This is the second time I've read this book. (The first time was very long ago) Even though I remembered some detail of the book, I was still absorbed in the book urging myself to read on to find out what happens next.
The story starts with her seeing ghosts in her house, an ability you lose once you are at around age 3. It is extremely rare to regain the vision of ghosts and spirits, but it happened to May. I'm not clear on why she had the vision, as the author did not explain furthermore, so that left me confused walking into the book.
The biggest problem with the plot is that the start is extremely unrealistic. When she receives a mysterious note from a lady from "the ever after" who tells her to follow her instructions. She decides to follow the directions. Is she oblivious to the fact that she hasn't told anyone of authority, and she wants to follow this random letter from a lady who lives in the ever after? I don't think she realized how dangerous that sounds, as the place is not even on earth. Why would she follow it? If that isn't senseless enough for you, when she reaches the lake, she trips on a bear trap, another warning to probably stay away. Meh, whatever. She continues and stares at her reflection in the lake so intensely that she falls into the lake. As she tries to swim up, a force tries to pull her down into the lake, but she manages to barely escape. Finally, she runs away home, never to go to or even look at the lake anymore. That was a life-and-death situation she experienced and she got the memo now. The book is over. Something else happens. Then, a few nights later, she decides to explore the lake again. What?!?! The last time you came here, you almost drown because an invisible force almost dragged you down! HELLO? Use something in your head called a brain. This time, a seemingly beautiful lady pulls her down into the lake, where she is greeted by the ever after. Do you get why it is unrealistic now?
Besides that, the story doesn't have many flaws and I like how the story can transition into a trilogy.
I like how the author made Pumpkin greet and help her escape, as she has to conquer her fear of ghosts and her shock of still being alive. I can tell that at the start of the book, she is a bit dumb. (No offense) For example, when Pumpkin tells her to quickly run with him so they could escape the Bogey,
May still hasn't realized that Pumpkin is trying to help her and tells him to go away. Pumpkin tells her to walk through the door or else the Bogey would get her. As the loud dogs and the Bogey near, she asks, "What's coming?" Maybe if you were paying a bit attention then you would have heard that something called the Bogey is coming for you. She asks multiple questions before she enters the door, so she is still not safe. Even when the trees are falling in the woods and the dogs are getting louder and louder, she still asks,
"Why should I trust you?
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Uhhh, I don't know, maybe because you can see the woods are being ripped apart and because some massive dogs are chasing you? Also maybe because the person who told you is not harmful, so you should trust them?
I would have liked Pumpkin to say, "Well, you can find out yourself what the Bogey can do but I am getting out of here. Adios Amigo!" Instead, the author settles with, "You have to." Honestly, I feel like the author should have changed the sentence to, "You have no choice" because then it can strengthen Pumpkins' argument that they have to get out of here or else they will die.
The rest of the book is good though, as it is very interesting and provides a story not many people have experienced. Something I noticed that was also a bit unrealistic was how she was barely fazed after she saw dead people, people cut in half, a bony hand protruding out a wall. I'm pretty sure many people would have freaked out or even fainted, but she barely has any reaction which I find hard to believe.
Something I felt like the author excelled in was adding a mini second narrative on Somber Kitty, May's pet cat. He gets separated when May gets sucked into the lake and he wants to find her. Over the course of the journey, the author adds random bits of the story of the cat, where he is and how he is trying to find May, I felt like the author did a good job incorporating that in the plot, and I like how the author lets Somber Kitty save the day as it is a bit ironic that the scary, massive, shuck hounds are scared of a normal cat.
I think it also creates the theme that everyone has weaknesses and strengths. Even though the shuck hounds have strengths in scaring people and killing them, they have a weakness of being afraid of cats. May shows her weaknesses when she doesn't use her head but she is gritty and courageous. Pumpkin shows his weaknesses because he is very shy and afraid, but he stands up for his friends when they really need him.
I am very excited to read the second and third books of the trilogy and I recommend this book to people who like Fantasy or Realistic Fiction as this is a mix of both. 4 stars.