In a kingdom where the Old Ways hold fast and a man's worth lies entirely in his skill with the sword, Conor Mac Nir is a scholar, a musician, and a follower of the forbidden Balian faith: problematic for any man, but disastrous for the son of the king.When Conor is sent as a hostage to a neighboring kingdom, he never expects to fall in love with the rival king's sister, Aine. Nor does he suspect his gift with the harp (and Aine's ability to heal) touches on the realm of magic. Then his clan begins a campaign to eliminate all Balians from the isle of Seare, putting his newfound home in peril and entangling him in a plot for control of the island that has been unfolding since long before his birth.Only by committing himself to an ancient warrior brotherhood can Conor discover the part he's meant to play in Seare's future. But is he willing to sacrifice everything--even the woman he loves--to follow the path his God has laid before him?
C.E. Laureano’s love of fantasy began with a trip through a magical wardrobe, and she has never looked back. She’s happiest when her day involves martial arts, swords, and a well-choreographed fight scene, though when pressed, she’ll admit to a love of theater and travel as well. Appropriately, she’s wife to a martial arts master and mom to two boys who spend most of their time jumping off things and finding objects to turn into lightsabers. They live in Denver, Colorado with a menagerie of small pets.
C.E. also writes contemporary romance under the name Carla Laureano.
I apologize in advance for the first six hundred or so words of this review not being an actual review, but instead being a discussion of the Christian fantasy genre in all its glory and failures. It’s a subject that is dear to me, and I can’t help myself!
When I was younger, it was difficult to find good Christian fiction. There was plenty of Christian fiction out there, of course, but outside of classics there weren’t that many that were actually well written and compelling, in my opinion. If you weren’t interested in historical or Amish fiction, there just really wasn’t that much fiction out there that could edify your faith without becoming boring. And then I found Christian fantasy. There wasn’t a whole lot of it when I was a teen, but it was a genre on the rise. The likes of Ted Dekker and Frank Peretti radically impacted my life, and continue to do so. But these weren’t high fantasy or epic fantasy. They tended to lay more on the horror side of things, becoming spiritual thrillers for the most part. I loved these, as they made me think deeply about what goes on in the spiritual realm around us.
But epic fantasy, fantasy that takes place in another world radically different from our own, is my favorite genre and it was very underrepresented in the Christian fiction world. Outside of Narnia (still a favorite, by the way), there just wasn’t that much offered in this area. In this past 15 years or so, this tiny subgenera has exploded. Christian fantasy is now a big market, as fantasy fans have begun looking for cleaner, more hopeful reading options that reflect their faith and worldview. Are all of the new offerings in this still budding genre actually good? No more than every secular fantasy novel is successful. Some of these are pale reflections of their secular cousins, basically just using fantasy settings to preach.
I don’t want my fiction to preach at me. I want it to uplift me in my faith, yes, and to make me think deeply, but even as a Christian I have zero desire to have religion shoved down my throat. Finding Christian fiction that can balance this, can uplift and inspire without preaching, is difficult in any subgenre. But Christian fantasy in particular has been plagued with problems, especially regarding the use of magic. Also, every genre of Christian fiction is a mixed bag when it comes to the quality of the writing. I don’t think something should be considered a book worthy of the name just because it’s been printed. There has to be a standard there, and I personally feel that Christian artists should be held to an even higher standard because their work is supposed to reflect Christ. Often, however, Christian authors seem to sadly just slap some prayer onto the page and call it good enough. I think this is like an architect building a super shoddy house, cutting all kinds of corners, and then slapping a fish or a cross on the door and saying he did it for the glory of God. Shouldn’t we give God our best in everything, including our art?
But even though there are issues with this subgenre both in the content and in the quality of the prose, there are gems here. And as the years progress and more and more Christian fantasy series are published, there are better and better offerings available. Besides C.S. Lewis, we now have Patrick W. Carr, Anna Elizabeth Stengl, Jill Williamson, Karen Hancock, and more in the genre that are a pleasure to read and who I feel can hold their own with their secular counterparts. Will C.E. Laureano join that list for me? I’m not positive yet. Onto the actual review. (Sorry for the long lecture before I even mentioned the book I was supposed to be reviewing!)
This first installment in the Song of Seare trilogy had a lot of things I really liked. The writing wasn’t clunky or slow. Conor, our main character, is well rounded and believable and interesting. I loved his interest in and talent for music, and how that talent held magic for him. Music was presented beautifully here, which is one of the quickest way a writer can worm their way into my heart. The setting felt Scottish, and reminded me a lot of the setting of John Gwynne’s The Faithful and the Fallen series. Which I loved. But my favorite aspect of the book was the faith element. The religion was a clear renaming of the Christian faith, with the names of God (Comdiu) and Jesus (Balus) merely changed. But that faith was vibrant and real, and it was a giant part of the lives of the main characters. Faith was never an afterthought, but rather an incredibly important building block of life. It was relied upon, and I loved how faith was presented as so vital to everyday life.
The things that bogged me down a bit were the training and war elements (which is normal for me as I almost always get bogged down with these) and the romance. I felt that the romance element became too central to the plot, but it was still well handled. All in all, this was a good book, and it’s definitely a series I’ll be continuing in the future!
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So, I don't even know. Oath of the Brotherhood by C.E. Laureano was great in some ways, but mostly I just wasn't feeling it. Like I didn't quite connect with the characters and get swept into the story fully.
First off, it's mostly from a man's POV. (Which I can get frustrated with after awhile, because I generally relate better to girl characters). Conor is a nice enough character, but ... um, I didn't really get to know him enough? He's the son of a king, but was raised by someone else, who taught him the harp, scholarly things, and about the true God. In this book, Conor finds himself falling in love with the daughter of another king (this girl is the other POV character); and then, in the midst of a war but unable to do anything. He becomes a warrior, and is determined to do everything in his power to keep the land from being ruled by an evil druid.
It was interesting fantasy. I liked Conor's love interest; she was a good character. This story was rather complex, and some of the threads that wove it together were rather intriguing. Conor's time with the Brothers was both frustrating (maybe a little boring) and interesting. I liked watching him fight his way to "freedom". Some of the characters I simply did not understand. Such as the older man who plays the harp. Is he good? He had some bad advice for Aine ... to let the people believe she was powerful instead of convincing them that any power she had came from God. Also, the leader of the Brothers; he was very deceptive and controlling, and that bothered me a great deal. Are these characters on the good side? Or the bad side?? There was more magic than I preferred, perhaps. For the most part, I think I can understand how it all tied in with the Christian allegory. But some parts were a little much; like these ghastly creatures (kind of like demons in a "siren" sort of form) who lure people to their deaths. Could they really affect Christians? Some parts, darkness felt all too strong, and we couldn't see God's power. And, of course, the guy who tells Aine to take the praise. I didn't like that at all. Aine resisted this advice for the most part ... but I wonder where the author is going with that. Also, there were these power currents underground which could be turned off and on, and had lethal consequences. I wasn't quite sure what to think of that. Still, there was clearly a Christian allegory, and some profound scenes.
Since I enjoyed this book well enough, I was planning on finishing this series, THE SONG OF SEARE; but now I'm not so sure. I gather from other reviews that there is lots of sorrow and separation, and death ... and if you know me, you know I do NOT approve of unhappy endings! *glares* So, I don't know. Also, one reviewer said that, in the last book, the characters seem to fall away from God and start depending on their own power? If that is true, then I'm quite done with this series. I only want to read Christian fantasy that brings glory to God! Not to man.
I found myself SLIGHTLY bored a couple times, but the overall plot was interesting enough to keep me reading. ALL THE NAMES THO. Names were often pronounced NOTHING like they were spelled. There is a pronunciation guide in the back, but I was still struggling until the very end.
Oath of the Brotherhood by Carla Laureano is a Christian Fantasy story that I had a pretty good time reading. I am not typically a fantasy reader but have been dipping my toes in the genre every so often. I enjoyed this and will continue with the series. While I was confused sometimes and had a really hard time with the names and keeping up with the characters and cities, I still enjoyed the story itself and give it 3.5 stars rounded up to 4 on Goodreads. There is a glossary of names and how to pronounce them, but in the reading experience I struggled throughout with so many different names.
This story has a great Medieval and Celtic vibe – loved those aspects. She beautiful interweaves that with many Christian themes – adored those aspects. We see God and Jesus present in this story but with different names in this fantasy world. The story itself is centered around 2 main characters and point of views – Conor and Aine.
Conor is a musician and follower of a forbidden faith. While he was raised by a foster family, he was the son of the King. He wasn’t taught how to fight in his training with a sword or a boy, which is very important in this world. He studied languages and other subject matters, including the forbidden Balian faith, but has no idea how to defend himself with a weapon. Conor’s real father sends him away to the rival kingdom as a political hostage but while he is there, he falls in love with their king’s sister, Aine. He soon realizes he has a special gift of music and magic tied together. While he is training with the brotherhood, the kingdoms are under attack and Conor must do everything he can to fight and protect Aine.
Aine is such a strong character, I really liked reading her parts and felt she had her own story for us to follow, which was intriguing. The romance in this story was sweet but a small part of the overall story.
Really liked the ending too!
Overall, a great introduction to a fantasy trilogy I need to continue reading to see what happens next!
Conor is the king’s son, but for reasons he’s never fully understood, he was raised by a foster family. As he comes of age, his father, the king, shows great disappointment that his foster family raised him in a forbidden faith and essentially banished him to a neighbouring kingdom as a political pawn. There he meets and becomes friends with a young woman, Aine (an-ya).
There is a magic system that is a bit difficult to grasp, and the god of the forbidden faith is meant to represent our one true God, in the book he’s called Comdeiu. (Just a personal pet peeve annoyance with the way this sounds like ‘come to you’)
I could see some similarities with Ellis Peters’ book ‘Dead Man’s Ransom’
Language: 2 ba
Also, it’s a curious choice that they chose to have a female narrator to narrate a mostly male perspective story
Oath of the Brotherhood's new cover is captivating. Couple that with the fact that Enclave republished the book, and I immediately wanted to read it.
I have some mixed feelings about this book. To be clear, it's not a bad book, and I'll get to what I liked in a paragraph or so. I ended up skipping portions, though. It ended up just not being the book for me, though my dad really liked it and it would earn a five star from him.
What I Liked
- The faith element overall. Laureano integrated it in extremely well, and I quite appreciated how unflinching she was in her delivery of it. And parts were heartbreaking due to...well, you'll figure it out if you read this book. (Laureano really tugged the heartstrings in this aspect.)
- The worldbuilding in theory. Worldbuilding can be so difficult to pull off, and overall, Laureano did a good job creating the differences between kingdoms, clans, and good and evil.
- Conor wasn't some buff, expert swordsman at seventeen. How many times have we read where the male protagonist picks up the sword without ever even seeing one before and is automatically an expert? Or how he's still growing into himself and, yet again, is all muscle without doing any physical labor? Instead of this, Conor was realistic; he had his strengths and weaknesses, and forced himself to learn despite his misgivings. Plus, he has a mischievous side that well offsets the somber, solemn personality we see in the first few chapters.
- Aine. What. A Beautiful. Name. Plus, she wasn't some insipid weakling who could only scream when the hero is in trouble. She was multifaceted, adept and a healer to boot! (I love healer characters.) I appreciated how she had character. Most YA female protagonists are flat and only think of themselves and their crushes.
What I Wasn't Fond Of
- There is a possibility of the Lord's name in vain (only it used the book's name for Him). It's hard to tell, but such instances always bother me and are always a strike against the book. because it's unclear.
- It appears that Jesus (or is it the Holy Spirit? It's hard to tell) speaks directly to the characters. Yes, the Holy Spirit impresses upon our thoughts and hearts and minds, but we do not hear Him audibly speak. I would not have even considered this as a negative aspect had there not been Scripture and the story's equivalent of a Bible, but there is, so this bothered me. Immensely.
- This is purely personal opinion, but what I often notice when reading spec fic (particularly fantasy) books written by an author who's crossed over from another genre, is that a lot of things are overboard. Too many fancy names. Too many confusing worldbuilding characteristics. The writing is too fancy. Just...it's too much. Now, overall, I did like how Laureano built the lands and world. It was super creative. And Laureano does know how to weave words, which builds a captivating cornerstone for the book. But I was overwhelmed, and that doesn't happen often for me.
Content Warning
- Magic (presented as good) -Druids (obviously bad, bad dudes) - Violence; some of it might bother younger YA readers - The main issue is the potential Lord's name in vain and the speaking to believers. - There is romance, but it's nicely and tastefully addressed.
Conclusion
Like I said, my dad liked this book. I had a bit of a harder time, but a lot of that was personal opinion/preference. The primary problems are discussed above. If you're not into magic, then this isn't the book for you. However, if you like YA coming of age tales with a strong Christian faith, Oath of the Brotherhood might be the book for you.
One of my must haves in a book is romance. I don’t often read a book that doesn’t have it unless I know the author will deliver. When I heard that Carla Laureano wrote a fantasy book, I jumped at the chance to read it. I’m a fan of her books and fantasy is a genre I enjoy.
I didn’t have any expectations for the book (I don’t read blurbs), but that I would enjoy it.
For me, the book started out a little slow and I was actually a little confused the first few chapters. I’m not sure if it was my mindset (wasn’t feeling well when I started reading) or if I just wasn’t grasping the information. But I kept reading because it’s Carla Laureano.
I’m so glad I did. I became engrossed in Conor and Aine’s story. I could easily picture the setting, the characters, the evil that was at work in the book. And I had to know what happened. Not just for the love story (woohoo romance), but to know if Conor and Aine would accomplish the task set before them.
This book wraps up nicely with an HEA but it does leave somethings open because it’s first book in the series. I definitely want to know what happens next and I’m glad I read this.
*I received a complimenatry copy form the publisher. My review was not required nor influenced.
Interestingly, I began this book shortly after reading a few articles by authors who claim to have observed a self-focused, entitled tendency among young people today. Conor, although brought up as Crown Prince, is the least entitled young man you could find. He knows very well that he must adapt to his circumstances rather than expecting them to cave in to him, and his circumstances get rough. Being raised in the school of hard knocks stands him in good stead for the Firein brotherhood, who certainly never mollycoddle anyone. He earns respect with his hardworking, diligent attitude, especially since, by nature, he'd prefer to be a scholar and musician.
Aine initially comes across as more sure of herself and confident than Conor; mature in her outlook for a teenager, but she has a lot of responsibility, being gifted as both a seer and a healer. She's celebrated as the Lady Healer of Lisdara. What I appreciated most about her story is her discovery of the balance she needs to find in her life, between exercising her special gifts and seeking the face and love of the Source of them. 'She needed to spend her time in prayer and study of Scripture, and quiet reflection, so that she could hear Comdiu's whispers among the cacophony of other demands.'
This story is a good example of why fantasy can be the perfect vehicle to tell a Christian tale. The things that happen can paint a very vivid picture, such as the way in which Conor and Aine deal with the Sidhe (evil spirits) on different occasions. There are also several descriptive passages about how God (or Comdiu, as he is known), chooses to communicate with his followers. Lord Balus' words to Aine could be meant for us all. 'Have faith in me, seek my wisdom, accept my guidance, it is not for you to know what is to come.'
The huge cast of characters may be hard to keep track of, if you don't either keep referring to the glossary at the back of the book or write your own. New people are introduced thick and fast, sometimes every few pages, until well past the halfway mark. As many have similar, hard-to-pronounce names, you must keep a record somewhere. There are hundreds of members of the brotherhood alone, and sometimes I felt we were introduced to every single one of them. The same goes for the people back in the kingdoms.
There are lots of lyrical lines, such as Conor's reflection that calling both himself and Meallachan musicians was like classifying both a raindrop and an ocean as water. I like the respect paid to the arts, such as music and storytelling. "All good stories are true. Even if they were completely made up by the storyteller, there is something in them that resonates with us."
I received a copy from Net Galley and Tyndale House in return for an honest review
Completely blew me away. I was not expecting to like this book as much as I did. I am picking up the next one right now! 4.5 stars, rounded up to five, because it surprised me with how good it was.
I really enjoyed this fantasy story. It is very unique. It has a Celtic/medieval feel to it, which I love. It has a lot of allegories to Christianity. It is told more from a male perspective, which I don't always connect with as much. I really loved the parts with the heroine and the slow building romance. "The Oath of the Brotherhood" seems to be a great start to a promising Christian fantasy series.
I was recommended this book for a few years since I also write Celtic-inspired fiction and was told I would like this.
But I found much to be desired. There was a great lack of depth, especially emotional depth, in the characters, which made them feel very shadow and I couldn't emphasize with any of them. This made it very hard to really get into the story, along with the lack of smooth world-building. World-building was introduced in chunks of info-dumping or based on the assumption the reader would already know this or that, so it was hard to follow. Plot-wise, it was good, but I didn't feel like the story was going anywhere until 100 or so pages in, which is essentially 1/4th of the book. I appreciate the Celtic influences, but I feel like it could go so much further than just names. I expected elements of culture and tradition in there, such as are in Stephen Lawhead's books, and it just wasn't there. This story shows potential, but the lack of emotion and feeling in the story really brings it down. I may or may not continue reading the trilogy simply because I didn't get to invest in any of the characters. It's a fun read if you want to just read something, but as far as favorite fiction goes, this story lacks depth.
C.E. Laureano dips her quill in the fantasy genre with the deft skill of a master! Oath of the Brotherhood captivates and defies the norm, wrenching readers from the boredom of overdone plots. With rich characters, killer plot twists, and an incredible storyworld, Oath of the Brotherhood will live in the hearts of its readers long after the last page is turned!
Ok...WOW! This was a book I couldn't put down (stop listening to). I bought the hardcover, but in the interest of time I listened to the audiobook. The narrator did a great job. I'll be honest, I probably wouldn't have had a clue how to pronounce many of the names in the story if it weren't for the glossary!
If you enjoy a good fantasy with swords and ancient skills with a superb dose of faith woven throughout the story then THIS is a book you'll want to read!! Having read another genre by this author I wasn't sure what her leap into the fantasy one would be like. Well, she nailed it.
The first thing that comes to mind with this story is Peter from Narnia, who had to grow into his role and abilities. It also has Tolkien vibes with the knights who are training and the brotherhood.
We watch as Conor grows as a teen into adulthood trying to make choices that follow the path that he believes Comdiu (God) is leading him. I appreciated following him as he goes through trials and tribulation. His faith is definitely stretched.
Then there's Aine (Anya) who he meets when they're in their teens. There's an instant connection which ties them together over the years though they go separate ways.
While I think there's a clear message in this story for anyone of any age, I think it's fantastic for teens and young adults because the characters (not what they're going through) will be highly relatable to them. Trying to figure out their course in life, who they are, trusting in God, etc will speak volumes to them through Conor and Aine.
The faith thread of this story was the part that impressed me the most. The way the characters used Scripture and references to God were at the forefront and incredibly well done. I feel like it can be difficult for an author to create a new world with a Creator and weave in Scripture so that it fits, but she did it well!
The story is a nail biter and I was swept away into the series and can't wait to dive into book two immediately!!
"All good stories are true. Even if they were completely made up by the storyteller, there is something in them that resonates with us. Courage. Love. Self-sacrifice. The storyteller makes his story real through the telling."
I have loved Carla Laureano's contemporary romance for quite a few years now but this entry into her fantasy world has totally blown my socks off. What an engaging and enchanting tale of duty, honor, self-sacrifice, justice and mercy, faith, and undying love! My meager words in this review cannot do justice to what a great beginning to the Song of Seare trilogy this book is. The setting that is influenced by Celtic lore and medieval times is totally engrossing and you will feel like you are right in the middle of Conor's training and Aine's work in the battlefront. The author is clear in her notes at the end of the book that this series is not an allegory so that is something to keep in mind as you read the book.
The Isle of Seare is meticulously and intricately built and though there are many different words and ways of life on the Isle, I had no trouble following along as the four kingdoms on the Isle are introduced. The history of faith and religion on the Isle is fascinating, as is the Fireian Brotherhood and what it stands for. Conor is an unlikely hero at the beginning of the book, with his book knowledge, unrivaled musical ability, and humility; but these qualities shape the hero that the Isle so desperately needs. Aine is also an unlikely heroine at start, with her frail countenance and fearful heart. Experience in both triumph and failure matures them as they become engaged in a war against evil to save their beloved home and people. The cast of secondary characters is fantastic and I'm hoping for their return in the next book. There is a lot of magic involved - dark magic that is wielded by evil but also good magic gifted by the Creator that comes in multiple forms and helps dispel the darkness. There is also plenty of betrayal and twists to the plot that will have you gasping. It is such a delightful book that every fantasy lover should read!
I received a copy of the book from the author and Enclave Publishing and was under no obligation to post a positive review. All comments and opinions are solely my own.
I read Carla Laureano's first book, Five Days in Skye, and loved it so much, I read it twice. It was a Christian romance, though, and when I saw Oath of the Brotherhood and saw it labeled as fantasy, I didn't want to read it because that's not a genre I like. Then I got a free sample for my Nook and though, 'hmm, I might just like this.' So I bought a physical copy and I am surely glad I did.
Oath of the Brotherhood reminded me more of the period of the Dark Ages and maybe set in Scotland. Some of the names were Scottish sounding and name places sounded the same. Of course, that didn't matter in the least because the book is absolutely wonderful!
It reminded me a bit of the BBC series 'Merlin', too, because there is magic involved, both good and bad.
I won't repeat the synopsis here and risk a spoiler. I'll just tell you what I liked about the book. Easy. Everything. The setting is my cup of tea because I love this period. I loved the Brotherhood, how they trained, what they learned, how they felt and the way they worked within their boundaries.
CE Laureano describes the places, people and action so well, I felt as if I were running through the woods with the trackers, and felt the magic threatening to swallow the good ones up.
This is a Christian novel, even though God is not called by the name God. The author has created another world, much like Tolkien created Middle Earth. She does it well, too. It is quite good at differentiating between the good and the bad, showing the Christian how easily they can be swept under the the schemes and wooing of the enemy of our souls.
I was swept away by this book and this will be a series, a fact for which I am very glad because I want to know more! I only wish I didn't have to wait for it.
Don't hesitate to buy this book. I truly feel you will be glad you did. It's not often you find an author switching genres with such ease and perfection. This one does it extremely well.
Update: I have today finished a third reading of this book and it was just as good each time.
The only thing which I thought would make it better was a list of all the character's names at the front. Then about a third of the way through the book I got the brilliant idea of checking the back and there, lo and behold, was a glossary of names which I afterwards made full use of. :)
Wow…I’m not sure I can say all that I think about this book and do it justice! Frankly, I loved it! (And the cover is stunning!)
It took me a few chapters to warm up to the story and figure out some of the world building, but then I was hooked.
The mixing of fantasy with real Celtic history and legend, along with Christianity was fascinating and very well done. Laureano was true to certain historical facts but still created a vivid fantasy world. The faith aspects were strong with a beautiful message. There was some magic, but it was almost presented as a type of “spiritual gift” for lack of a better term; and the Druid’s bad magic was clearly condemned.
All the Celtic names were fascinating…however, there is a three-page character list at the beginning of the book, and I didn’t take the time to check the pronunciation of every name. So I know I’m probably slaughtering the pronunciations in my head. *hangs head in shame* I did need the list a few times to remember who was who.
The characters particularly the MCs were great; Eoghan (I think I spelled that right?) was an amazing friend to Coner…like incredible. I’m eager for more of his story.
The plot kept me engaged, and I pretty much didn’t put the book down for the last 3/4’s of the story.
The ending felt a little rushed in parts, and I still have some questions that I need answers to pretty much ASAP! ;)
Beautiful Quote: “As Labhrás liked to say, important men demanded respect. Great men earned it.”
Content: nondescript kissing; “bastard” is used to refer to a illegitimate son; unmarried man and woman share a mattress, man is injured nothing happens, and there is a chaperone
Celetic love, heoric coming of age all the fantasy goodness my heart could hold. This book had rich characters, expansive worldbuilding and faith that inspires. This was the adventerous, fantastical and celetic book series I needed! I am so invested!
I've been super drawn to this book for a while, especially by its GORGEOUS cover! The moment I opened the page, I was instantly in awe. The world setting is so rich with elements reminiscent of medieval Celtic Ireland, from clans within kingdoms to druids to even the supernatural from Companions (angels) and the sihde (demons), and even magical harps and charms.
And then there were the characters! I cannot help but admire Conor Mac-Nir, who enters the scene a son of a king raised in education in a warrior society, all the while hiding his Balian faith... and discovering ancient gifts deep within himself. There's also Anne Nic Taimhis, whose incredible gift of healing and sweet nature that slowly draws all sorts of attention, including Conor's heart! As dangers emerge across Seare in both magical and invading forces, both characters endure series of tests in their faith and themselves, especially Conor in his joining of a warrior brotherhood with noble yet strident traditions. But they (and the reader) are YET to discover their roles (as well as Comidu's plan) in a great battle that exceeds far beyond between nations. A battle between forces of light and darkness.
I absolutely adore this book... with such a steady pace full of mystery that rises into a climax as forces began to clash. The ending is both satisfying with a great sigh of relief... but it leaves you anticipating for the final two sequels, for the quest is not over yet!
This is truly an AMAZING gem, and I cannot wait to read more of Conor and Aine's journeys... and of the world of Seare itself!
The beauty of this book was how easy it was to pick up and become immersed in again, even after some time away. I’ve been reading it, literally, just a few pages here and there for a couple weeks now. Yet I never once dreaded starting it again. Never felt bored. It was simply a pleasure to read, from start to finish. That’s the measure of a good book. Instant enjoyment.
The captivation of Oath of the Brotherhood comes not from driving action or mind-blowing imagery—though it has a fair share of both—it is from great characterization and solid world building. The story is like a glass of iced tea and a porch swing on a warm day. No jarring surprises or twists, yet enough tension and action to move the story along. Plus characters you can empathize with.
My only criticisms are mere quibbles. Early on there seemed to be a few too many character walks, and I would’ve liked the ending to feel a bit more climatic. Of course, since this is the start of series, there are obviously larger apexes to come. Frankly, I’m looking forward to whatever author Laureano has planned with the next book.
Oath of the Brotherhood is the perfect book for summer reading. Check it out!
Sci-fi/fantasy is not my normal genre, but I thought I’d give Ms. Laureano's other style a try after enjoying Five Days in Skye and two of her supper club books. She really is a good writer.
Fascinating book full of faith symbolism. God was known by another name, and gifts were given to his people, but it was clear what it all meant.
4.5 stars and I will definitely find the next book in the series.
The Song of Seare trilogy follows a young man named Conor Mac Nir and his journey to overcome the evil threatening his world, and, on a more personal level, Conor's journey as a man.
In the first book in the trilogy, The Oath of the Brotherhood, we meet Conor Mac Nir, a puny, scholarly boy who has powerful gifts as a musician. Conor does not really seem to fit in anywhere. When Conor's foster father dies, Conor fakes his own death to cover his trail and joins the Firein, a group of monk-like "brothers" - the difference being that the otherwise monastic brotherhood are trained in the fighting arts as well as spiritual disciplines. But Conor soon grows restless and wants to leave the brotherhood to do something about the darkness that has begun to threaten the outside world. Finally, Conor leaves Ard Dhaimin, to join Calhoun Mac Cuilinn's army. Calhoun is the older half-brother of Aine, a beautiful young girl Conor felt an immediate connection to, and fell in love with in the short time he stayed with her family before joining the brotherhood. Aine, in Conor's absence, has developed her own unique gifts and has gained renown for her incredible healing abilities. When Aine is kidnapped, Conor risks everything to save her and the two are reunited and married aboard a ship that they hope will carry them to a new life.
This first book really sets the stage nicely for the other two books to come. It's a little slow in the beginning but interest really soars when Conor joins the brotherhood and really becomes a hero worth cheering for. I have to say, when a character is described as puny, it kind of gives you a mental picture of that character that is irreversible, even if the we are told that the character really beefs up later on in the story (which, of course, they always do, because where's the attraction in a guy who does not have bulging biceps and a perfect six pack?). Fortunately for Laureano, this is not the case with Conor; his progression from wimpy boy to muscular man is slow enough and convincing enough that your not permanently stuck thinking of Conor as that toothpick-limbed guy we envision when we were first introduced to him.
In the second book in The Song of Seare Trilogy, Beneath the Forsaken City, Conor and Aine have been separated in a storm at sea and now must pursue separate journeys. Conor is made a slave but is set free and escapes with one of his fellow captives, Prince Talfryn, there under cover to save Conor. As his honored guest, Conor remains with Talfryn while he awaits news of Aine. But while there he comes up against unforeseen obstacles - things are not what they seem within the kingdom. Briallu, the only daughter of his friend, holds a strange attraction for Conor that he struggles to resist. Aine makes her way to her native land, where her aunt is currently in power and magic of all kinds - such as Aine now wields with more power than ever - is held in extreme suspicion. While some welcome Aine back, or grow to love her, her aunt's veiled dislike of her serves to make her even more lonely and distraught. Aine struggles desperately against doubt and confusion, and is bewildered when attempts on her life become disturbingly frequent and there seem to be veiled threats on every side. Aine no longer knows who she can trust. Both of their paths eventually lead them both back to Seare, however, and Aine and Conor are finally reunited once more.
Beneath the Forsaken City builds well on the first book. Separating Conor and Aine the way she does is a masterful move on Laureano's part - it allows readers a chance to get to know them as individuals, apart from one another, something we got to do in Oath of the Brotherhood with Conor, obviously, but not as much with Aine, and since her role is only increasing, it's important that we really get behind Aine. This is the closest thing to a flaw that I foresee for this trilogy. That we won't ever get to know Aine enough to ever like her. Honestly, when we first met her back in Oath of the Brotherhood, she never appealed to me. I like her better in this book, but the connection between her and the reader is not as strong as it should be - something Laureano will have to remedy quickly if she wishes to redeem Aine.
That is the trouble with reserved, sweet characters. While the writer may just think of them as quiet or shy, or just kindhearted and compassionate, they come across to the reader as boring and dull, lacking life and personality. Such characters give us very little reason to get behind them, to laugh when they laugh and cry when they cry, because we don't really know what would make them laugh or cry. They have remained so aloof and distant, hiding behind that facade of reserve or kindness, that We The Reader don't really know them at all.
In the last book in the Song of Seare Trilogy, The Sword and the Song, Aine and Conor are reunited in Ard Dhaimin and the future is looking bright for them. The couple is expecting their first child, they are happy, and Ard Dhaimin has become a refuge for many fleeing the darkness and danger that has become rampant in Seare. But it soons becomes apparent that everything is not as perfect as it seems. Eoghan, Conor's closest friend, is the fulfillment of the prophecy, and as such, he should be taking leadership of the Firein. But Eoghan is hesitant to step up, which causes friction between Conor and him. Eoghan reached out to Conor when he first arrived friendless in Ard Dhaimin, Eoghan mentored and trained Conor until he became a better swordsman than Eoghan himself, Eoghan risked severe punishment to leave Ard Dhaimin and help Conor, saving his life, and Eoghan saved Aine's life when she returned to Seare after struggling with doubt and defeat in her homeland. So the bond between the two men is still strong... but it's strength is being tested. Especially as it becomes more and more obvious to everyone, Conor, Aine, and Eoghan himself, that Eoghan is falling for Aine - the pregnant wife of his best friend. Conor has thought of a way to protect Seare and fight back against the Red Druid, Diarmuid - but it requires leaving Ard Dhaimin. He gets back in plenty of time to witness the birth of his child - but almost as soon as he returns, he has to leave again. On an even longer journey this time. Conor's mission is almost complete when Diarmuid attacks Ard Dhaimin. His goal is to kidnap Aine's soon-to-be born, specially gifted child. Because of Aine's growing powers, she is able to communicate mentally with Conor - but he is experiencing difficulty as well: he has been badly wounded, and help cannot reach him. In an unexpected twist, Conor's foster sister who has been living in Ard Dhaimin, once a confederate of Diarmuid, turns on him suddenly, killing him. But it is too late for Conor. With his last words, he names the son he wanted to desperately to witness the birth of, the son he so desperately wanted to be a good father to, the son he will now never meet... his son is born only minutes later.
Wow. I did not even see this ending coming. It is superb. I was so close to tears. I've read a lot of books, a lot of endings, a lot of good endings, even. But I don't know that I've ever read an ending quite like this one. It is unique and so oddly moving. I think because it really is very surprising. Conor is so very afraid that if he dies, Aine and Eoghan will be together and forget him, that you never think that that will actually happen! You just assume that because they want it so much, because Conor and Aine deserve it so much after all they have been through, all the separation and pain and doubting each other and not knowing if the other is even alive, and feeling unworthy of the other's love, you just naturally assume that they will get that happy ending... You want them to have that happy ending. You want Conor so see his son. You want them to be able to be a family. And so it is really depressing when Conor dies when he is so close to achieving this dream.
This last book really highlights Conor's strength as a character. He has become the hero. And that is something I find rather fascinating: Conor didn't start out the hero that you were hoping for - he becomes that hero. You really begin to see his depth in this last book, his brokenness and disappointment with himself, his frustration and anger as he starts to really snap and kind of lose his grip on sanity. I don't believe there's any such thing as a completely sane hero anyway:)
Aine, though, actually regressed, in my opinion. She effectively loses all the ground she gained in the second book.
Overall, this last book was not only by far the best but was a great way to end the series; Laureano got better with each succeeding book.
Intriguing story. Quite the fascinating tale. This was my first experience with Carla Laureano's work outside of contemporary fiction. Because I love her books, I knew I really wanted to read this, even though I'm not quite as much a fan of fantasy. I did like this story, but it took me a bit to get into it.
Conor was an excellent main character. I was quite sympathetic to him and his cause, right from the beginning. I wasn't always sure which side he was on, or who was on his side. But I fully enjoyed seeing him grow, and seeing the changes he made as the story progressed.
I also really liked Aine. I didn't find everything about her to be completely believable. But...isn't that the beauty of a fantasy tale? It doesn't all have to feel realistic!
I loved the setting! Scotland & Ireland hold deep fascination for me, and I long for the day when I can go see those countries. Because of that, I also love the whole Celtic culture thing, and I really enjoyed delving into some of the ancient cultures, and visiting those lands.
There were many confusing words. If I'd have been holding the physical book in my hand, I think I would've found myself flipping back and forth between my reading spot and the glossary in the front of the book. But...because I read a kindle version, this seemed too difficult, and so I muddled through without always knowing what the words meant as I read them.
Parts of this book moved quickly for me, and other parts moved a bit more slowly than I'd have preferred. All in all, I found this book quite an enjoyable read, and I definitely want to read the rest of the series! Disclaimer: I receive complimentary books from various sources, including, publishers, publicists, authors, and/or NetGalley. I am not required to write a positive review, and have not received any compensation. The opinions shared here are my own entirely. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255
Award-winning author Carla Laureano presents the first novel in her medieval Celtic-inspired epic fantasy series, filled with adventure, romance, magic, swordplay, faith, and superstition.
In Oath of the Brotherhood, musician Conor Mac Nir is sent to a nearby kingdom to secure a treaty. He is also a believer in a currently forbidden faith. Conor discovers his talent with the harp is more important than his lack of talent with the sword. Leaving that kingdom and joining an ancient warrior brotherhood, his sword proficiency greatly improves. Then he discovers a role that combines the two, but it might require sacrificing everything he holds dear. Is he willing to follow this path?
Laureano, known for her inspirational contemporary romances, creates a fantasy world that will please fantasy and Christian fiction readers: a hero quest, a strong female lead, an inspirational message of hope, magic, as well as a good vs. evil battle. Her characters face despair, betrayal, sacrifice, honor, faithfulness, death, and love as they find their gifts and how they are to use them. Engaged in the first chapter, readers will encounter plot twists, relatable characters, and a story that will keep them reading until the end of the book, only wish for the next book in The Song of Seare series.
Laureano weaves in Celtic elements (ancient history, mythology, druids, etc.) in the Sword of Seare trilogy. Originally published in 2014 under C. E. Laureano, this faith-based series is back in print with a new publisher and some additional material. Watch for the other books, Beneath the Forsaken City (June 2021), and The Sword and the Song (January 2022).
Disclaimer: Book reviews are my honest opinion of books I either purchased or received free of cost from the publishers, publicists, and/or authors. I am not required to write reviews, nor to even post positive reviews.
Leaving behind his peaceful upbringing, Conor Mac Nir is thrust into a world of politics and intrigue. The follower of a forbidden faith, and the possessor of a rare gift, Conor is the perfect target. He must make a choice to give up everything he's known in order to have a chance to save it.
An engaging introduction to this fantasy adventure trilogy, with a Scottish flair. This was a well paced read with well balanced steady action and development. My only complaint is that I had to keep flipping to the glossary to make sure that I was pronouncing the names and geographical locations correctly, which can sometimes make the story hard to follow, but I didn't have that problem with this book, thankfully.
Conor is an admirable protagonist, he works hard to improve himself, is humble and doesn't give up. I loved how faith was woven into the fabric of this world, with the good and evil, it felt almost Arthurian. Though the first in the trilogy, this book does a great job of laying the groundwork for future books in the series, with a full cast of characters, and both sides readying for battle. This book was hard to put down, and I'm excited to see where the series goes!
I received a complimentary copy of this book. Opinions expressed in this review are completely my own.
As a young child, Conor’s future was orchestrated by people he had never met. Though his clan was known for its warriors, Conor’s foster family raised him to be a scholar and musician while teaching him the forbidden Balian faith. Even at age seventeen, others still control his fate. When he’s sent to the rival kingdom of Lisdara as a hostage, he soon falls in love with the king’s sister, Aine. While at Lisdara, his education continues and he realizes his gift of music has magical capabilities. But before he can fully understand his gifts, he is forced to seek the protection of the ancient Firein brotherhood. While he is learning the skills to become the warrior his clan always wanted him to become, the surrounding kingdoms come under attack. Will Conor remain within the protection of the brotherhood or will he join the fight against his clan to protect the woman he loves? In the first book of The Song of the Seare series, Oath of the Brotherhood has some good parts, but also some holes that often leave the reader struggling to follow along.
I really thought I would love this book. The back cover synopsis sounds like a nice young adult fantasy with just a touch of romance and that’s exactly the story. But while the idea is good and Laureano has a very nice storytelling voice the overall execution has some issues.
Oath of the Brotherhood started out pretty rough. I read it on my Kindle and was not aware of the glossary at the end of the book until I was finished. The information in the glossary would have helped tremendously with the opening chapters. However, I don’t think it would have completely resolved my issues since there are a lot of characters and kingdom names given in a short period of time. Keeping everything straight would be quite a challenge regardless and constantly flipping to the glossary would disrupt the flow of the story.
In addition to early information overload, there are some gaps in the writing. At times it’s an issue of terms or concepts not being adequately conveyed and at other times, it’s just simply missing information. One scene in particular I read three times and was never able to gather the same information the character did.
I think overall, with the exception of the characters, there is a lack of development. At times the story feels like it loses focus—almost like the author wants to have the current events and the romance flow together, but just can’t get them there. As a result, these two parts of the story feel incomplete (and not just because this is book one). The spiritual component also struggles to feel fully developed. While Laureano makes some excellent points, the Balian religion, though central to the story, doesn’t feel fleshed out nor does its presence within the story feel complete. Though there are other Balian followers besides Conor and Aine, it doesn’t seem like their beliefs are central to their lives, even for those characters who should have Balian central to their lives.
The characters are really good though. Conor is instantly likeable and he’s the main reason I kept reading. His journey from awkward teen to confident adult is fun to follow. Aine’s character is good as well, but didn’t draw me to the story quite like Conor. Her personality was a little bit too perfect and she lacks any true vulnerability. Several of the supporting characters at times outshined both Aine and Conor. I do hope some of them will return with larger roles in subsequent books.
Though I am a bit disappointed with the book’s execution, there are some interesting storylines that I’d like to find out how they end. Also, I believe this is only Laureano’s second book, so I don’t doubt she will continue to improve her style and hone her abilities. So even though Oath of the Brotherhood had some rough spots, I still plan to continue the series.
Oath of the Brotherhood is the story of Conor Mac Nir - son of a king but raised by an adoptive father. He is highly educated and gifted at music, but possess little skill when it comes to the sword. Sent as a political hostage to cement a treaty his life looks to be going nowhere, but when tragedy strikes his homeland, he is forced onto a new path that will take him into the trust of a mysterious brotherhood.
The world of this book seems to be based on Scotland. The names of people and places sound Scottish. The action all takes place on Isle of Seare, but the map in the front shows another island - hinting at a bigger world to be explored in the series. The island has four distinct nations, which brings plenty of tension. The brotherhood Fascinated me - such a capable group of people - yet they hold strictly to a non-interference policy - hearkening to the prime directive of Star Trek.
Conor didn't feel like an average fantasy hero. He was a very capable and gifted person - yet in the culture he lived his skills were seen as worthless. His transformation while with the brotherhood was extreme - but didn't seem unnatural. I was drawn to the character of Aine. She served as a love interest for Conor, but she was much more than that. She had her own story, which continued after she and Conor were separated. Their relationship - one of immediate connection, followed by the building of a solid friendship that naturally developed into more was satisfying and believable. In fact, it reminded me of my early relationship with my wife.
The spiritual framework of this world was a mirror of Christianity. God and Jesus were present but with different names. This is common in Christian fantasy, but I don't think I've seen it done quite like this. At one point, we hear a character tell a parable of Balus - very similar to one of Jesus' parables recorded in the Bible. I thought that was cool.
The magic system in this book was interesting, though perhaps a tad under-utilised, but I'm sure we'll see more as the series goes on. Magical powers were attributed to the "Christian" characters - essentially like giftings of the Holy Spirit - but on overdrive. Magic is often attributed to anti-christian characters these days, and even portrayed as evil, so it was fascinating to see magic portrayed as a specifically Christian attribute. There was also a druid who possessed different kinds of powers though he was villain. The use of music in the magic system was especially interesting. Certainly in the real world music has a power over us, but in the world of this book, that is meant in a literal rather than a figurative sense. Music has great power in the book's world - and I am looking forward to seeing how this concept is developed.
C.E. Laureano has created the beginnings of a fascinating Christian fantasy with this book. It stands tall on its own but invites us to continue the journey.
It took me a long time to get through this book. Over a year, when I usually finish Epic Fantasy novels in a couple of months, or not at all if I don't like them. This is not to say it was bad, but because I kept leaving it aside to read other things, and often, just did not have the time.
As historical Fantasy, set in a country very much like Medieval Ireland, this was very good. I personally though found the Irish/Gaelic names with original spelling made it a little hardgoing. It seems the intended audience were Young Adults, but I think it was a good read for adults as well.
My only complaint was that, at times, it seemed a little over-complicated and hard to follow at times. Maybe I was just reading too fast, or not paying enough attention, but there was plenty of action as well as hint of Romance, as well as moral development which is sometimes lacking in stories like this.
The depiction of creatures from Irish Mythology created an interesting spin. Recommended for Fantasy lovers.
Oath of the Brotherhood is an intriguing high fantasy reminiscent of The Ranger’s Apprentice by John Flanagan, A Cast of Stone’s by Patrick Carr, The Summer Tree by Guy Gavriel Kay and even George Lucas’s Star Wars: A New Hope (without the sci-fi element). Laureano creates a world that makes you think of Britain or Ireland with its Celtic and Welsh legends. She weaves in a strong thread of Christian faith, even though it cloaked in words like Comdiu (God) and Balus (Savior/Christ). In fact the language is the only thing readers may struggle to understand and pronounce. Laureano, however, provides a dictionary of terms and pronunciations in addition to a map to help her readers follow the story better. The story begins with an older adolescent named, Conor, who after fostering with another lord of the province, returns home only to find that his father, the king of Tigh, despises him because he has not learned to be a warrior. His father under the influence of a Red Druid, prepares to send Conor to his enemies in Faolan as a peace offering. Conor knows this is not a ‘peace offering’ but more likely political posturing; leaving Conor as a prisoner in the enemies hands. The Red Druid, attempts to influence Conor, but Conor is aware of the druid’s malice and manipulations, even if he cannot defend himself from it. Upon arriving in Faolan, Conor meets the lovely Aine, who has gifts of healing and occasionally visions. Conor’s own gift of music becomes evident and meaningful as his friendship and love for Aine grows. Unfortunately, Conor is a pawn in his father’s game, and torn from Aine, is forced to seek his uncle among the ancient Firein brotherhood. In Firein, secrets are revealed about Conor and he must choose whether to accept the oath of the brotherhood, or leave the brotherhood and fight a war that is working its way across Seare. Friendship, love, betrayal, sacrifice, and loss fill this adventure as Conor matures and realizes that he is being called by something much greater than his father, much greater than the brotherhood, and even greater than his love for Aine…and he knows he must follow. This is book 1 in a trilogy so yes, it does leave you ‘hanging’ and longing for book 2! Entertaining story – Suitable for Teens and Young Adults. Note to author: I compared your work to several of my favorite male story-tellers, but I do believe you would fit well with the likes of Anne McCaffrey, Robin McKinley, Patricia McKillip, and even your voice of reason, Lisa Bergren, who writes the pulse-pounding River of Time series!