Aparecium

by LadyKenz347

Hermione Granger has been away from London for six and a half years. When she returns, her son in tow, she runs into the one person she was hellbent on avoiding.

Genres: Fan Fiction, Romance, Fantasy, Fiction, Romantasy, Harry Potter

131 pages, ebook

Published July 14, 2020

Reviews

[Kate · Rating 4 out of 5]

Bash Ron any day of the week.

[Allyson · Rating 2 out of 5]

I need to stop picking up fanfics recommended on TikTok…

[Macee Grisenti · Rating 4 out of 5]

Tw: past t*rture, bl**d, ect, name calling, prejudice

This was a cute story. It was super easy to read and mostly fun. It was a cute story, but I wanted to see Hermione fighting more that Liam was in fact only her child. I know that Draco is the father but that doesn’t make him a dad or allow him any rights. Maybe it’s different there, but idk she could’ve argued more and I kinda wanted to see her try. I get that she was going to tell him guess eventually but this seemed off.
Hermione would’ve fought harder. Also I wanted more from Draco when it came to making her come back to life he manor. Like she was legit hurt badly there and he just is like in you go! And then while she’s clearly panicking he does very little.

Like I said though I enjoyed the book their kid was hilarious. Exactly as you’d expect from those two. Kinda wish we could’ve had an epilogue where we see Liam get sorted or any other kids they may have had. I was a little sad to see it just end. The ending was adorable though.

Tropes: enemies to lovers, accidental pregnancy, hidden baby, HEA, matchmaking, magic, jealousy, Ron bashing

Spice: 🌶️
Steam: 🔥
Sweetness: 💗💗💗

[Nia · Rating 2 out of 5]

Too rushed and simple. Out of character actions, unrealistic children... I liked the concept, but not the execution.

[Emily · Rating 4 out of 5]

Me reading dramione, in sickness and in health (mostly sickness at the moment though)

[Abby Kirkness · Rating 5 out of 5]

Man I enjoyed this so very much I love a bit of Ron bashing although Hermione was a bit of an egg at the start but Liam was an absolute delight I loved the whole thing

[R1vana]

Dramione:
-one night stand
-accidental hidden pregnancy (6yrs later)
-sarcastic kid (Liam is Dramione’s kid; ex: His small brows tugged together and he turned to Draco with a stern expression. "You really are rubbish at contraception charms.")

[ariel · Rating 4 out of 5]

lighthearted cute dad draco?? yes plz!!! (if you are anyone but kayla pretend you can’t see this)

[Celine · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 ⭐️: Another great Dramione fan fic. The middle bit Draco didn’t click for me as some other Dracos but otherwise I loved it. Thanks for sharing and writing this story for us 🫶

[Hayden Wilson · Rating 2 out of 5]

Dipping my toes into fanfic for my girl Clancy. Am I shipping Dramoine now? This definitely needed a QA team. Not exactly my usual genre, but I’m here to entertain the fantasy. A little cringe, but also kinda cute. I’d definitely come back to this fanfic world again.

[Anahí ✨ · Rating 3 out of 5]

I actually enjoyed this one. Specially the first half. Characterization wasn’t that good to some characters particularly Ron. It’s really short so it wasn’t that big on character development so sometimes everything happened really fast with little to no explanation.

[Ness · Rating 2 out of 5]

DNF.
I got bored and the writing fell flat for me :/

[Jane’t Alexandria · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 stars cause fanfiction can’t be given anything less than in my head cause they took the time to write it and build the story for FREE and FUN

[Dani (_heyitsdanii) · Rating 2 out of 5]

I found about this one on a TikTok, I thought I was going to like it more but it was s rushed it didn't really enjoyed it.

[Gio Herrera · Rating 3 out of 5]

Está ameno, fácil de leer y la trama es muy linda, nunca me cansaré de ver a Draco en su faceta de papá >.<

Lo único que no me gustó mucho es q Mione no le dio más batalla por las cosas que querían que hiciera Liam, entiendo que mucho de su actuar fue desde la culpa pero aún así me hubiera gustado que fuera un poco más firme en cuanto a cambios vitales entiendo la vida de Liam.

Ya había leído a Scorp pero ver este nuevo personaje que es Liam fue muy refrescante. Also que risa me dió el final y lo que le dice a su papá.

[tori · Rating 1 out of 5]

Nah this was just so bad. I’d say half baked at best but it’s the equivalent of a crumbl cookie. No plot. I have so many unanswered questions. I almost dnfed but I was HOPING so much that it would get better. It did not. I’ve concluded that Ron and Pansy in this dramione au deserve each other. And while VERY uncharacteristic, Lucius and Narcissa were very cute as grandparents.

I can’t even recommend a song for this fic bc there’s no theme to grab from.

[Gabriela M · Rating 3 out of 5]

Dramione fanfic. Around 21 years after the war.
Hermione gets pregnant and hides the child from the child’s father, appearing in London again when the kid is six.

Not bad. A good amount of Ron bashing. Lovely Narcissa and Lucius.
I didn’t love that the child’s name is Liam and was not named after the stars, as Black tradition.
The fic could have been longer and more fleshed up, but it wasn’t bad.

[Isi Cárdenas · Rating 3 out of 5]

Amé el fanfic

[Yas · Rating 3 out of 5]

this was so cute🥺 LOVE LOVE LOVE

[Meena ❤️ · Rating 5 out of 5]

Stfu cause why was Liam was so cute he was the perfect mix of Draco and hermione and for that alone I gave it a 5⭐️

[Veronika Gazárková · Rating 3 out of 5]

Cute

[Abby Chiles · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5

[Alva Schwung · Rating 4 out of 5]

stunning, absolutely stunning. daddy draco malfoy. ugghhhhhhh !!!!!!!!

[Indiana Hatzakortzian · Rating 4 out of 5]

✨ 4 Stars ✨

For the ‘brightest witch of her age’ Hermione sure does do a lot of silly things in this one, but oh did it revive my love for Dramione. I’m pretty sure you’ll see my good read embark on a fan fiction kick following this one, because I have a taste for more. Ronald Weasley you are so silly, but I was happy to get the Draco/Potter friendship.

The premise of this one was cute and I do love the way that Lucius was actually low-key likeable.

[Ella Harris · Rating 3 out of 5]

Starting the year off with a guilty pleasure. Don’t look at me like that.

[Nelly · Rating 2 out of 5]

This story had a great concept but could have been proofread and gone through some alterations. In the story the child is 6 but acts and speaks more like a teenager to young adult which made it difficult to read and stay engaged. There were some instances of using an incorrect word, calling Liam by a different name or referring to Albus but using Liam's name. It was a fantastic idea but really unrealistic especially when it seems to take place over a few days-weeks.

I am not familiar with the author and didn't read any reviews going into it, but I did like the story just needed some editing especially with the unrealistic child aspect. I would have liked it to be a much longer story, with Hermione fighting a lot more about going to the Manor as well as fighting for her only child. The section talking about her trauma with what happened with Bellatrix is very short and could have played a lot more into the anxiety and the trauma instead of being an afterthought that leads to an almost kiss. It left a lot to be desired and I would have loved to see it expanded.

I did enjoy the story, and the idea. It just left a lot to be desired.

[❥︎ · Rating 3 out of 5]

I've recently became obsessed with DILF/MILF Dramione and this one was another one I really liked!

The writing was once again good, like it always is with this author, and the plot is nice. The length is also amazing (58K+ words), although it could be divided to more chapters (maybe like 20).

However, I really didn't like Hermione in the beginning. She sort of blamed Draco, when she was the one who didn't told him about their child and tried to excuse it. Even towards the end, she made few comments about Liam being HER son. But she still had her character development in the last few chapters, which I'm glad.

Overall, this fic was pretty good and I'm totally reading from this author again!!

[Belle S. · Rating 5 out of 5]

Ok I loved this - start to finish. It was so cozy and romantic. Liam being a little replica of Draco, Harry the absolute loyal goofball, Ginny forever entertaining, and Draco being kind and warm and protective and funny as usual, bonus points for a warm Narcissa and beguiled Lucius. It made me laugh out loud and cry happy tears. It was so beautiful and well paced and didn’t waffle on but got straight to the point. Both Hermione and Draco were likeable in this one and real grown ups about their feelings.
Loved it.
Like a warm cup of tea on a rainy day.

[I'm Fine, Just Tired · Rating 4 out of 5]

Aparecium

HERO /HEROINE
-Hermione returns to London with a well hidden secret. A six year old son, Liam.
-Draco is rebuilding his life after the war and works with the Auror Department at the Ministry of Magic

OVERALL THOUGHTS
Over ten years after the war, Hermione finds herself a single mother living in the States. Her son, Liam, is six and a brilliant little boy who loves to learn. He is also the most annoying and sarcastic boy ever, which makes sense once you realise his father is Draco Malfoy.

This is a wonderful short story of how Hermione Granger had a one night stand that changed her life.

It'd be unfair to rate this anything less than a 4. Fanfiction is a gift and I religiously read fics every day. However, there are some serious typos, confusing names, and unfortunately only one chapter of Draco’s POV.

WHAT I DIDN’T LIKE
Hermione did not act like book Hermione at all. She was mostly out of her element and gave up a lot. There are some serious typos, confusing names, and unfortunately only one chapter of Draco’s POV.

SAFETY

AGE:
Hermione and Draco are in their 30s

SEXUAL HISTORY:
Hermione has been celibate during their almost seven years a part. And I'm not sure but Draco hinted that there hasn't been anyone comparable to her in their time apart. Idk if that means he was celibate but I took it as that.

CONDOMS:
In the form of contraceptive potions and spells.

TUMMY BUTTERFLIES:
None to be honest. This has smut but it wasn't very well done.

PUSH/PULL:
Hermione pulls away a bit but not for long.

SEPARATION:
Over six years

CHEATING:
None

OW (Other Woman)/OM (Other Man) drama:
Nope

SEX SCENE WITH OW/OM:
Nope

POSSIBLE PET PEEVES/TRIGGERS
Reference to past cheating, slut shaming, pregnancy, discussion of pregnancy issues, prejudice, PTSD, alcoholism, feelings of abandonment, secret baby, explicit sex scenes

HEA/HFN:
HEAHermione and Draco end up getting engaged and are expecting a sibling for Liam

[Elena Bass · Rating 4 out of 5]

Essa é uma daquelas histórias mais curtas que você deseja que tivesse mais para ler. A ideia tem muito potencial para ser uma história maior, mas acaba sendo bem objetiva, os acontecimentos são rápidos e os personagens lidam de cara com os problemas.

Nessa fanfic, Hermione e Draco tiveram uma noite de se*o alguns anos após o fim da guerra. A relação acaba gerando uma gravidez inesperado e Hermione foge para o EUA sem contar para ninguém sobre o bebê, inclusive ao Draco. Passados 06 anos, ela retorna a Londres para vender a sua casa de infância (os pais dela seguem sem lembranças), na companhia da coisinha mais fofa do mundo chamada Liam. Mãe e filho estão na casa dos Potters (aqui Ginny e Harry ficaram juntos mesmo e tiveram dois filhos), quando chega o Draco, que agora trabalha com Potter e é como um tio para os filhos do casal. Nesse ínterim, Liam acaba confessando que o cabelo dele, que estava sob efeito de feitiço, é loiro como o de Draco, o que imediatamente levanta a suspeita da paternidade neste. O desenrolar da trama é Draco se aproximando do filho e construindo uma relação com ele, na medida em que também se envolve com Hermione.

Pra mim, o grande problema do livro é que a narrativa é muito objetiva, desperdiçando muito potencial. Não aprofunda na fuga e vida de Hermione no Estados Unidos, não diz nada sobre como o Draco lidou com fim da guerra. Todas as questões entre os protagonistas são rapidamente superadas e perdoadas. Não dá pra passar por cima facilmente do fato que a Hermione escondeu um filho do Draco por quase 7 anos. A justificativa recai porcamente na questão dela não querer que o Draco se sentisse obrigado e sangue dela. A autora não aprofunda em nada em como foi pra Hermione tomar essa decisão. Pra mim é meio inconcebível que Draco supere a questão tão rápido. Basicamente ele só exige da Granger que ele possa ser apresentado ao Liam e eles já começam a conviver. Toda a narrativa é muito apressada. Os “desafios” que surgem são rapidamente superados, sejam eles, Ron, Pansy, Lucius.

O livro deixa de explorar também qualquer complicação na construção do relacionamento em si entre os protagonistas, então acaba sendo superficial quando eles confessam amar um ao outro. Questões como o bullying sofrido pela Hermione, a tortura da Bellatrix na Mansão Malfoy, consequências da guerra em suas vidas pessoais e etc são absurdamente superficiais, a autora não se aprofunda em nada disso. A sensação é de que Malfoy e Granger nem eram “inimigos” num determinado momento da vida.

Enfim, é isso. A história é legal, mas pessoalmente acho que há uma perda absurda de potencial. Indico super para quem quer algo mais leve, objetivo e rápido para ler, sobretudo para na ressaca literária.