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The Earls of Mercia #2
The Danish King's Enemy
Leofwine, Ealdorman of the Hwicce, has proved himself in battle and won the support of his King, Aethelred II, but the spectre of Swein of Denmark, the man who partially blinded him five years before, has suddenly become a harrowing reality.
As the Viking raids intensify, conflict at the King's Witan and amongst his Councillors grows and Leofwine finds himself still treading a difficult path between loyalty and the twisted self-interests of the men the King surrounds himself with.
Can Leofwine weather more storms and grow his own power base, or will his King, once and for all, lose patience with his broken Ealdorman?
As the Viking raids intensify, conflict at the King's Witan and amongst his Councillors grows and Leofwine finds himself still treading a difficult path between loyalty and the twisted self-interests of the men the King surrounds himself with.
Can Leofwine weather more storms and grow his own power base, or will his King, once and for all, lose patience with his broken Ealdorman?
424 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 29, 2014
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About the author
M.J. Porter
111 books257 followersI'm an author of historical fiction (Early English (before 1066)/Viking) and now five 20th-century mysteries..
The Eagle of Mercia Chronicles (featuring a young Icel from The Last King series) is now available from Boldwood Books. As is the complete Brunanburh Series and the first two books in the Dark Age Chronicles, my foray to before Saxon England was Saxon England. Enjoy.
The Ninth Century Series (The Last King), are stories of ninth-century England, but not as it's been written before, (featuring an older Icel and some other familiar faces too).
The Erdington Mysteries now has a third book in the series—The Secret Sauce. (Did you know Erdington would have been in Mercia back in the Saxon period? I know, you can't get me away from the place.) The Barrage Body is coming soon.
The Royal Women Who Made England, my first non-fiction book about the royal women of the tenth century, is available now.
I like to write. You've been warned.
Find me at
www.mjporterauthor.com or at www.mjporterauthor.blog where I blog about books and films and sometimes, writing!
https://linktr.ee/MJPorterauthor
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You can join my monthly subscriber newsletters and gain access to the restricted page on my blog at the same time.
https://BookHip.com/MGWHLDC (Saxon stories)
https://BookHip.com/THPKCKP (mysteries only)
(I have odd reading tastes - there's no need to notice though!!) I'm also exceedingly anti-social - that you may notice but must accept!
The Eagle of Mercia Chronicles (featuring a young Icel from The Last King series) is now available from Boldwood Books. As is the complete Brunanburh Series and the first two books in the Dark Age Chronicles, my foray to before Saxon England was Saxon England. Enjoy.
The Ninth Century Series (The Last King), are stories of ninth-century England, but not as it's been written before, (featuring an older Icel and some other familiar faces too).
The Erdington Mysteries now has a third book in the series—The Secret Sauce. (Did you know Erdington would have been in Mercia back in the Saxon period? I know, you can't get me away from the place.) The Barrage Body is coming soon.
The Royal Women Who Made England, my first non-fiction book about the royal women of the tenth century, is available now.
I like to write. You've been warned.
Find me at
www.mjporterauthor.com or at www.mjporterauthor.blog where I blog about books and films and sometimes, writing!
https://linktr.ee/MJPorterauthor
https://mjporterauthor.sumupstore.com
You can join my monthly subscriber newsletters and gain access to the restricted page on my blog at the same time.
https://BookHip.com/MGWHLDC (Saxon stories)
https://BookHip.com/THPKCKP (mysteries only)
(I have odd reading tastes - there's no need to notice though!!) I'm also exceedingly anti-social - that you may notice but must accept!
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March 8, 2019
Hard going
I find the author's writing style a tad too flowery for my taste but great content non the less and worthy of 5 stars for that alone
I find the author's writing style a tad too flowery for my taste but great content non the less and worthy of 5 stars for that alone
November 17, 2017
This is the 2nd book of a series; the first book is pretty short. Leofwine was a real person, though not much has been written about him. The large amount of unknowns with the lesser characters in this period of history offers an opportunity for an author to develop the characters with more freedom, but there isn't a lot of depth with anyone in this story, nor does there seem to be much of a plot. As the book went on, I started to see more and more grammar and word usage errors. There is use of possessive punctuation when it should just be plural nouns ("son's" when it should be "sons") and the errors are repeated so it's not just a typo. There are also some incorrect words used, like "access" when it should have been "assess," "vain" for "vein," and the dreaded "loose" when it should be "lose." The author also over uses and misuses the word "chill" for some reason; it's sometimes used as an adjective just as it is, rather than "chilly," which would have been the proper term. It's kind of bizarre & makes the writing seem very teenager-ish. It started out, in the first book, much better, but the author doesn't seem to be able to maintain a quality style of writing. I think the author has promise, but some remedial English grammar & vocabulary classes are needed.
July 13, 2018
Excellent story and narrative... Hooked for the duration!
Excellent story teller i am hooked for the duration of the series ...... Author does a great job of keeping you interested
Excellent story teller i am hooked for the duration of the series ...... Author does a great job of keeping you interested
April 4, 2018
Easy reading
While it was a pleasant read,the battle scenes almost an afterthought. The amount of time spent on describing politics takes away any real gripping excitement.
While it was a pleasant read,the battle scenes almost an afterthought. The amount of time spent on describing politics takes away any real gripping excitement.
May 29, 2018
Exciting action circa 1000
This second in the series is a much improved novel based on historical events available which cover this millennial period
This second in the series is a much improved novel based on historical events available which cover this millennial period
October 31, 2022
THE ENGLISH LANGUAGE'S ENEMY: M. J. PORTER
I may as well repeat most of my review for Book One of this series since nothing's changed except for more execrable editing:
"From homophone abuse to outright orthographic savagery, mystifying non-sequiturs, faulty pronoun references, absurd punctuation faux-pas, and endless sentence constructs that leave the reader nonplussed and irritable, this piece of swill must be the worst demonstration of proofreading on record. It was a supreme effort to read this tripe through to the end. Porter or Kindle or the Publisher is responsible for this exercise in literary delinquency and should be ashamed that this travesty ever saw the light of day. Somewhere within this labyrinth of errors lies a good story, but genuine anger at the editing prevents the reader from finding it!
I may as well repeat most of my review for Book One of this series since nothing's changed except for more execrable editing:
"From homophone abuse to outright orthographic savagery, mystifying non-sequiturs, faulty pronoun references, absurd punctuation faux-pas, and endless sentence constructs that leave the reader nonplussed and irritable, this piece of swill must be the worst demonstration of proofreading on record. It was a supreme effort to read this tripe through to the end. Porter or Kindle or the Publisher is responsible for this exercise in literary delinquency and should be ashamed that this travesty ever saw the light of day. Somewhere within this labyrinth of errors lies a good story, but genuine anger at the editing prevents the reader from finding it!
November 29, 2016
Another good book.
September 8, 2025
First rate story
I've found a winner of a series. The Earls of Mercia, is an excellent series. The story of the Ealdorman, Leofwine of Mercia is exciting and interesting in all the best ways. The struggles of the Saxons to protect their peoples and lands from the Raiders from the north is told in a way that reminds us that real people lived the history of England. Its easy to recognize that they were brave and intelligent, or cowardly and weak, lived, loved, fought and died depending on each other. Well worth a read.
I've found a winner of a series. The Earls of Mercia, is an excellent series. The story of the Ealdorman, Leofwine of Mercia is exciting and interesting in all the best ways. The struggles of the Saxons to protect their peoples and lands from the Raiders from the north is told in a way that reminds us that real people lived the history of England. Its easy to recognize that they were brave and intelligent, or cowardly and weak, lived, loved, fought and died depending on each other. Well worth a read.
January 11, 2025
The Saga continues
This is the second part of an amazing adventure set in the second Viking age. The detail of the political process and the battle movements are believable and keep you reading long into the night.
This is the second part of an amazing adventure set in the second Viking age. The detail of the political process and the battle movements are believable and keep you reading long into the night.
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September 20, 2024A riveting read
Once again M J Porter opens up Anglo Saxon England so well. You feel you a part of story, the highs and the lows.
Once again M J Porter opens up Anglo Saxon England so well. You feel you a part of story, the highs and the lows.
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October 26, 2017
REVIEW FROM AMAZON
Having read and enjoyed book 1 of this series I got this to see how the story continued. I wasn't disappointed. The people and the setting - Anglo Saxon England at the time of the Viking raids - seemed to come alive and I could almost imagine that I was there. The battle scenes aren't too gory (thank goodness) but the details of the people, how they lived and died, the nature of kingship at that time and just the details of day to day life in an Ealderman's home were suburb. I usually either love or loathe historical novels. I love this one and can't wait for the next one - I doubt it could be left as it is without another book to follow.
A minor thing, is that occasionally plurals appear in the text as 's, eg boy's rather than boys but it easy to make typing errors when you're working on something this vast. Also the author uses the word besides when beside would have done. Don't know if this is a throwback to the style of writing of that time or the author's way of proving the work is theirs. Neither of these spoil what is essentially a jolly good ripping yarn.
Having read and enjoyed book 1 of this series I got this to see how the story continued. I wasn't disappointed. The people and the setting - Anglo Saxon England at the time of the Viking raids - seemed to come alive and I could almost imagine that I was there. The battle scenes aren't too gory (thank goodness) but the details of the people, how they lived and died, the nature of kingship at that time and just the details of day to day life in an Ealderman's home were suburb. I usually either love or loathe historical novels. I love this one and can't wait for the next one - I doubt it could be left as it is without another book to follow.
A minor thing, is that occasionally plurals appear in the text as 's, eg boy's rather than boys but it easy to make typing errors when you're working on something this vast. Also the author uses the word besides when beside would have done. Don't know if this is a throwback to the style of writing of that time or the author's way of proving the work is theirs. Neither of these spoil what is essentially a jolly good ripping yarn.
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