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Keeley, a simple plain Jane, hits the jackpot. [No, she did not win the lottery!] At least that's what she thinks when she marries the most eligible bachelor in New York City: Aaron, a wealthy cold-hearted heartthrob and Tycoon.
She wants to show the world that she deserves her position and bends over backward to fit into his world.
One beautiful day, Aaron hands her a document asking her to sign. A divorce paper...
"She's pregnant, and I need to take responsibility."
That is the last thing that keeps on playing in her mind before she takes her last breath.
Keeley dies, a 'hit and run'. [End of story. Not!]
For some unexplainable reason, she wakes up as her younger self. A young high school girl, around the time when she first meets her cheating husband.
Remembering her life with Aaron before she died, she makes a promise to herself that she will do everything in her power to avoid him at all costs.
Will she be able to keep her promise when Aaron has his own plans as well, specifically for her? Or will she repeat history and fall for him once more...
Why not journey with me and find out the truth behind their story.
She wants to show the world that she deserves her position and bends over backward to fit into his world.
One beautiful day, Aaron hands her a document asking her to sign. A divorce paper...
"She's pregnant, and I need to take responsibility."
That is the last thing that keeps on playing in her mind before she takes her last breath.
Keeley dies, a 'hit and run'. [End of story. Not!]
For some unexplainable reason, she wakes up as her younger self. A young high school girl, around the time when she first meets her cheating husband.
Remembering her life with Aaron before she died, she makes a promise to herself that she will do everything in her power to avoid him at all costs.
Will she be able to keep her promise when Aaron has his own plans as well, specifically for her? Or will she repeat history and fall for him once more...
Why not journey with me and find out the truth behind their story.
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January 3, 2021
Oh. My. God. This story took over my freaking life for like 5 days. I didn't do laundry. I didn't do dishes. I barely paid attention to my kids. I spend every damn second I had reading this on WebNovel. I have never read a reincarnation story before but this immediately drew me in after reading the preview chapters. This story was addicting and so well written! ♡♡♡♡♡
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January 2, 2021Chapter 1: Hit and Run
A little confusing to read at first but the opening is pretty much the same as the synopsis stated, Aaron is an ass and Keeley dies (*murdered*). However, she wakes up as her 17 year old self and decides to changer her life’s course and stay far away from Aaron.
Chapter 2: Familiar Icy Voice
Keeley’s plan to stay away from Aaron doesn’t go according to plan as she ends up sitting next to him in her class. Aaron also makes an odd comment on Keeley’s doodles on her paper; stating he forgot how she liked to do that. Which is odd unless Kelley isn’t the only one who was reborn?
Chapter 3: Mind If I Sit Here?
I feel so bad for Keeley she is really trying to stay away from Aaron, but for some reason he won’t leave her alone; it must be stated they don’t know each other yet! Aaron still manages to include himself in her lunch group and tries to start a conversation but he is easily ignored which he isn’t pleased about. We learn that the old Keeley gave up her dream college NYU to go to Boston University to be with Aaron, who as we all know was a major duck about it in her previous life. Aaron seems interested in the fact that Keeley might want to go to Boston University which is close to Harvard where he will be going, but Keeley shuts him down quick and leaves. I’m totally loving the badass Keeley!
Chapter 4: This Is Kidnapping
Okay yeah the title is self efficient, the man seriously kidnapped her just to drive her home. Keeley was not pleased and can’t figure out why he is so intrigued by her since they never even spoke and she tries to avoid him at al costs.
I think there are 2 possible answers: 1) Keeley wasn’t the only one given a chance to go back in time and do things over differently, I think Aaron was as well or 2) Aaron would have inserted himself in Keeley’s life one way or another, perhaps there was a plan all along?
Chapter 5: Toying With Her
I give Keeley props because I would have lost my damn mind. Aaron won’t leave her alone so she starts evasive maneuvers (all the claps to her!) which work until she has class with him and he basically asks her to the dance. This is met with a swift shut down but oddly enough Keeley’s name has been put on the list of volunteers for the dance. Naturally the teacher won’t let her out of it and she resigns herself to go. Also creepily enough, Keeley bumps into her murdered which happens to be Lacy’s friend who was obsessed with her but Lacy only had eyes for Aaron.
While Keeley tries to escape the creepo, Aaron catches her and wants to know why she is crying. Keeley completely loses it and yells at Aaron to leave her alone.
Chapter 6: I Don’t Need a Reason *FAVORITE*
Aaron kidnaps Keeley again but this time takes her to an expensive chocolate shop. The chocolate does help but Keeley will not be fooled by him again. They have a little convo over the chocolate but Keeley leaves ASAP. The truth is revealed, Aaron has also been reborn and he really does love Keeley before and now; he needs her love and he will protect her better this time. It seems there is more to the story than we know.
Chapter 7: Nobody’s Better Than Me
Aaron tried to woo Keeley to be his date; Keeley is not having it. Did I say how much I adore this girl?! She flipping rocks! However, Aaron will not deterred so begins the present giving which confuses Keeley more.
We learn the name of Keeley’s murderer aka creepo: Maximillian Lynch.
Chapter 8: I Want You to Dress Up Tomorrow
Aaron won’t stop trying to woo Keeley, but as stated before she won’t give in. The dance has arrived! Keeley remembers what happened last time and does everything she can to avoid Lacy.
Chapter 9: I Hate You, Aaron Hale *FAVORITE*
Poor poor Aaron lol! The man just doesn’t understand that this is NOT the same Keeley; I wonder if he thinks he was the only one reborn and is unaware that Keeley knows everything about their old life?
Chapter 10: So? *FAVORITE*
Aaron only chapter.
It seems Aaron really does love Keeley and always did and he doesn’t understand why she hates him so much now. We get even more insight into Aaron and Keeley of old. We also get our first interaction with Lacy aka The Bitch.
Chapter 11: Dare You
Aaron and Keeley are paired in class to work on a group project which they decide to work on in Aaron’s house.
Chapter 12: Why Are You So Afraid of Me?
We finally learn that Aaron died of a heart attack after being alone for 27 years; was it 27 years after Keeley’s death? Aaron never mentions her death and is confused as to why she is afraid of him. When he learned of his second chance at life he did everything he could think of to win over his love, Keeley, but nothing is working.
Chapter 13: Christmastime in Boston
Flashback of Keeley and Aaron of old.
Chapter 14: Midnight
Flashback continues.
Chapter 15: Control Your Girlfriend
Keeley and Lacy have it out. Keeley tells Aaron to control Lacey. Lacey and Aaron have it; Lacey has Max watch Keeley.
Chapter 16: This Isn’t Like You *FAVORITE*
Aaron and Keeley a mini showdown; Aaron doesn’t understand why she doesn’t love him anymore. It is confirmed Aaron doesn’t realize Keeley has been reborn too.
Chapter 17: Tell Me Exactly What You Saw
Lacey and Max chapter.
Chapter 18: Troubles at School
Keeley thinks back to her interaction with Aaron’s friend and how they disliked her.
Chapter 19: The Wrong Choice
Keeley gets into NYU.
Chapter 20: Keeley’s Dream
Lydia and Keeley celebrate their college acceptances; Keeley wants to study in Genetics.
Keeley was murdered at 31 years old.
Chapter 21: Surprise!
Keeley tells Aaron about NYU; we get a flashback of Aaron’s first day at Harvard.
Chapter 22: You’re Either Brave or Crazy
Keeley and Aaron text some more; Keeley and Lydia continue their celebration.
Chapter 23 & 24:
Keeley spends the day with her dad and her family. She also ponders what happened to her body after her death.
I really want to know what happened between her death and Aaron’s death.
Chapter 25:
Lacey and Max plot to drug Keeley at prom.
Chapter 26: *FAVORITE*
Aaron chapter; he still plans on winning Keeley’s love before graduation. We learn he was heartbroken after Keeley’s death which led him to work until he died. He tries to have a convo with Keeley but she shuts him down after a few moments. However, he found a way in with Keeley: scrapbooking.
Chapter 27: *FAVORITE*
Aaron goes to a scrapbook store! You could just feel the embarrassment and determination from him. Then hand delivers it to Keeley in her own home which happens to have her father there as well.
Chapter 28: *FAVORITE*
Aaron has dinner with Keeley and her dad, Robert. Aaron finally starts to wonder why she hates him so much and comes to the idea she has been reborn as well; but quickly changes his mind because that would be impossible.
Chapter 29: I’m Sorry for Your Loss *FAVORITE*
Omg we finally learn what happened after Keeley’s death! Aaron never betrayed her, he was just trying to protect her, but she was still a casualty in an evil plot. Aaron got revenge on Lacy, Max and his own father, but there was one person he was never able to identify. After Keeley’s murder, he worked and worked until he worked himself to death.
Keeley doesn’t know why to make of such a different Aaron and vows to stay clear of him until graduation.
Chapter 30:
Keeley scrapbooked and made brownies as a thank you for Aaron.
Chapter 31: You Think You Can Run Away From Me *FAVORITE*
Keeley tries to give Aaron the brownies, but Aaron is being all touchy feely. Keeley shuts him down and he seems hurt as well as disappointed.
Chapter 32: Define Within Reason *FAVORITE*
Since Keeley made Aaron late for class, he decides she owes him and demands she make him more brownies and have lunch with him for a month.
Rachel, Lacy’s friend, sees their interaction and tells the psycho Lacy.
Chapter 33: She Can’t Do Anything to Me *FAVORITE*
Aaron is really going for here, offering trips and stating she will be his girlfriend. Keeley not too pleased with him and let’s him know about her fears of Lacy.
Chapter 34: Giving Up *FAVORITE*
Aaron’s plan was working but it was basically killing Keeley’s soul too. The gold digger rumors were flying courtesy of Lacy and Aaron was pleased because he wanted Lacy to trip up now so he could get rid of her. Mostly he wanted his Keeley back and he knew he was losing her all over again just like when she lost their baby.
Chapter 35: Observational Skills *FAVORITE*
Aaron’s plan was working and confusing the hell out of Keeley. He really did noticed very detail about her
Chapter 36:
Lacy tried to intrude on their lunch, doesn’t go well for her.
Chapter 37:
Lacy chapter, we learn how she became obsessed with Aaron.
Chapter 38: His Downfall *FAVORITE*
Aaron chapter; we learn how his plan in his old life to wait and see essentially led to death of Keeley at the hands of Max, Lacy and his father.
Chapter 39: Nightmare *FAVORITE*
Keeley has a memory/nightmare mash up of her wedding to Aaron. Which leads her to a mini meltdown with Aaron at lunch the next day.
I’m hoping the reveal of the double reborn happens soon!
Chapter 40: Mind Games *Favorite*
Aaron gives Keeley space after her outburst thinking it had to do with Lacy, but he doesn’t give up yet.
Chapter 41: A Birthday Present *Favorite*
Chapter 42:
Lacy and Max’s plan unfolds to drug and take pictures of Keeley.
Chapter 43:
Lacy and Max chapter
Chapter 44:
Keeley wakes up and Aaron runs to her.
Chapter 45: Neptune vs Her Glacier *favorite*
Keeley is very talkative and aggressive when drugged ;) poor Aaron
Chapter 46: This Is Your Fault Aaron *favorite*
Props to Aaron for staying strong! But I really need the truth to be out there already! After everything they know about Lacy and Max they underestimate them!
Chapter 47: I Didn’t Do This *favorite*
Aaron realizes he failed Keeley again; decides to become stronger to protect her even if it means leaving her alone until he is.
Chapter 48: Aaron’s Statement
Chapter 49: What a Terrible Birthday
Chapter 50:
Lacy chapter.
Chapter 51: Something to Remember Her By *favorite*
Aaron finally decides to let Keely go for now; he will get her back when he can protect her.
Chapter 52: Friends
Keeley is ready to move on and go to NYU.
Chapter 53: Graduation
Chapter 54: This Is Where Their Paths Diverge *favorite*
They say a final goodbye.
Chapter 55: Aaron’s Research *favorite*
Aaron creates his plan to become powerful enough to protect Keeley even though he has to let her go for now.
Chapter 56:
Keeley gets a job.
Chapter 57: Dorm Life
Chapter 58: College Jobs *favorite*
Aaron sees Keeley on the way to her job at the Burger Barn; flashbacks to their old life when she worked a similar job before they got married.
Chapter 59: The Card King *favorite*
Aaron builds his team! Also he is keeping tabs on Keeley through his jacket and there was definitely an interesting Karaoke night.
Chapter 60: No Short Term Game *favorite*
Aaron’s plan builds and he’s missing his Keeley.
Chapter 61: No More All Nighters
Chapter 62:
Keeley and Robert talk about Aaron.
Chapter 63: The Million Dollar Question *favorite*
Aaron talks with his hacker, Anomaly aka Aiden about Keeley. Aaron misses Keeley.
Chapter 64: Christmas Cheer
Chapter 65: Memories of Christmas Past
Chapter 66: Thinking about 2007
Keeley dies in 2019.
Chapter 67: Truth or Dare
Chapter 68: An Insult to Snakes *favorite*
It’s New Years Eve and Aaron and Keeley are in 2 different parties that nearby each other. Aaron shuts Lacy down harshly and I loved it! He also decides to sneak a peak at the love of his lives, Keeley.
Chapter 69: Why Me? *favorite*
Aaron couldn’t do it and kissed Keeley at midnight. Keeley was not pleased. Seriously how have they not figured out that something is way off with this redo!
Chapter 70: He Needed to Work Harder *favorite*
Aaron knows he messed up with the kiss but it just strengths his resolve to protect his Keeley. He also has a terrible nightmare about when she died before.
Chapter 71: 5.5 Years Later (chapters no longer free)
Chapter 72: Tough Nut to Crack *favorite*
Aaron makes plans with Aiden aka Anomaly to “bump” into Keeley.
Chapter 73: Long Time No See *favorite*
Keeley and Aaron bump into each other and have dinner.
Chapter 74: Nice Try My Love
Aaron chapter and he is trying so hard to get Keeley to engage in their “date.” Apparently, Aaron is reserved for Keeley alone. He really misses Keeley and wants his wife back; he a lot more power now to protect her but he still needs more. But he plans to interact more with Keeley.
Chapter 75: Fake Date
Aiden chapter. He gets Jennica, Keeley’s roommate and friend, to be Aaron’s fake date.
Chapter 76:
Jennica chapter.
Chapter 77:
Jennica Chapter; she definitely goes for Lacy to help Aaron; good thing he gave her a fake name. Aaron goes into detail all the things he would do for Keeley without revealing her name.
Chapter 78:
Keeley and Jennica talk about her acting gig.
Chapter 79: Rushing to the Rescue *favorite*
Keeley and Aaron meet again and discuss cats. Keeley also gets food poisoning from tacos and Aaron comes to her rescue.
Chapter 80: Since When Was Aaron This Nice *favorite*
Aaron takes care of sick Keeley.
Chapter 81: A Wonderful Way to Start Off the Day *favorite*
Aaron chapter and he is super happy to have Keeley in his home.
Chapter 82:
Keeley chapter; we learn more about Keeley’s miscarriage and how Aaron treated her in their old life.
Chapter 83:
It seems Aaron has some competition for Keeley’s affections from Ryan, her college and current friend.
Chapter 84:
Aiden learns of Ryan after seeing him with a drunk Keeley.
Chapter 85:
Aiden gossips with Cameron, Aaron’s other loyal member, about Aaron and Keeley.
Chapter 86:
Aiden and Cameron continue to gossip about Aaron then go confront him about why Keeley was wearing his shirt.
Chapter 87:
Aaron, Aiden and Cameron discuss Keeley and pets.
Chapter 88: Was This Surprise Keeley Day or What? *favorite*
Aaron and Keeley go together to adopt Aaron a cat.
Chapter 89: I Like My Privacy *favorite*
Chapter 90: They Seem a Bit Energetic for Me *favorite*
Aaron and Keeley have a great time finding him a pet.
Chapter 91: You Can’t Abandon Her *favorite*
Aaron adopts a cat named Dinah; they have a serious conversation about abandonment.
Chapter 92: Beginner’s Luck *favorite*
They have lunch in an arcade and plays one games.
Chapter 93: A Good Choice *favorite*
They have a great time, but Keeley shuts him down again. Aiden buys a hamster tunnel.
Chapter 94: A Telenovela Idea
Chapter 95: Who Even Are You Anymore
Valentina, Keeley’s other roommate and college friend, brings up the possibility that Aaron was reborn too! But Keeley quickly kills that idea.
Chapter 96: You Gave Up So Much For Me *favorite*
Aaron chapter; Aaron finally realizes everything Keeley gave up for him in their old life. Aiden might have found some dirt on Aaron’s dirty ass father.
Chapter 97: A Long Road Ahead *favorite*
Aaron learns from Aiden that he didn’t make as much progress as he thought with Keeley, but he’s not giving up.
Chapter 98: Acting Like a Doting Boyfriend *favorite*
Chapter 99: Oddly Sentinental *favorite*
More progress is made and finally Aaron tells Keeley he is not ashamed of her.
Chapter 100:
Halloween costume shopping.
Chapter 101:
Jennica chapter.
Chapter 102: Crazy Person
Chapter 103: Why Did Everything Have to Be So Hard? *favorite*
We learn about Aaron’s past with Halloween with Keeley; this man really did love her even if he was slow on how to protect her.
Chapter 104: Stupid Aaron
Chapter 105:
Cameron and Jennica chapter.
Chapter 106:
Cameron chapter.
Chapter 107:
Aiden and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 108:
Keeley chapter. Tbh it’s getting a little boring, I need some more actually progress in this story maybe the reveal of a double reborn, something anything; this is moving so slow!
Chapter 109: You’re Weird
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 110: Not to be Rude But *favorite*
More progress, slow progress but progress; Aaron still wants Keeley to be his wife.
Chapter 111:
Keeley and Robert chapter.
Chapter 112:
Jennica chapter; not very interesting nor did it add to the story line.
Chapter 113:
Aaron and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 114: Unheard Of
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 115: Everybody is Nobody But You **
Aaron and Keeley fancy steak; she is afraid to let him in.
Chapter 116: A Good Thing or A Bad Thing**
Aaron saves the day again and comforts a crying Keeley. We learn that Keeley never had a miscarriage, her doctor was bribed by Aaron’s father to kill her baby and make her infertile. These people suck balls big time and should be sent straight to hell first class.
Chapter 117: That’s Your Keeley Face**
Chapter 118: Souvenir Shopping**
Chapter 119:
Keeley and Ryan.
Chapter 120:
Ryan wants to be with Keeley.
Chapter 121:
Cameron and Jennica chapter.
Chapter 122: I’m His Evil Clone**
Awwww Aaron missed his Keeley and carries away to his home on her pjs.
Chapter 123: Living the Dream**
Aaron gives Keeley his souvenir and they watch TV.
Chapter 124: They’re Going to Kill Me**
Aaron and Keeley cuddled, totally Keeley’s fault.
Chapter 125: Don’t Be Too Impressed**
They have breakfast and form a friendship.
Chapter 126-128:
Jennica and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 129:
Keeley’s Thanksgiving
Chapter 130: Hurricane Aaron**
Aaron learns of Ryan.
Chapter 131:
Cameron chapter.
Chapter 132: Personal Errand Boy**
Aaron and Keeley discuss Christmas.
Chapter 133:
Aaron, Aiden and Cameron discuss Ryan.
Chapter 134: You’re Welcome Aiden**
Keeley finally accepts that Aaron likes her and decides to be his friends and give him a chance.
Chapter 135: I’m Happy For You**
Aaron and Keeley decide to exchange gifts.
Chapter 136: Facebook Friends**
Aaron is too cute with Keeley moments.
Chapter 137:
Keeley invites Aaron for Christmas Eve. Christmas cookie baking.
Chapter 138:
Cameron spies on Ryan and Keeley while baking cookies.
Chapter 139:
Aiden and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 140: So Awkward**
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 141: A Toast**
Aaron and Keeley Christmas Eve.
Chapter 142: Under the Mistletoe**
So cute! They exchange presents! They really need to get together and destroy all the bad people now please.
Chapter 143: You’re Going to Break His Heart
Keeley and Robert discuss Aaron.
Chapter 144:
Aaron humiliates Lacy in front of the “important” people and pissed of his father, Alistair.
Aiden tries to speed up their power hold to enact Plan B.
Chapter 145: Business Trips**
Aaron had a slot of trips and Keeley actually missed him.
Chapter 146: Valentine’s Day Plans
Keeley realizes she is attached to Aaron and vows to let him go.
Chapter 147: It Was All Over Now**
Aaron finds Keeley with Ryan on Valentine’s Day; Keeley decides to break Aaron’s heart with his old words for his own good: He’s worth more than fifty of you.
Chapter 148: Oh Keeley***
Finally finally finally AARON realizes Keeley has been reborn too!!! Heartbreaking chapter watching him fall apart but so worth it! He now realizes why Keeley hates him so much and what she meant when she was drugged.
Chapter 149: His Ex-Wife Is Here to See Him***
Yaaaassss Keeley finally realizes Aaron is reborn as well! She was NOT pleased.
Chapter 150: Explain Yourself***
Aaron tells everything to Keeley.
Chapter 151: This Doesn’t Feel Like Love to Me**
Keeley doesn’t know how to feel and leaves Aaron.
Chapter 152: I Think She Dunped Him**
Aaron decides to give Keeley some time. Aiden and Cameron discuss how workaholic robot Aaron turned into to. Aaron reveals he can’t have bananas because Keeley is allergic and won’t kiss him unless he brushes his teeth.
A little confusing to read at first but the opening is pretty much the same as the synopsis stated, Aaron is an ass and Keeley dies (*murdered*). However, she wakes up as her 17 year old self and decides to changer her life’s course and stay far away from Aaron.
Chapter 2: Familiar Icy Voice
Keeley’s plan to stay away from Aaron doesn’t go according to plan as she ends up sitting next to him in her class. Aaron also makes an odd comment on Keeley’s doodles on her paper; stating he forgot how she liked to do that. Which is odd unless Kelley isn’t the only one who was reborn?
Chapter 3: Mind If I Sit Here?
I feel so bad for Keeley she is really trying to stay away from Aaron, but for some reason he won’t leave her alone; it must be stated they don’t know each other yet! Aaron still manages to include himself in her lunch group and tries to start a conversation but he is easily ignored which he isn’t pleased about. We learn that the old Keeley gave up her dream college NYU to go to Boston University to be with Aaron, who as we all know was a major duck about it in her previous life. Aaron seems interested in the fact that Keeley might want to go to Boston University which is close to Harvard where he will be going, but Keeley shuts him down quick and leaves. I’m totally loving the badass Keeley!
Chapter 4: This Is Kidnapping
Okay yeah the title is self efficient, the man seriously kidnapped her just to drive her home. Keeley was not pleased and can’t figure out why he is so intrigued by her since they never even spoke and she tries to avoid him at al costs.
I think there are 2 possible answers: 1) Keeley wasn’t the only one given a chance to go back in time and do things over differently, I think Aaron was as well or 2) Aaron would have inserted himself in Keeley’s life one way or another, perhaps there was a plan all along?
Chapter 5: Toying With Her
I give Keeley props because I would have lost my damn mind. Aaron won’t leave her alone so she starts evasive maneuvers (all the claps to her!) which work until she has class with him and he basically asks her to the dance. This is met with a swift shut down but oddly enough Keeley’s name has been put on the list of volunteers for the dance. Naturally the teacher won’t let her out of it and she resigns herself to go. Also creepily enough, Keeley bumps into her murdered which happens to be Lacy’s friend who was obsessed with her but Lacy only had eyes for Aaron.
While Keeley tries to escape the creepo, Aaron catches her and wants to know why she is crying. Keeley completely loses it and yells at Aaron to leave her alone.
Chapter 6: I Don’t Need a Reason *FAVORITE*
Aaron kidnaps Keeley again but this time takes her to an expensive chocolate shop. The chocolate does help but Keeley will not be fooled by him again. They have a little convo over the chocolate but Keeley leaves ASAP. The truth is revealed, Aaron has also been reborn and he really does love Keeley before and now; he needs her love and he will protect her better this time. It seems there is more to the story than we know.
Chapter 7: Nobody’s Better Than Me
Aaron tried to woo Keeley to be his date; Keeley is not having it. Did I say how much I adore this girl?! She flipping rocks! However, Aaron will not deterred so begins the present giving which confuses Keeley more.
We learn the name of Keeley’s murderer aka creepo: Maximillian Lynch.
Chapter 8: I Want You to Dress Up Tomorrow
Aaron won’t stop trying to woo Keeley, but as stated before she won’t give in. The dance has arrived! Keeley remembers what happened last time and does everything she can to avoid Lacy.
Chapter 9: I Hate You, Aaron Hale *FAVORITE*
Poor poor Aaron lol! The man just doesn’t understand that this is NOT the same Keeley; I wonder if he thinks he was the only one reborn and is unaware that Keeley knows everything about their old life?
Chapter 10: So? *FAVORITE*
Aaron only chapter.
It seems Aaron really does love Keeley and always did and he doesn’t understand why she hates him so much now. We get even more insight into Aaron and Keeley of old. We also get our first interaction with Lacy aka The Bitch.
Chapter 11: Dare You
Aaron and Keeley are paired in class to work on a group project which they decide to work on in Aaron’s house.
Chapter 12: Why Are You So Afraid of Me?
We finally learn that Aaron died of a heart attack after being alone for 27 years; was it 27 years after Keeley’s death? Aaron never mentions her death and is confused as to why she is afraid of him. When he learned of his second chance at life he did everything he could think of to win over his love, Keeley, but nothing is working.
Chapter 13: Christmastime in Boston
Flashback of Keeley and Aaron of old.
Chapter 14: Midnight
Flashback continues.
Chapter 15: Control Your Girlfriend
Keeley and Lacy have it out. Keeley tells Aaron to control Lacey. Lacey and Aaron have it; Lacey has Max watch Keeley.
Chapter 16: This Isn’t Like You *FAVORITE*
Aaron and Keeley a mini showdown; Aaron doesn’t understand why she doesn’t love him anymore. It is confirmed Aaron doesn’t realize Keeley has been reborn too.
Chapter 17: Tell Me Exactly What You Saw
Lacey and Max chapter.
Chapter 18: Troubles at School
Keeley thinks back to her interaction with Aaron’s friend and how they disliked her.
Chapter 19: The Wrong Choice
Keeley gets into NYU.
Chapter 20: Keeley’s Dream
Lydia and Keeley celebrate their college acceptances; Keeley wants to study in Genetics.
Keeley was murdered at 31 years old.
Chapter 21: Surprise!
Keeley tells Aaron about NYU; we get a flashback of Aaron’s first day at Harvard.
Chapter 22: You’re Either Brave or Crazy
Keeley and Aaron text some more; Keeley and Lydia continue their celebration.
Chapter 23 & 24:
Keeley spends the day with her dad and her family. She also ponders what happened to her body after her death.
I really want to know what happened between her death and Aaron’s death.
Chapter 25:
Lacey and Max plot to drug Keeley at prom.
Chapter 26: *FAVORITE*
Aaron chapter; he still plans on winning Keeley’s love before graduation. We learn he was heartbroken after Keeley’s death which led him to work until he died. He tries to have a convo with Keeley but she shuts him down after a few moments. However, he found a way in with Keeley: scrapbooking.
Chapter 27: *FAVORITE*
Aaron goes to a scrapbook store! You could just feel the embarrassment and determination from him. Then hand delivers it to Keeley in her own home which happens to have her father there as well.
Chapter 28: *FAVORITE*
Aaron has dinner with Keeley and her dad, Robert. Aaron finally starts to wonder why she hates him so much and comes to the idea she has been reborn as well; but quickly changes his mind because that would be impossible.
Chapter 29: I’m Sorry for Your Loss *FAVORITE*
Omg we finally learn what happened after Keeley’s death! Aaron never betrayed her, he was just trying to protect her, but she was still a casualty in an evil plot. Aaron got revenge on Lacy, Max and his own father, but there was one person he was never able to identify. After Keeley’s murder, he worked and worked until he worked himself to death.
Keeley doesn’t know why to make of such a different Aaron and vows to stay clear of him until graduation.
Chapter 30:
Keeley scrapbooked and made brownies as a thank you for Aaron.
Chapter 31: You Think You Can Run Away From Me *FAVORITE*
Keeley tries to give Aaron the brownies, but Aaron is being all touchy feely. Keeley shuts him down and he seems hurt as well as disappointed.
Chapter 32: Define Within Reason *FAVORITE*
Since Keeley made Aaron late for class, he decides she owes him and demands she make him more brownies and have lunch with him for a month.
Rachel, Lacy’s friend, sees their interaction and tells the psycho Lacy.
Chapter 33: She Can’t Do Anything to Me *FAVORITE*
Aaron is really going for here, offering trips and stating she will be his girlfriend. Keeley not too pleased with him and let’s him know about her fears of Lacy.
Chapter 34: Giving Up *FAVORITE*
Aaron’s plan was working but it was basically killing Keeley’s soul too. The gold digger rumors were flying courtesy of Lacy and Aaron was pleased because he wanted Lacy to trip up now so he could get rid of her. Mostly he wanted his Keeley back and he knew he was losing her all over again just like when she lost their baby.
Chapter 35: Observational Skills *FAVORITE*
Aaron’s plan was working and confusing the hell out of Keeley. He really did noticed very detail about her
Chapter 36:
Lacy tried to intrude on their lunch, doesn’t go well for her.
Chapter 37:
Lacy chapter, we learn how she became obsessed with Aaron.
Chapter 38: His Downfall *FAVORITE*
Aaron chapter; we learn how his plan in his old life to wait and see essentially led to death of Keeley at the hands of Max, Lacy and his father.
Chapter 39: Nightmare *FAVORITE*
Keeley has a memory/nightmare mash up of her wedding to Aaron. Which leads her to a mini meltdown with Aaron at lunch the next day.
I’m hoping the reveal of the double reborn happens soon!
Chapter 40: Mind Games *Favorite*
Aaron gives Keeley space after her outburst thinking it had to do with Lacy, but he doesn’t give up yet.
Chapter 41: A Birthday Present *Favorite*
Chapter 42:
Lacy and Max’s plan unfolds to drug and take pictures of Keeley.
Chapter 43:
Lacy and Max chapter
Chapter 44:
Keeley wakes up and Aaron runs to her.
Chapter 45: Neptune vs Her Glacier *favorite*
Keeley is very talkative and aggressive when drugged ;) poor Aaron
Chapter 46: This Is Your Fault Aaron *favorite*
Props to Aaron for staying strong! But I really need the truth to be out there already! After everything they know about Lacy and Max they underestimate them!
Chapter 47: I Didn’t Do This *favorite*
Aaron realizes he failed Keeley again; decides to become stronger to protect her even if it means leaving her alone until he is.
Chapter 48: Aaron’s Statement
Chapter 49: What a Terrible Birthday
Chapter 50:
Lacy chapter.
Chapter 51: Something to Remember Her By *favorite*
Aaron finally decides to let Keely go for now; he will get her back when he can protect her.
Chapter 52: Friends
Keeley is ready to move on and go to NYU.
Chapter 53: Graduation
Chapter 54: This Is Where Their Paths Diverge *favorite*
They say a final goodbye.
Chapter 55: Aaron’s Research *favorite*
Aaron creates his plan to become powerful enough to protect Keeley even though he has to let her go for now.
Chapter 56:
Keeley gets a job.
Chapter 57: Dorm Life
Chapter 58: College Jobs *favorite*
Aaron sees Keeley on the way to her job at the Burger Barn; flashbacks to their old life when she worked a similar job before they got married.
Chapter 59: The Card King *favorite*
Aaron builds his team! Also he is keeping tabs on Keeley through his jacket and there was definitely an interesting Karaoke night.
Chapter 60: No Short Term Game *favorite*
Aaron’s plan builds and he’s missing his Keeley.
Chapter 61: No More All Nighters
Chapter 62:
Keeley and Robert talk about Aaron.
Chapter 63: The Million Dollar Question *favorite*
Aaron talks with his hacker, Anomaly aka Aiden about Keeley. Aaron misses Keeley.
Chapter 64: Christmas Cheer
Chapter 65: Memories of Christmas Past
Chapter 66: Thinking about 2007
Keeley dies in 2019.
Chapter 67: Truth or Dare
Chapter 68: An Insult to Snakes *favorite*
It’s New Years Eve and Aaron and Keeley are in 2 different parties that nearby each other. Aaron shuts Lacy down harshly and I loved it! He also decides to sneak a peak at the love of his lives, Keeley.
Chapter 69: Why Me? *favorite*
Aaron couldn’t do it and kissed Keeley at midnight. Keeley was not pleased. Seriously how have they not figured out that something is way off with this redo!
Chapter 70: He Needed to Work Harder *favorite*
Aaron knows he messed up with the kiss but it just strengths his resolve to protect his Keeley. He also has a terrible nightmare about when she died before.
Chapter 71: 5.5 Years Later (chapters no longer free)
Chapter 72: Tough Nut to Crack *favorite*
Aaron makes plans with Aiden aka Anomaly to “bump” into Keeley.
Chapter 73: Long Time No See *favorite*
Keeley and Aaron bump into each other and have dinner.
Chapter 74: Nice Try My Love
Aaron chapter and he is trying so hard to get Keeley to engage in their “date.” Apparently, Aaron is reserved for Keeley alone. He really misses Keeley and wants his wife back; he a lot more power now to protect her but he still needs more. But he plans to interact more with Keeley.
Chapter 75: Fake Date
Aiden chapter. He gets Jennica, Keeley’s roommate and friend, to be Aaron’s fake date.
Chapter 76:
Jennica chapter.
Chapter 77:
Jennica Chapter; she definitely goes for Lacy to help Aaron; good thing he gave her a fake name. Aaron goes into detail all the things he would do for Keeley without revealing her name.
Chapter 78:
Keeley and Jennica talk about her acting gig.
Chapter 79: Rushing to the Rescue *favorite*
Keeley and Aaron meet again and discuss cats. Keeley also gets food poisoning from tacos and Aaron comes to her rescue.
Chapter 80: Since When Was Aaron This Nice *favorite*
Aaron takes care of sick Keeley.
Chapter 81: A Wonderful Way to Start Off the Day *favorite*
Aaron chapter and he is super happy to have Keeley in his home.
Chapter 82:
Keeley chapter; we learn more about Keeley’s miscarriage and how Aaron treated her in their old life.
Chapter 83:
It seems Aaron has some competition for Keeley’s affections from Ryan, her college and current friend.
Chapter 84:
Aiden learns of Ryan after seeing him with a drunk Keeley.
Chapter 85:
Aiden gossips with Cameron, Aaron’s other loyal member, about Aaron and Keeley.
Chapter 86:
Aiden and Cameron continue to gossip about Aaron then go confront him about why Keeley was wearing his shirt.
Chapter 87:
Aaron, Aiden and Cameron discuss Keeley and pets.
Chapter 88: Was This Surprise Keeley Day or What? *favorite*
Aaron and Keeley go together to adopt Aaron a cat.
Chapter 89: I Like My Privacy *favorite*
Chapter 90: They Seem a Bit Energetic for Me *favorite*
Aaron and Keeley have a great time finding him a pet.
Chapter 91: You Can’t Abandon Her *favorite*
Aaron adopts a cat named Dinah; they have a serious conversation about abandonment.
Chapter 92: Beginner’s Luck *favorite*
They have lunch in an arcade and plays one games.
Chapter 93: A Good Choice *favorite*
They have a great time, but Keeley shuts him down again. Aiden buys a hamster tunnel.
Chapter 94: A Telenovela Idea
Chapter 95: Who Even Are You Anymore
Valentina, Keeley’s other roommate and college friend, brings up the possibility that Aaron was reborn too! But Keeley quickly kills that idea.
Chapter 96: You Gave Up So Much For Me *favorite*
Aaron chapter; Aaron finally realizes everything Keeley gave up for him in their old life. Aiden might have found some dirt on Aaron’s dirty ass father.
Chapter 97: A Long Road Ahead *favorite*
Aaron learns from Aiden that he didn’t make as much progress as he thought with Keeley, but he’s not giving up.
Chapter 98: Acting Like a Doting Boyfriend *favorite*
Chapter 99: Oddly Sentinental *favorite*
More progress is made and finally Aaron tells Keeley he is not ashamed of her.
Chapter 100:
Halloween costume shopping.
Chapter 101:
Jennica chapter.
Chapter 102: Crazy Person
Chapter 103: Why Did Everything Have to Be So Hard? *favorite*
We learn about Aaron’s past with Halloween with Keeley; this man really did love her even if he was slow on how to protect her.
Chapter 104: Stupid Aaron
Chapter 105:
Cameron and Jennica chapter.
Chapter 106:
Cameron chapter.
Chapter 107:
Aiden and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 108:
Keeley chapter. Tbh it’s getting a little boring, I need some more actually progress in this story maybe the reveal of a double reborn, something anything; this is moving so slow!
Chapter 109: You’re Weird
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 110: Not to be Rude But *favorite*
More progress, slow progress but progress; Aaron still wants Keeley to be his wife.
Chapter 111:
Keeley and Robert chapter.
Chapter 112:
Jennica chapter; not very interesting nor did it add to the story line.
Chapter 113:
Aaron and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 114: Unheard Of
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 115: Everybody is Nobody But You **
Aaron and Keeley fancy steak; she is afraid to let him in.
Chapter 116: A Good Thing or A Bad Thing**
Aaron saves the day again and comforts a crying Keeley. We learn that Keeley never had a miscarriage, her doctor was bribed by Aaron’s father to kill her baby and make her infertile. These people suck balls big time and should be sent straight to hell first class.
Chapter 117: That’s Your Keeley Face**
Chapter 118: Souvenir Shopping**
Chapter 119:
Keeley and Ryan.
Chapter 120:
Ryan wants to be with Keeley.
Chapter 121:
Cameron and Jennica chapter.
Chapter 122: I’m His Evil Clone**
Awwww Aaron missed his Keeley and carries away to his home on her pjs.
Chapter 123: Living the Dream**
Aaron gives Keeley his souvenir and they watch TV.
Chapter 124: They’re Going to Kill Me**
Aaron and Keeley cuddled, totally Keeley’s fault.
Chapter 125: Don’t Be Too Impressed**
They have breakfast and form a friendship.
Chapter 126-128:
Jennica and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 129:
Keeley’s Thanksgiving
Chapter 130: Hurricane Aaron**
Aaron learns of Ryan.
Chapter 131:
Cameron chapter.
Chapter 132: Personal Errand Boy**
Aaron and Keeley discuss Christmas.
Chapter 133:
Aaron, Aiden and Cameron discuss Ryan.
Chapter 134: You’re Welcome Aiden**
Keeley finally accepts that Aaron likes her and decides to be his friends and give him a chance.
Chapter 135: I’m Happy For You**
Aaron and Keeley decide to exchange gifts.
Chapter 136: Facebook Friends**
Aaron is too cute with Keeley moments.
Chapter 137:
Keeley invites Aaron for Christmas Eve. Christmas cookie baking.
Chapter 138:
Cameron spies on Ryan and Keeley while baking cookies.
Chapter 139:
Aiden and Cameron chapter.
Chapter 140: So Awkward**
Keeley and Aaron chapter.
Chapter 141: A Toast**
Aaron and Keeley Christmas Eve.
Chapter 142: Under the Mistletoe**
So cute! They exchange presents! They really need to get together and destroy all the bad people now please.
Chapter 143: You’re Going to Break His Heart
Keeley and Robert discuss Aaron.
Chapter 144:
Aaron humiliates Lacy in front of the “important” people and pissed of his father, Alistair.
Aiden tries to speed up their power hold to enact Plan B.
Chapter 145: Business Trips**
Aaron had a slot of trips and Keeley actually missed him.
Chapter 146: Valentine’s Day Plans
Keeley realizes she is attached to Aaron and vows to let him go.
Chapter 147: It Was All Over Now**
Aaron finds Keeley with Ryan on Valentine’s Day; Keeley decides to break Aaron’s heart with his old words for his own good: He’s worth more than fifty of you.
Chapter 148: Oh Keeley***
Finally finally finally AARON realizes Keeley has been reborn too!!! Heartbreaking chapter watching him fall apart but so worth it! He now realizes why Keeley hates him so much and what she meant when she was drugged.
Chapter 149: His Ex-Wife Is Here to See Him***
Yaaaassss Keeley finally realizes Aaron is reborn as well! She was NOT pleased.
Chapter 150: Explain Yourself***
Aaron tells everything to Keeley.
Chapter 151: This Doesn’t Feel Like Love to Me**
Keeley doesn’t know how to feel and leaves Aaron.
Chapter 152: I Think She Dunped Him**
Aaron decides to give Keeley some time. Aiden and Cameron discuss how workaholic robot Aaron turned into to. Aaron reveals he can’t have bananas because Keeley is allergic and won’t kiss him unless he brushes his teeth.
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December 6, 2022
This was extraordinarily entertaining. Every deserving of the guilty reads shelf, although I don't regret it one bit.
I will say, it is impressive how nearly everyone managed to get shipped to someone else. It would've sucked being single in that novel.
I will say, it is impressive how nearly everyone managed to get shipped to someone else. It would've sucked being single in that novel.
February 3, 2021
This was an amazing web novel! It took me about a week to finish but I was hooked. It was nothing like my normal book honestly. I'm usually into the fantasy with magical creatures with a nice cup of smut but this was soft and normal (for the most part) no magical beings and the smut was pg -13 lol but the plot was so intense and it just kept hooking me in deeper!
I'm only giving it four stars because it got to a point where I just wanted it to end because of how long it was . I feel that if it had been a published series instead of one ridiculously long web novel I would of definitely given it 5 stars.
I'm only giving it four stars because it got to a point where I just wanted it to end because of how long it was . I feel that if it had been a published series instead of one ridiculously long web novel I would of definitely given it 5 stars.
January 7, 2021
This was the most intense story I have ever read. The story was a bit of overload, but due to the story content it makes sense. Our story begins with Keeley Hall and Aaron Hale, they are the main characters, although it contained so many others everything is about their lives stories. Yes, lives because they both along with one other character, Aaron’s half-bother Graydon Michael who is Michael Gray, were reincarnated back to retry their first lives.
This story is about a all consuming love and revenge. Starting over at the same point when Keeley and Aaron met. Knowing this is your second chance and knowing from your first life what horrible things would happen and how things happened during that time, can you change things and make better decisions to right what was wrong last time! Can you get revenge and take down the people that caused such atrocious the first time? Well, that’s Aaron plan.
You might think this is a just a basic quick romance, but your in for a ride with all the twist and truths that come out. There are flashbacks to help bring certain points of the story to light explaining first life actions and reasons.
This is a perfect read if you like suspense, mystery and romance. I throughly enjoyed reading this story. I’m betting you will too!
This story is about a all consuming love and revenge. Starting over at the same point when Keeley and Aaron met. Knowing this is your second chance and knowing from your first life what horrible things would happen and how things happened during that time, can you change things and make better decisions to right what was wrong last time! Can you get revenge and take down the people that caused such atrocious the first time? Well, that’s Aaron plan.
You might think this is a just a basic quick romance, but your in for a ride with all the twist and truths that come out. There are flashbacks to help bring certain points of the story to light explaining first life actions and reasons.
This is a perfect read if you like suspense, mystery and romance. I throughly enjoyed reading this story. I’m betting you will too!
January 30, 2021
Love this book. I do most of my reading with audible so my hands are free to work. I really wish this book was in actual print and audible. I would have purchased the audible version in a heartbeat. Please find a publisher.
December 31, 2020
Technically still reading, but this book is so damn good I had to review now! Will update after I finish. :)
April 26, 2021
I truly enjoyed this story, but hated the format and Webnovel service. This was FAR too long and expensive. I won’t be reading more on Webnovel because of the way they price. Short chapters full of filler inflate the price of books since they charge by the chapter. This book had 542 chapters. It cost more than $40 to read. At that rate, I’m not getting sucked into another Webnovel story again. If this author would just publish actual books that I could read on my Kindle, I might read more of their work, but unless that happens, this will be my first and last. It doesn’t matter how good a book is if you feel like your PayPal account is constantly ticking away while you’re reading.
February 10, 2021
I didn’t hate the ending, I hated that it ended!! Days of my life invested in this book.
Loved the story line and most of the characters.
I wanted to know what happed to the rest of them.
Not just Vi!
Loved the story line and most of the characters.
I wanted to know what happed to the rest of them.
Not just Vi!
January 16, 2021
i just finished reading this and i had to leave a review! it’s honestly amazing, i didn’t even mean to start reading it. i was scrolling through pinterest and clicked on the link to this book by mistake but then decided to read it since it looked interesting. i am blown away!
the book had me hooked from the first few chapters and i literally could not put it down. i pulled many all-nighters and even woke up late for class a few times because of how obsessed i got with this.
the main character, keeley, isn’t a complete idiot and the way aaron constantly chases after her without giving up is what made me fall inlove with him. their love is so sweet and pure i keep wanting more. i also love how we also got to see the side characters get into relationships and find love as well as the mc.
absolutely adored this book and had a lot of fun reading it! would 10/10 recommend for a cute romance with a feeling of peace? haha at the end.
the book had me hooked from the first few chapters and i literally could not put it down. i pulled many all-nighters and even woke up late for class a few times because of how obsessed i got with this.
the main character, keeley, isn’t a complete idiot and the way aaron constantly chases after her without giving up is what made me fall inlove with him. their love is so sweet and pure i keep wanting more. i also love how we also got to see the side characters get into relationships and find love as well as the mc.
absolutely adored this book and had a lot of fun reading it! would 10/10 recommend for a cute romance with a feeling of peace? haha at the end.
February 5, 2021
OMG, this is an amazingly addictive reading. Now as the first time I have read a Webnovel, I wasn't expecting the 500+ chapters but jeepers, thank the lord for lockdown. I've been reading since last Saturday and today's Friday and I've just finished. Absolutely loved the story, reincarnation caught my interest, my first read of this genre, so I though I'll give it a go, AND couldn't put it down. The children and hubby got fed, and the house got a quick tidy but otherwise I've been addicted to this for the last 6 days. No spoilers here, you just have to read it. Seriously, go NOW.
April 2, 2021
Well, what can I say. I started reading this because of an ad on Facebook. It had me hooked from the first chapter. Brilliant story. My only criticism is that it could probably have been a wee bit shorter but actually it does round up nicely in the end, which was something that the main characters needed. Many congratulations to the author, this is the first book in a while that I just couldn’t put down - would love to see this in hard copy print as I would definitely buy it.
February 4, 2021
Read this book and really enjoyed it. Just wish I was able to buy it in kindle form
March 11, 2025
This is a web book (I don't know how else to describe it) that I found several years ago and tend to re-read sections of. It's super long and expansive, but I really enjoy it.
After her high-society husband, Aaron, asks for a divorce to wed his mistress, Keeley is murdered in a hit and run accident. She then wakes up a senior in high school once more and is forced to relive meeting her husband in school. Little does Keely know that Aaron's coldness and distance in her past life was all a facade because his high-society family was out to get her and his "mistress" was the one that had her murdered. Spoiler - there was not actual mistress. But on top of that, Aaron has been reincarnated as well, and all he wants is a second chance to win his wife back and love her forever. This story takes them through their lives of heartbreak and pain to a place full of love and joy.
The story meanders a bit, especially the last quarter, but it's a fun ride.
After her high-society husband, Aaron, asks for a divorce to wed his mistress, Keeley is murdered in a hit and run accident. She then wakes up a senior in high school once more and is forced to relive meeting her husband in school. Little does Keely know that Aaron's coldness and distance in her past life was all a facade because his high-society family was out to get her and his "mistress" was the one that had her murdered. Spoiler - there was not actual mistress. But on top of that, Aaron has been reincarnated as well, and all he wants is a second chance to win his wife back and love her forever. This story takes them through their lives of heartbreak and pain to a place full of love and joy.
The story meanders a bit, especially the last quarter, but it's a fun ride.
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March 27, 2021Curse you Webnovel app! I'm going to end up spending a fortune trying to read this book! I found this book via fb clickbait. I love it! I can't believe I hadn't heard of this rebirth storyline in books before. Totally new concept to me and I can't get enough of it! This is a web novel written a few chapters at a time. Short chapters that come out in bits and pieces so you stay addicted having to come back and read more. There are like 500+ "chapters." If you're familiar with how After was written online then this is the same concept. I really like the author and hope she has a real deal book deal coming her way just like Anna Todd did. If you like fun fluffy romances, especially those involving bad rich boys, then this is a redemption story you will love.
February 3, 2021
The Pros
Still reading.... currently on chapter 423! Beginning of the book got me hooked. Delightful read. Interesting spin on a love story. I clicked on a FB ad to read the preview and lost several hours of my life as I lost all track of time. Obligations forgotten. There is only Keeley.
The cons
Probably could’ve been split into two books or edited down to take out repetitive character development. Aaron could’ve used more dimension later in the book; his only emotions are love, panic, and ice. Everything wraps up a little too well with any characters causing friction. I’m super behind in my book club reads because I keep thinking this one will end soon.
Still reading.... currently on chapter 423! Beginning of the book got me hooked. Delightful read. Interesting spin on a love story. I clicked on a FB ad to read the preview and lost several hours of my life as I lost all track of time. Obligations forgotten. There is only Keeley.
The cons
Probably could’ve been split into two books or edited down to take out repetitive character development. Aaron could’ve used more dimension later in the book; his only emotions are love, panic, and ice. Everything wraps up a little too well with any characters causing friction. I’m super behind in my book club reads because I keep thinking this one will end soon.
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June 24, 2021
I really enjoyed the first 70 chapters, and would love to have continued reading it, however there is no way I am going to spend so much money on a Webnovel when I can purchase a brand new Hardcover novel (for example, recently purchased a new hardcover copy of Colum McCann’s brilliant novel ‘Apeirogon’ at my small local bookshop for just under $40AUD) , or a Kindle based novel for less.
If the author’s works became available on Kindle then I would be interested.
If the author’s works became available on Kindle then I would be interested.
January 7, 2021
I enjoyed this book it was long and definitely not on good reads but for a book on the internet it had a good premise. What would you do if you had your life to live over again? What mistakes would you rectify? I liked this and really enjoyed the dynamic between the main characters Aaron and Keeley. This is a must read. Found it on fastnovels.net
February 9, 2021
The characters are very immature - I'm not sure of the author's age, but characters in their 50s and older speak and behave like teenagers and it's very distracting. It's almost two novels - the main story essentially resolves, and then it's 200+ chapters of wrapping up every other character ever mentioned.
May 16, 2021
I don’t normally read web novels but was scrolling through facebook and it popped up. Was expecting to read the standard 10 episodes than get locked out but got the first 72 unlocked right away. This story took over my life for 6 days, my kids were happy cause it meant lots of park time so mommy could read. Very addictive!
February 6, 2021
I’m on chapter 471. I love the story so far but can’t keep paying for coins to continue reading. I would love to find out what happens between Violet, Jeremy and Noah. Hopefully, the book will be published soon.
May 18, 2021
I really liked this book! The only thing is, it took me over a week to read, and I'm not used to that. HA! I basically had to tell myself that I was reading a series of books. It got a little slow in parts, but I still enjoyed the fun, easy read!
June 11, 2021
Fun enough premise, but really got uninteresting. And the characters weren't exceptionally exciting. Things like 'best friends for years' only giving a 2 week notice on moving out because if how guilty she felt? I dunno. Web novels are not for me it seems
January 5, 2026
I love this book! He realizes what he lost and tries to change it. It’s a slow-building story, with a lot of character development. I love that she realizes her self-worth and follows her goals. He learns how to support her the way she needs him to.
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February 6, 2021
Have read 70 chapters so far and I'm hooked!
March 31, 2021
Love the story arc and character development, especially those of the supporting characters. Some phrases get repeated a lot, so the book could have saved on words.
May 3, 2021
I liked it very much, but isn’t there more to it?
What are the names of her other books.
What are the names of her other books.
February 6, 2022
I loved this story! Could not stop reading unless I really had to. Definitely kept my interest because I usually drop books if It wasn’t up to my standards.
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March 2, 2021This is not a quick read. I don't even know how far I'm into the book, and I've read for several days.
The first part is intense. Then it gets complacent. Chapters could have been combined or skipped entirely. The author spends a lot of time describing food... at restaurants, sweet treats made, birthday cakes. All of them eat... a lot. How these people aren't diabetic is surprising to me.
There are too many side plots. I wish the author had just focused on the main characters. They spend a lot of time describing others who aren't/don't need to be central to the story. I don't even care about them as much... back to the main plot, sis.
Too long. I could have ended happily once a certain central character died.
The first part is intense. Then it gets complacent. Chapters could have been combined or skipped entirely. The author spends a lot of time describing food... at restaurants, sweet treats made, birthday cakes. All of them eat... a lot. How these people aren't diabetic is surprising to me.
There are too many side plots. I wish the author had just focused on the main characters. They spend a lot of time describing others who aren't/don't need to be central to the story. I don't even care about them as much... back to the main plot, sis.
Too long. I could have ended happily once a certain central character died.
February 7, 2021
The beginning was good, but the author put so many insignificant chapters that the story dragged on for ages. The author could have cut it off after Keeley and Aaron's relationship was resolved and made the second half another novel (that I most likely wouldn't have read).
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