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After defeating his enemies in a glorious battle, Bradley was awarded by General Fluxi himself. His name spread throughout Arcana, reaching even the doors of those residing safely in the Capital of the Nine Nations. With such a grandiose display, the Dark Races quickly unveiled just who their nemesis was, and they wanted vengeance. Now stationed in the grueling deserts of Arcana, Bradley must fend off against the Dark Races, all while watching for an abrupt attack from behind. How will he survive his dire straits?
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190 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 15, 2020
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December 28, 2020
Being short is not the worst of it
For one, there is no tower in this book. Only 1 or2 chapters has skills or leveling. The first 4 chapter is mainly monologue. 90 percent of the book is talking and not doing anything. Felt like a small setup book.
For one, there is no tower in this book. Only 1 or2 chapters has skills or leveling. The first 4 chapter is mainly monologue. 90 percent of the book is talking and not doing anything. Felt like a small setup book.
December 19, 2020
Good title.
I enjoyed whole book. My only grip is that first half of the book was little bit scatterbrained and focused on things that didn;t really affected MC in long way. Preparing his soldiers for war could have been shorter (for ex. when MC given order to cut short bullying in army. it was interesting but took too much time)
I enjoyed whole book. My only grip is that first half of the book was little bit scatterbrained and focused on things that didn;t really affected MC in long way. Preparing his soldiers for war could have been shorter (for ex. when MC given order to cut short bullying in army. it was interesting but took too much time)
February 17, 2021
Nothing much happens, plot is ridiculous.
Bradley supposedly enters the army because of his weakness in military tactics and is somehow a natural genius at it. Snooze. Its like reading an arrogant man's diary.
Bradley supposedly enters the army because of his weakness in military tactics and is somehow a natural genius at it. Snooze. Its like reading an arrogant man's diary.
January 4, 2021
It's gonna be a no from me
This should not have been published yet. It's riddled with spelling and syntax errors, no character progression, and practically no plot. Nothing really happens in this book and the plot is not progressed in any meaningful way. This wasn't a tower climbing or rebirth book at all, it was just about a single skirmish from a military perspective. I wish there was something better to say, but it just didn't have any of the elements that make an effective story.
This should not have been published yet. It's riddled with spelling and syntax errors, no character progression, and practically no plot. Nothing really happens in this book and the plot is not progressed in any meaningful way. This wasn't a tower climbing or rebirth book at all, it was just about a single skirmish from a military perspective. I wish there was something better to say, but it just didn't have any of the elements that make an effective story.
February 24, 2021
Way too short & no MC progression
Very little of the things I like in LitRPG books. I guess that would make this more of a GameLit one. No real stats or character progression were mentioned until I was 75% through the book.
Where’s the vampire/nephilim/sun mage gritty details? So many cool aspects of this character, none of which get fleshed out. The book mostly focuses on him as a general.
Way too short. One of the things I hate the most. This made novellas look long lol. Read it in one evening.
Very little of the things I like in LitRPG books. I guess that would make this more of a GameLit one. No real stats or character progression were mentioned until I was 75% through the book.
Where’s the vampire/nephilim/sun mage gritty details? So many cool aspects of this character, none of which get fleshed out. The book mostly focuses on him as a general.
Way too short. One of the things I hate the most. This made novellas look long lol. Read it in one evening.
June 16, 2021
Good enough
I enjoyed the story for what it is, a simple entertaining read. I do hope that the future books will have some actual character growth. As it stands now the MC seems flat and one sided. While, there are a few moments of introspection and what looks like change, they were quickly cast aside and the MC become a single note again. Even the side characters are pretty one dimensional.
But again, I enjoyed it the story for what it is.
I enjoyed the story for what it is, a simple entertaining read. I do hope that the future books will have some actual character growth. As it stands now the MC seems flat and one sided. While, there are a few moments of introspection and what looks like change, they were quickly cast aside and the MC become a single note again. Even the side characters are pretty one dimensional.
But again, I enjoyed it the story for what it is.
December 22, 2020
A let down
The editing in this series has never really been up to snuff but this one felt more sloppy than the previous 2. Also there wasn't really anything to drive the plot only a small battle and a bunch of filler. The story wasn't garbage ie a 1 star but it wasn't a masterwork at 5 stars. I look forward to book 4 and I hope it is better than this one.
The editing in this series has never really been up to snuff but this one felt more sloppy than the previous 2. Also there wasn't really anything to drive the plot only a small battle and a bunch of filler. The story wasn't garbage ie a 1 star but it wasn't a masterwork at 5 stars. I look forward to book 4 and I hope it is better than this one.
December 26, 2020
Great addition
This was a good addition to the series. I'm hoping there's more. Things have progressed well in this book though Things Are at some points, a bit slower but that is to be expected when writing a series if you don't want to skip too much. Definitely eager to see what happens next.
This was a good addition to the series. I'm hoping there's more. Things have progressed well in this book though Things Are at some points, a bit slower but that is to be expected when writing a series if you don't want to skip too much. Definitely eager to see what happens next.
January 2, 2021
Great addition!
I've just come into contact recently with Tristan work. I love the story arcs he portrays. While it feels a little rushed i can appreciate the quickness the stories are published. Waiting for months on end for the next installment frankly sucks and I'll gladly take a lil rushed with good writing. Thanks for your hard work and keep them coming.
I've just come into contact recently with Tristan work. I love the story arcs he portrays. While it feels a little rushed i can appreciate the quickness the stories are published. Waiting for months on end for the next installment frankly sucks and I'll gladly take a lil rushed with good writing. Thanks for your hard work and keep them coming.
December 31, 2020
Surprisingly good.
The author continues his work while the are some grammar issues it does not take anything away from the story and I look forward to the next installment of the saga.
The author continues his work while the are some grammar issues it does not take anything away from the story and I look forward to the next installment of the saga.
December 31, 2020
Slow build
The story was good but slow in building. The MC is building his army but had little overall progression until the end. The story didn’t progress as much but still an enjoyable read.
The story was good but slow in building. The MC is building his army but had little overall progression until the end. The story didn’t progress as much but still an enjoyable read.
January 6, 2021
Good third book
Enough character progression and som class changes I didn’t see coming. I’m really interested to see how the vampires turns out and what happens with the new military developments.
Enough character progression and som class changes I didn’t see coming. I’m really interested to see how the vampires turns out and what happens with the new military developments.
February 17, 2024
The bad editing is a real shame!
The author totally forgot why the protagonist went to the place - to learn strategy and tactics which he lacked in his last life..
Most of the book reads like a dull filler as nothing happens and nothing makes the protagonist more sympathetic.
The author totally forgot why the protagonist went to the place - to learn strategy and tactics which he lacked in his last life..
Most of the book reads like a dull filler as nothing happens and nothing makes the protagonist more sympathetic.
December 21, 2020
Fun
The main character is not what he seems and makes for an entertaining read. A good book and a great time will be had.
The main character is not what he seems and makes for an entertaining read. A good book and a great time will be had.
December 24, 2020
Good enough.
Not as much progress as the other two books. Still I’m looking forward to the next in the series. Bye
Not as much progress as the other two books. Still I’m looking forward to the next in the series. Bye
December 24, 2020
Next pls
Love the storyline. With each chapter, it gets more interesting.
Can't wait until next book comes out. Hopefully pretty soon.
Love the storyline. With each chapter, it gets more interesting.
Can't wait until next book comes out. Hopefully pretty soon.
December 29, 2020
A nice continuation of tb story
While a bit brief in length the story is actually nice, showing Bradley to develop and love h towards his goals, my only improvement would be the need to incorporate his vampirism into the story a bit more.
While a bit brief in length the story is actually nice, showing Bradley to develop and love h towards his goals, my only improvement would be the need to incorporate his vampirism into the story a bit more.
January 2, 2021
Nice
Progression i think? MC is gradually getting more powerful and his plans are moving forward steadily. Too many unknowns though
Progression i think? MC is gradually getting more powerful and his plans are moving forward steadily. Too many unknowns though
January 4, 2021
Good
A good continuation of the series. But very short compared to previous books in this series. Focused on one area, it is setting up the events for the future series
A good continuation of the series. But very short compared to previous books in this series. Focused on one area, it is setting up the events for the future series
January 14, 2021
Filler
Not a lot goes on in this book, seemed to not flow very well either. Hopefully the next book gets back on track and we can see Bradley progress.
Not a lot goes on in this book, seemed to not flow very well either. Hopefully the next book gets back on track and we can see Bradley progress.
January 23, 2021
Great story
The MC grows in power, but the future has changed and he with it. A great look at the fluid nature of things
The MC grows in power, but the future has changed and he with it. A great look at the fluid nature of things
February 12, 2021
Excellent
Well written and the characters are very relatable and has a smooth storyline. I would definitely recommend you try this book!!!
Well written and the characters are very relatable and has a smooth storyline. I would definitely recommend you try this book!!!
February 13, 2021
Brilliant
It's a brilliant book and a great continuation from the previous one and I can't wait for the next installment of the series.
It's a brilliant book and a great continuation from the previous one and I can't wait for the next installment of the series.
February 14, 2021
Good
A good entry into the book series, I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book released.
A good entry into the book series, I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book released.
February 14, 2021
Loved it! A little short though.
This was another great book in this series. It was a little short but quality over quanity. Definetly one of my favs.
This was another great book in this series. It was a little short but quality over quanity. Definetly one of my favs.
February 14, 2021
Another good read
I love the series and cannot wait to see how it progresses. I read through them so fast, I can only hope the next book is longer!
I love the series and cannot wait to see how it progresses. I read through them so fast, I can only hope the next book is longer!
February 19, 2021
Good read
The book is well put together and will keep you reading along its next iteration,a the story is good and well stung together
The book is well put together and will keep you reading along its next iteration,a the story is good and well stung together
March 8, 2021
Great series
Love the series. I started reading it at the same time as dungeon slayer series. Just wish that it would hit Audible one of these days
Love the series. I started reading it at the same time as dungeon slayer series. Just wish that it would hit Audible one of these days
August 28, 2021
Enjoying it so far !
Not bad really enjoying the series. This book seemed a little off from the others. Lost attention a bit but love the story and system looking forward to more !
Not bad really enjoying the series. This book seemed a little off from the others. Lost attention a bit but love the story and system looking forward to more !
May 25, 2022
Been liking this series a lot
BUT in each book their are Grammer errors so plz look back through your work and fix them, other than that great story.
BUT in each book their are Grammer errors so plz look back through your work and fix them, other than that great story.
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