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The Grinning Goblins
Fandom: Harry Potter
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Harry feels that it's stupid to alienate those who control your money. See how a bunch of first years treat the goblins and what comes of it. These kids are going to cause quite a storm. Should be fun. A fast paced, happy, story about changing their destiny. It all starts at Gringotts.
Words: 48,979
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Harry feels that it's stupid to alienate those who control your money. See how a bunch of first years treat the goblins and what comes of it. These kids are going to cause quite a storm. Should be fun. A fast paced, happy, story about changing their destiny. It all starts at Gringotts.
Words: 48,979
- GenresFan Fiction
ebook
Published January 1, 2020
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June 15, 2021
Highly recommend.
June 16, 2021
★★⯪☆☆ and barely at that.
This story, while having a good plot, suffers from multiple massive issues:
• bad spelling
• Americanisms
• naïvety (e.g. consider a six-month gap between Maths lessons… pupild would have forgotten everything and then some in the meantime… better to interleave them)
This could have been better if it was well thought-out.
The story didn’t feel coherent to me either. It’s visible it started as four or five connected oneshots and grew from there, but it… wasn’t convincing, in a way.
This story, while having a good plot, suffers from multiple massive issues:
• bad spelling
• Americanisms
• naïvety (e.g. consider a six-month gap between Maths lessons… pupild would have forgotten everything and then some in the meantime… better to interleave them)
This could have been better if it was well thought-out.
The story didn’t feel coherent to me either. It’s visible it started as four or five connected oneshots and grew from there, but it… wasn’t convincing, in a way.
Displaying 1 - 3 of 3 reviews