"With the strength of an army and the fury of Life, the Wind lifted and flung through the streets. It marched from the highest peaks above them." Straight away, readers are thrown into the story in a very intriguing way. The very moment they entered the tavern scene, I was indeed hooked to the overall story. There are a few positives and negatives. First, I would like to say that this author is a brilliant writer!
I look forward to her future work. Coming up with a magic system that makes sense that readers can follow can be complicated. This is where things can get dicey.
Storm is an overall great character- well developed, harsh, sarcastic, and you can't help but want to be her friend and know she is a kind of badass.
Storm is not this all-powerful being that can't be stopped. She is vulnerable, hurt, and honestly, it seems more realistic that way. I dislike overpowered characters unless there is a reason for it. Storm is not that overpowered character.
Lots of descriptions throughout the action scenes. You're always going to have some readers like it; some do not. So I say this is a positive because she writes it well.
In the first chapter, there is a character that is introduced, Marvin. He is one of my favorites throughout the book.
However, there is a line, and if you miss it, then you may not realize "Marvin" and "Mareau" are the same character. The character is introduced as Marvin until he meets up with Storm, and she casually asks him, "You are Mareau aren't you?" to which he is, and then the author switches his name from Marvin to Mareau now that the reader knows his actual name.
Did I mention how much I love Mareau's character? All throughout the book, you can't help but switch back and forth of wanting more from each character. Not that the author doesn't do a good job. Just that we want more. :)
Yes, there are a lot of characters introduced within several chapters. I think this is okay, but I can understand some reader's concern with wanting to make sure that they keep up with all the characters within the story. Pretty sure Game of Thrones has way more characters and confusing parts, anyway.
Now for the magic: Yes, there are parts that are confusing. The reason being is sometimes Storm, for instance, can use all the distinct elements; then, she can't. It is not clear why or how this works. Also, who has magic? Is it everyone, and it just depends on the range of power? But this isn't the case either.
Overall this book isn't bad. It's intriguing, with enjoyable characters and scenes throughout. The magic system is indeed confusing, but if she continues on with the book, perhaps things will be better explained. :) I read this book in one sitting, and I enjoyed it.