sexual orientation is also well written, with the story showing how important it can be to just let love happen instead of worrying about how it defines you.
I think what I loved the most is intergration of family and friends within the core of Denny and Eliza's love story. Their friends like Heather siblings like Salem. Nieces and nephews like Bella, and parents like Kathleen. They all just add so much to both the love story and growth of Denny and Eliza as individuals and when the story is complete everything feels like two puzzle pieces connecting perfectly 🥰
The story warmed my heart, made me swoon, and showed a type of intimacy that I think is so important to see in romance. 5 stars 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟
“No expectations, okay?” Denny said. “I want you to do only what feels right in any given moment.” God, Denny was almost too good to be true. “Well, in that case…” Eliza pulled Denny close and kissed her again."
Can my whole review be swoon, swoon, swoon and more, please? As much as I loved the book (see my review from September 5, 2020) the audio was even better. The best narrators elevate the quality of a work and The Legendary Angela Dawe does it every. damn. time. I was smiling, laughing, squealing, awwwwing and, yes - swooning - throughout the entire thing. This felt like a warm bath on a cold day. Like sitting in front of a fire wrapped in the softest blanket. It was sweet, tender and felt so very good. Who can't use more of that right now?? A perfect combination of the wonderful words of Jae and the beautiful performance of Dawe.
A really solid friends-to-lovers romance! I absolutely loved the characters, especially Denny—the adorable, socially awkward butch who totally stole my heart. The story unfolded beautifully, evolving into a believable and heartfelt love story. Both Eliza and Denny were fantastic main characters, and even the supporting cast—Bella, Salem, and Heather—were so charming and likeable.
I will say it leaned a little too slow-burn for my personal taste, but that’s purely a preference thing and not a knock on the book itself. Now I can’t wait to dive into Lucky Yellow Shoes to read Denny and Eliza’s epilogue!
All in all, this was such a sweet and satisfying read. Perfect for anyone who loves slow-burn romances with tons of heart.
As a big fan of Jae's work, I was really looking forward to this release and it was everything I'd anticipated - a lovely, sweet, slow burn romance about two "real" people who meet entirely by accident. Denny finds herself the recipient of a text from a very cute woman who sends pics of a few potential outfits for a date that evening, thinking she's sending them to her best friend for her input. Her BFF's phone number has recently changed and apparently she doesn't have the right one. That mix-up results in a growing friendship between Eliza, a crafter who is straight, and Denny, a shy butch who works as a cashier in a grocery store. Because they can't actually see one another and know nothing of the other beyond their enjoyable text banter about Eliza's disastrous dates, it allows them to share in a way that is comfortable for them both. This story feels so relevant because of how many people communicate via text, online or through the written word today. Here's what I love about Jae as an author: she asks for input about what people don't see enough of in lesfic and then she writes it. After 21 novels, no two of her books are alike, her characters aren't always exclusively feminine or masculine, they vary in how they identify on the sexual spectrum, they have varied body types, and always have unique professions and backgrounds. Her stories are inclusive and never re-treads. A common thread I appreciate is they are mature enough to communicate about their vulnerabilities and insecurities in a healthy way. And the woman knows how to write swoon-worthy romance! In addition to being shy and butch, Denny carries some extra love handles. Eliza is beautiful but also has her own physical insecurities. I love how their relationship flourishes as friends as it grows and deepens. Both are very lovable characters that you root for. Denny is especially appealing. Interestingly, I don't usually find myself gravitating toward butch characters, but Jae has written some that I've absolutely loved - especially Luke from Backwards to Oregon and now Denny. They're not stereotypical, but fully three dimensional characters, as evidenced by Denny's surprising passion. There are also strong secondary characters - including Denny's sister Salem and niece Bella, who live with her, and Eliza's best friend Heather, a trans woman who is like a sister to her. This is a solid, feel-good romance that sure hits the sweet spot in times like these! Highly recommend.
4.45 stars. Probably the most wholesome read of 2020.
I liked to read about everyday people for a change. No Hollywood actresses, surgeons, presidents or psychic cops here. They're not some otherworldly beauties. They're just... people. While I like those other types of characters too, Jae's approach in this book felt refreshing.
I loved how she describes the characters with their little imperfections. Hashtag relatable and all that. Slow burn was executed beautifully too. Often, I get impatient and can't wait for characters to finally get together. But I had no such problems here. Secondary characters also played a role in that. Heather and Denny's sister were a joy to read about.
If you are in the mood for a zero angst sloooooooow burn, toaster oven romance this will fit the bill. I enjoyed it but I was not captivated by it. It's a pleasant story of two ordinary people meeting by chance and becoming friends that very slowly realize it's something more. It's sweet treat like a nice bowl of premium vanilla ice cream. Nothing wrong with it, it's perfectly enjoyable it just not every exciting.
Finally, a slow-burn romance! I've been encountering lots of insta-loves in my reads lately, it felt nice to be given a break from those.
In this latest novel by Jae, she clearly made a point to create characters who embody everyday people. The ones who are shy and insecure. The ones who are deemed physically imperfect by (the judgmental) society. The ones who are contented with what they currently have and are not out to dominate the world. Normally, characters who are modest are paired with someone imposing—and there's nothing wrong with that because it's a tried-and-tested dynamic. In Wrong Number, Right Woman though, we were given a pairing consisting of people who weren't usually put under a spotlight, as evidenced by the choice of professions for both Denny and Eliza. It was great to see that both found satisfaction in their employment, making Eliza stand firm in her chosen career, and making Denny at ease with what she does for a living until she was ready to pursue her passion.
And the most important thing of all? The beauty of these two women were still emphasized—and we're not only talking good looks here. How Denny and Eliza weeded out each other's uncertainties and insecurities was beautiful beyond words. There's no trace of superficiality in their connection. Denny was such a sweetheart and her kindness radiated in everything she does. I seriously swooned at her thoughtfulness most of the time. The same could be said of Eliza, but what stood out for her is her effort to take the lead in their relationship in the beginning, because she knows how reserved Denny can be. I could go on and on about how perfect their partnership is, because it shows even in the smallest of things they do for each other, but I'd rather have you read it for yourself.
The endearing conversation between Denny and Salem (Denny's sister) near the end of the book had me teary-eyed. I think Denny is the softest of the soft butches out there, it makes you want to hug her all the time 😂
So, why only 4 stars?
I'm afraid the devil in me snatched the last star 😅 This book is too pure for my sinful heart LOL. It has no external conflict and that's a good thing because there's no contrived drama. But as a consequence, the book didn't really have a firm grip on my attention since I find my mind wandering off a couple of times while reading it. Maybe this can't be helped because I always gravitate towards angsty stories, so this was like the lull in my stormy reads. I'm also a fan of complex characters—those who are made colorful by their faults and imperfections not just on the physical aspect, so the MCs' angelic characterizations didn't captivate me. Despite their lack of confidence in their appearances, Denny and Eliza were actually perfect—kind, thoughtful, caring, sweet—basically, they're good eggs.
I get that Jae was attempting to establish a strong connection between the MCs through text alone before they meet personally, but I think cutting a small portion of that in the beginning would've delivered the same outcome. Remaining textmates for 1/3 of the book was a tad long for setting the groundwork for their relationship.
And while I favor femme-femme matches, I'm grateful this book taught me a few things about butches. Like for example, I never knew a butch could take offense in being called boyish. The scene where Eliza rebuked the woman in the food cart surprised me, because it did seem like the woman made an honest mistake and meant no harm to Denny. So, how Eliza addressed that situation left me feeling unsure.
There's no doubt that Jae's writing is one of the best in the genre. Browsing through her works, you can't question it anymore by this point.
I've read Under a Falling Star 3 years ago and rated it 3 stars, but I didn't write a review for it so I only have a faint recollection of Austen and Dee's (Eliza's bosses) story. I haven't read Backwards to Oregon yet, which appears to be the top-rated book for Jae fans. But I have to say, my #1 book from this author is Just for Show.
If you love slow-burn, feel-good stories with adorable characters, this book is for you.
Great book. Really impressive. It's a sweet, long, slow-burn romance between a "straight" woman and a lesbian butch. No angst at all, so perfect to enjoy and savor every word in the story.
Now I need urgently a trip to Portland. Never been there.