I wanted to love this book so bad! I got it on release day and read the first 87 pages that weekend, and then got the rest when the kindle version was fixed (the author was great about it). But in the end it was just okay.
What worked:
The premise - a woman gets turned into a wolf shifter for love, but it goes horribly wrong when her mate rejects her alpha status. With nowhere else to go, she joins the Army in an all-shifter unit.
The Setting - What better place for a newly minted alpha b*tch to cut her teeth than a basic training unit full of shifters?
Hunter - The goofy beta who has a big heart, not a lot of brains, and lots of shifter knowledge.
What didn’t work:
-Riley never grew up. I was disappointed in the lack of character development we saw in the main character. For an Alpha, she seemed to really only be a bystander in her own life. By the end of the book, I was hoping to see her really stand up for herself and her team, and she didn’t.
-Attempted rape as a plot point. Maybe I have just read too many books lately that use rape and attempted rape as a plot device, but I’m kind of sick of it. In my opinion, rape for the character development of women is kind of grasping. But then to have it happen numerous times to the same supposedly alpha character, and she never even tells her supposed mates about it?
-The relationship between Riley and the guys. I just wasn’t feeling it. I feel like I was being told, not shown, that something was developing between them. But to be honest, even at the end, it seemed they were still kind of stuck at friend zone. Plus, the book was no-burn, no sex for Riley, and I was not expecting that.
Maybe my expectations were too high? Maybe I just went in with some baggage? I enjoyed the book, it was fine, but I didn’t love it. I will probably still read the next one though. If nothing else, just to see if Riley finally gets laid.