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The Earthen-Crest Kingdoms #1
The Earth-Treader
Eighteen-year-old Rylla Wayscot has always wanted to fly, but being human has its limitations. As a cartographer’s daughter in the Earthen-Crest kingdoms' boot of Aylati, Rylla wants more than anything to know the whereabouts of her brothers, even if it means finding them herself. But there’s one she’s afraid to venture too far from home.
After a short walk to the Grove and stumbling into a talking cat, she realizes she may have no other choice. There she is told she’s an Earth-Treader—one who can bend the will of nature and speak to animals, and she’s reminded of the Earth-Lore—the five missing stones which once held their kingdoms together. But with a growing Darkness lurking on the horizon, the missing stones are being sought by many. Rylla is tasked with finding them herself, especially before the cruel Lord Brennigan does.
Despite all her protestations, Rylla can’t escape her fate. She must embark on this impossible journey and leave all her comforts behind. But she’s not alone. Even with fear and doubt as her armor, Rylla meets strangers who challenge her resolve, and she learns that even in the shadows love and light can thrive. Perhaps it’s even enough to give her wings.
After a short walk to the Grove and stumbling into a talking cat, she realizes she may have no other choice. There she is told she’s an Earth-Treader—one who can bend the will of nature and speak to animals, and she’s reminded of the Earth-Lore—the five missing stones which once held their kingdoms together. But with a growing Darkness lurking on the horizon, the missing stones are being sought by many. Rylla is tasked with finding them herself, especially before the cruel Lord Brennigan does.
Despite all her protestations, Rylla can’t escape her fate. She must embark on this impossible journey and leave all her comforts behind. But she’s not alone. Even with fear and doubt as her armor, Rylla meets strangers who challenge her resolve, and she learns that even in the shadows love and light can thrive. Perhaps it’s even enough to give her wings.
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First published December 3, 2020
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Alissa J. Zavalianos
8 books512 followersAlissa J. Zavalianos grew up in New Hampshire and currently lives there with her wonderful husband, sweet daughter, and mischievous cat, Moo. As a child, she always had a love for nature, books, and fairy tales, and as she grew older, that love bloomed all the more. Alissa loves Jesus and is inspired by birds, mountains, castles, Tolkien, Lewis, and the way a cold breath of wind feels on her bare toes.
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December 23, 2024Author’s Note:
It was so much fun to write this debut novel of mine—one where I poured so much of myself into.
I hope you enjoy Rylla and Caz’s journey across the Earthen-Crest kingdoms, humor Moo with his musings, and get swept away amidst the magic!
💛
It was so much fun to write this debut novel of mine—one where I poured so much of myself into.
I hope you enjoy Rylla and Caz’s journey across the Earthen-Crest kingdoms, humor Moo with his musings, and get swept away amidst the magic!
💛
July 14, 2023
This is one of those books I have a hard time putting into words exactly how it made me feel and how much I love it despite wanting desperately to talk about it. (Please tell me I’m not the only one who feels this way about their favorite books…) It’s both beautiful and challenging and so imaginative while also being grounded in truth and light despite the darkness trying to drag the characters down every single page.
The love for nature shines so bright and pure throughout and made me want to walk in the woods and find my own adventure to go running off on like I did as a child playing in the forest and dreaming up adventures to go on just like Rylla did.
Speaking of Rylla, she’s amazing. Fearful yet strong in her courage and love for those around her and the land under her feet, she is an inspiration and someone I feel such a connection too and hope to be like. And Caz, our hero, is so awesome in everything but mostly in being protective and serious but gentle and kind as well. He’s amazing too, and if Rylla didn’t want him I certainly would! And all I can say about the romance is it’s so sweet and pure and raw and I ate it up and was inwardly squealing by the end. 🥰🥰🥰 Moo is such a wise, caring friend for our girl and Elowen and Jovin are such special beans in their own right even though I did very much want to smack Elowen at one point. 😒
This is the perfect fantasy story with a classic Lord of the Rings feel but without the heavy handed descriptions and a more modern flavor while still staying classic like in its tone and feel, very much like H. S. J. William’s Moonscript.
It’s stories like this one that drew me to fantasy long ago and keeps me grounded on this earth and makes me come back for more magic and light in an otherwise dark world. And I know for sure this will be a story I will come back to again and again and never grow tired of as it has somehow become a very part of me I never knew I needed until now.
‼️Content‼️
Language: hell (as a place)
Violence: fighting humans and animals with weapons and magic (not detailed); injuries and blood (not detailed); arrows are shot at a character; an arrow hits a character’s arm; a tree spirit attacks a character; a character is stabbed in the thigh (not detailed); characters almost drown; in the past a man killed his brother (shown but not detailed); a character is stabbed in the stomach (not detailed); a sea serpent eats a man (not detailed)
Sexual: a kiss (not detailed)
Drug/Alcohol: characters are given a magical drug like drink
Other: magic; magical abilities, objects, and creatures; a man tries to keep characters imprisoned; a man’s body is magically reformed using dark magic (not detailed or shown in a good light); evil shadow spirit/wraith like creatures
The love for nature shines so bright and pure throughout and made me want to walk in the woods and find my own adventure to go running off on like I did as a child playing in the forest and dreaming up adventures to go on just like Rylla did.
Speaking of Rylla, she’s amazing. Fearful yet strong in her courage and love for those around her and the land under her feet, she is an inspiration and someone I feel such a connection too and hope to be like. And Caz, our hero, is so awesome in everything but mostly in being protective and serious but gentle and kind as well. He’s amazing too, and if Rylla didn’t want him I certainly would! And all I can say about the romance is it’s so sweet and pure and raw and I ate it up and was inwardly squealing by the end. 🥰🥰🥰 Moo is such a wise, caring friend for our girl and Elowen and Jovin are such special beans in their own right even though I did very much want to smack Elowen at one point. 😒
This is the perfect fantasy story with a classic Lord of the Rings feel but without the heavy handed descriptions and a more modern flavor while still staying classic like in its tone and feel, very much like H. S. J. William’s Moonscript.
It’s stories like this one that drew me to fantasy long ago and keeps me grounded on this earth and makes me come back for more magic and light in an otherwise dark world. And I know for sure this will be a story I will come back to again and again and never grow tired of as it has somehow become a very part of me I never knew I needed until now.
‼️Content‼️
Language: hell (as a place)
Violence: fighting humans and animals with weapons and magic (not detailed); injuries and blood (not detailed); arrows are shot at a character; an arrow hits a character’s arm; a tree spirit attacks a character; a character is stabbed in the thigh (not detailed); characters almost drown; in the past a man killed his brother (shown but not detailed); a character is stabbed in the stomach (not detailed); a sea serpent eats a man (not detailed)
Sexual: a kiss (not detailed)
Drug/Alcohol: characters are given a magical drug like drink
Other: magic; magical abilities, objects, and creatures; a man tries to keep characters imprisoned; a man’s body is magically reformed using dark magic (not detailed or shown in a good light); evil shadow spirit/wraith like creatures
March 2, 2023
2023 Reread
I stand by my first review—this book is magical & I love it! And I’m updating it to 5⭐️ because again, I love it. ☺️
MOO! He is a true hero & simply the best. He deserves all the love, catnip, and cuddles.
Also, now I’m dreaming about owning a fancy cloak...
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Original Review — 2022
4 ⭐️
What a beautiful story!!
I loved the Hobbit-y quest/chosen one/under-qualified hero vibes. There was something reminiscent of Middle Earth and Narnia that was just lovely!
Sometimes fantasy world-building throws me for a loop, but I’m happy to say this one didn’t, and I greatly enjoyed how amazing it was.
I have to say I loved the characters best though. ☺️ Rylla, our chosen hero, is real and relatable. She has her moments of doubt and struggle but also overcomes obstacles. Elowen, Caz, and Jovian are “the team,” and despite their differences, mistakes, and misunderstandings, they stick together with Rylla. Lord Brennigan is positively villainous…and makes a good villain. Fang (Moo’s grandfather) is hilarious and reminds me a little of the Cheshire Cat from Alice in Wonderland. And lastly, Rylla’s cat sidekick, Moo. I’m no avid animal lover, but Moo is the sweetest thing, and I think he was my favourite character in this story. If allergies weren’t an issue (and he wasn’t opposed to being touched), I would want to give him a pat and a squeeze. 😉
The plot kept me hooked, and I was reading the last few chapters like mad because I.need.to.know.what.happens. Very intense battle moments.
And now I have a tremendous urge to make an aesthetic reel for this story, but I’m not sure I could do it justice!
I stand by my first review—this book is magical & I love it! And I’m updating it to 5⭐️ because again, I love it. ☺️
MOO! He is a true hero & simply the best. He deserves all the love, catnip, and cuddles.
Also, now I’m dreaming about owning a fancy cloak...
___________
Original Review — 2022
4 ⭐️
What a beautiful story!!
I loved the Hobbit-y quest/chosen one/under-qualified hero vibes. There was something reminiscent of Middle Earth and Narnia that was just lovely!
Sometimes fantasy world-building throws me for a loop, but I’m happy to say this one didn’t, and I greatly enjoyed how amazing it was.
I have to say I loved the characters best though. ☺️ Rylla, our chosen hero, is real and relatable. She has her moments of doubt and struggle but also overcomes obstacles. Elowen, Caz, and Jovian are “the team,” and despite their differences, mistakes, and misunderstandings, they stick together with Rylla. Lord Brennigan is positively villainous…and makes a good villain. Fang (Moo’s grandfather) is hilarious and reminds me a little of the Cheshire Cat from Alice in Wonderland. And lastly, Rylla’s cat sidekick, Moo. I’m no avid animal lover, but Moo is the sweetest thing, and I think he was my favourite character in this story. If allergies weren’t an issue (and he wasn’t opposed to being touched), I would want to give him a pat and a squeeze. 😉
The plot kept me hooked, and I was reading the last few chapters like mad because I.need.to.know.what.happens. Very intense battle moments.
And now I have a tremendous urge to make an aesthetic reel for this story, but I’m not sure I could do it justice!
November 26, 2020
A fun fantasy that brought me back to the books I adored when I was an early teen. Who doesn't want a cat for a sidekick? Brace yourself for forbidden nature magic, quests, all the family themes, some romance, and, of course, a sea serpent that will definitely want to eat you for lunch.
February 23, 2022
Alissa will always be one of my favorite authors. Her writing is magical like The Chronicles of Narnia and always gives me Lord of the Rings vibes. Highly recommend!!
January 5, 2022
Right off the bat, I get some juicy Hobbit vibes - you know, that classic epic fantasy feeling that says “adventure awaits”. The writing style was a fun mix of fresh and modern with an old-fashioned flair. The illustrations at each part added to the ambiance of the story in a delightful way! In whole it reminded me of leather-bound books, which added to the aesthetic of the story.
I appreciated so much how the story and writing felt ageless; enjoyable for adults but also a great introduction to fantasy for young teens. It was really fun to see our protagonist, Rylla, has two parents! It is such a rarity in the YA genre, but Zavalianos achieved the feat of having both a healthy home and sending our hero off on an adventure very believably.
The story was very enjoyable to read, and I loved how it was a mix of mini adventures within a larger epic quest with many colorful characters and fun surprises along the way. There were great descriptions of the world and each location visited that really brought the setting to life, not to mention that tree portals sound amazing!
I loved the names of the characters all around; they felt like they belonged to the same world, but were still unique and fitting. Moo was one of my favorites! He gave me some really amazing Barbie movie vibes, and was such a sweet friend to Rylla. Caz was also a very fun character to follow, with his own journey and growth to be had in the story apart from being the "love interest", which I really enjoyed.
All of the friendships felt so genuine, starting as strangers and growing in a very realistic and heartwarming way, working through conflict and trials together. The romance was also really well handled, feeling authentic and appropriate for the characters and the story.
The throughline theme of the story was also very well explored: The stones are neither good or bad on their own, but their goodness is determined by the purity of the heart that holds them. We are all blessed with gifts, and they all have a potential for good or for evil, depending on our own heart's motiviations. It was great to see each of the characters be confronted with this decision, and how they all worked through it in different ways.
In the end 5/5 and I will definitely be recommending this book to others!
I appreciated so much how the story and writing felt ageless; enjoyable for adults but also a great introduction to fantasy for young teens. It was really fun to see our protagonist, Rylla, has two parents! It is such a rarity in the YA genre, but Zavalianos achieved the feat of having both a healthy home and sending our hero off on an adventure very believably.
The story was very enjoyable to read, and I loved how it was a mix of mini adventures within a larger epic quest with many colorful characters and fun surprises along the way. There were great descriptions of the world and each location visited that really brought the setting to life, not to mention that tree portals sound amazing!
I loved the names of the characters all around; they felt like they belonged to the same world, but were still unique and fitting. Moo was one of my favorites! He gave me some really amazing Barbie movie vibes, and was such a sweet friend to Rylla. Caz was also a very fun character to follow, with his own journey and growth to be had in the story apart from being the "love interest", which I really enjoyed.
All of the friendships felt so genuine, starting as strangers and growing in a very realistic and heartwarming way, working through conflict and trials together. The romance was also really well handled, feeling authentic and appropriate for the characters and the story.
The throughline theme of the story was also very well explored: The stones are neither good or bad on their own, but their goodness is determined by the purity of the heart that holds them. We are all blessed with gifts, and they all have a potential for good or for evil, depending on our own heart's motiviations. It was great to see each of the characters be confronted with this decision, and how they all worked through it in different ways.
In the end 5/5 and I will definitely be recommending this book to others!
September 9, 2023
The Earth-Treader is a clean, wholesome and captivating novel that warms the heart and feeds the imagination. If you enjoyed The Lord of the Rings and The Chronicles of Narnia, then this book is right up your alley.
Alissa Zavalianos's The Earth-Treader was, in a word, fantastic. I usually don't buy books without reading them first through the library, but I read the first few chapters on Amazon and I was hooked! I bought it and read it in a few days, it was that good. I tried to keep putting it down to sleep, but I couldn't!
Right away I connected with the characters and was rooting for them the entire time. They felt real and I found myself wanting to know how it ends for them. I appreciated the fact that Zavalianos didn't shy away from the fact that her main character, Rylla, was anxious about her call to action. It felt realistic and refreshing to have a lead (female) character who felt emotions and was honest with herself about negative emotions like fear. I could relate to her, as I deal with anxiety myself. I could see myself in Rylla in different situations throughout the book, and I love it when that happens.
The antagonist's motivations were believable and I can see why he did what he did. Lord Brennigan is a sinister figure and is a very well-written baddie. His introduction after the prologue was memorable and eerie (in the best way possible). I won't go into detail but Chapter Three stuck with me.
Overall, it was worth the read. I wish I could reread it for the first time again!
Alissa Zavalianos's The Earth-Treader was, in a word, fantastic. I usually don't buy books without reading them first through the library, but I read the first few chapters on Amazon and I was hooked! I bought it and read it in a few days, it was that good. I tried to keep putting it down to sleep, but I couldn't!
Right away I connected with the characters and was rooting for them the entire time. They felt real and I found myself wanting to know how it ends for them. I appreciated the fact that Zavalianos didn't shy away from the fact that her main character, Rylla, was anxious about her call to action. It felt realistic and refreshing to have a lead (female) character who felt emotions and was honest with herself about negative emotions like fear. I could relate to her, as I deal with anxiety myself. I could see myself in Rylla in different situations throughout the book, and I love it when that happens.
The antagonist's motivations were believable and I can see why he did what he did. Lord Brennigan is a sinister figure and is a very well-written baddie. His introduction after the prologue was memorable and eerie (in the best way possible). I won't go into detail but Chapter Three stuck with me.
Overall, it was worth the read. I wish I could reread it for the first time again!
December 28, 2022
Not being a cat person, and being rather skeptical of liking a story with one named Moo, I’m happy to report that I loved this book!
I’ve long loved the author’s encouraging posts on bookstagram. And naturally added her books to my to-read shelf because of said posts.
I loved the characters in this book! The pacing is perfect, in spite of my normal dislike for jumping between viewpoints, this style worked in the storytellers favor to keep the story moving and engaging.
There is humor and sorrow, and despair and healing that are so well written into the story that you are feeling and experiencing all the ups and downs with the characters.
The magic system was easy to comprehend and didn’t take too much time to grasp and understand, which is always a plus.
I love the romance!! So much!! It made for a nice balance of storylines and they were neither neglected nor the main focus.
Overall, if you haven’t gotten the drift by now, I loved just about everything about it!!
I’ve long loved the author’s encouraging posts on bookstagram. And naturally added her books to my to-read shelf because of said posts.
I loved the characters in this book! The pacing is perfect, in spite of my normal dislike for jumping between viewpoints, this style worked in the storytellers favor to keep the story moving and engaging.
There is humor and sorrow, and despair and healing that are so well written into the story that you are feeling and experiencing all the ups and downs with the characters.
The magic system was easy to comprehend and didn’t take too much time to grasp and understand, which is always a plus.
I love the romance!! So much!! It made for a nice balance of storylines and they were neither neglected nor the main focus.
Overall, if you haven’t gotten the drift by now, I loved just about everything about it!!
September 7, 2021
Youthful and courageous
I originally expected this story to be a middle-grade type book, but it's not—in a surprisingly good way.
This book is simplistic and beautifully so, but it also delves into the darker parts of humanity and the fears many of us face when growing up.
I loved the characters—Rylla was shockingly relatable, and the others were clear cut and had voices of their own. The world-building was also easy to follow and I had no trouble immersing myself in the world the author created. The story line in some ways reminded me of Lord of the Rings, with the stones of power and how some are corrupt and control its bearers, and in other ways made me think of the Wingfeather Saga in terms of its childlike sweetness and delicacy with darker subject material and especially its villain and his back story.
All in all, this was a very enjoyable story and a great start to Alissa's writing career. Her style of prose is very winsome and I look forward to reading more by her!
I originally expected this story to be a middle-grade type book, but it's not—in a surprisingly good way.
This book is simplistic and beautifully so, but it also delves into the darker parts of humanity and the fears many of us face when growing up.
I loved the characters—Rylla was shockingly relatable, and the others were clear cut and had voices of their own. The world-building was also easy to follow and I had no trouble immersing myself in the world the author created. The story line in some ways reminded me of Lord of the Rings, with the stones of power and how some are corrupt and control its bearers, and in other ways made me think of the Wingfeather Saga in terms of its childlike sweetness and delicacy with darker subject material and especially its villain and his back story.
All in all, this was a very enjoyable story and a great start to Alissa's writing career. Her style of prose is very winsome and I look forward to reading more by her!
November 30, 2022
I’ve read this book twice so far, and will definitely read it yet again!
The world-building is so well done, and the characters have such wonderful arcs (especially Caz and Finn!). The truths of forgiveness, redemption, and courage are beautifully illustrated in this story:)
And let’s not forget the bits of poetry (ugh, I have such a soft spot for good, rhythmic lines lol!) - I just have to share a little piece:
“You fight with shadows
I fight with gold
The darkness you wield
Is all but foretold”
If you enjoy good fantasy, relatable characters, and sweet, non-spicy romance, this is the book for you!
The world-building is so well done, and the characters have such wonderful arcs (especially Caz and Finn!). The truths of forgiveness, redemption, and courage are beautifully illustrated in this story:)
And let’s not forget the bits of poetry (ugh, I have such a soft spot for good, rhythmic lines lol!) - I just have to share a little piece:
“You fight with shadows
I fight with gold
The darkness you wield
Is all but foretold”
If you enjoy good fantasy, relatable characters, and sweet, non-spicy romance, this is the book for you!
May 28, 2021
If you enjoy reading middle grade fantasy with a female lead, then you’ll love Alissa J. Zavalianos’ debut novel, The Earth Treader. She’s a talented author with a kindred spirit: she shares my love of all things Tolkien and Lewis—which of course means that she’s a good person. 😅
As a disclaimer, please note that I don’t often read current middle-grade fantasy—a detriment to my own publishing pursuits. I’m familiar with Cornelia Funke, and I found a lot of similarities between Funke and Zavalianos, a light-hearted magical quality that’s safe for the whole family.
This book will mainly (but not exclusively) appeal to girls between the ages of 10 and 18. It follows Rylla, an eighteen-year-old girl who discovers that she’s an “Earth Treader,” which is sort of like the ‘benders’ of Avatar: The Last Airbender, except the Earth Treaders have power over all aspects of nature (and the setting is pseudo-Renaissance Europe rather than pseudo-Medieval Asia). I found this aspect really interesting.
Where Zavalianos succeeded the most was in her characterizations. She fleshed out distinct, likeable characters that really drive the plot.
While I don’t often enjoy anything romantic, I felt that Zavalianos did a wonderful job including just enough of the romantic element between her leads to develop the characters, but not drive off a guy like me whose only interests lay in swords and lore and sunken isles (fortunately there’s a bit of the latter in here too!).
On the note of swords, Zavalianos has two great battle scenes that kept me on the edge of my seat.
The only fault with the book (if it can really be called a fault) is that at times, the Earth Treaders’ powers seemed a bit arbitrary or irregular, especially the rate at which Earth Treaders acquire their skill, or the amount of required training to be proficient at “Earth Treading,” etc. I think Zavalianos could have drawn from Avatar or Star Wars for a more structured or consistent approach to the Earth Treaders’ powers—and we could have experienced this gradual progression in skill through Rylla. But, this could easily be a matter of taste—the author may be writing in the vein of older fantasies and myths with less structed magic, à la George Macdonald.
If you’re looking for a rating, I’d have to give this 4 out of 5 stars—but keep my disclaimer in mind. Since this isn’t my main genre, take my opinions with a grain of the proverbial salt.
That being said, for someone with my tastes to enjoy this book means that the middle-grade fantasy community should love this—and they do! (Just look at the praise she’s gotten)
Zavalianos is a practiced writer with wonderful technique. Reading her work was a good lesson in writing, and I’ve definitely learned a lot from her.
Check her stuff out, ASAP!
March 16, 2025
Stopped this book at page 115.
I could not get through it... It's been a month, and everytime I pick it up I find myself just cringing inwardly at the lack of... Everything. T-T
The worlbuilding is lacking... Rylla, the main character, is EIGHTEEN?! She acts TWELVE- And her personality is very flat. Moo the cat was supposed to be a fun side character, but he was more annoying for me than anything... Which is unusual, because for the most part, I enjoy fun pets for main characters.
Maybe I just had high expectations for this book... But most things about it feel so childish. That's not a bad thing, but it doesn't excuse the lack of depth.
I heard this book compared to The Hobbit by J.R.R. Tolkien, and I think that's what really set my expectations high. The sudden adventure side of it could be seen as somewhat like The Hobbit, but nothing else is similar to it.
Maybe I'll pick this book up again sometime, but for now, I'm dropping it.
I could not get through it... It's been a month, and everytime I pick it up I find myself just cringing inwardly at the lack of... Everything. T-T
The worlbuilding is lacking... Rylla, the main character, is EIGHTEEN?! She acts TWELVE- And her personality is very flat. Moo the cat was supposed to be a fun side character, but he was more annoying for me than anything... Which is unusual, because for the most part, I enjoy fun pets for main characters.
Maybe I just had high expectations for this book... But most things about it feel so childish. That's not a bad thing, but it doesn't excuse the lack of depth.
I heard this book compared to The Hobbit by J.R.R. Tolkien, and I think that's what really set my expectations high. The sudden adventure side of it could be seen as somewhat like The Hobbit, but nothing else is similar to it.
Maybe I'll pick this book up again sometime, but for now, I'm dropping it.
January 25, 2021
The Earth-Treader instantly whisks you away to a far off land where the connection between man and nature is deep-rooted and the forces of good and evil are at war. From Aylati to the Isles, you’ll feel transported into a new world, each characterized by its own beauty and brokenness. Rylla and her pack of seemingly mismatched companions will quickly win you over. You’ll eagerly keep pace with this clan as they seek to restore peace to the Earthen-Crest kingdom. Alissa Zavalianos brings just the right levity and force to this stunning debut fantasy, and dusts it in a little gold for good measure. A must read!
January 2, 2021
I purchased this book to support a family member of a family member on publishing her first novel and I am so glad I did. I enjoyed this book a lot, despite the fact that fantasy books are not usually a genre I read (I may have to read more). For a first novel, I would say the author did a remarkable job. The story held my interest, the main characters, Rylla and Caz were likable and being a cat lover, I especially liked Moo! If you are a reader of fantasy novels, try out this new author. I don't think you will be disappointed.
December 23, 2020
The Earth-Treader was an incredibly captivating, deeply imaginative, coming-of-age young adult fantasy novel that depicted the triumph of good over evil. There were so many unexpected twists and turns that I kept turning the pages. Alissa Zavalianos successfully created an original world and lovable protagonists. This novel is worth the read for anyone who loves a good adventure story!
December 1, 2020
I don’t read usually read fantasy novels, but once I started reading this book, I simply couldn’t put it down! It is a compelling journey that keeps you enchanted until the end. I definitely recommend it. Can’t wait until someone makes a movie out of it!
August 12, 2023
I loved everything about this book! I am such a fantasy book lover but I cannot stand spice, this book did an AMAZING job at being captivating and whimsical all while remaining a clean read! It quickly became among one of my favorite reads, and I can’t wait to read other books by this author!
December 6, 2020
This book is fantastic. If you enjoy themes of tragedy, perseverance, hope, love, and redemption, with influences from C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien, you will love this book.
May 5, 2022
I cannot wait till my girls are old enough for me to read this book to them! I absolutely loved it. It's a perfect book for a reader of any age.
August 12, 2022
An incredible fantasy read!
July 26, 2022
An amazing debut, by an incredible author. This story, as with all of Alissa's stories, is filled with so much heart, warmth and hope. But as I suspected, this one-the warmest of them all, in my opinion - is my favorite, thus far.
The MC's character development in this story was eloquently done! When I first begun reading, I felt like Rylla was a mere child, but by the end, she had certainly grown into her own. And the other characters were some of my favorite.
There were a few surprises within, which is always fun. I'd even say one...curve ball, perhaps? Either way, beautifully done.
Luckily, since I'm only just reading this one, I don't have to wait too long for the Epilogue, as it was only just released. I would have hated to wait to find out how so many of the characters fared after this story!
The MC's character development in this story was eloquently done! When I first begun reading, I felt like Rylla was a mere child, but by the end, she had certainly grown into her own. And the other characters were some of my favorite.
There were a few surprises within, which is always fun. I'd even say one...curve ball, perhaps? Either way, beautifully done.
Luckily, since I'm only just reading this one, I don't have to wait too long for the Epilogue, as it was only just released. I would have hated to wait to find out how so many of the characters fared after this story!
April 27, 2023
4.5 stars, rounded up!
“Rylla paused to look at her hands. Hands that drew lines on her father’s maps, hands that turned the pages of storybooks, hands that were weak and trembling when battling fear. These hands were nothing great.”
I really enjoyed this book by Alissa J. Zalvanios. It was my first time reading anything by her, and I loved her writing style! Despite having a truly chill inducing villain, this story was fun and the other characters were sweet.
Rylla’s positive attitude and kindness was one of my favourite parts. Moo was so adorable, and I petition for more stories with cat sidekicks.
I'm not into magical fantasy, and there was a bit too magic for my taste, however that is my personal opinion.
Overall, this was a very fun story about finding courage and gaining confidence, with talking animals joining along on the adventure!
“Rylla paused to look at her hands. Hands that drew lines on her father’s maps, hands that turned the pages of storybooks, hands that were weak and trembling when battling fear. These hands were nothing great.”
I really enjoyed this book by Alissa J. Zalvanios. It was my first time reading anything by her, and I loved her writing style! Despite having a truly chill inducing villain, this story was fun and the other characters were sweet.
Rylla’s positive attitude and kindness was one of my favourite parts. Moo was so adorable, and I petition for more stories with cat sidekicks.
I'm not into magical fantasy, and there was a bit too magic for my taste, however that is my personal opinion.
Overall, this was a very fun story about finding courage and gaining confidence, with talking animals joining along on the adventure!
July 10, 2023
a good tale with a plucky heroine
It’s a good story, if you don’t need too much realism in your tales.
Not every story needs to be realistic, and this one is a fun adventure, though it did have me face-palming a few times.
What I liked:
- The MC is likable: spunky and sweet, vulnerable and determined. The other characters are varied and fairly interesting, including the magical, talking animals. Effort is made to make them multilayered and three-dimensional. Although the villain is a bit of a caricature, the back story does depict a believable path to darkness.
- The world is intriguing, although incredibly small. (Conveniently, it only takes a few hours’ travel to get anywhere.) The details at the beginning paint a homey picture of a delightful cottage and a warm, close-knit family. Other parts of the world are also portrayed with vivid imagery. I’d like to see more of it.
- The premise with the power of the Earth-Treaders and the missing stones is excellent, and mostly well done. The end was satisfying, both from a fantasy-adventure standpoint and a romantic one.
- The multiple romantic tensions are cute. There’s definitely some love-at-first-sight dynamics that don’t make a lot of sense—but then love often doesn’t. And hardship is what proves love, and that element is there, which is what saves the romance from being pure fluff. And I love that I could hand this to a 10yo daughter and let her just enjoy the wholesome ride.
- The adventure is mostly fast-paced, with one event leading quickly to another—some dire, some more fun.
- Moo is a cutie. I’d like to have him as a friend.
What I had trouble with:
- There are a lot of coincidences, conveniences and contrivances in the action. The MC just stumbles on the very people or objects she needs to find. She goes long periods of time without seeming to notice hunger. But as I said, not every story needs to feel realistic. This one feels a lot like one of those fairy-tales where the fairy godmother shows up at just the right time. The result is a good tale… but not one that will change me.
- The main love interest is not the sharpest tool in the shed. We literally start his involvement in the story with his overlooking multiple clues—and realizing later what a dolt he is. I like him. I appreciate the personal demons he wrestles with and his determination to find atonement. He’s honorable. But he’s a fairy-tale knight, not necessarily one I’d like to meet in real life.
- The talking animals thing is great, but the execution of it had some bumps. The cat is perceived, by those who can’t understand what he says, to meow a lot. But if his communications with the MC are so vocal, that leaves a number of times when quiet conversation between them ought to be awkward, but isn’t. (He does whisper at times. But still.) The part where the owls are so erudite they have to speak in ornate, complex phrases was I think meant to be entertaining, but it fell flat for me. (What little horse speech there is was really nicely done though.)
- The writing was sometimes a little too ornate, or did odd things grammatically. Not a show-stopper, but I prefer the words become invisible, pulling me into a story and letting me lose myself in it, rather than sounding in my head as I read.
- I liked the characters, but I didn’t love them. I enjoyed reading about them, but I’m not sad to part with them. I could tell the author saw them, and was trying to portray them, as multifaceted and deep, but I didn’t really feel the magic. That’s probably the main reason I give this 4 stars instead of 5.
- The romance is cute, and I’m glad for them that they get their happy ending, but I’m not really feeling my heart pounding along with them.
I guess my takeaway is that this was more of a “tell me a tale” kind of book—and tales can be highly interesting—than “drop me in the story and make me feel every second of it.”
All in all, it’s a recommendable tale, with a plucky heroine who overcomes her own self-obstacles to save the day, with much-needed help from some worthy friends along the way!
It’s a good story, if you don’t need too much realism in your tales.
Not every story needs to be realistic, and this one is a fun adventure, though it did have me face-palming a few times.
What I liked:
- The MC is likable: spunky and sweet, vulnerable and determined. The other characters are varied and fairly interesting, including the magical, talking animals. Effort is made to make them multilayered and three-dimensional. Although the villain is a bit of a caricature, the back story does depict a believable path to darkness.
- The world is intriguing, although incredibly small. (Conveniently, it only takes a few hours’ travel to get anywhere.) The details at the beginning paint a homey picture of a delightful cottage and a warm, close-knit family. Other parts of the world are also portrayed with vivid imagery. I’d like to see more of it.
- The premise with the power of the Earth-Treaders and the missing stones is excellent, and mostly well done. The end was satisfying, both from a fantasy-adventure standpoint and a romantic one.
- The multiple romantic tensions are cute. There’s definitely some love-at-first-sight dynamics that don’t make a lot of sense—but then love often doesn’t. And hardship is what proves love, and that element is there, which is what saves the romance from being pure fluff. And I love that I could hand this to a 10yo daughter and let her just enjoy the wholesome ride.
- The adventure is mostly fast-paced, with one event leading quickly to another—some dire, some more fun.
- Moo is a cutie. I’d like to have him as a friend.
What I had trouble with:
- There are a lot of coincidences, conveniences and contrivances in the action. The MC just stumbles on the very people or objects she needs to find. She goes long periods of time without seeming to notice hunger. But as I said, not every story needs to feel realistic. This one feels a lot like one of those fairy-tales where the fairy godmother shows up at just the right time. The result is a good tale… but not one that will change me.
- The main love interest is not the sharpest tool in the shed. We literally start his involvement in the story with his overlooking multiple clues—and realizing later what a dolt he is. I like him. I appreciate the personal demons he wrestles with and his determination to find atonement. He’s honorable. But he’s a fairy-tale knight, not necessarily one I’d like to meet in real life.
- The talking animals thing is great, but the execution of it had some bumps. The cat is perceived, by those who can’t understand what he says, to meow a lot. But if his communications with the MC are so vocal, that leaves a number of times when quiet conversation between them ought to be awkward, but isn’t. (He does whisper at times. But still.) The part where the owls are so erudite they have to speak in ornate, complex phrases was I think meant to be entertaining, but it fell flat for me. (What little horse speech there is was really nicely done though.)
- The writing was sometimes a little too ornate, or did odd things grammatically. Not a show-stopper, but I prefer the words become invisible, pulling me into a story and letting me lose myself in it, rather than sounding in my head as I read.
- I liked the characters, but I didn’t love them. I enjoyed reading about them, but I’m not sad to part with them. I could tell the author saw them, and was trying to portray them, as multifaceted and deep, but I didn’t really feel the magic. That’s probably the main reason I give this 4 stars instead of 5.
- The romance is cute, and I’m glad for them that they get their happy ending, but I’m not really feeling my heart pounding along with them.
I guess my takeaway is that this was more of a “tell me a tale” kind of book—and tales can be highly interesting—than “drop me in the story and make me feel every second of it.”
All in all, it’s a recommendable tale, with a plucky heroine who overcomes her own self-obstacles to save the day, with much-needed help from some worthy friends along the way!
May 3, 2023
Dear Alissa,
To be honest with you dear friend, I don’t know how to start this review without going into tears.
Nothing I can say would do your writing proud. Rylla, Caz, Moo, Jovin, and Elowen were beautiful characters inside and out with their flaws and personalities. They’re all so fleshed out and your world building was magnificent as Lord of the Rings. I believe Tolkien would be impressed of you.
Your story of The Earth Treader weaved Christian themes subtly which helped me be more grounded. To tell myself more that I can’t let fear rule me…to rely on my friends and better myself, so like Lord Brennigan, I’m not ensnared by hatred and darkness. Moo was of course the best companion and he was a sweetheart. I felt like I was receiving a reminder from you every time I opened your book at work every day…when the anxiety and the sadness dragged me down.
You said “It’s okay. There’s nothing to be afraid of. I’m always here to support you. You can do this.”
You came into my life when God and Jesus wanted me to read your book and warm my heart with light when I was so close to losing a constant battle, being told that I’m not good enough, you have no future.
I’ve been told awful things. Gut-wrenching things. I know I’m not the only one out there whose been told bad things. I want to be good enough. I want to have a future. I don’t want to give up when everyone tells me that I can’t. You wrapped your arm around my shoulder and said “Don’t listen to them. I’ve got your back. I know it’s hard, but I won’t let you fall. He won’t let you give up either.” I guess praying every day on my morning drive to work did make a difference after all, huh? Crying after work after every burnout at night didn’t help, but you always came back to help me. Reading your book lit a fire in me, one that I was so excited to get back through all the headaches and heartache.
Alissa, thank you for sharing your story with me. If you read this, just know that I love your heart. I love our friendship and what we have. Don’t you ever stop being you. Don’t give up on writing even when you come close to walking away. Don’t let others dictate how you want to write. Write the words in your heart. You planted a wishing seed in my soul. I’ve gained courage like a Earth Treader. And I hope to walk through the Endlewood hoping to meet you one day and explore new adventures with you. You’re the sweetest friend and I am so blessed to have met you.
Your best friend,
Lauren
To be honest with you dear friend, I don’t know how to start this review without going into tears.
Nothing I can say would do your writing proud. Rylla, Caz, Moo, Jovin, and Elowen were beautiful characters inside and out with their flaws and personalities. They’re all so fleshed out and your world building was magnificent as Lord of the Rings. I believe Tolkien would be impressed of you.
Your story of The Earth Treader weaved Christian themes subtly which helped me be more grounded. To tell myself more that I can’t let fear rule me…to rely on my friends and better myself, so like Lord Brennigan, I’m not ensnared by hatred and darkness. Moo was of course the best companion and he was a sweetheart. I felt like I was receiving a reminder from you every time I opened your book at work every day…when the anxiety and the sadness dragged me down.
You said “It’s okay. There’s nothing to be afraid of. I’m always here to support you. You can do this.”
You came into my life when God and Jesus wanted me to read your book and warm my heart with light when I was so close to losing a constant battle, being told that I’m not good enough, you have no future.
I’ve been told awful things. Gut-wrenching things. I know I’m not the only one out there whose been told bad things. I want to be good enough. I want to have a future. I don’t want to give up when everyone tells me that I can’t. You wrapped your arm around my shoulder and said “Don’t listen to them. I’ve got your back. I know it’s hard, but I won’t let you fall. He won’t let you give up either.” I guess praying every day on my morning drive to work did make a difference after all, huh? Crying after work after every burnout at night didn’t help, but you always came back to help me. Reading your book lit a fire in me, one that I was so excited to get back through all the headaches and heartache.
Alissa, thank you for sharing your story with me. If you read this, just know that I love your heart. I love our friendship and what we have. Don’t you ever stop being you. Don’t give up on writing even when you come close to walking away. Don’t let others dictate how you want to write. Write the words in your heart. You planted a wishing seed in my soul. I’ve gained courage like a Earth Treader. And I hope to walk through the Endlewood hoping to meet you one day and explore new adventures with you. You’re the sweetest friend and I am so blessed to have met you.
Your best friend,
Lauren
May 23, 2021
3.5 stars
I found The Earth-Treader a mix of fairytale/folktale and fantasy. When I began reading I thought I may have made a mistake and was reading a book aimed at young teens, due to the simple language of the folk tale style. The beginning felt a little clunky. At other times I was irritated by the long sentences with constant similies.
The book soon becomes a story of Rylla’s quest or journey to find stones to save the kingdom. This part is more like a fantasy novel. We have magical creatures, sea serpents, magic stones, bad guys, good guys and a talking cat.
For me the book improved as we moved the plot forward into the quest fully. There are some terrific scenes which I enjoyed. I felt much of the dialogue was awkward and did not have a natural flow. Hopefully all these skills will sharpen up with more experience.
This author has lots of potential and I wish her all the best in her next writings.
I found The Earth-Treader a mix of fairytale/folktale and fantasy. When I began reading I thought I may have made a mistake and was reading a book aimed at young teens, due to the simple language of the folk tale style. The beginning felt a little clunky. At other times I was irritated by the long sentences with constant similies.
The book soon becomes a story of Rylla’s quest or journey to find stones to save the kingdom. This part is more like a fantasy novel. We have magical creatures, sea serpents, magic stones, bad guys, good guys and a talking cat.
For me the book improved as we moved the plot forward into the quest fully. There are some terrific scenes which I enjoyed. I felt much of the dialogue was awkward and did not have a natural flow. Hopefully all these skills will sharpen up with more experience.
This author has lots of potential and I wish her all the best in her next writings.
May 26, 2021
The Earth-Treader is an unforgettable story of finding one's true self through the hard work of facing fears and persevering through doubts. In her debut book, Alissa J. Zavalianos takes the reader on an incredible journey through the memorable landscapes of Earthen-Crest kingdoms and introduces us to the plights and secrets of intriguing, lovable characters. This book has everything I would hope for in a fantasy, adventure story- magical creatures, unexpected twists, choices and challenges, good versus evil, a dash of romance, and triumphs in small and epic proportions. I hope there will be a second adventure in the Earthern-crest kingdoms soon because I can't wait to "go back" and explore some more!
August 30, 2021
I can not say enough about this book. It was amazing. It has talking animals, powerfully magical gemstones, sea creatures, evil villains, love, and friendship. What else could you ask for in a book! Rylla is like a lot of us, afraid of the unknown but longing to know more. I loved watching her grow in charter and strength. Along the way she makes a group of friends that teach her to trust others, even when she doesn’t want to, and also encourage her to believe in her own strengths. This is a wonderful coming of age book that I would highly recommend.
November 30, 2020
An amazing debut novel from Alissa Zavalianos! I loved all the characters but my favorite were the animals. Not since The chronicles of Narnia have I been so attached to animal characters. The author does an amazing job making the animal voices believable and funny! This world was so fun to explore and I hope the author decides to write more books set in the Earthen-Crest Kingdom.
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