As graduation draws near, Koyuki is doing a lot more with her classmates and has withdrawn from the aquarium club. Konatsu has kept things going, but still wants to get her feelings across, whatever they are. Stay tuned for more frog and salamander and not much else!
So, it’s not bad. This final volume has the girls reaching out to one another and making their feelings, whatever they’re supposed to be, known and has lots of time to show how they’ve grown as people. I wouldn’t be complaining if this was strictly the focus.
We also get a little development on the Kaede front, showing that she’s become a bit more responsible, and Koyuki’s brother definitely has an eye for her. Their relationship is also subtly developing right up to the ending.
But that’s the thing about this, there’s nothing definitive here. It is very much a fill in the blanks story. Do the girls remain close friends? They do! Do the girls become lovers and live against the prevailing heteronormative Japanese society? They do! Do they find spirit fairies and become magical girls? Why not!?
Because this story stands for nothing, it concludes nothing, and, frankly, comes perilously close to meaning nothing. There is ambiguity and then there’s authorial obstinance and the mangaka saying this isn’t a yuri story when it’s been coded like one the whole way is just aggravating.
Especially because that refusal just leaves the narrative twisting in the wind. It has some strong moments, although if that frog and salamander metaphor comes up ever again it’ll be too soon, and signs of real growth and change that I like (the uniform bit is, in fact, really good).
Konatsu’s ploy to show Koyuki how much she means to her is as close to a confession as we’re likely to get in many books, but again, not a yuri, apparently. When they realize that they’ve gotten through to one another it’s genuinely sweet.
If you don’t mind a story where the journey is the entire point, even if the path it’s pretty obviously on isn’t the one it’s apparently actually on, then you’ll probably be okay with the narrative here. This has been utterly frustrating for several volumes now and it continues that trend right to the finale.
I do not need every story to be yuri, but it’s hard not to feel like you’re being jerked around by the mangaka while reading this series and if I was not aware of their thoughts on this I probably wouldn’t be so annoyed with it. Sometimes the smallest things can throw you off a manga and that really did it for me.
If it walks like a yuri and quacks like a yuri and all that. Anyway, it’s over and done with and I’m pretty sure this won’t be a series I come back to any time soon, if ever. It has a lot of potential that it sort of wastes by refusing to acknowledge what it pretty much is, even if it doesn’t do a bad job. I could probably review this another day and feel quite differently about it.
3 stars - in case you couldn’t tell, this story got me into a bit of a snit and sadly I couldn’t manage to separate the art from the artist, which I acknowledge as a bit of a fail on my part. By trying to both sides itself, however, it doesn’t quite do either justice and there are much better girls love stories and much better ‘female best friend’ stories out there to be enjoyed.