This is more like a 3.5 or 3.75 rating. I thoroughly enjoyed this novella. My main complaint is that I just wanted more. I know this is a novella, but I think maybe this story would have been better suited as a full-length novel. I believe certain stories are more suited to be novellas and I also believe them to be a lot harder to wtite. For me, at least, I've always struggled with getting what I want to write or say into a small and concise amount of words. I think that was the issue for me with this book. I wanted more development and more characterization. There were also moments that I think were kind of skimmed over which made it feel a little rushed. When Emilio is seen by Louisa making out with that girl we never really got his narrative on that. I think that would have added a little more depth to his character, especially because at times we did get his perspective. Another aspect of the book that felt bereft was after the party when Daniel and Louisa went out those few times. I think the author was trying to portray the insignificance of Daniel. However, I think it would have been worth it to the reader. Throughout, the novella I was also wondering about what exactly Emilio looked like. I assumed he was Hispanic based on him knowing Spanish so well and his name, but I don't recall if that was ever confirmed 🤔. I also remember him being close to Louisa's height. Again, I'm not sure if this was a conscious decision in order to forgo his appearance or if the author kind of forgot🤷♀️.
Having given those critiques I loved reading this book and just wanted it to last longer. I loved what Emilio said to Louisa about how after she started dressing differently, he said that "she looked more like herself". I would love for someone to tell me that. I also enjoyed Emilio and Louisa's discussion on Persuasion by Jane Austen (even though I've never read it). Emilio also made a good and interesting point about the possible negative effects of Jane Austen's novels on our romantic relationships since she was published.