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Atomic Mage
While on a trip to visit his children after his wife's untimely death Cade Willmartin suffers a tragic car accident.
Waking up in a different world by some unknown means he must use his new abilities to survive in this new world he finds himself in.
Facing new and unknown challenges, his control over the smallest bits of matter will certainly come in handy as he begins his journey as the Atomic Mage.
Atomic Mage is an adult fantasy romp, If you enjoy overpowered male protagonists that use their powers creatively give it a try.
Still on the fence? Give it a go, you just might like it.
Atomic mage contains adult scenes of FM, FFM, and harem elements. This isn't a fade to black kind of book, so be ready for a wild time.
Waking up in a different world by some unknown means he must use his new abilities to survive in this new world he finds himself in.
Facing new and unknown challenges, his control over the smallest bits of matter will certainly come in handy as he begins his journey as the Atomic Mage.
Atomic Mage is an adult fantasy romp, If you enjoy overpowered male protagonists that use their powers creatively give it a try.
Still on the fence? Give it a go, you just might like it.
Atomic mage contains adult scenes of FM, FFM, and harem elements. This isn't a fade to black kind of book, so be ready for a wild time.
357 pages, ebook
Published December 20, 2020
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February 1, 2021
This book had shades of Daniel black with the powers of atom eve from the invincible comics; but it was ultimately disappointing. There was too much sex with not enough plot along with shaky world building. It could have been soo much better.
March 10, 2022
What the hell was that?!
I didn't even get to the sex part, this book was so bad!
You know books that manage to make you hate the MC? Not because they are morally challenging, or clueless, but because they are bona-fide douchebags you wouldn't want to spend 15 mins with, they are so cringy...
Why would I read a book where this kind of person is the MC?
Because I didn't know...
Now I do.
So now I don't.
I didn't even get to the sex part, this book was so bad!
You know books that manage to make you hate the MC? Not because they are morally challenging, or clueless, but because they are bona-fide douchebags you wouldn't want to spend 15 mins with, they are so cringy...
Why would I read a book where this kind of person is the MC?
Because I didn't know...
Now I do.
So now I don't.
June 19, 2022
I am getting some serious Daniel Black vibes from this book. The way the protagonist uses his magic is kind of like Daniel, but it's not well explained? It just seems like he is doing anything, and he passes it off as his powers.
I don't know if converting energy can do that, maybe it's explained? I'm only a few chapters in.
I was correct. This book draws very heavily from the Daniel Black Series, although I don't think it is as well written. To me, the story relies on the smut to progress. If you removed the smut from Daniel Black, the story would still progress, this book seems to have built the progression around the smut.
I know it's probably backwards reading a smut book looking for an actual story, but I found many a great author and stories that way.
I might read the sequel, but it shows that more effort was placed on developing / explaining the smut, than the protagonist's ability.
I still don't understand how he really does what he does. I can understand if he was a chemist or a physicist, then him altering things at the atomic scale would be grasped more easily, but he admits he doesn't even know atomic theory.
We will see what the future brings.
3/5 Stars
I don't know if converting energy can do that, maybe it's explained? I'm only a few chapters in.
I was correct. This book draws very heavily from the Daniel Black Series, although I don't think it is as well written. To me, the story relies on the smut to progress. If you removed the smut from Daniel Black, the story would still progress, this book seems to have built the progression around the smut.
I know it's probably backwards reading a smut book looking for an actual story, but I found many a great author and stories that way.
I might read the sequel, but it shows that more effort was placed on developing / explaining the smut, than the protagonist's ability.
I still don't understand how he really does what he does. I can understand if he was a chemist or a physicist, then him altering things at the atomic scale would be grasped more easily, but he admits he doesn't even know atomic theory.
We will see what the future brings.
3/5 Stars
December 24, 2020
A fairly good book.
The book was not bad and had a good premise to start with. The book was light on world building but it has promise. I give it a 3.5 out of5 rounded up.
The book was not bad and had a good premise to start with. The book was light on world building but it has promise. I give it a 3.5 out of5 rounded up.
March 11, 2022
has potential
This is one of those books where you can see the potential for a great story to be told. The main barrier to being great really comes down to editing, this reads like a rough first draft where the connections and transitions a great story makes in a story can be fleshed out and grammatical and spelling errors can be addressed. The author appears to have not had any form of editing done and the book and subsequently the story suffers and finds a ceiling of barely readable and I could not in good consciousness suggest that anyone read this although I will admit I will read the next book in series to see if the author obtained a editor like I said has potential to be a really good story
This is one of those books where you can see the potential for a great story to be told. The main barrier to being great really comes down to editing, this reads like a rough first draft where the connections and transitions a great story makes in a story can be fleshed out and grammatical and spelling errors can be addressed. The author appears to have not had any form of editing done and the book and subsequently the story suffers and finds a ceiling of barely readable and I could not in good consciousness suggest that anyone read this although I will admit I will read the next book in series to see if the author obtained a editor like I said has potential to be a really good story
November 1, 2021
Needs editing.
Overall story is interesting. The cover said it all. Op Mc who shows up and everything is going his way. But the ending actually answers some questions regarding why. Good story over all. But... The editing is a major pain. Reading a sentence where hand is meant to be head or he is spelled hee. Just throws the flow all off.
Overall story is interesting. The cover said it all. Op Mc who shows up and everything is going his way. But the ending actually answers some questions regarding why. Good story over all. But... The editing is a major pain. Reading a sentence where hand is meant to be head or he is spelled hee. Just throws the flow all off.
January 25, 2021
Really enjoyed but.....
Really enjoyed it, but editing is seriously needed.
It was very confusing as there was no new line started between each new character speaking. There is potential though
Really enjoyed it, but editing is seriously needed.
It was very confusing as there was no new line started between each new character speaking. There is potential though
December 29, 2020
A thoroughly entertaining storyline!!!
An excellent way to begin a new series!!! A truly unique way to look at magic and some incredible adult fantasy!!!! Keep up the awesome writing!!!
An excellent way to begin a new series!!! A truly unique way to look at magic and some incredible adult fantasy!!!! Keep up the awesome writing!!!
December 30, 2020
Wow
Just WOW! The ending is such a plot twist. That this story could easily jump from a short 3 book story to a 50 book mega story.
Just WOW! The ending is such a plot twist. That this story could easily jump from a short 3 book story to a 50 book mega story.
December 28, 2020
I liked aliked a lot
Totally OP MC check. Hot monster girls check. Isekai without MC knowing what that was, check. Good beginning, middle, and end, check.
Totally OP MC check. Hot monster girls check. Isekai without MC knowing what that was, check. Good beginning, middle, and end, check.
November 9, 2022
I didn't really find any redeeming qualities to this book. The prose was amateurish and awkward. The protagonist who is supposedly a man in his 60s spoke like a middle-schooler from the early 2000s. None of the dialogue felt natural. The plot was uninteresting. I guess the setting was... Fine?
July 5, 2022
Atomic Mage has narrators who do terrific jobs with other books, but who seem disinterested in this story, a somewhat interesting story, but with poor writing….and an MC and wives who can only be described as sadists. Honestly, lots of harem fantasy stories feature death, revenge killing, battles etc….but here it’s simply sadistic cruelty. I’m not sure why I finished this audiobook, and I certainly don’t intend to listen to the sequel(s).
I will note, however, that the narraters (Marcus Jahn and Maggie Langhorne) have been replaced with a re-release. The new narrators (Matthew Beans, Ophelia Madson) might or might not be better. Unless the re-release also completely rewrites the characters, I’m really not sure what new narration can do to make this a story anyone would want to listen to.
1* - just terrible.
I will note, however, that the narraters (Marcus Jahn and Maggie Langhorne) have been replaced with a re-release. The new narrators (Matthew Beans, Ophelia Madson) might or might not be better. Unless the re-release also completely rewrites the characters, I’m really not sure what new narration can do to make this a story anyone would want to listen to.
1* - just terrible.
October 29, 2021
Could be much better if adult times wasn't used as filler
I'm all for adult times in books, but when it's over half the content, it's no longer a fun story, it's just cheap porn. It's annoying because I love the premise and powers, his forced stupidity and obliviousness on a few occasions are annoying though. So far the book is like a not as well done "Daniel Black" series(among my all time book favorites) by E William Brown. Similar powers and set, adults times to, fantasy, fantasy races etc, but the adult times don't overtake the story filling up over half the books. I will say MC in this book comes up with some better uses for the power set, better precautions\safety measures to his body including placement of power generator
I'm all for adult times in books, but when it's over half the content, it's no longer a fun story, it's just cheap porn. It's annoying because I love the premise and powers, his forced stupidity and obliviousness on a few occasions are annoying though. So far the book is like a not as well done "Daniel Black" series(among my all time book favorites) by E William Brown. Similar powers and set, adults times to, fantasy, fantasy races etc, but the adult times don't overtake the story filling up over half the books. I will say MC in this book comes up with some better uses for the power set, better precautions\safety measures to his body including placement of power generator
January 11, 2024
It’s ok.
So, typical isekai tensei type story. Protagonist dies and gets sent to a new world where he has amazing new powers. Starts kicking ass and meeting beautiful women and building his harem.
The sex scenes are ok. Not terribly written, but not great either. Trying to picture the scenes with the basilisk lover are a bit difficult. Described as having an ass but that makes the snake lower half images not really work. I guess snake sex is hard to describe.
Decent pacing, but the grammar and spelling errors made it a bit hard to read. Some spots I had to try and figure out what the author wanted to say. An editor would have caught most of these.
Overall, it’s an ok read. Undecided if I’ll continue with the rest of the series.
So, typical isekai tensei type story. Protagonist dies and gets sent to a new world where he has amazing new powers. Starts kicking ass and meeting beautiful women and building his harem.
The sex scenes are ok. Not terribly written, but not great either. Trying to picture the scenes with the basilisk lover are a bit difficult. Described as having an ass but that makes the snake lower half images not really work. I guess snake sex is hard to describe.
Decent pacing, but the grammar and spelling errors made it a bit hard to read. Some spots I had to try and figure out what the author wanted to say. An editor would have caught most of these.
Overall, it’s an ok read. Undecided if I’ll continue with the rest of the series.
April 17, 2022
A western Isekai harem story.
Cade suffers a car accident while visiting his children after the death of his wife.... Only to wake-up in a new world and find his body restored to his youth.... Oh and apparently there is magic now.
In all this was a decent book, but not an outstanding one. The idea of science in a magic setting was cool and made for a cool powerset, but in the end this is a fairly typical Isekai story. Guy dies and is reborn, gains power, finds a harem. Read this novel for the entertainment and the adult content (of wish there was quite a lot), but not necessarily for the thrilling plot.
3 stars.
Cade suffers a car accident while visiting his children after the death of his wife.... Only to wake-up in a new world and find his body restored to his youth.... Oh and apparently there is magic now.
In all this was a decent book, but not an outstanding one. The idea of science in a magic setting was cool and made for a cool powerset, but in the end this is a fairly typical Isekai story. Guy dies and is reborn, gains power, finds a harem. Read this novel for the entertainment and the adult content (of wish there was quite a lot), but not necessarily for the thrilling plot.
3 stars.
October 4, 2021
Could’ve been more…
As the titles states, this could’ve been more then what it became after maybe 20-30% in to the book. Not going to spoil the story but the sudden need to complete the important mission was sideline for a elderly man that you would assume has some since of urgency boils down into self gratification and smut action galore. This is a harem book but the story still needs to be present for it to be readable. I do read harems, yet I skipped half of the book for it being so bizarre and ridiculous.
As the titles states, this could’ve been more then what it became after maybe 20-30% in to the book. Not going to spoil the story but the sudden need to complete the important mission was sideline for a elderly man that you would assume has some since of urgency boils down into self gratification and smut action galore. This is a harem book but the story still needs to be present for it to be readable. I do read harems, yet I skipped half of the book for it being so bizarre and ridiculous.
January 8, 2022
My Rating System:
5- Perfect for my taste, could not physically stop reading/listening, wanted more afterword.
4- Almost perfect, could not stop reading/listening, probably wanted more afterword.
3- Enjoyed the book, could see others loving it, need to think if I want more.
2- Can see why others might like the book, but I could not, I do not want more.
1- What is this? What went wrong? Why did they do this? This doesn't make any sense! (No idea who it is for but definitely not for me).
[Audiobook Version]
Could have been better.
5- Perfect for my taste, could not physically stop reading/listening, wanted more afterword.
4- Almost perfect, could not stop reading/listening, probably wanted more afterword.
3- Enjoyed the book, could see others loving it, need to think if I want more.
2- Can see why others might like the book, but I could not, I do not want more.
1- What is this? What went wrong? Why did they do this? This doesn't make any sense! (No idea who it is for but definitely not for me).
[Audiobook Version]
Could have been better.
April 18, 2021
A lot better than I thought
Despite my dislike for some of the actions taken by none-main characters it was an enjoyable read as unlike some recent books it doesn't give me.a paragraph of how it was happening. Some authors really seem to have a fetish for forced unwilling sex I'm glad Garrett doesn't.
Despite my dislike for some of the actions taken by none-main characters it was an enjoyable read as unlike some recent books it doesn't give me.a paragraph of how it was happening. Some authors really seem to have a fetish for forced unwilling sex I'm glad Garrett doesn't.
November 14, 2021
I wanted to like this, I really did.
A good harem book has a solid story interlaced with adult situations. This has adult situation interlaced with weak story. Add in muddled descriptors making it difficult to keep track of what is happening, and badly written combat and you just have a big mess. The instant connections between characters does nothing to help either.
A good harem book has a solid story interlaced with adult situations. This has adult situation interlaced with weak story. Add in muddled descriptors making it difficult to keep track of what is happening, and badly written combat and you just have a big mess. The instant connections between characters does nothing to help either.
April 21, 2021
Interesting magic concept
Too much harem not enough focus on the story. The atomic mage concept is awesome and interesting how it starts to play out. Some of the interactions I could do without. Curious enough on the concept to read the next book to see if it gets better.
Too much harem not enough focus on the story. The atomic mage concept is awesome and interesting how it starts to play out. Some of the interactions I could do without. Curious enough on the concept to read the next book to see if it gets better.
August 27, 2021
Focuses to much on Harem
It was interesting at first but then he met his first girl and it went down hill from there. I just couldn't get past his personality change and the way he talks after he meets his first mate.
It was interesting at first but then he met his first girl and it went down hill from there. I just couldn't get past his personality change and the way he talks after he meets his first mate.
October 12, 2021
good start
Not a bad story very interesting story line and mechanics. I would say the “my dear, Cade,ect..” was over used quite a lot and got border line annoying but interesting story overall
Not a bad story very interesting story line and mechanics. I would say the “my dear, Cade,ect..” was over used quite a lot and got border line annoying but interesting story overall
March 20, 2022
good book
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
Needs a little editing but fine
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
Needs a little editing but fine
December 1, 2023
Good but...
With the amount of grammatical errors in the the writing, I found myself backtracking a little too often. Overall the story is a big wish fulfillment fantasy, which is kind of what I was looking for. So yeah, good story, but needs some editing.
With the amount of grammatical errors in the the writing, I found myself backtracking a little too often. Overall the story is a big wish fulfillment fantasy, which is kind of what I was looking for. So yeah, good story, but needs some editing.
February 9, 2021
Tough
Hard to read. Editing is rough. The story seems forced. The flow was off. The mc is just so willing to accept dying.
Hard to read. Editing is rough. The story seems forced. The flow was off. The mc is just so willing to accept dying.
June 10, 2021
Naughty but nice
Fun little story of a transplanted MC who developed interesting powers. The sex scenes are rather long but the story progresses well. Good job.
Fun little story of a transplanted MC who developed interesting powers. The sex scenes are rather long but the story progresses well. Good job.
September 11, 2021
MY GUY is an AUTHOR! Although not my preferred genre this has such a great plot & that twist for the end! I've started reading the next one...
Can anyone tell I'm a Proud Parent? Go Garrett!❣
Can anyone tell I'm a Proud Parent? Go Garrett!❣
October 1, 2021
Liked it
Not a bad story a little bit short on actual story. To much harem building in my opinion. I liked it enough to give book two a try hopefully it has my plotlines less sex
Not a bad story a little bit short on actual story. To much harem building in my opinion. I liked it enough to give book two a try hopefully it has my plotlines less sex
October 10, 2021
Strange formatting and lots of errors
Tried this and just didn’t enjoy it. The book has some weird formatting issues and lots of errors. Pacing is super fast.
Tried this and just didn’t enjoy it. The book has some weird formatting issues and lots of errors. Pacing is super fast.
October 13, 2021
...This could have been so much more then it was. SO SO Much more.
DNF.. Even i have limits to how much pointless badly written sex i will put up with in a book.
DNF.. Even i have limits to how much pointless badly written sex i will put up with in a book.
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