Building Harem Town 2

Building Harem Town #2

by Eric Vall

I still don’t know why I’m in this strange fantasy world, but three beautiful priestesses are counting on me to protect them, provide for them, and impregnate them.
I am their god, so I can’t let them down.
Memories of my past are scattered, but I recall the basics of survival and building. Every small step brings me new powers and abilities I can grant my faithful… and closer to figuring out who I actually am.

Genres: Harem, Fantasy, Litrpg, Erotica

569 pages, Kindle Edition

First published December 25, 2020

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Reviews

[Dannan Tavona]

As it says again

Fantasy LitRPG harem adult situations
Book 2 sees the three priestesses continue advancing in levels. Despite Jack being worshiped as a deity, he doesn't get to select and skills or abilities, he gets a preselected skill for each level up. The same for the women.
I was somewhat okay with one of the women wanting or needing some rough stuff to increase her pleasure, but the other two didn't seem to be into that. But at the big scene, suddenly all three want the same - to be called dirty and impure while Jack lets loose with a belt on their bare bums. For two of the women, this was out of character. But more, these were his priestess, his devotees. The women decided that getting hurt and then healed was a fun ritual - because they like being dominated. First, I have reservations about establishing sexualized pain as part of belief system. Second, inflicting pain is affiliated with dominance, but is not the same, and I'm not sure if the confusion is in the head of the MC or the author, but this radical shift to wholesale hard kink at odds with Jack's earlier assertions of love and protection - because nothing says love like the man (or God) that "hurts me then heals me." Submissiveness does not require masochism. Dominance only includes pain when the dominance is challenged because then there is a fight. Making such not only part of the sex play but also part of religious practice? I found the notion distasteful. Whenever I hear or read about people who whip to purge "sin" I see cruel priests who flagellate until the blood flows. The "kind and good" Jack is now trying to supplant Loviatar, Mistress of Pain? These gender games cloaked in religion and love in the last ten percent of the book had me asking - why did you mess up a good story? It is recoverable, but Jack believes this game world is real. Jack needs to decide - Is giving your followers pain what you want to establish in your faith?
If there's a book 3 I will probably pick it up, but if there's no follow up, after that last scene, I won't miss it overmuch.

[Camilo]

Same as the other book, I did this one because the end of the other one let me curious about this one, but it's the same as the first one, slooooow in the beginning, then improves on the last part leaving you curious about the next one.

If you're looking this for the smut content, I say the same I said in the first book, it's going to leave you with blue balls most of the time, he got the ability to visit the prietesess in their dreams but most of the times it happened he just resumed that in a paragraph.

However, it's not bad if you know what you're looking for, I didn't like it but there might be people that like it. There's some character development, we specially get to know more Aleia.

[Jamie Ross]

Awesome, could put it down!

When I started this series, I was curious to see how things would work with the world building and the circumstances our God-Like MC found himself in.
But as I read these books, the more intriguing and exciting they became.

And the second book is even better than the first with more exploration, excitement and adventure... Plus gorgeous and beautiful priestesses.

Already dying for the 3rd book!

[Imkmoney]

Jack our God

Our God, Jack, is helping his 3 gorgeous priestesses survive in a run down convent that is really old, but Jack is new at this 'whole God thing.' He and they are helping another settlement of gnomes and protecting them also. When a gnome baby is kidnapped, Jack and the priestesses go to rescue her ans kill a group of bad guys.

This was a lot more fun than the last book & I'm looking forward to the next in the series.

Read in 4 days

[Keith Duarte]

Keeps getting better

The Convent keeps improving as the story continues to get better. I really enjoyed the pacing in this book, a very good blend of slower moments mixed in with action. This series is quickly joining the list of favorites that I look forward to reading through again.

[Matthew Domenic]

A good sequel

I love the characterization of each of the women. And though I wish the main character could remain corporal more often it is nice to see the women do things for themselves. If you liked this book I would also like to recommend Eric Vall's other book Princess Master series

[Heath]

Good Read.

Interesting harem story with a town building twist. On the creature attack in the beginning of the story, it is described as a cougar, but is named as a lion and cougar in the same sentence, which is off putting. They are both basically cats, but are not the same type of creature (the name can not be exchanged fir the other). Other than that, like the story.

[Steve Sargent]

Leveling up

The god Jack is leveling up through the efforts of his priestesses. Improving the convent allows the god and his crew to increase their skills and attributes. But Jack still has no idea how he came to be, or what his potential powers will be. A good read as their adventure continues.

[david urke]

I love the mixture at characters. Very diverse. Once the main characters are set, they stay and a few minor characters enter, then get dealt with. The best written scenes of any "Harem" type book

I have read. Looking forward greatly to next installment. If anyone likes these type of books, this is one of the best!

[Paul Hefka]

This was good.

The adventure continues. Jack and the girls are back and facing a whole new set of challenges. Things get interesting. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.

[Alan K]

Building nicely

I think this book was a better than the first, a little more action although the strange huge spiders with autonomous attacking legs was so odd it felt out of place in the story. Gnomes, Goblins, more followers and a high wall are a feature in this book. Will read book 3 next.

[Magda]

I went through whole series as I hate to start something and not finish it. It did start as building town LitRPG with a pauses for smut (same-same feeling all the time tho). But it devolved into army and godhood very quickly with starter powers not really taking use ever. So if you are looking for building and town growth - move along.

[sterling morris]

Mysteries and orgies

This is shaping up in to an excellent adventure with real layers of mystery to the world and lore. The characters are great and the story just toys by with each new development!

[Ann Johnson-Durham]

Amazing series so far

I’ve read both books and I’ve loved them both so far Anne can’t wait until the 3rd book is released... would def recommend not only this series but also anything from this author as anything I’ve read so far has been amazing

[Michael]

Where will this new series take us?

The mystery and power grows in this episode, the MC is solidifying in his personality as his situation becomes more clear. While becoming more clear in the immediate, the greater mystery grows too

[Al Parks]

Exciting adventure

Great Series so far, a lot happened in this book. I keep thinking that the gnomes will ask a certain question of the girls, and Jack but they don't. Maybe in book three.

[James Evans]

Pretty Vivid Imagination!

This author has gotten my attention in more places than one.
The characters and scenery are so well described its wonderful.
My only complaint would be too much detailed sex fantasies.

[Zack Turner]

Excellent!!

Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!

[Marc L Ball]

Amazing

I can't wait for the next one. Love, action, sex and intrigue. It Just gets better and better. Can't wait.

[Tracy S McCoy]

Good series

Not my favorite Eric Vall series but it is entertaining and has good adult fantasy action through out. Keep it going

[Mohammed]

Tedious

Gets very tedious with all the

"you r awesome." she grinned
"oh, but you are r awesome too " i smiled
"no we r awesome." she chuckled.

ad nauseam

[James A.]

Entertaining Story

The story line is very entertaining. A new spin on previous stories. I like the mix harem women . It is nice that they are challenged in their tasks.

[DWIGHT D MILLER]

Another awesome book

The action suspense romance and sex was amazing. Couldn't put the book down had to read the whole story. He has been one of my favorite authors

[Eric]

Great series

Honestly really find myself enjoying this series more and more.l can’t wait to figure more out about what’s going on!

[steven wolf]

Fun

This is a very interesting and fun scenario with regards to harems. The second book in the series was as good or better than the first.

[Joel B Rupp]

Fun read

I could do with out the excessive sex. Other than that it is great. All hail Jack the magnificent. Lol

[Jonathon]

Not great, not super bad.

[Jay Collins]

2.5 to maybe 3 stars , simalar to the first book but not getting better.

[Sergiu]

More of the same. Building a wall, looking at hot priestesses, bad plot and character development. :))

[James Richardson]

Good book

Very good book and a excellent series so far. Can't wait for the next book to come out. It will be a long dang wait