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Building Harem Town #2
Building Harem Town 2
I still don’t know why I’m in this strange fantasy world, but three beautiful priestesses are counting on me to protect them, provide for them, and impregnate them.
I am their god, so I can’t let them down.
Memories of my past are scattered, but I recall the basics of survival and building. Every small step brings me new powers and abilities I can grant my faithful… and closer to figuring out who I actually am.
I am their god, so I can’t let them down.
Memories of my past are scattered, but I recall the basics of survival and building. Every small step brings me new powers and abilities I can grant my faithful… and closer to figuring out who I actually am.
569 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 25, 2020
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February 14, 2021
As it says again
Fantasy LitRPG harem adult situations
Book 2 sees the three priestesses continue advancing in levels. Despite Jack being worshiped as a deity, he doesn't get to select and skills or abilities, he gets a preselected skill for each level up. The same for the women.
I was somewhat okay with one of the women wanting or needing some rough stuff to increase her pleasure, but the other two didn't seem to be into that. But at the big scene, suddenly all three want the same - to be called dirty and impure while Jack lets loose with a belt on their bare bums. For two of the women, this was out of character. But more, these were his priestess, his devotees. The women decided that getting hurt and then healed was a fun ritual - because they like being dominated. First, I have reservations about establishing sexualized pain as part of belief system. Second, inflicting pain is affiliated with dominance, but is not the same, and I'm not sure if the confusion is in the head of the MC or the author, but this radical shift to wholesale hard kink at odds with Jack's earlier assertions of love and protection - because nothing says love like the man (or God) that "hurts me then heals me." Submissiveness does not require masochism. Dominance only includes pain when the dominance is challenged because then there is a fight. Making such not only part of the sex play but also part of religious practice? I found the notion distasteful. Whenever I hear or read about people who whip to purge "sin" I see cruel priests who flagellate until the blood flows. The "kind and good" Jack is now trying to supplant Loviatar, Mistress of Pain? These gender games cloaked in religion and love in the last ten percent of the book had me asking - why did you mess up a good story? It is recoverable, but Jack believes this game world is real. Jack needs to decide - Is giving your followers pain what you want to establish in your faith?
If there's a book 3 I will probably pick it up, but if there's no follow up, after that last scene, I won't miss it overmuch.
Fantasy LitRPG harem adult situations
Book 2 sees the three priestesses continue advancing in levels. Despite Jack being worshiped as a deity, he doesn't get to select and skills or abilities, he gets a preselected skill for each level up. The same for the women.
I was somewhat okay with one of the women wanting or needing some rough stuff to increase her pleasure, but the other two didn't seem to be into that. But at the big scene, suddenly all three want the same - to be called dirty and impure while Jack lets loose with a belt on their bare bums. For two of the women, this was out of character. But more, these were his priestess, his devotees. The women decided that getting hurt and then healed was a fun ritual - because they like being dominated. First, I have reservations about establishing sexualized pain as part of belief system. Second, inflicting pain is affiliated with dominance, but is not the same, and I'm not sure if the confusion is in the head of the MC or the author, but this radical shift to wholesale hard kink at odds with Jack's earlier assertions of love and protection - because nothing says love like the man (or God) that "hurts me then heals me." Submissiveness does not require masochism. Dominance only includes pain when the dominance is challenged because then there is a fight. Making such not only part of the sex play but also part of religious practice? I found the notion distasteful. Whenever I hear or read about people who whip to purge "sin" I see cruel priests who flagellate until the blood flows. The "kind and good" Jack is now trying to supplant Loviatar, Mistress of Pain? These gender games cloaked in religion and love in the last ten percent of the book had me asking - why did you mess up a good story? It is recoverable, but Jack believes this game world is real. Jack needs to decide - Is giving your followers pain what you want to establish in your faith?
If there's a book 3 I will probably pick it up, but if there's no follow up, after that last scene, I won't miss it overmuch.
July 5, 2022
Same as the other book, I did this one because the end of the other one let me curious about this one, but it's the same as the first one, slooooow in the beginning, then improves on the last part leaving you curious about the next one.
If you're looking this for the smut content, I say the same I said in the first book, it's going to leave you with blue balls most of the time, he got the ability to visit the prietesess in their dreams but most of the times it happened he just resumed that in a paragraph.
However, it's not bad if you know what you're looking for, I didn't like it but there might be people that like it. There's some character development, we specially get to know more Aleia.
If you're looking this for the smut content, I say the same I said in the first book, it's going to leave you with blue balls most of the time, he got the ability to visit the prietesess in their dreams but most of the times it happened he just resumed that in a paragraph.
However, it's not bad if you know what you're looking for, I didn't like it but there might be people that like it. There's some character development, we specially get to know more Aleia.
December 27, 2020
Awesome, could put it down!
When I started this series, I was curious to see how things would work with the world building and the circumstances our God-Like MC found himself in.
But as I read these books, the more intriguing and exciting they became.
And the second book is even better than the first with more exploration, excitement and adventure... Plus gorgeous and beautiful priestesses.
Already dying for the 3rd book!
When I started this series, I was curious to see how things would work with the world building and the circumstances our God-Like MC found himself in.
But as I read these books, the more intriguing and exciting they became.
And the second book is even better than the first with more exploration, excitement and adventure... Plus gorgeous and beautiful priestesses.
Already dying for the 3rd book!
January 11, 2021
Jack our God
Our God, Jack, is helping his 3 gorgeous priestesses survive in a run down convent that is really old, but Jack is new at this 'whole God thing.' He and they are helping another settlement of gnomes and protecting them also. When a gnome baby is kidnapped, Jack and the priestesses go to rescue her ans kill a group of bad guys.
This was a lot more fun than the last book & I'm looking forward to the next in the series.
Read in 4 days
Our God, Jack, is helping his 3 gorgeous priestesses survive in a run down convent that is really old, but Jack is new at this 'whole God thing.' He and they are helping another settlement of gnomes and protecting them also. When a gnome baby is kidnapped, Jack and the priestesses go to rescue her ans kill a group of bad guys.
This was a lot more fun than the last book & I'm looking forward to the next in the series.
Read in 4 days
December 28, 2020
Keeps getting better
The Convent keeps improving as the story continues to get better. I really enjoyed the pacing in this book, a very good blend of slower moments mixed in with action. This series is quickly joining the list of favorites that I look forward to reading through again.
The Convent keeps improving as the story continues to get better. I really enjoyed the pacing in this book, a very good blend of slower moments mixed in with action. This series is quickly joining the list of favorites that I look forward to reading through again.
December 28, 2020
A good sequel
I love the characterization of each of the women. And though I wish the main character could remain corporal more often it is nice to see the women do things for themselves. If you liked this book I would also like to recommend Eric Vall's other book Princess Master series
I love the characterization of each of the women. And though I wish the main character could remain corporal more often it is nice to see the women do things for themselves. If you liked this book I would also like to recommend Eric Vall's other book Princess Master series
January 8, 2021
Good Read.
Interesting harem story with a town building twist. On the creature attack in the beginning of the story, it is described as a cougar, but is named as a lion and cougar in the same sentence, which is off putting. They are both basically cats, but are not the same type of creature (the name can not be exchanged fir the other). Other than that, like the story.
Interesting harem story with a town building twist. On the creature attack in the beginning of the story, it is described as a cougar, but is named as a lion and cougar in the same sentence, which is off putting. They are both basically cats, but are not the same type of creature (the name can not be exchanged fir the other). Other than that, like the story.
January 11, 2021
Leveling up
The god Jack is leveling up through the efforts of his priestesses. Improving the convent allows the god and his crew to increase their skills and attributes. But Jack still has no idea how he came to be, or what his potential powers will be. A good read as their adventure continues.
The god Jack is leveling up through the efforts of his priestesses. Improving the convent allows the god and his crew to increase their skills and attributes. But Jack still has no idea how he came to be, or what his potential powers will be. A good read as their adventure continues.
January 23, 2021
I love the mixture at characters. Very diverse. Once the main characters are set, they stay and a few minor characters enter, then get dealt with. The best written scenes of any "Harem" type book
I have read. Looking forward greatly to next installment. If anyone likes these type of books, this is one of the best!
I have read. Looking forward greatly to next installment. If anyone likes these type of books, this is one of the best!
March 8, 2021
This was good.
The adventure continues. Jack and the girls are back and facing a whole new set of challenges. Things get interesting. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.
The adventure continues. Jack and the girls are back and facing a whole new set of challenges. Things get interesting. The story and characters were intriguing and engaging. I look forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.
March 18, 2021
Building nicely
I think this book was a better than the first, a little more action although the strange huge spiders with autonomous attacking legs was so odd it felt out of place in the story. Gnomes, Goblins, more followers and a high wall are a feature in this book. Will read book 3 next.
I think this book was a better than the first, a little more action although the strange huge spiders with autonomous attacking legs was so odd it felt out of place in the story. Gnomes, Goblins, more followers and a high wall are a feature in this book. Will read book 3 next.
March 20, 2025
I went through whole series as I hate to start something and not finish it. It did start as building town LitRPG with a pauses for smut (same-same feeling all the time tho). But it devolved into army and godhood very quickly with starter powers not really taking use ever. So if you are looking for building and town growth - move along.
December 28, 2020
Mysteries and orgies
This is shaping up in to an excellent adventure with real layers of mystery to the world and lore. The characters are great and the story just toys by with each new development!
This is shaping up in to an excellent adventure with real layers of mystery to the world and lore. The characters are great and the story just toys by with each new development!
January 4, 2021
Amazing series so far
I’ve read both books and I’ve loved them both so far Anne can’t wait until the 3rd book is released... would def recommend not only this series but also anything from this author as anything I’ve read so far has been amazing
I’ve read both books and I’ve loved them both so far Anne can’t wait until the 3rd book is released... would def recommend not only this series but also anything from this author as anything I’ve read so far has been amazing
January 15, 2021
Where will this new series take us?
The mystery and power grows in this episode, the MC is solidifying in his personality as his situation becomes more clear. While becoming more clear in the immediate, the greater mystery grows too
The mystery and power grows in this episode, the MC is solidifying in his personality as his situation becomes more clear. While becoming more clear in the immediate, the greater mystery grows too
February 21, 2021
Exciting adventure
Great Series so far, a lot happened in this book. I keep thinking that the gnomes will ask a certain question of the girls, and Jack but they don't. Maybe in book three.
Great Series so far, a lot happened in this book. I keep thinking that the gnomes will ask a certain question of the girls, and Jack but they don't. Maybe in book three.
December 27, 2021
Pretty Vivid Imagination!
This author has gotten my attention in more places than one.
The characters and scenery are so well described its wonderful.
My only complaint would be too much detailed sex fantasies.
This author has gotten my attention in more places than one.
The characters and scenery are so well described its wonderful.
My only complaint would be too much detailed sex fantasies.
December 27, 2020
Excellent!!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!
December 29, 2020
Amazing
I can't wait for the next one. Love, action, sex and intrigue. It Just gets better and better. Can't wait.
I can't wait for the next one. Love, action, sex and intrigue. It Just gets better and better. Can't wait.
January 1, 2021
Good series
Not my favorite Eric Vall series but it is entertaining and has good adult fantasy action through out. Keep it going
Not my favorite Eric Vall series but it is entertaining and has good adult fantasy action through out. Keep it going
January 7, 2021
Tedious
Gets very tedious with all the
"you r awesome." she grinned
"oh, but you are r awesome too " i smiled
"no we r awesome." she chuckled.
ad nauseam
Gets very tedious with all the
"you r awesome." she grinned
"oh, but you are r awesome too " i smiled
"no we r awesome." she chuckled.
ad nauseam
January 10, 2021
Entertaining Story
The story line is very entertaining. A new spin on previous stories. I like the mix harem women . It is nice that they are challenged in their tasks.
The story line is very entertaining. A new spin on previous stories. I like the mix harem women . It is nice that they are challenged in their tasks.
January 20, 2021
Another awesome book
The action suspense romance and sex was amazing. Couldn't put the book down had to read the whole story. He has been one of my favorite authors
The action suspense romance and sex was amazing. Couldn't put the book down had to read the whole story. He has been one of my favorite authors
January 31, 2021
Great series
Honestly really find myself enjoying this series more and more.l can’t wait to figure more out about what’s going on!
Honestly really find myself enjoying this series more and more.l can’t wait to figure more out about what’s going on!
February 5, 2021
Fun
This is a very interesting and fun scenario with regards to harems. The second book in the series was as good or better than the first.
This is a very interesting and fun scenario with regards to harems. The second book in the series was as good or better than the first.
March 1, 2021
Fun read
I could do with out the excessive sex. Other than that it is great. All hail Jack the magnificent. Lol
I could do with out the excessive sex. Other than that it is great. All hail Jack the magnificent. Lol
September 9, 2021
Not great, not super bad.
December 1, 2021
2.5 to maybe 3 stars , simalar to the first book but not getting better.
April 2, 2022
More of the same. Building a wall, looking at hot priestesses, bad plot and character development. :))
December 30, 2020
Good book
Very good book and a excellent series so far. Can't wait for the next book to come out. It will be a long dang wait
Very good book and a excellent series so far. Can't wait for the next book to come out. It will be a long dang wait
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